Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFRFZZ65KSDX0M1E73HDBS

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Duration:
17.5s
Cost:
$0.001717
Provider:
Novita

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora's sternum like a second heartbeat as she stepped between the standing stones. The ancient oaks loomed around them, their gnarled roots twisting into patterns that made her eyes ache if she looked too long. "Did the trees just... move?" she whispered, fingers brushing the Fae blade at her belt. Nyx's form rippled beside her, shadows coalescing into something more solid. "They remember the old ways," they murmured, voice like wind through dry leaves. "Paths shift for those they deem worthy." Aurora exhaled, watching her breath mist in air suddenly colder than the autumn afternoon they'd left behind. The grove smelled of crushed mint and something metallic—like lightning about to strike. Isolde moved ahead without sound, her silver hair catching light that shouldn't exist beneath the canopy. Where her bare feet touched the moss, tiny blue flowers unfurled, then withered in her wake. "You'll want to stay close," the seer said without turning. "The grove delights in leading wanderers astray." Aurora's left wrist itched where her crescent scar pulled tight. She flexed her fingers, focusing on the solid weight of the dagger's hilt. The trees here grew at impossible angles—some trunks spiraled like barley sugar twists, while others bent double as if bowing to unseen royalty. Between their roots, mushrooms pulsed faintly, their caps shimmering with bioluminescent veins. Nyx drifted a hand through one. Their violet eyes brightened. "They sing," they said, wonder threading their whisper. "Can you hear it?" Aurora strained. At first, nothing. Then—a hum, so low it vibrated in her molars. Not music, but something older. The sound of roots drinking deep, of bark knitting over wounds. A branch cracked. She spun, blade half-drawn before she registered the deer. Not a deer—its antlers were too many-branched, its coat dappled with patches of iridescent scales. It regarded them with eyes like liquid mercury before dissolving into a shower of petals. "Christ," Aurora breathed. Isolde's laugh was the chime of icicles breaking. "No gods here, little crow. Only the First Folk and what they choose to share." The path sloped downward, moss giving way to stones worn smooth by centuries of footsteps that left no prints. The air thickened, tasting of elderflower and damp copper. Aurora's pendant grew warmer. Then—the trees parted. A clearing opened before them, vast and impossibly circular. At its center stood a pool so still it might have been glass, reflecting not the sky but a field of stars that didn't match Earth's constellations. Around its edges, flowers bloomed in colors Aurora had no names for—hues that shifted when she blinked, petals that folded and unfolded like living origami. Nyx went utterly still. "That's not water," they said. Isolde crouched, trailing fingers through the surface. It parted like smoke, revealing glimpses of—something else. A city of spiraling towers? A forest of crystal trees? The images fractured before Aurora could be sure. "The Mirror of Mnemosyne," Isolde said. "It shows what was, what is, and what may yet be. If one knows how to look." Aurora's scar throbbed. She knelt beside the pool, drawn by something she couldn't name. Her reflection wavered—then changed. Herself, but older, face lined with scars the crescent on her wrist couldn't explain. A crown of brambles circled her brow, dripping something dark and shimmering— She recoiled. The image shattered. "Careful," Nyx murmured, their shadow stretching unnaturally long across the flowers. "Some truths cut deeper than steel." A wind stirred, carrying the scent of burning spices. The stars in the pool's reflection winked out one by one. Isolde stood abruptly, her lavender eyes gone storm-dark. "We're expected," she said. The flowers trembled. Between one heartbeat and the next, the clearing's far side was no longer empty. Figures emerged from the tree line—tall, slender, their features too perfect to be human. Their clothes seemed woven from living vines and starlight. One wore a cloak of moth wings that fluttered despite the still air. Aurora's fingers found Nyx's sleeve. Their form flickered, half-substantial. The lead Fae smiled, revealing teeth like needles. "Little Seer," they crooned. "You bring us gifts?" Isolde's chin lifted. "Guests, cousin. Bound by guest-right." The Fae's nostrils flared. They stepped closer, head tilting as they examined Aurora. "Ah," they breathed. "The crow with hellfire in her pocket." The Heartstone burned against Aurora's skin. She forced herself to meet those bottomless black eyes. "We're just passing through." Laughter like shattering crystal. "All things pass," the Fae agreed. "The question is—what will you leave behind?" Nyx's shadows deepened, spreading across the ground like spilled ink. Aurora tightened her grip on the Fae blade, its cold seeping into her bones. Above them, the false stars winked out one by one, plunging the grove into a darkness that felt alive.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.522
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount803
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount803
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count2
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
9
word"wavered"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"fluttered"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"loomed"
2"weight"
3"whisper"
4"vibrated"
5"footsteps"
6"crystal"
7"fractured"
8"throbbed"
9"wavered"
10"shattered"
11"trembled"
12"perfect"
13"fluttered"
14"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords789
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
53.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount672
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Aurora13
Fae5
Nyx6
Isolde6
Earth1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Fae"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
5"Earth"
places(empty)
globalScore0.533
windowScore0.833
43.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if bowing to unseen royalty"
1"seemed woven from living vines and starlight"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.535
wordCount789
matches
0"Not music, but something older"
1"not the sky but a field of stars"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean23.21
std14.38
cv0.62
sampleLengths
039
115
231
330
432
517
658
722
830
93
1039
113
1223
1332
143
1561
169
1733
1823
1944
205
2117
2228
234
2417
2536
269
2716
288
2923
3019
3117
3224
3319
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences86
ratio0.116
matches
0"The grove smelled of crushed mint and something metallic—like lightning about to strike."
1"The trees here grew at impossible angles—some trunks spiraled like barley sugar twists, while others bent double as if bowing to unseen royalty."
2"Then—a hum, so low it vibrated in her molars."
3"Not a deer—its antlers were too many-branched, its coat dappled with patches of iridescent scales."
4"Then—the trees parted."
5"Around its edges, flowers bloomed in colors Aurora had no names for—hues that shifted when she blinked, petals that folded and unfolded like living origami."
6"It parted like smoke, revealing glimpses of—something else."
7"Her reflection wavered—then changed."
8"A crown of brambles circled her brow, dripping something dark and shimmering—"
9"Figures emerged from the tree line—tall, slender, their features too perfect to be human."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount684
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.033625730994152045
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008771929824561403
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean9.17
std5.57
cv0.607
sampleLengths
017
122
215
311
413
57
617
713
816
916
1010
117
1210
1313
1423
1512
166
174
188
194
202
213
229
235
2411
253
269
2715
2815
293
308
3115
3219
339
344
353
369
3727
3825
394
405
417
428
435
445
458
466
4717
483
4911
62.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4069767441860465
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners35
99.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"Then—a hum, so low it"
1"Then—the trees parted."
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences67
matches
0"she whispered, fingers brushing the"
1"they murmured, voice like wind"
2"She flexed her fingers, focusing"
3"Their violet eyes brightened."
4"they said, wonder threading their"
5"She spun, blade half-drawn before"
6"It regarded them with eyes"
7"It parted like smoke, revealing"
8"She knelt beside the pool,"
9"Her reflection wavered—then changed."
10"Herself, but older, face lined"
11"Their clothes seemed woven from"
12"Their form flickered, half-substantial."
13"They stepped closer, head tilting"
14"She forced herself to meet"
ratio0.224
49.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences67
matches
0"The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora's"
1"The ancient oaks loomed around"
2"she whispered, fingers brushing the"
3"Nyx's form rippled beside her,"
4"they murmured, voice like wind"
5"Aurora exhaled, watching her breath"
6"The grove smelled of crushed"
7"Isolde moved ahead without sound,"
8"the seer said without turning"
9"Aurora's left wrist itched where"
10"She flexed her fingers, focusing"
11"The trees here grew at"
12"Nyx drifted a hand through"
13"Their violet eyes brightened."
14"they said, wonder threading their"
15"The sound of roots drinking"
16"A branch cracked."
17"She spun, blade half-drawn before"
18"It regarded them with eyes"
19"Isolde's laugh was the chime"
ratio0.821
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
19.70% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The ancient oaks loomed around them, their gnarled roots twisting into patterns that made her eyes ache if she looked too long."
1"Isolde moved ahead without sound, her silver hair catching light that shouldn't exist beneath the canopy."
2"The trees here grew at impossible angles—some trunks spiraled like barley sugar twists, while others bent double as if bowing to unseen royalty."
3"At its center stood a pool so still it might have been glass, reflecting not the sky but a field of stars that didn't match Earth's constellations."
4"Above them, the false stars winked out one by one, plunging the grove into a darkness that felt alive."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she whispered, fingers brushing the Fae blade at her belt"
1"Nyx murmured, their shadow stretching unnaturally long across the flowers"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"they murmured (murmur)"
2"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
3"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
4"they breathed (breathe)"
5"the Fae agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.478
leniency0.957
rawRatio0.545
effectiveRatio0.522
71.8960%