| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.522 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 803 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 803 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "fractured" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "wavered" | | 10 | "shattered" | | 11 | "trembled" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "fluttered" | | 14 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 789 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.27% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 672 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Aurora | 13 | | Fae | 5 | | Nyx | 6 | | Isolde | 6 | | Earth | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Earth" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.533 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 43.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if bowing to unseen royalty" | | 1 | "seemed woven from living vines and starlight" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.535 | | wordCount | 789 | | matches | | 0 | "Not music, but something older" | | 1 | "not the sky but a field of stars" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 23.21 | | std | 14.38 | | cv | 0.62 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.116 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove smelled of crushed mint and something metallic—like lightning about to strike." | | 1 | "The trees here grew at impossible angles—some trunks spiraled like barley sugar twists, while others bent double as if bowing to unseen royalty." | | 2 | "Then—a hum, so low it vibrated in her molars." | | 3 | "Not a deer—its antlers were too many-branched, its coat dappled with patches of iridescent scales." | | 4 | "Then—the trees parted." | | 5 | "Around its edges, flowers bloomed in colors Aurora had no names for—hues that shifted when she blinked, petals that folded and unfolded like living origami." | | 6 | "It parted like smoke, revealing glimpses of—something else." | | 7 | "Her reflection wavered—then changed." | | 8 | "A crown of brambles circled her brow, dripping something dark and shimmering—" | | 9 | "Figures emerged from the tree line—tall, slender, their features too perfect to be human." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 684 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.033625730994152045 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008771929824561403 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 9.17 | | std | 5.57 | | cv | 0.607 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 62.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4069767441860465 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 99.50% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Then—a hum, so low it" | | 1 | "Then—the trees parted." |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, fingers brushing the" | | 1 | "they murmured, voice like wind" | | 2 | "She flexed her fingers, focusing" | | 3 | "Their violet eyes brightened." | | 4 | "they said, wonder threading their" | | 5 | "She spun, blade half-drawn before" | | 6 | "It regarded them with eyes" | | 7 | "It parted like smoke, revealing" | | 8 | "She knelt beside the pool," | | 9 | "Her reflection wavered—then changed." | | 10 | "Herself, but older, face lined" | | 11 | "Their clothes seemed woven from" | | 12 | "Their form flickered, half-substantial." | | 13 | "They stepped closer, head tilting" | | 14 | "She forced herself to meet" |
| | ratio | 0.224 | |
| 49.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora's" | | 1 | "The ancient oaks loomed around" | | 2 | "she whispered, fingers brushing the" | | 3 | "Nyx's form rippled beside her," | | 4 | "they murmured, voice like wind" | | 5 | "Aurora exhaled, watching her breath" | | 6 | "The grove smelled of crushed" | | 7 | "Isolde moved ahead without sound," | | 8 | "the seer said without turning" | | 9 | "Aurora's left wrist itched where" | | 10 | "She flexed her fingers, focusing" | | 11 | "The trees here grew at" | | 12 | "Nyx drifted a hand through" | | 13 | "Their violet eyes brightened." | | 14 | "they said, wonder threading their" | | 15 | "The sound of roots drinking" | | 16 | "A branch cracked." | | 17 | "She spun, blade half-drawn before" | | 18 | "It regarded them with eyes" | | 19 | "Isolde's laugh was the chime" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 19.70% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks loomed around them, their gnarled roots twisting into patterns that made her eyes ache if she looked too long." | | 1 | "Isolde moved ahead without sound, her silver hair catching light that shouldn't exist beneath the canopy." | | 2 | "The trees here grew at impossible angles—some trunks spiraled like barley sugar twists, while others bent double as if bowing to unseen royalty." | | 3 | "At its center stood a pool so still it might have been glass, reflecting not the sky but a field of stars that didn't match Earth's constellations." | | 4 | "Above them, the false stars winked out one by one, plunging the grove into a darkness that felt alive." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, fingers brushing the Fae blade at her belt" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured, their shadow stretching unnaturally long across the flowers" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "they breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "the Fae agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.478 | | leniency | 0.957 | | rawRatio | 0.545 | | effectiveRatio | 0.522 | |