Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFQEGA3GEHQZ2VQDYP39HE

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Duration:
45.4s
Cost:
$0.002584
Provider:
Novita

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air shimmered like heat rising from pavement as Aurora stepped through the standing stones. The Heartstone pendant at her throat pulsed warm against her skin, its crimson glow casting strange shadows across the ancient oak trunks. Behind her, Nyx's form flickered between solidity and shadow, their violet eyes scanning the grove with quiet intensity. "Time moves differently here," Isolde murmured, her silver hair catching moonlight that shouldn't have existed beneath the canopy. Her bare feet left no impression in the carpet of wildflowers that bloomed impossibly—bluebells beside winter roses, spring crocuses tangled with autumn foxgloves. "Watch the shadows. They have teeth." Aurora's fingers brushed the cool hilt of the Fae-forged blade at her belt. The grove hummed with energy that prickled along her skin, raising the fine hairs on her arms. The trees here grew twisted, their bark black as ink and veined with silver that pulsed faintly like a slow heartbeat. Between their roots, mushrooms glowed with bioluminescent light, casting eerie blue halos across the forest floor. Nyx moved ahead, their shadow-form stretching unnaturally long before snapping back to humanoid shape. "The air tastes of burnt sugar and lightning," they whispered, voice carrying on a wind Aurora couldn't feel. "This place remembers blood." Ahead, the path curved around a massive oak whose trunk bore a hollow large enough to walk through. The opening shimmered like disturbed water, reflecting colors that didn't exist in the mortal world—shades of violet too deep, greens too vibrant. Aurora's breath caught as she reached out, her fingertips passing through the surface with only the faintest resistance, like pushing through spider silk. "Wait—" Isolde began, but the decision was made. The world inverted. Aurora's stomach lurched as gravity shifted sideways, then righted itself with a nauseating snap. She stumbled onto soft moss, the air suddenly thick with the scent of ripe peaches and something metallic beneath. Nyx materialized beside her, their form more substantial here, the edges of their shadow-body sharpening into something nearly human. Isolde stepped through last, her lavender eyes glowing faintly in the twilight. They stood in a clearing where the trees grew upside-down, their roots twisting into a canopy overhead while their branches speared downward into earth that shimmered like liquid mercury. The sky—if it could be called that—swirled with amber and violet clouds that moved against each other in opposing currents. Aurora's pendant flared hot against her collarbone. "Where are we?" she whispered, her voice swallowed by the oppressive silence. Isolde tilted her head, listening to something Aurora couldn't hear. "The borderlands. Where Hel kisses the Fae wilds." She pointed to where the upside-down trees gave way to a vineyard stretching into the distance, the grapes black and swollen on the vine. "Dymas lies that way. Can you hear them?" At first, there was nothing. Then—a distant cacophony of clinking glass and laughter, the sizzle of meat on grills, the rhythmic chop of knives. The smells grew richer, overwhelming: caramelized onions, roasting meats, spices that burned Aurora's nostrils and made her eyes water. Her stomach growled despite herself. Nyx's form rippled uneasily. "The Prince's feasting halls. We shouldn't linger." Aurora moved toward the vineyard, drawn by some inexplicable pull. The black grapes glistened with dew that smelled faintly of wine. When she reached out to touch one, Isolde caught her wrist with surprising strength. "Everything here has a price," the seer warned. "Even knowledge." A rustle in the undergrowth. They turned as one to see a creature watching them from beneath the roots of an inverted tree—something with too many eyes and a mouth that split its face horizontally. It chittered at them, then vanished into the shadows. "Wardens," Nyx murmured. "They'll report our presence." The ground trembled faintly beneath their feet. In the distance, the amber clouds parted to reveal towering spires of black glass, their peaks lost in the swirling sky. Lights moved within them—hundreds, thousands of windows glowing gold against the eternal twilight. Aurora's pendant pulsed in time with the distant lights, its rhythm accelerating as they watched. Isolde's breath fogged in the suddenly chill air. "The Veil is thin here. We stand between worlds." She turned slowly, taking in the impossible landscape. "This place remembers when the realms were one." Aurora's fingers found the Fae blade again, its chill seeping through the leather sheath to bite at her fingertips. The unease in her gut had nothing to do with the disorienting landscape. Something watched them—not the many-eyed creature from before, but something older. The air grew heavier, pressing against her eardrums until they popped. Nyx went perfectly still. "Don't move," they breathed. Between one blink and the next, the shadows beneath the inverted trees deepened, stretching toward them like grasping fingers. The temperature plummeted. Aurora's exhale crystallized in the air before her face. The Heartstone pendant burned white-hot against her skin. Then—a sound like tearing fabric. The space before them rippled, and a figure stepped through the Veil as easily as passing through a curtain. Taller than any human, clad in robes that shifted color with every movement, the being regarded them with eyes that held entire galaxies within their depths. Aurora's mind skittered away from comprehending its full form, settling instead on impressions—antlers like blackened bone, hands with too many joints, a smile that showed teeth sharp as needles. "Little moths," it purred, its voice layered with echoes. "Fluttering too close to the flame." Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair lifting as though underwater. "We seek only passage, Elder One." The being laughed, and the sound made Aurora's vision blur. "All who come here seek something." Its gaze landed on Aurora, and she felt it like a physical touch—cold fingers tracing the curve of her spine. "Ah. You carry old debts, mortal." The pendant throbbed painfully. Aurora forced herself to meet those impossible eyes. "We don't want trouble." "Trouble wants you." The being gestured lazily, and the landscape around them warped—the vineyard stretched impossibly long, the black grapes now watching them with pupil-less white eyes. "The Prince prepares his table. The courses are many, and the guests... hungry." Nyx's form darkened, shadows coiling around their hands. "We're leaving." The being smiled wider. "Through the door you came? Or through the one that waits ahead?" It pointed toward the distant spires, where the lights now pulsed in time with Aurora's racing heart. "The choice, as ever, is yours." The ground trembled again, harder this time. From the direction of the spires came a new sound—a hunting horn, low and resonant, shaking the very air. The being's smile turned sharp. "Run, little moths." Then the world exploded into motion.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.464
leniency0.929
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.071
73.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"lazily"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
2"perfectly"
3"lazily"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"shimmered"
count3
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"intensity"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count2
7
word"lurched"
count1
8
word"oppressive"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"cacophony"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count2
13
word"chill"
count2
14
word"crystallized"
count1
15
word"depths"
count1
16
word"echoes"
count1
17
word"tracing"
count1
18
word"throbbed"
count1
19
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"pulsed"
2"flickered"
3"scanning"
4"intensity"
5"silk"
6"stomach"
7"lurched"
8"oppressive"
9"silence"
10"cacophony"
11"rhythmic"
12"trembled"
13"chill"
14"crystallized"
15"depths"
16"echoes"
17"tracing"
18"throbbed"
19"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1103
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.90% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount954
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.78
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora17
Heartstone2
Nyx7
Fae-forged1
Ahead1
Isolde7
Fae2
Veil1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.609
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.907
wordCount1103
matches
0"not the many-eyed creature from before, but something older"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean34.47
std19.99
cv0.58
sampleLengths
055
147
267
336
463
58
667
756
812
950
1048
1111
1245
1344
147
1556
1633
1754
188
1939
2024
2155
2215
2316
2442
2516
2640
2710
2839
2931
303
316
81.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences73
matches
0"was made"
1"being regarded"
2"being laughed"
3"being gestured"
4"being smiled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs155
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences88
ratio0.136
matches
0"Her bare feet left no impression in the carpet of wildflowers that bloomed impossibly—bluebells beside winter roses, spring crocuses tangled with autumn foxgloves."
1"The opening shimmered like disturbed water, reflecting colors that didn't exist in the mortal world—shades of violet too deep, greens too vibrant."
2"The sky—if it could be called that—swirled with amber and violet clouds that moved against each other in opposing currents."
3"Then—a distant cacophony of clinking glass and laughter, the sizzle of meat on grills, the rhythmic chop of knives."
4"They turned as one to see a creature watching them from beneath the roots of an inverted tree—something with too many eyes and a mouth that split its face horizontally."
5"Lights moved within them—hundreds, thousands of windows glowing gold against the eternal twilight."
6"Something watched them—not the many-eyed creature from before, but something older."
7"Then—a sound like tearing fabric."
8"Aurora's mind skittered away from comprehending its full form, settling instead on impressions—antlers like blackened bone, hands with too many joints, a smile that showed teeth sharp as needles."
9"\"All who come here seek something.\" Its gaze landed on Aurora, and she felt it like a physical touch—cold fingers tracing the curve of her spine."
10"\"Trouble wants you.\" The being gestured lazily, and the landscape around them warped—the vineyard stretched impossibly long, the black grapes now watching them with pupil-less white eyes."
11"From the direction of the spires came a new sound—a hunting horn, low and resonant, shaking the very air."
86.17% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount974
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"heavier, pressing against her"
1"white-hot against her"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.04209445585215606
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.018480492813141684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean12.53
std7.73
cv0.617
sampleLengths
015
122
218
318
423
56
613
717
821
916
1014
1118
124
1318
1422
1523
168
173
1814
1919
2019
2112
2229
2320
247
2512
2610
2732
288
295
3019
3119
325
334
347
3510
3611
3714
388
392
405
4130
429
433
444
457
4621
4713
4815
498
68.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4318181818181818
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences71
matches
0"Then—a distant cacophony of clinking"
1"Then—a sound like tearing fabric."
2"Then the world exploded into"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences71
matches
0"Her bare feet left no"
1"they whispered, voice carrying on"
2"She stumbled onto soft moss,"
3"They stood in a clearing"
4"she whispered, her voice swallowed"
5"She pointed to where the"
6"Her stomach growled despite herself."
7"They turned as one to"
8"It chittered at them, then"
9"She turned slowly, taking in"
10"it purred, its voice layered"
11"Its gaze landed on Aurora,"
12"It pointed toward the distant"
ratio0.183
51.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences71
matches
0"The air shimmered like heat"
1"The Heartstone pendant at her"
2"Isolde murmured, her silver hair"
3"Her bare feet left no"
4"Aurora's fingers brushed the cool"
5"The grove hummed with energy"
6"The trees here grew twisted,"
7"Nyx moved ahead, their shadow-form"
8"they whispered, voice carrying on"
9"The opening shimmered like disturbed"
10"Aurora's breath caught as she"
11"Isolde began, but the decision"
12"The world inverted."
13"Aurora's stomach lurched as gravity"
14"She stumbled onto soft moss,"
15"Nyx materialized beside her, their"
16"Isolde stepped through last, her"
17"They stood in a clearing"
18"The sky—if it could be"
19"Aurora's pendant flared hot against"
ratio0.817
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Her bare feet left no impression in the carpet of wildflowers that bloomed impossibly—bluebells beside winter roses, spring crocuses tangled with autumn foxglov…"
1"The opening shimmered like disturbed water, reflecting colors that didn't exist in the mortal world—shades of violet too deep, greens too vibrant."
2"Aurora's breath caught as she reached out, her fingertips passing through the surface with only the faintest resistance, like pushing through spider silk."
3"They stood in a clearing where the trees grew upside-down, their roots twisting into a canopy overhead while their branches speared downward into earth that shi…"
4"Aurora's mind skittered away from comprehending its full form, settling instead on impressions—antlers like blackened bone, hands with too many joints, a smile …"
5"Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair lifting as though underwater."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"they whispered, voice carrying on a wind Aurora couldn't feel"
1"Isolde began, but the decision was made"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"the seer warned (warn)"
4"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
5"they breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.429
76.7580%