Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFP2XEP8S1BN80R9R794G5

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7.7s
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Clarifai

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The amber sky bledinto the horizon, a molten gold that swallowed the stars, as the three figures emerged from the narrow, moss-choked entrance. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, felt the weight of the pendant at her throat—a small, crimson Heartstone that pulsed faintly against her skin, a warmth spreading through her like a secret. Nyx, the Shade, shifted fluidly, their form dissolving into a smoky wisp that flowed over the uneven stones before coalescing again, a silhouette of living shadow that seemed to absorb the dim light. Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae Seer, walked with an ethereal grace, her silver hair catching the strange light, leaving no trace on the ground beneath her feet. The air here was thick, heavy with the scent of overripe fruit and something else—something ancient and faintly metallic, like copper and ozone. It clung to their clothes, a tangible reminder of the realm’s nature. The ground beneath their boots was soft, yielding slightly, covered in a carpet of velvety moss that seemed to sigh as they passed. Aurora’s eyes, bright blue and wide with a mix of awe and apprehension, scanned the surroundings. Vines, thick as a man’s arm, snaked across crumbling stone arches, their leaves a deep, unnatural green that shimmered with an inner light. Orchards stretched out, laden with fruits she couldn’t name—glowing melons the size of her head, clusters of berries that pulsed with a soft, internal fire. “Look,” Nyx breathed, their voice a whisper carried on the wind. They gestured towards a clearing where a grand feast was laid out on a table carved from a single, petrified tree. Helbound souls, their forms twisted and gaunt, moved with unnatural speed, carving meat from a roast that seemed to steam with an inner heat. The air vibrated with the sound of their chewing, a low, guttural chorus that echoed strangely in the vast space. Aurora felt a prickle of unease, a cold finger tracing her spine. These were not the souls of the damned she’d heard tales of; they moved with a desperate, almost joyful fervor, their eyes vacant yet focused on the bounty before them. Isolde stopped, her silver hair flowing like liquid moonlight. She raised a hand, and the air around her shimmered, revealing faint, shimmering distortions—tears in the Veil, the barrier between realms. “The Veil weakens here,” she murmured, her voice like dry leaves rustling. “The boundary is thin, porous. Gluttony breeds excess, and excess breeds weakness in the walls between worlds.” She turned to Aurora, her pale lavender eyes holding a depth of ancient knowledge. “Your pendant... it sings. It recognizes the resonance.” Aurora touched the Heartstone again, feeling its warmth intensify. “It’s like a beacon,” she whispered, her voice tight. “A signal in the dark.” She glanced back at the feast, the sight of the Helbound souls devouring their meal with such fervor making her stomach churn. “What are they? Why are they here?” “Souls bound by their sin,” Isolde replied, her speech always a riddle. “They feast eternally, yet hunger eternally. Their gluttony is their prison, and their prison is this realm. But the Veil’s weakness... it makes them more than just prisoners. It makes them... hungry for more.” She gestured towards the vines that snaked across the stone. “Look closer, Rory. The plants here... they are not merely nourished. They are *fed*.” As they moved deeper, the air grew denser, the sounds more pronounced. The rustle of leaves became a chorus, the drip of water a rhythmic chant. Aurora’s pendant pulsed stronger, a steady throb against her skin. Nyx, shifting into incorporeal form, flowed like smoke through a crack in the wall, returning moments later with a look of profound unease. “The shadows... they move without them,” Nyx stated, their voice a faint sigh. “They are not shadows *of* things, but shadows *that* are things. They watch us.” They entered a vast hall, its ceiling lost in darkness, illuminated only by the warm, amber light filtering from above. At the far end, a grand stage was set for a culinary competition. Chefs, their forms indistinct and shimmering, moved with supernatural speed, tossing ingredients that burst into flames or transformed into exotic dishes before their eyes. The air was thick with the scent of spices and roasting meat, a sensory overload that made Aurora’s head swim. She felt a sudden, overwhelming urge to consume, a physical craving that had nothing to do with hunger. Isolde stood beside her, her silver hair shimmering. “This is the heart of Gluttony,” she intoned. “Excess made manifest. But remember, Rory, the heartstone’s warmth... it is not just a beacon. It is a key. It resonates with the Veil’s weakness. It can open a path... or it can be a trap.” She touched Aurora’s arm, her touch cold. “Be wary of the feast. It offers sustenance, but it also offers a taste of the realm’s soul. And the soul of Gluttony is insatiable.” Aurora looked at the feast, the Helbound souls devouring their meal with such desperate joy, and then at Nyx, who stood watching the chefs with a mixture of fascination and dread, and Isolde, her eyes holding the weight of centuries. The amber sky outside seemed to pulse with a hidden life, and the Veil’s shimmer was now a constant, unsettling presence. The ancient, otherworldly place had revealed its wonders and its terrors in equal measure. The key was in her hand, the blade at her side, and the path forward was shrouded in the thick, intoxicating air of Gluttony. The exploration had only just begun, and the realm’s insatiable hunger was already beginning to echo within her own chest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She glanced back [back]"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
94.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount949
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount949
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"tangible"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"apprehension"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"resonance"
count1
13
word"beacon"
count2
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"churn"
count1
16
word"rhythmic"
count1
17
word"throb"
count1
18
word"profound"
count1
19
word"pulse"
count1
20
word"otherworldly"
count1
21
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"tangible"
4"reminder"
5"apprehension"
6"scanned"
7"shimmered"
8"whisper"
9"vibrated"
10"echoed"
11"tracing"
12"resonance"
13"beacon"
14"stomach"
15"churn"
16"rhythmic"
17"throb"
18"profound"
19"pulse"
20"otherworldly"
21"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences43
matches
0"felt a prickle"
9.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences43
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences48
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords943
ratio0.003
matches
0"fed"
1"of"
2"that"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.55% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount757
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory1
Heartstone2
Shade1
Varga1
Half-Fae1
Seer1
Veil2
Aurora9
Helbound3
Isolde5
Nyx5
Gluttony1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
3"Shade"
4"Seer"
5"Aurora"
6"Isolde"
7"Nyx"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.906
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"shadow that seemed to absorb the dim light"
1"moss that seemed to sigh as they passed"
2"roast that seemed to steam with an inner heat"
93.96% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.06
wordCount943
matches
0"not shadows *of* things, but shadows *"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
25.85% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean94.3
std22.68
cv0.24
sampleLengths
0116
1122
2118
381
452
570
686
795
884
9119
88.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences43
matches
0"was laid"
1"was shrouded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs107
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences48
ratio0.104
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, felt the weight of the pendant at her throat—a small, crimson Heartstone that pulsed faintly against her skin, a warmth spreading through her like a secret."
1"The air here was thick, heavy with the scent of overripe fruit and something else—something ancient and faintly metallic, like copper and ozone."
2"Orchards stretched out, laden with fruits she couldn’t name—glowing melons the size of her head, clusters of berries that pulsed with a soft, internal fire."
3"These were not the souls of the damned she’d heard tales of; they moved with a desperate, almost joyful fervor, their eyes vacant yet focused on the bounty before them."
4"She raised a hand, and the air around her shimmered, revealing faint, shimmering distortions—tears in the Veil, the barrier between realms."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount763
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"narrow, moss-choked entrance."
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.028833551769331587
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010484927916120577
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences48
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences48
mean19.65
std9.18
cv0.467
sampleLengths
023
134
233
326
423
512
623
716
823
925
1011
1121
1224
1320
1412
1530
169
1721
1812
1931
208
219
229
2327
247
2512
2644
2714
2812
2914
3010
3123
3213
3314
3420
3513
3624
3720
3818
398
408
4143
4225
4340
4421
4514
4624
4720
65.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4583333333333333
totalSentences48
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences42
matches
0"It clung to their clothes,"
1"They gestured towards a clearing"
2"She raised a hand, and"
3"she murmured, her voice like"
4"She turned to Aurora, her"
5"she whispered, her voice tight"
6"She glanced back at the"
7"She gestured towards the vines"
8"They entered a vast hall,"
9"She felt a sudden, overwhelming"
10"She touched Aurora’s arm, her"
ratio0.262
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences42
matches
0"The amber sky bledinto the"
1"Aurora Carter, known to her"
2"Nyx, the Shade, shifted fluidly,"
3"Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae Seer,"
4"The air here was thick,"
5"It clung to their clothes,"
6"The ground beneath their boots"
7"Aurora’s eyes, bright blue and"
8"Vines, thick as a man’s"
9"Orchards stretched out, laden with"
10"Nyx breathed, their voice a"
11"They gestured towards a clearing"
12"The air vibrated with the"
13"Aurora felt a prickle of"
14"These were not the souls"
15"Isolde stopped, her silver hair"
16"She raised a hand, and"
17"she murmured, her voice like"
18"She turned to Aurora, her"
19"Aurora touched the Heartstone again,"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The amber sky bledinto the horizon, a molten gold that swallowed the stars, as the three figures emerged from the narrow, moss-choked entrance."
1"Nyx, the Shade, shifted fluidly, their form dissolving into a smoky wisp that flowed over the uneven stones before coalescing again, a silhouette of living shad…"
2"Helbound souls, their forms twisted and gaunt, moved with unnatural speed, carving meat from a roast that seemed to steam with an inner heat."
3"The air vibrated with the sound of their chewing, a low, guttural chorus that echoed strangely in the vast space."
4"Chefs, their forms indistinct and shimmering, moved with supernatural speed, tossing ingredients that burst into flames or transformed into exotic dishes before…"
5"She felt a sudden, overwhelming urge to consume, a physical craving that had nothing to do with hunger."
6"Aurora looked at the feast, the Helbound souls devouring their meal with such desperate joy, and then at Nyx, who stood watching the chefs with a mixture of fas…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Nyx breathed, their voice a whisper carried on the wind"
1"she whispered, her voice tight"
2"Isolde replied, her speech always a riddle"
3"Nyx stated, their voice a faint sigh"
4"She touched, her touch cold"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"Nyx stated (state)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.533
62.1324%