Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFNJB8GSSW3W09ZZVT28HW

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Duration:
53.2s
Cost:
$0.002429
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling for three hours, turning London's streets into rivers of reflected neon. Detective Harlow Quinn ran through the slick pavement of Camden High Street, her breath burning in her chest, her footsteps splashing through puddles that soaked through the thin soles of her shoes. Eighteen years on the force had taught her that the bad guys always ran. What they never seemed to understand was that she always followed. The suspect—a wiry man in a dark jacket she'd been tailing for two weeks—cut hard left down an alley, disappearing into the shadowed mouth between a vintage record shop and a building whose windows had been boarded since the eighties. Quinn didn't slow. Her hand found her weapon out of habit, though she kept it lowered, swept low along her thigh. She wasn't firing into a crowd of civilians. Not tonight. Not ever if she could help it. The alley stank of wet cardboard and urine. Her shoes skidded on the wet cobblestones as she rounded the corner, and for a moment she lost sight of him—a gap of three seconds that felt like an eternity. Then she heard it: the rhythmic clatter of someone descending stairs at speed. There. A narrow staircase leading down, the iron railing slick with rain, the walls covered in graffiti that seemed to absorb what little light filtered from the street behind her. The suspect's footsteps echoed downward, growing distant. Quinn hesitated at the top of the stairs. Three years ago, her partner had gone down stairs like these. Different part of the city. Different dark. DS Morris had been chasing a lead on their case—a string of disappearances that the brass kept trying to bury—and he'd gone into a building alone. They found him two days later in the Thames, what was left of him. The official report said accident. The unofficial whispers said something else entirely. Quinn had spent eighteen months trying to find the truth, and what she'd found instead was a door that kept opening onto rooms she didn't have the keys to. She descended. The stairs wound down past street level, past what had once been the basement of some long-gone establishment, into darkness that the beam of her torch couldn't fully penetrate. The air changed—cool and stale, carrying a smell she couldn't name. Mineral, almost. Like the inside of a cave. The walls transitioned from brick to something older, stone worn smooth by decades or centuries, she couldn't tell. At the bottom, a corridor stretched ahead, lit by what looked like candles set into niches in the wall—dozens of them, maybe hundreds, their flames burning in colors that didn't belong to any fire she'd ever seen. Blue. Green. A pale gold that seemed to shift as she watched. The sound of voices drifted up from somewhere ahead, and the clatter of the suspect's footsteps had stopped. Quinn moved forward, her weapon now raised, her breath steady despite the hammering of her heart. She'd learned to control that. To push the fear down into a small, manageable box and lock it away where it couldn't affect her judgment. Morris's face flashed in her mind—his easy smile, the way he'd called her Harlow when no one else dared, the gap in the official timeline between his going into that building and his body turning up in the river. Forty-seven hours. No one had ever explained what happened in those forty-seven hours. The corridor opened into a cavern. It was vast—far larger than any basement she'd seen in London, larger than any underground space she knew existed beneath the city. Stalls and tents and makeshift tables spread across the uneven floor, dozens of them, maybe more, arranged in something that might have been a market layout if markets were designed by people who had never seen daylight. People moved between the stalls, and Quinn's trained eye catalogued them in fragments: a woman with silver hair and eyes that caught the candlelight at an impossible angle; a man whose shadow seemed to move independently of his body; a child—or something that looked like a child—browsing through a table of bottles filled with liquids that glowed from within. The Veil Market. She'd heard rumors. Three years of chasing shadows and half-truths, of whispers in interview rooms and bodies that didn't stay dead, had led her to the edges of this place. She'd never found the door. And now she'd stumbled through it by accident, chasing a suspect who apparently knew exactly where he was going. She spotted him. Twenty meters ahead, speaking urgently to a figure in a hooded cloak whose face she couldn't see. The suspect gestured toward the far end of the market, and the hooded figure shook their head slowly. Then the suspect turned, and his eyes found Quinn across the crowded space. For a moment, neither of them moved. Quinn was aware of the weight of her weapon. The futility of it. These people—these things—they weren't criminals she could arrest. They weren't suspects who would run and give her cause to fire. They were something else entirely, something she'd spent her career trying not to see because seeing meant admitting that the world was stranger and darker and more dangerous than she'd ever allowed herself to believe. The suspect bolted. He ran toward the far end of the market, shoving past a vendor whose wares looked like preserved organs in glass jars, ducking beneath a banner that seemed to be written in a language Quinn didn't recognize. She followed—because that was what she did, because she'd spent three years not knowing what had happened to Morris and this was the first real thread she'd had, because running was easier than thinking. The crowd parted around her. Some of them watched with expressions she couldn't read. Others turned away as if they couldn't bear to see what came next. The air grew colder as she ran, and the candlelight seemed to dim, and the voices faded until all she could hear was her own breathing and the wet slap of her shoes on the stone floor. The suspect reached the far wall—a sheer face of rock that shouldn't have existed beneath Camden, that looked like something carved by water over millennia—and pressed his palm to a spot near the floor. A section of the wall swung inward, revealing a passage that breathed wind from somewhere deep and dark. He glanced back at her. Just for a moment. And in that moment, Quinn saw something in his face that looked almost like pity. Then he was gone, and the wall was closing, and Quinn was standing alone at the edge of an abyss she didn't have a map for. Her watch ticked on her wrist. The leather strap, worn soft from years of twisting when she was thinking, had gone wet and cold. She could feel the rain still falling somewhere above her, through layers of stone and earth and whatever else separated this place from the world she knew. She could go back. Climb the stairs, walk back through the corridor, find her way to the surface and file a report that would go in a drawer and be forgotten. She could call it a night, go home to her flat, drink a beer and watch the rain streak down her windows and pretend she'd never seen any of this. Or she could follow. The wall was almost closed now, a sliver of darkness remaining, the passage beyond barely visible. Quinn thought of Morris. Of the forty-seven hours no one had explained. Of the look on his face the last time she'd seen him, when he'd said he was close to something big, that he could feel it, that this was the one that would make sense of everything. She stepped forward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"footsteps"
count3
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count2
5
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"rhythmic"
2"echoed"
3"weight"
4"could feel"
5"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
9.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1305
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1305
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London2
Harlow2
Quinn12
Camden2
High1
Street1
Morris4
Thames1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Market"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"High"
3"Street"
4"Thames"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"felt like an eternity"
1"graffiti that seemed to absorb what little light filtered from the street behind her"
2"looked like candles set into niches in th"
3"gold that seemed to shift as she watched"
4"looked like a child—browsing through a ta"
5"a suspect who apparently knew exactly where"
6"banner that seemed to be written in a language Quinn didn't recognize"
7"looked like preserved organs in glass jar"
8"looked like something carved by water ove"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1305
matches(empty)
89.15% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"was that she"
1"admitting that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean52.2
std34.41
cv0.659
sampleLengths
073
178
251
345
499
52
666
767
893
96
10118
1157
1251
137
1468
153
1671
1764
1852
1924
2026
21112
224
2365
243
93.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"been boarded"
1"were designed"
2"was gone"
79.88% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs222
matches
0"wasn't firing"
1"was going"
2"was standing"
3"was thinking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences86
ratio0.128
matches
0"The suspect—a wiry man in a dark jacket she'd been tailing for two weeks—cut hard left down an alley, disappearing into the shadowed mouth between a vintage record shop and a building whose windows had been boarded since the eighties."
1"Her shoes skidded on the wet cobblestones as she rounded the corner, and for a moment she lost sight of him—a gap of three seconds that felt like an eternity."
2"DS Morris had been chasing a lead on their case—a string of disappearances that the brass kept trying to bury—and he'd gone into a building alone."
3"The air changed—cool and stale, carrying a smell she couldn't name."
4"At the bottom, a corridor stretched ahead, lit by what looked like candles set into niches in the wall—dozens of them, maybe hundreds, their flames burning in colors that didn't belong to any fire she'd ever seen."
5"Morris's face flashed in her mind—his easy smile, the way he'd called her Harlow when no one else dared, the gap in the official timeline between his going into that building and his body turning up in the river."
6"It was vast—far larger than any basement she'd seen in London, larger than any underground space she knew existed beneath the city."
7"People moved between the stalls, and Quinn's trained eye catalogued them in fragments: a woman with silver hair and eyes that caught the candlelight at an impossible angle; a man whose shadow seemed to move independently of his body; a child—or something that looked like a child—browsing through a table of bottles filled with liquids that glowed from within."
8"These people—these things—they weren't criminals she could arrest."
9"She followed—because that was what she did, because she'd spent three years not knowing what had happened to Morris and this was the first real thread she'd had, because running was easier than thinking."
10"The suspect reached the far wall—a sheer face of rock that shouldn't have existed beneath Camden, that looked like something carved by water over millennia—and pressed his palm to a spot near the floor."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1326
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.032428355957767725
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006787330316742082
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean15.17
std12.42
cv0.818
sampleLengths
016
132
214
311
440
53
618
78
82
97
108
1130
1213
131
1429
157
168
1711
185
192
2026
2114
225
237
2429
252
2629
2711
282
296
3018
3137
321
331
3410
3518
3616
375
3820
3939
402
4111
426
4322
4437
4559
463
473
4827
495
64.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4418604651162791
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then she heard it: the"
1"Then the suspect turned, and"
2"Just for a moment."
3"Then he was gone, and"
ratio0.051
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences78
matches
0"Her hand found her weapon"
1"She wasn't firing into a"
2"Her shoes skidded on the"
3"They found him two days"
4"She'd learned to control that."
5"It was vast—far larger than"
6"She'd heard rumors."
7"She'd never found the door."
8"She spotted him."
9"They weren't suspects who would"
10"They were something else entirely,"
11"He ran toward the far"
12"She followed—because that was what"
13"He glanced back at her."
14"Her watch ticked on her"
15"She could feel the rain"
16"She could go back."
17"She could call it a"
18"She stepped forward."
ratio0.244
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences78
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ran through"
2"The suspect—a wiry man in"
3"Quinn didn't slow."
4"Her hand found her weapon"
5"She wasn't firing into a"
6"The alley stank of wet"
7"Her shoes skidded on the"
8"A narrow staircase leading down,"
9"The suspect's footsteps echoed downward,"
10"Quinn hesitated at the top"
11"DS Morris had been chasing"
12"They found him two days"
13"The official report said accident."
14"The unofficial whispers said something"
15"Quinn had spent eighteen months"
16"The stairs wound down past"
17"The air changed—cool and stale,"
18"The walls transitioned from brick"
19"A pale gold that seemed"
ratio0.718
64.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"To push the fear down"
ratio0.013
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ran through the slick pavement of Camden High Street, her breath burning in her chest, her footsteps splashing through puddles that soake…"
1"A narrow staircase leading down, the iron railing slick with rain, the walls covered in graffiti that seemed to absorb what little light filtered from the stree…"
2"Morris's face flashed in her mind—his easy smile, the way he'd called her Harlow when no one else dared, the gap in the official timeline between his going into…"
3"Stalls and tents and makeshift tables spread across the uneven floor, dozens of them, maybe more, arranged in something that might have been a market layout if …"
4"People moved between the stalls, and Quinn's trained eye catalogued them in fragments: a woman with silver hair and eyes that caught the candlelight at an impos…"
5"Three years of chasing shadows and half-truths, of whispers in interview rooms and bodies that didn't stay dead, had led her to the edges of this place."
6"They were something else entirely, something she'd spent her career trying not to see because seeing meant admitting that the world was stranger and darker and …"
7"He ran toward the far end of the market, shoving past a vendor whose wares looked like preserved organs in glass jars, ducking beneath a banner that seemed to b…"
8"The suspect reached the far wall—a sheer face of rock that shouldn't have existed beneath Camden, that looked like something carved by water over millennia—and …"
9"A section of the wall swung inward, revealing a passage that breathed wind from somewhere deep and dark."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.0918%