Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFNTTAGJ87PJ5JZR9C4ZE6

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Duration:
8.8s
Cost:
$0.000319
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain lashed against the pavement, a relentless percussion that blurred the neon glow of Soho’s street signs into streaks of sickly green and crimson. Detective Harlow Quinn’s worn leather watch, its face smeared with grime, ticked steadily against her wrist as she sprinted, the slick asphalt sucking at her boots. Her breath misted in the cold air, visible in the sudden lulls between the downpour’s fury. Behind her, the silhouette of Tomás Herrera vanished around the corner of a narrow alley, his dark curls plastered to his skull, a desperate energy propelling him forward. Quinn’s military precision kept her stride controlled, her movements economical. She knew the city’s veins like the back of her hand, but this chase felt different. The scent of damp earth and ozone hung heavy, a familiar perfume of the supernatural that prickled the back of her neck. Herrera’s flight wasn’t just about escape; it was a taunt, a challenge. Three years ago, her partner, DS Morris, had died under circumstances that defied explanation, a death that had left her with more questions than answers and a burning need for justice. Now, the trail led here, to the heart of the city’s hidden underworld. She rounded the corner, the alley opening onto a narrow street choked with the exhaust fumes of idling taxis and the rhythmic throb of distant sirens. Herrera was gone, swallowed by the rain-slicked darkness. Quinn’s gaze swept the deserted thoroughfare, her sharp jawline set in a grim line. The bone token. It had to be the key. The Veil Market. The place where the supernatural traded in forbidden knowledge and dangerous artifacts. Herrera wouldn’t have come this far without a reason, and Quinn wouldn’t let him slip away. A rusted fire escape clawed its way up the side of a derelict building, its metal rungs slick with rain. Quinn’s eyes locked onto it. Herrera had used it. She started climbing, her boots finding precarious purchase on the wet metal, her body moving with the practiced ease of years on the force. The air grew colder, denser, charged with an unseen energy as she ascended. At the top, she emerged onto a narrow ledge overlooking a crumbling courtyard. Below, the Veil Market pulsed with an unnatural light. It wasn’t the neon glow of the city; it was a deeper, more primal radiance, emanating from the stalls and booths that cluttered the space. Stalls draped in tattered black cloths displayed glowing crystals, vials of iridescent liquid, and intricate, unsettling sculptures. The air hummed with a low, constant vibration, and the scent of ozone, damp earth, and something else – something metallic and faintly sweet – filled her nostrils. A bone token, cold and smooth, lay on a small stone plinth near the entrance. Quinn hesitated only for a heartbeat. The risk was immense. This was territory she knew nothing about, a place where the rules she understood didn’t apply. But Herrera was here, and he was hers. She took a deep breath, the cold air stinging her lungs. The bone token felt heavy in her pocket. She pressed it against the stone, feeling a faint, electric pulse run through her fingers. The stone shifted, revealing a hidden mechanism. With a soft click, a section of the crumbling wall slid open, revealing a narrow, damp tunnel leading downwards. Quinn didn’t pause. She dropped the token back onto the plinth, the entrance sealing itself behind her with a soft sigh of stone. The tunnel was pitch black, but her eyes, adjusted to the gloom, saw the faint phosphorescent glow emanating from the walls ahead. It was a path worn by countless feet, a secret artery beneath the city. She moved with deliberate silence, her boots making no sound on the damp earth. The air grew thicker, the hum louder, a low thrum that vibrated in her bones. The scent of ozone intensified, mingling with the metallic tang and the faint, sickly sweet odor of something decaying. The tunnel opened into a vast, cavernous space. The Veil Market sprawled before her, a subterranean bazaar lit by flickering torches and the eerie glow of enchanted artifacts. Stalls lined the walls, their owners – figures shrouded in shadow or draped in exotic fabrics – watched her approach with unreadable expressions. The air was thick with the smell of ozone, damp stone, and the sharp tang of alchemical concoctions. The low hum was now a constant drone, punctuated by the occasional crackle of magic. Quinn moved with calculated caution, her hand resting near the grip of her service pistol, concealed beneath her coat. She scanned the crowd, her sharp eyes searching for Herrera. He was here, she was sure of it. He moved with the practiced ease of someone who knew this place, weaving through the stalls like a ghost. He disappeared behind a curtain of black silk hanging from a makeshift frame. Quinn followed, her heart hammering against her ribs. The stall was a den of shadows. Herrera was there, his back to her, speaking in hushed tones to a figure cloaked in darkness. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck glinted faintly in the torchlight. Quinn pressed herself against the wall, her breath held. She needed to know what he was doing here, what he was trading. The stakes were higher than ever. Her partner’s death, the unexplained supernatural elements, the trail leading inexorably to this place – it all converged here. She inched closer, her senses on overdrive. The air crackled with latent magic. She caught a glimpse of a vial containing a swirling, violet liquid that seemed to pulse with its own inner light. Herrera’s voice was low, urgent. “The bone token. It’s the key. He’ll find it.” The cloaked figure nodded, a gesture visible only in the dim light. “He’s close. The detective is relentless.” Herrera’s expression was grim. “Then we end it. Now.” Quinn’s hand tightened on her pistol. The decision was made. She couldn’t let him walk away. Not again. Not with the truth still buried. She pushed off the wall, stepping into the dim light of the stall. “Detective Quinn,” she said, her voice cutting through the low murmur of the market, cold and precise. “You shouldn’t have come down here.” Herrera turned, his eyes wide with surprise, then hardening into defiance. The Saint Christopher medallion seemed to glow faintly in the torchlight. “You think you can stop me?” he spat, his voice thick with the accent of Seville. “You think you understand what’s at stake?” Quinn leveled her pistol, the muzzle cold and hard against the air between them. “I understand enough,” she replied, her voice steady despite the pounding in her chest. “You’re involved. You know who killed my partner.” The market around them seemed to hold its breath, the low hum intensifying. The chase had led her here, into the heart of the supernatural, and the truth, whatever it was, was finally within reach.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1152
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"inexorably"
count1
highlights
0"inexorably"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1152
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"practiced ease"
count2
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"unreadable"
count1
13
word"calculated"
count1
14
word"scanned"
count1
15
word"silk"
count1
16
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"rhythmic"
2"throb"
3"practiced ease"
4"charged"
5"pulsed"
6"intricate"
7"electric"
8"pulse"
9"gloom"
10"silence"
11"vibrated"
12"unreadable"
13"calculated"
14"scanned"
15"silk"
16"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences83
matches
0"e with surprise"
74.01% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1156
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1104
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn12
Tomás1
Herrera11
Morris1
Veil3
Market3
Saint2
Christopher2
Seville1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Morris"
5"Market"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
1"Seville"
globalScore0.957
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"liquid that seemed to pulse with its own inner light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1156
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
21.67% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean88.92
std20.08
cv0.226
sampleLengths
095
1104
288
379
4128
560
6107
784
869
991
1075
1160
12116
92.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"was gone"
1"was made"
2"was, was"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was doing was trading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences85
ratio0.059
matches
0"Herrera’s flight wasn’t just about escape; it was a taunt, a challenge."
1"It wasn’t the neon glow of the city; it was a deeper, more primal radiance, emanating from the stalls and booths that cluttered the space."
2"The air hummed with a low, constant vibration, and the scent of ozone, damp earth, and something else – something metallic and faintly sweet – filled her nostrils."
3"Stalls lined the walls, their owners – figures shrouded in shadow or draped in exotic fabrics – watched her approach with unreadable expressions."
4"Her partner’s death, the unexplained supernatural elements, the trail leading inexorably to this place – it all converged here."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1100
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, sickly sweet odor"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.017272727272727273
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.01
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean13.6
std6.97
cv0.513
sampleLengths
025
126
216
328
410
516
622
712
831
913
1026
118
1214
133
146
153
1612
1716
1820
195
204
2124
2213
2313
249
2525
2617
2728
2815
296
304
3116
328
3311
348
3515
367
3719
383
3920
4022
4114
4214
4315
4419
458
4620
4723
4818
4915
39.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.25882352941176473
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences82
matches
0"Her breath misted in the"
1"She knew the city’s veins"
2"She rounded the corner, the"
3"It had to be the"
4"She started climbing, her boots"
5"It wasn’t the neon glow"
6"She took a deep breath,"
7"She pressed it against the"
8"She dropped the token back"
9"It was a path worn"
10"She moved with deliberate silence,"
11"She scanned the crowd, her"
12"He was here, she was"
13"He moved with the practiced"
14"He disappeared behind a curtain"
15"She needed to know what"
16"Her partner’s death, the unexplained"
17"She inched closer, her senses"
18"She caught a glimpse of"
19"She couldn’t let him walk"
ratio0.293
8.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences82
matches
0"The rain lashed against the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s worn leather"
2"Her breath misted in the"
3"Quinn’s military precision kept her"
4"She knew the city’s veins"
5"The scent of damp earth"
6"Herrera’s flight wasn’t just about"
7"She rounded the corner, the"
8"Herrera was gone, swallowed by"
9"Quinn’s gaze swept the deserted"
10"The bone token."
11"It had to be the"
12"The Veil Market."
13"The place where the supernatural"
14"Herrera wouldn’t have come this"
15"A rusted fire escape clawed"
16"Quinn’s eyes locked onto it."
17"Herrera had used it."
18"She started climbing, her boots"
19"The air grew colder, denser,"
ratio0.902
60.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Now, the trail led here,"
ratio0.012
55.39% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The rain lashed against the pavement, a relentless percussion that blurred the neon glow of Soho’s street signs into streaks of sickly green and crimson."
1"The scent of damp earth and ozone hung heavy, a familiar perfume of the supernatural that prickled the back of her neck."
2"Three years ago, her partner, DS Morris, had died under circumstances that defied explanation, a death that had left her with more questions than answers and a …"
3"She started climbing, her boots finding precarious purchase on the wet metal, her body moving with the practiced ease of years on the force."
4"It wasn’t the neon glow of the city; it was a deeper, more primal radiance, emanating from the stalls and booths that cluttered the space."
5"She caught a glimpse of a vial containing a swirling, violet liquid that seemed to pulse with its own inner light."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he spat, his voice thick with the accent of Seville"
1"she replied, her voice steady despite the pounding in her chest"
2"them seemed, the low hum intensifying"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he spat (spit)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.222
73.1519%