| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She turned slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.464 | | leniency | 0.929 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 73.29% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1123 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "lazily" | | 4 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1123 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "intensity" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "lurched" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "cacophony" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "trembled" | | 13 | "chill" | | 14 | "crystallized" | | 15 | "depths" | | 16 | "echoes" | | 17 | "tracing" | | 18 | "throbbed" | | 19 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1103 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.90% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 954 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.78 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 17 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Ahead | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Fae | 2 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.609 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.907 | | wordCount | 1103 | | matches | | 0 | "not the many-eyed creature from before, but something older" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 34.47 | | std | 19.99 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 55 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 6 |
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| 81.23% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "was made" | | 1 | "being regarded" | | 2 | "being laughed" | | 3 | "being gestured" | | 4 | "being smiled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.136 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bare feet left no impression in the carpet of wildflowers that bloomed impossibly—bluebells beside winter roses, spring crocuses tangled with autumn foxgloves." | | 1 | "The opening shimmered like disturbed water, reflecting colors that didn't exist in the mortal world—shades of violet too deep, greens too vibrant." | | 2 | "The sky—if it could be called that—swirled with amber and violet clouds that moved against each other in opposing currents." | | 3 | "Then—a distant cacophony of clinking glass and laughter, the sizzle of meat on grills, the rhythmic chop of knives." | | 4 | "They turned as one to see a creature watching them from beneath the roots of an inverted tree—something with too many eyes and a mouth that split its face horizontally." | | 5 | "Lights moved within them—hundreds, thousands of windows glowing gold against the eternal twilight." | | 6 | "Something watched them—not the many-eyed creature from before, but something older." | | 7 | "Then—a sound like tearing fabric." | | 8 | "Aurora's mind skittered away from comprehending its full form, settling instead on impressions—antlers like blackened bone, hands with too many joints, a smile that showed teeth sharp as needles." | | 9 | "\"All who come here seek something.\" Its gaze landed on Aurora, and she felt it like a physical touch—cold fingers tracing the curve of her spine." | | 10 | "\"Trouble wants you.\" The being gestured lazily, and the landscape around them warped—the vineyard stretched impossibly long, the black grapes now watching them with pupil-less white eyes." | | 11 | "From the direction of the spires came a new sound—a hunting horn, low and resonant, shaking the very air." |
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| 86.17% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 974 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavier, pressing against her" | | 1 | "white-hot against her" |
| | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.04209445585215606 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018480492813141684 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 12.53 | | std | 7.73 | | cv | 0.617 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 68.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4318181818181818 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Then—a distant cacophony of clinking" | | 1 | "Then—a sound like tearing fabric." | | 2 | "Then the world exploded into" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 1 | "they whispered, voice carrying on" | | 2 | "She stumbled onto soft moss," | | 3 | "They stood in a clearing" | | 4 | "she whispered, her voice swallowed" | | 5 | "She pointed to where the" | | 6 | "Her stomach growled despite herself." | | 7 | "They turned as one to" | | 8 | "It chittered at them, then" | | 9 | "She turned slowly, taking in" | | 10 | "it purred, its voice layered" | | 11 | "Its gaze landed on Aurora," | | 12 | "It pointed toward the distant" |
| | ratio | 0.183 | |
| 51.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered like heat" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 2 | "Isolde murmured, her silver hair" | | 3 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 4 | "Aurora's fingers brushed the cool" | | 5 | "The grove hummed with energy" | | 6 | "The trees here grew twisted," | | 7 | "Nyx moved ahead, their shadow-form" | | 8 | "they whispered, voice carrying on" | | 9 | "The opening shimmered like disturbed" | | 10 | "Aurora's breath caught as she" | | 11 | "Isolde began, but the decision" | | 12 | "The world inverted." | | 13 | "Aurora's stomach lurched as gravity" | | 14 | "She stumbled onto soft moss," | | 15 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 16 | "Isolde stepped through last, her" | | 17 | "They stood in a clearing" | | 18 | "The sky—if it could be" | | 19 | "Aurora's pendant flared hot against" |
| | ratio | 0.817 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bare feet left no impression in the carpet of wildflowers that bloomed impossibly—bluebells beside winter roses, spring crocuses tangled with autumn foxglov…" | | 1 | "The opening shimmered like disturbed water, reflecting colors that didn't exist in the mortal world—shades of violet too deep, greens too vibrant." | | 2 | "Aurora's breath caught as she reached out, her fingertips passing through the surface with only the faintest resistance, like pushing through spider silk." | | 3 | "They stood in a clearing where the trees grew upside-down, their roots twisting into a canopy overhead while their branches speared downward into earth that shi…" | | 4 | "Aurora's mind skittered away from comprehending its full form, settling instead on impressions—antlers like blackened bone, hands with too many joints, a smile …" | | 5 | "Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair lifting as though underwater." |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, voice carrying on a wind Aurora couldn't feel" | | 1 | "Isolde began, but the decision was made" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "the seer warned (warn)" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "they breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.429 | |