Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFNAV0Z2TSXCQZBJ3SV45K

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Duration:
5.6s
Cost:
$0.000215
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station at Camden swallowed thelast of the dying light. Detective Harlow Quinn’s polished boots echoed on the damp concrete, a sharp counterpoint to the oppressive silence. Her worn leather watch ticked steadily on her left wrist, a metronome marking the seconds as she scanned the scene with military precision. Eva Kowalski stood nearby, her red hair catching the weak glow of Quinn’s flashlight, her round glasses reflecting the shadows. Eva’s satchel, worn leather bulging with books, slumped against her hip. “No struggle,” Quinn murmured, her voice low and controlled. “No forced entry. The victim’s position is… unnatural. Laid out like a display.” She gestured towards the figure sprawled near the decaying platform edge. The man’s face was slack, eyes wide and unseeing, a stark contrast to the grim determination etched on Quinn’s own features. “The blood pattern suggests a single, precise wound. No defensive wounds. No sign of a struggle.” Eva knelt, her fingers brushing the man’s shoulder. “But the location, Detective. The Veil Market. It’s not just a market. It’s a conduit. A place where the mundane bleeds into the… other.” She pulled a small, worn notebook from her satchel, flipping it open. “The bone token at the entrance. That’s not just a key. It’s a marker. A signal.” Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened. “A signal for what? A robbery gone wrong? A personal dispute? The evidence doesn’t support anything supernatural.” She crouched, examining the ground near the body. “No footprints leading away. No drag marks. The victim’s shoes are pristine. He walked here willingly, or was brought here without resistance.” Eva’s freckled nose wrinkled. “Unless…” She trailed off, her eyes darting around the cavernous space. “Unless the victim was compelled. Charmed. Or worse, taken by something that doesn’t leave a trace.” She pointed towards a faint, almost invisible shimmer in the air near the platform wall. “Look there. The Veil Compass would confirm it.” Quinn’s gaze snapped to the spot. Her own worn leather watch seemed to pulse faintly. She reached into her pocket, fingers closing around the familiar weight of her police-issue flashlight. “The Compass,” she said, her voice tight. “Show me.” She activated the small device. The needle didn’t spin erratically. It didn’t point north. It trembled violently, then settled, not towards a direction, but towards the shimmering air. “It’s pointing… inward. Towards the rift.” “Exactly,” Eva breathed, her voice hushed. “The Veil Market isn’t just a place. It’s a threshold. And whoever brought him here… they used the veil itself as a weapon. Or a trap.” She gestured at the body again. “Look closer, Detective. The wound. It’s not just a cut. It’s… charred. Like something burned through the skin from the inside out.” Quinn leaned in, her eyes narrowing. The light from her flashlight caught the man’s chest. A faint, silvery scar, like a brand, marked the exact spot of the wound. “A burn,” Quinn whispered, the realization dawning. “Not from a blade. From… energy. Magic.” She straightened, the weight of the Compass still humming in her pocket. “The evidence didn’t add up because it wasn’t meant to. This wasn’t a crime scene. It was a message. A demonstration of power.” Eva nodded, her red hair falling forward as she tucked a strand behind her ear. “And the bone token? It wasn’t just an entry requirement. It was a warning. A sign that the veil is thinning. That the market is waking.” Quinn’s sharp jaw set. The worn leather watch on her wrist ticked on, a relentless reminder of the time slipping away. The Veil Market had spoken, and its message was clear: the supernatural was real, and the hunt was just beginning. She turned to Eva, her gaze sharp and unwavering. “Then we find out who’s speaking. And why.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount629
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount629
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"pristine"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"oppressive"
2"silence"
3"scanned"
4"stark"
5"etched"
6"pristine"
7"pulse"
8"familiar"
9"weight"
10"trembled"
11"reminder"
12"unwavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences35
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences35
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences44
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords628
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
27.72% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount368
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.45
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn9
Kowalski1
Eva7
Compass1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Compass"
5"Market"
places(empty)
globalScore0.277
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences26
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
40.76% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.592
wordCount628
matches
0"not towards a direction, but towards the shimmering air"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
13.34% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean62.8
std12.35
cv0.197
sampleLengths
083
170
260
351
454
573
660
778
841
958
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs64
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount369
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.032520325203252036
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.01084010840108401
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences44
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences44
mean14.27
std8.31
cv0.582
sampleLengths
012
117
223
320
411
59
624
721
816
98
1036
1116
124
1325
1422
154
1611
1731
188
196
209
2115
227
237
245
254
2614
276
286
2932
3022
316
329
3314
347
3519
3623
3715
3826
394
4017
4120
429
438
46.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.38636363636363635
totalSentences44
uniqueOpeners17
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences35
matches
0"Her worn leather watch ticked"
1"She gestured towards the figure"
2"She pulled a small, worn"
3"She crouched, examining the ground"
4"She trailed off, her eyes"
5"She pointed towards a faint,"
6"Her own worn leather watch"
7"She reached into her pocket,"
8"she said, her voice tight"
9"She activated the small device"
10"It didn’t point north."
11"It trembled violently, then settled,"
12"She gestured at the body"
13"She straightened, the weight of"
14"She turned to Eva, her"
ratio0.429
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences35
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station at"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s polished boots"
2"Her worn leather watch ticked"
3"Eva Kowalski stood nearby, her"
4"Eva’s satchel, worn leather bulging"
5"Quinn murmured, her voice low"
6"She gestured towards the figure"
7"The man’s face was slack,"
8"Eva knelt, her fingers brushing"
9"She pulled a small, worn"
10"Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened."
11"She crouched, examining the ground"
12"Eva’s freckled nose wrinkled."
13"She trailed off, her eyes"
14"She pointed towards a faint,"
15"Quinn’s gaze snapped to the"
16"Her own worn leather watch"
17"She reached into her pocket,"
18"she said, her voice tight"
19"She activated the small device"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences12
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Quinn murmured, her voice low and controlled"
1"She trailed, her eyes darting around the cavernous space"
2"she said, her voice tight"
3"Eva breathed, her voice hushed"
4"Quinn whispered, the realization dawning"
5"She straightened, the weight of the Compass still humming in her pocket"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
1"Eva breathed (breathe)"
2"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.381
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.286
66.1248%