Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFNXWX77XW3GPVBFX5ZT61

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Duration:
1m 22s
Cost:
$0.001121
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SiliconFlow

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock was insistent. Not the cheerful rap of a delivery, not the impatient thump of a landlord. This was something else — three measured strikes that vibrated through the three deadbolts on Eva’s front door. Rory froze, a cold splash of intuition trickling down her spine. She was alone. Eva was at the British Library, chasing down some obscure reference to Babylonian binding rituals. The flat on Brick Lane was a cave of paper and shadows, the only light coming from a battered desk lamp that painted the towers of books in gold and deep umber. Ptolemy, the tabby, lifted his head from a nest of scrolls on the sofa, his eyes catching the low light like coins. She didn’t want to answer. Every sensible nerve ending told her to be still, to let the silence swallow the sound. But London didn’t grant that kind of mercy. It could be Silas from the bar below, needing a favour. It could be Yu-Fei with a last-minute delivery run. It could be Evan. That last thought propelled her off the threadbare armchair. Her heart was a hard, fast drum against her ribs as she crossed the cramped space, the scent of old paper, curry from downstairs, and Eva’s jasmine incense hanging in the air. She didn’t look through the peephole. She simply placed her palm flat against the cool wood, took a breath that did nothing to steady her, and turned the three locks. The door swung inward. And there he was, a spectre from a life that felt both yesterday and a century ago, haloed by the damp, sodium-lit gloom of the Brick Lane evening. Rain glittered in his slicked-back platinum hair like shattered crystal and beaded on the shoulders of his immaculate charcoal wool coat. Lucien Moreau. Time didn’t so much stop as warp. It folded in on itself, dragging her back to a dimly lit booth in his club, to the scent of his cologne and expensive whiskey, to the low timbre of his voice explaining the impossible rules of a world she never wanted to know. Her quick, out-of-the-box thinking, usually so reliable, stuttered and failed. All she could do was stare. He looked exactly the same. Impeccable. The tailored lines of his suit, the sharp cut of his jaw, the unsettling, beautiful contrast of his eyes — one the warm amber of cognac, the other a pitiless, absorbing black. He leaned lightly on the ivory handle of his cane, his expression unreadable as a tombstone. “Aurora,” he said, and her name in his French-tinged accent was a key turning in a long-locked door. “Lucien.” Her own voice sounded thin, borrowed. She didn’t step back to let him in. The threshold felt like the only defense she had left. A faint, almost imperceptible smile touched his lips. It didn’t reach his eyes. “May I come in? The weather is… disagreeable.” “It’s London. It’s always disagreeable.” The retort was automatic, a relic of their old, easier rapport. She saw his amber eye flicker, just for a second, and then down to her left hand, still braced against the doorframe. To the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. His gaze lingered there, and she felt it like a physical touch, warm and unsettling. Finally, she moved aside, a silent concession. He crossed the threshold with a slight, practised dip of his cane, his presence immediately overwhelming the small flat. He seemed to take up all the air, all the space. He shrugged off his coat, revealing a suit of the same charcoal grey, perfectly fitted. He draped the coat over his arm, his movements economical and precise. “I see Eva’s filing system remains… aspirational,” he remarked, his heterochromatic eyes scanning the chaotic landscape of research. “It’s a system. You wouldn’t understand it.” Rory closed the door, thumbing the deadbolts back into place with a series of solid, final clunks. The sound sealed them in together. She turned to face him, crossing her arms over her chest. “What are you doing here, Lucien?” He didn’t answer immediately. Instead, he moved further into the room, his cane tapping softly on the floorboards. He stopped by Eva’s desk, his gloved fingers brushing the edge of an open grimoire. Ptolemy, intrigued, uncoiled himself and padded over, weaving figure-eights around the fine wool of Lucien’s trousers. The half-demon glanced down, a genuine flicker of surprise softening his features for a moment. He offered a finger for the cat to sniff. “You left,” Lucien said finally, his voice low. He didn’t look at her. “I did.” “Without a word.” “You know why.” Now he turned. The lamplight carved the planes of his face into sharp relief, making the amber eye glow and the black one look like a hole into nothing. “I know what you believed. I am less certain you knew the truth.” Anger, hot and sudden, flushed through her cool-headed resolve. “The truth? The truth was a man with his throat torn out in an alley behind your club, Lucien. The truth was you standing over him with blood on your cuff and a story that didn’t add up. The truth was you telling me to forget what I saw, to go back to my deliveries and my little life above the bar.” Her voice tightened. “The truth was you asking for a trust you hadn’t earned.” He absorbed her words without flinching. “The man in the alley was a *Karthos* demon. He had killed three mortal women, draining their life essence to sustain himself in this realm. He was about to select a fourth. My methods are seldom tidy, Aurora, but they are effective. I did not tell you the full story because the full story would have placed you in more danger. Knowledge is a currency, and a target.” “So you decided for me,” she shot back. “You made the choice about what I could handle. That’s not protection, Lucien. That’s arrogance.” A muscle twitched in his jaw. For the first time, his composure showed a hairline fracture. “It was a mistake.” The admission hung in the incense-heavy air, stark and simple. It disarmed her more than any deflection or justification could have. “I came tonight,” he continued, his gaze holding hers, “because the danger I sought to shield you from has evolved. It is no longer a question of inconvenient knowledge. Your friend Eva is digging in places that have attracted notice. And your name, *ma chère*, has become linked with hers in certain circles. Unpleasant circles.” A cold knot formed in Rory’s stomach. “What kind of notice?” “The kind that does not send a politely worded letter.” He took a step closer. The space between them crackled with all the unsaid things, the remembered attraction that had always simmered beneath their businesslike exchanges — the brush of his hand guiding her through a crowd, the way his eyes tracked her across a room. The hurt of his omission was a fresh wound, but the pull was still there, a treacherous undertow. “Why tell me now?” she whispered. “Because my previous strategy was a failure,” he said, his voice dropping, becoming almost intimate. “And because seeing you walk away was… intolerable.” The raw honesty in the words stole her breath. She could smell the rain on him, the subtle, expensive scent of his skin, the wool of his suit. She saw the fatigue now, etched in faint shadows beneath his extraordinary eyes. The infallible Lucien Moreau looked, for a fleeting second, like a man carrying a weight. He lifted his cane, not as a support, but to gesture slightly with the ivory handle. “I am offering the truth now. All of it. It will be ugly, and it will bind you to my world in ways you may not wish. But the alternative is leaving you blind, and I find I cannot do that again.” Ptolemy purred, a loud, incongruous rumble in the tense silence. Rory uncrossed her arms, her fingers brushing the scar on her wrist. A childhood accident, her father had said. A silly fall. She wondered now, staring into Lucien’s mismatched eyes, if any scar was ever that simple. “Start talking,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. “And start from the beginning.” A genuine smile, small and weary, touched his lips. “As you wish.” He didn’t move to the sofa or the chair. He remained standing, close enough that she could see the individual droplets of moisture still caught in his pale lashes. The story began, a low, steady flow of words about realms, rivalries, and a deadly search for an artifact Eva had inadvertently referenced in a published paper. Rory listened, the clutter of the flat fading away, the entire universe narrowing to the sound of his voice, the intensity of his gaze, and the frightening, thrilling realisation that walking away a second time might already be impossible.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.071
86.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1492
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"perfectly"
2"softly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1492
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"tinged"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count2
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"chaotic"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"stark"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"treacherous"
count1
16
word"etched"
count1
17
word"fleeting"
count1
18
word"weight"
count1
19
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"vibrated"
2"down her spine"
3"silence"
4"gloom"
5"shattered"
6"crystal"
7"unreadable"
8"tinged"
9"flicker"
10"scanning"
11"chaotic"
12"resolve"
13"stark"
14"stomach"
15"treacherous"
16"etched"
17"fleeting"
18"weight"
19"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords3
totalWords1484
ratio0.002
matches
0"Karthos"
1"ma chère"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1127
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva5
British1
Library1
Babylonian1
Brick2
Lane2
London1
Silas1
Yu-Fei1
Evan1
Moreau2
French-tinged1
Rory5
Lucien5
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Silas"
2"Evan"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
5"Lucien"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"British"
1"Library"
2"Babylonian"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like the only defense she had left"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.674
wordCount1484
matches
0"not as a support, but to gesture slightly with the ivory handle"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"grant that kind"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean40.11
std26.97
cv0.673
sampleLengths
036
183
253
371
44
551
667
754
818
925
1021
1161
1264
1318
1447
1573
1613
172
183
193
2042
2185
2274
2323
2420
2521
2655
2711
2874
296
3023
3156
3258
3347
3415
3512
3695
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs166
matches(empty)
61.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences105
ratio0.029
matches
0"This was something else — three measured strikes that vibrated through the three deadbolts on Eva’s front door."
1"The tailored lines of his suit, the sharp cut of his jaw, the unsettling, beautiful contrast of his eyes — one the warm amber of cognac, the other a pitiless, absorbing black."
2"The space between them crackled with all the unsaid things, the remembered attraction that had always simmered beneath their businesslike exchanges — the brush of his hand guiding her through a crowd, the way his eyes tracked her across a room."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1135
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"damp, sodium-lit gloom"
1"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03259911894273128
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.014977973568281937
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean14.13
std12.26
cv0.867
sampleLengths
04
114
218
311
43
515
632
722
85
916
108
1111
129
134
149
1532
166
1724
184
1928
2021
212
227
2344
2410
256
265
271
2832
2916
3018
317
328
3310
348
355
368
3716
3822
398
4015
417
4219
4311
4415
4512
4618
4724
486
4911
48.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3619047619047619
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners38
76.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Finally, she moved aside, a"
1"Instead, he moved further into"
ratio0.023
26.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences87
matches
0"She was alone."
1"She didn’t want to answer."
2"It could be Silas from"
3"It could be Yu-Fei with"
4"It could be Evan."
5"Her heart was a hard,"
6"She didn’t look through the"
7"She simply placed her palm"
8"It folded in on itself,"
9"Her quick, out-of-the-box thinking, usually"
10"He looked exactly the same."
11"He leaned lightly on the"
12"he said, and her name"
13"Her own voice sounded thin,"
14"She didn’t step back to"
15"It didn’t reach his eyes."
16"She saw his amber eye"
17"His gaze lingered there, and"
18"He crossed the threshold with"
19"He seemed to take up"
ratio0.483
17.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences87
matches
0"The knock was insistent."
1"This was something else —"
2"Rory froze, a cold splash"
3"She was alone."
4"Eva was at the British"
5"The flat on Brick Lane"
6"Ptolemy, the tabby, lifted his"
7"She didn’t want to answer."
8"Every sensible nerve ending told"
9"It could be Silas from"
10"It could be Yu-Fei with"
11"It could be Evan."
12"That last thought propelled her"
13"Her heart was a hard,"
14"She didn’t look through the"
15"She simply placed her palm"
16"The door swung inward."
17"Rain glittered in his slicked-back"
18"Time didn’t so much stop"
19"It folded in on itself,"
ratio0.885
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"To the small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"Now he turned."
ratio0.023
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The flat on Brick Lane was a cave of paper and shadows, the only light coming from a battered desk lamp that painted the towers of books in gold and deep umber."
1"And there he was, a spectre from a life that felt both yesterday and a century ago, haloed by the damp, sodium-lit gloom of the Brick Lane evening."
2"It folded in on itself, dragging her back to a dimly lit booth in his club, to the scent of his cologne and expensive whiskey, to the low timbre of his voice ex…"
3"The space between them crackled with all the unsaid things, the remembered attraction that had always simmered beneath their businesslike exchanges — the brush …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he remarked, his heterochromatic eyes scanning the chaotic landscape of research"
1"Lucien said finally, his voice low"
2"he said, his voice dropping, becoming almost intimate"
3"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he continued (continue)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.143
83.0432%