| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1152 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1152 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "practiced ease" | | 4 | "charged" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "intricate" | | 7 | "electric" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "gloom" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "vibrated" | | 12 | "unreadable" | | 13 | "calculated" | | 14 | "scanned" | | 15 | "silk" | | 16 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 74.01% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1156 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.65% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1104 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Herrera" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 12 | | Tomás | 1 | | Herrera | 11 | | Morris | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Market | 3 | | Saint | 2 | | Christopher | 2 | | Seville | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Tomás" | | 3 | "Herrera" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Market" | | 6 | "Saint" | | 7 | "Christopher" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.957 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "liquid that seemed to pulse with its own inner light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 21.67% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 13 | | mean | 88.92 | | std | 20.08 | | cv | 0.226 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 95 | | 1 | 104 | | 2 | 88 | | 3 | 79 | | 4 | 128 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 107 | | 7 | 84 | | 8 | 69 | | 9 | 91 | | 10 | 75 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 116 |
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| 92.58% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was made" | | 2 | "was, was" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "Herrera’s flight wasn’t just about escape; it was a taunt, a challenge." | | 1 | "It wasn’t the neon glow of the city; it was a deeper, more primal radiance, emanating from the stalls and booths that cluttered the space." | | 2 | "The air hummed with a low, constant vibration, and the scent of ozone, damp earth, and something else – something metallic and faintly sweet – filled her nostrils." | | 3 | "Stalls lined the walls, their owners – figures shrouded in shadow or draped in exotic fabrics – watched her approach with unreadable expressions." | | 4 | "Her partner’s death, the unexplained supernatural elements, the trail leading inexorably to this place – it all converged here." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1100 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "faint, sickly sweet odor" |
| | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.017272727272727273 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 13.6 | | std | 6.97 | | cv | 0.513 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 39.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.25882352941176473 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 1 | "She knew the city’s veins" | | 2 | "She rounded the corner, the" | | 3 | "It had to be the" | | 4 | "She started climbing, her boots" | | 5 | "It wasn’t the neon glow" | | 6 | "She took a deep breath," | | 7 | "She pressed it against the" | | 8 | "She dropped the token back" | | 9 | "It was a path worn" | | 10 | "She moved with deliberate silence," | | 11 | "She scanned the crowd, her" | | 12 | "He was here, she was" | | 13 | "He moved with the practiced" | | 14 | "He disappeared behind a curtain" | | 15 | "She needed to know what" | | 16 | "Her partner’s death, the unexplained" | | 17 | "She inched closer, her senses" | | 18 | "She caught a glimpse of" | | 19 | "She couldn’t let him walk" |
| | ratio | 0.293 | |
| 8.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain lashed against the" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn’s worn leather" | | 2 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 3 | "Quinn’s military precision kept her" | | 4 | "She knew the city’s veins" | | 5 | "The scent of damp earth" | | 6 | "Herrera’s flight wasn’t just about" | | 7 | "She rounded the corner, the" | | 8 | "Herrera was gone, swallowed by" | | 9 | "Quinn’s gaze swept the deserted" | | 10 | "The bone token." | | 11 | "It had to be the" | | 12 | "The Veil Market." | | 13 | "The place where the supernatural" | | 14 | "Herrera wouldn’t have come this" | | 15 | "A rusted fire escape clawed" | | 16 | "Quinn’s eyes locked onto it." | | 17 | "Herrera had used it." | | 18 | "She started climbing, her boots" | | 19 | "The air grew colder, denser," |
| | ratio | 0.902 | |
| 60.98% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the trail led here," |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 55.39% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain lashed against the pavement, a relentless percussion that blurred the neon glow of Soho’s street signs into streaks of sickly green and crimson." | | 1 | "The scent of damp earth and ozone hung heavy, a familiar perfume of the supernatural that prickled the back of her neck." | | 2 | "Three years ago, her partner, DS Morris, had died under circumstances that defied explanation, a death that had left her with more questions than answers and a …" | | 3 | "She started climbing, her boots finding precarious purchase on the wet metal, her body moving with the practiced ease of years on the force." | | 4 | "It wasn’t the neon glow of the city; it was a deeper, more primal radiance, emanating from the stalls and booths that cluttered the space." | | 5 | "She caught a glimpse of a vial containing a swirling, violet liquid that seemed to pulse with its own inner light." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "he spat, his voice thick with the accent of Seville" | | 1 | "she replied, her voice steady despite the pounding in her chest" | | 2 | "them seemed, the low hum intensifying" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |