"She'd been dreaming of Evan—not the worst dreams, but the ordinary ones, the ones where he was just there, sitting at the kitchen table with a cup of coffee, smiling that smile that used to make her feel like the center of his universe."
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"Evan wouldn't knock like that—he'd have kicked the door in by now, or at least shouted through the letterbox."
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"She'd fallen asleep in her clothes again—jeans and a thin cotton shirt that smelled faintly of sesame oil and soy sauce from her shift at the restaurant."
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"She'd spent three months trying to forget it, three months of waking up reaching for someone who wasn't there, of walking past the Golden Empress and remembering the way he'd leaned against the counter, watching her with those impossible eyes—one amber, one black as a starless night."
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"Only he called her that—Aurora."
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"She could smell him through the grain—cologne and something darker, something that reminded her of old books and secrets."
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"She stepped back from the door, suddenly aware of how she must look—hair tangled from sleep, eyes probably bloodshot, clothes wrinkled and smelling of work."
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"The flat was tiny—one room that served as living room and kitchen, a bedroom barely large enough for the bed, a bathroom with tiles that were probably white under the accumulated grime."
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"Lucien turned to face her, and for a moment he just looked at her—really looked, the way he used to when they were alone together, like he was trying to memorize every detail."
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"Rory closed her eyes and let herself believe, just for a moment, that maybe she could have it all—the extraordinary life, the love, the chance to be who she was meant to be."
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"She'd been dreaming of Evan—not the worst dreams, but the ordinary ones, the ones where he was just there, sitting at the kitchen table with a cup of coffee, sm…"
1
"She'd fallen asleep in her clothes again—jeans and a thin cotton shirt that smelled faintly of sesame oil and soy sauce from her shift at the restaurant."
2
"She'd spent three months trying to forget it, three months of waking up reaching for someone who wasn't there, of walking past the Golden Empress and rememberin…"
3
"She could smell him through the grain—cologne and something darker, something that reminded her of old books and secrets."
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"She'd been avoiding it, avoiding everything that might remind her of the choices she'd made, the bridges she'd burned."
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"She'd spent the last three months trying to convince herself that she could be someone else, someone ordinary, someone who delivered Chinese food and paid her r…"
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"But there were shadows under his eyes that hadn't been there before, and his tie was loosened at the throat, as if he'd been wearing it for too many hours strai…"
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"The flat was tiny—one room that served as living room and kitchen, a bedroom barely large enough for the bed, a bathroom with tiles that were probably white und…"
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"But instead she found herself stepping closer, her hands coming up to rest on his chest, feeling the steady beat of his heart beneath her palms."
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"She lifted her hand, touching his face, tracing the line of his jaw with her fingertips."
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"Lucien's face lit up with a smile that made her breath catch."
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"She stepped into his arms, resting her head on his chest, listening to the steady rhythm of his heart."