Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFRC56GDHPFNS5Z656276K

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Duration:
29.6s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through puddles as she sprinted down the rain-slicked alley, her breath coming in sharp bursts. The suspect—a wiry man in a dark hoodie—darted ahead, his silhouette barely visible in the sodium-vapor glow of the streetlights. She'd been tailing him for hours, watching his movements through the crowded streets of Soho. The man had been making frequent stops at the Raven's Nest, a bar with a reputation for catering to London's more... unconventional clientele. Quinn's instincts told her he was involved in something bigger than petty crime, something that might finally explain what had happened to her partner three years ago. The suspect suddenly veered left, disappearing through a rusted metal door set into the side of a brick building. Quinn followed, her hand instinctively reaching for her service weapon. The door opened into a narrow stairwell that descended into darkness. She paused at the threshold, listening. Below, she could hear the distant murmur of voices and the occasional clink of glass. Taking a steadying breath, she descended the steps. At the bottom, she found herself in a long, damp tunnel. The air smelled of mildew and something else—something sharp and metallic that made the fine hairs on her arms stand up. The suspect was already moving down the tunnel, his footsteps echoing off the concrete walls. Quinn quickened her pace, her hand still on her weapon. The tunnel opened into a vast underground space, its ceiling lost in shadows. Stalls lined the perimeter, their wares glowing with an otherworldly light. Quinn recognized some of the items from her years on the force—enchanted weapons, banned alchemical substances, grimoires bound in human skin. The Veil Market. Her heart raced as she realized where she was. This was the place Morris had been investigating before he disappeared. The place where he'd told her he'd found evidence of something that couldn't possibly exist. The suspect wove through the crowd, his movements purposeful. Quinn followed, keeping a careful distance. She noted the way the market's patrons—humans and creatures she couldn't begin to identify—parted before him, as if recognizing his authority. They reached a stall at the far end of the market, its awning emblazoned with a stylized raven. The suspect exchanged a few words with the proprietor—a woman with eyes that reflected light like a cat's—and received a small, bone-white token in return. Quinn stepped closer, straining to hear their conversation. The woman's voice was low and melodic, but Quinn caught fragments: "...full moon approaches... the usual location..." The suspect nodded, pocketing the token, and turned to leave. Quinn ducked behind a nearby stall, her heart pounding. She needed that token. Needed to know what secrets it held. As the suspect moved away from the stall, Quinn made her move. She stepped out from her hiding place, her weapon drawn. "Metropolitan Police," she called out, her voice cutting through the market's ambient noise. "Stop right there." The suspect froze, his hand still in his pocket. Slowly, he turned to face her, his eyes widening in recognition. "Detective Quinn," he said, his voice calm despite the weapon trained on him. "I wondered when you'd find your way here." Quinn's grip tightened on her gun. "Hands where I can see them. Now." The suspect raised his hands slowly, a wry smile playing at the corners of his mouth. "You don't understand what you're getting into, Detective. This is bigger than you can imagine." "Try me," Quinn said, taking a step closer. "Start by telling me what that token is for." The suspect's smile widened. "Ah, yes. The bone token. Gateway to wonders and horrors alike. But I'm afraid that information comes at a price." Quinn's jaw clenched. "I'm not here to bargain." "No?" The suspect's eyes gleamed in the market's eerie light. "Then perhaps we should discuss your partner instead. DS Morris, wasn't it? Shame what happened to him." Quinn's finger twitched on the trigger. "You leave Morris out of this." "Or what?" The suspect took a step forward, ignoring the gun pointed at his chest. "You'll shoot me? In the heart of the Veil Market, surrounded by creatures that would tear you apart for a taste of human fear?" Quinn held her ground, her mind racing. The suspect was right—she was out of her depth here. But she couldn't back down now, not when she was so close to the truth. "Tell me about Morris," she said, her voice low and dangerous. "Tell me what really happened to him." The suspect's smile faded, replaced by something darker. "Morris got too close to the truth, Detective. He saw things that no human should ever see. Things that exist in the shadows between worlds." Quinn's breath caught in her throat. "What things?" The suspect shook his head. "It doesn't matter now. What matters is that you're here, asking questions you're not ready to have answered. The market moves with the full moon, Detective. If you want to find the truth, you'll need a token of your own." He nodded towards the stall behind him, where the cat-eyed woman watched their exchange with interest. Quinn hesitated, her mind warring with itself. She knew accepting the token would be crossing a line, admitting that there were forces at work beyond the understanding of the Met. But she also knew that if she walked away now, she might never get another chance to uncover the truth about Morris's disappearance. Slowly, she lowered her weapon. "Fine," she said, her voice tight. "I'll play your game. But understand this—I'm not leaving here without answers." The suspect's smile returned, wider than before. "I wouldn't expect anything less, Detective Quinn. Welcome to the Veil Market. I have a feeling you'll be seeing a lot more of it in the days to come." As Quinn approached the stall, the cat-eyed woman reached out a hand, her fingers long and delicate. In her palm lay a bone token, identical to the one the suspect had received. "The market thanks you for your patronage," the woman said, her voice like wind chimes. "May you find what you seek." Quinn took the token, its surface cool and smooth against her skin. She could feel a faint vibration emanating from it, a hum that seemed to resonate with something deep within her. She turned back to the suspect, who was already moving away through the crowd. "Wait!" she called out. "I need to know more. About Morris, about this place—" The suspect paused, glancing back over his shoulder. "All in good time, Detective. The market moves soon. If you want answers, you'll need to be ready to follow." With that, he disappeared into the throng of market-goers, leaving Quinn alone with her thoughts and the bone token burning in her palm. She looked around the market one last time, taking in the impossible sights and sounds. Then, with a deep breath, she turned and made her way back towards the surface, the weight of her decision heavy on her shoulders. The truth was out there, waiting for her. And Detective Harlow Quinn had always been willing to go to any lengths to uncover it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.621
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1205
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1205
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"otherworldly"
count1
4
word"raced"
count1
5
word"pounding"
count1
6
word"jaw clenched"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoing"
2"quickened"
3"otherworldly"
4"raced"
5"pounding"
6"jaw clenched"
7"racing"
8"could feel"
9"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"begin to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1189
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount896
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.34
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow2
Quinn21
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Veil1
Market1
Morris2
Met1
Detective2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"London"
3"Market"
globalScore0.328
windowScore0.167
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if recognizing his authority"
1"hum that seemed to resonate with something deep within her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1189
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"needed that token"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean29
std14.97
cv0.516
sampleLengths
040
165
246
355
470
53
635
736
843
919
106
1130
1222
1316
1420
1521
1613
1731
1817
1924
208
2127
2212
2339
2432
2518
2633
278
2845
2916
3053
3123
3236
3332
3421
3532
3628
3728
3823
3939
4024
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"was involved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences95
ratio0.063
matches
0"The suspect—a wiry man in a dark hoodie—darted ahead, his silhouette barely visible in the sodium-vapor glow of the streetlights."
1"The air smelled of mildew and something else—something sharp and metallic that made the fine hairs on her arms stand up."
2"Quinn recognized some of the items from her years on the force—enchanted weapons, banned alchemical substances, grimoires bound in human skin."
3"She noted the way the market's patrons—humans and creatures she couldn't begin to identify—parted before him, as if recognizing his authority."
4"The suspect exchanged a few words with the proprietor—a woman with eyes that reflected light like a cat's—and received a small, bone-white token in return."
5"The suspect was right—she was out of her depth here."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount911
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, bone-white token"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.020856201975850714
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009879253567508232
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean12.52
std6.98
cv0.558
sampleLengths
020
120
215
321
42
527
619
710
811
96
1015
118
1211
1321
1415
1510
1613
1711
1821
193
209
2111
2215
239
246
2521
2618
2725
288
2911
306
3110
329
334
347
3512
3610
3713
383
399
4011
4113
428
436
447
4516
4615
478
489
494
65.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.42105263157894735
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences74
matches
0"Slowly, he turned to face"
1"Slowly, she lowered her weapon."
2"Then, with a deep breath,"
ratio0.041
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences74
matches
0"She'd been tailing him for"
1"She paused at the threshold,"
2"Her heart raced as she"
3"She noted the way the"
4"They reached a stall at"
5"She needed that token."
6"She stepped out from her"
7"she called out, her voice"
8"he said, his voice calm"
9"she said, her voice low"
10"He nodded towards the stall"
11"She knew accepting the token"
12"she said, her voice tight"
13"She could feel a faint"
14"She turned back to the"
15"she called out"
16"She looked around the market"
ratio0.23
54.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences74
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed"
1"The suspect—a wiry man in"
2"She'd been tailing him for"
3"The man had been making"
4"Quinn's instincts told her he"
5"The suspect suddenly veered left,"
6"Quinn followed, her hand instinctively"
7"The door opened into a"
8"She paused at the threshold,"
9"The air smelled of mildew"
10"The suspect was already moving"
11"Quinn quickened her pace, her"
12"The tunnel opened into a"
13"Stalls lined the perimeter, their"
14"Quinn recognized some of the"
15"The Veil Market."
16"Her heart raced as she"
17"This was the place Morris"
18"The place where he'd told"
19"The suspect wove through the"
ratio0.811
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
55.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Quinn's instincts told her he was involved in something bigger than petty crime, something that might finally explain what had happened to her partner three yea…"
1"The suspect was already moving down the tunnel, his footsteps echoing off the concrete walls."
2"She noted the way the market's patrons—humans and creatures she couldn't begin to identify—parted before him, as if recognizing his authority."
3"The suspect exchanged a few words with the proprietor—a woman with eyes that reflected light like a cat's—and received a small, bone-white token in return."
4"She could feel a faint vibration emanating from it, a hum that seemed to resonate with something deep within her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she called out, her voice cutting through the market's ambient noise"
1"she said, her voice low and dangerous"
2"she said, her voice tight"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.207
leniency0.414
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.069
79.4897%