Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFRS9560A3AAMHWCXXSPDE

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Duration:
1m 51s
Cost:
$0.003437
Provider:
Novita

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The deadbolt was the third one Aurora was fighting with when she heard it—a knock at the door, unhurried, almost polite. She froze, keys still in the lock, her heart kicking against her ribs. Nobody knocked at this hour. Not on Eva's flat. Not on Brick Lane, where the curry shops downstairs pumped spice-scented steam through the vents until two in the morning and the only visitors were delivery drivers and the occasional drunk stumbling home from the Tube. Ptolemy, who had been sleeping in the alcove of the window where the curtain didn't quite meet the frame, lifted his head and blinked in the direction of the door. He didn't hiss. That was something, at least. Aurora pulled the key from the lock. She'd never gotten around to the third deadbolt—she never needed to, not really, not when Eva's research notes were scattered across every surface like autumn leaves and the only supernatural thing in the flat was the lingering residue of protective wards Eva had painted into the plaster years ago. She stood on her toes and peered through the peephole, and her breath stopped. It couldn't be. She opened the door anyway. Of course she did. That had always been her problem—cool-headed, intelligent Aurora Carter, known for quick out-of-the-box thinking, and yet she could never stop herself from opening doors she should have left shut. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway, one hand resting on the handle of his ivory-handled cane. The fluorescent light above them flickered once, twice, casting his face in stark relief—the sharp cheekbones, the pale sweep of his slicked-back platinum hair, the sharp line of his jaw. He wore charcoal, as he always did. Tailored jacket, fitted shirt, not a crease out of place. The suit of a man who moved through London's supernatural underworld like he owned it, who brokered deals between creatures that didn't exist in the average citizen's nightmares. And then there were his eyes. One amber, one black—heterochromatic, the word was too clinical for what they actually were. The amber one caught the light and burned like a cat's, while the black one simply absorbed it, swallowed it whole. She'd spent hours staring into those eyes. She'd dreamed about them. She'd woken up gasping, her chest tight with something she refused to name. "Rory," he said. His voice was exactly as she remembered—low, smooth, with that faint French curl to his consonants that he'd never quite shed despite a decade in London. "You look terrible." She blinked. "That's not—you can't just show up here. It's—" She glanced behind her at the chaos of Eva's flat, the towers of books threatening to collapse onto the battered sofa, the scrolls unrolled across the kitchen table, the cat hair covering every available surface. "It's two in the morning." "I know what time it is." He didn't move from the doorway. "May I come in?" "No." "Please." The word was quiet. Not a demand, not the careful negotiation he used when he was working, when he was smoothing over some supernatural dispute or extracting information from someone who didn't want to give it. Just please. Just that. Aurora's hand tightened on the door. She could feel the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, the one from the childhood accident, the one she'd gotten when she was eight and stupid and had tried to catch herself after falling off the wall behind the primary school. She'd had someone kiss that scar once. She'd had someone trace it with their thumb and promise to never hurt her. That had been a lie, of course. Everyone hurt her in the end. "How did you find me?" she asked. "I have my ways." "Lucien." "I asked Eva." Aurora's jaw tightened. "Eva doesn't know where I am. I didn't even tell her I was coming back to London. I just—" She stopped. That was too much information. That was giving him too much. But he was already stepping forward, past the threshold, and she was stepping back, and somehow they were inside the flat with the door swinging shut behind him. Ptolemy hopped down from the window ledge and wound between Lucien's ankles, purring. Traitor. "She was worried about you," Lucien said, looking around the flat with those mismatched eyes. "She said you left Cardiff without telling her. That you didn't answer your phone for three weeks." "I was busy." "Busy." He turned to face her. "Busy doing what? Running?" She flinched. He watched her flinch, and something shifted in his expression—a tightening around his mouth, a darkness that flickered in the amber eye. "Evan," he said. "It's Evan, isn't it? He found you again." "It's none of your business." "The hell it isn't." The curse was so unexpected—so far from his usual careful diction—that Aurora stared at him. Lucien never swore. He'd told her once that language was a tool, and one didn't wield a blade carelessly. He chose his words like he chose his moves in the negotiations that kept London's supernatural world from tearing itself apart. Carefully. Deliberately. With an eye toward the outcome he wanted. And yet here he was, standing in Eva's cramped flat, surrounded by research notes about things that shouldn't exist, his hand still resting on that cane that hid a thin blade, saying hell like it was nothing. "You left," she said. Her voice came out steadier than she felt. "You left, Lucien. You didn't say a word. Three months, and you didn't—" She stopped. Swallowed. "You don't get to show up here and ask about Evan. You don't get to care about that now." "I didn't leave by choice." "Everyone leaves by choice." He was quiet for a moment. The only sound was Ptolemy's purring, the distant thrum of the curry shop's extractor fan below them, the eternal hum of London outside the window. "My father," he said finally. "The one from Avaros. He sent for me. There was a—" He paused, choosing his words. "A matter that required my attention. In the realm. I couldn't refuse. I couldn't—" His hand flexed on the cane. "I tried to tell you. I came to your flat in Cardiff, and you weren't there. Your mother said you'd gone to London. With Eva." "I didn't know." Aurora's voice was smaller now. "I didn't know you came. Mom never said—" "I asked her not to. I thought—" He laughed, a bitter sound she'd never heard from him before. "I thought if you knew I'd been there, you'd wait. I thought you'd wait for me to come back. And I didn't know how long it would take. I didn't know if I'd come back at all." The words hung in the air between them. Avaros. She'd heard of it—the demon realm, the place Lucien came from, the half of him that he kept carefully hidden beneath tailored suits and perfect French. She knew what it meant when a demon from Avaros sent for someone. She knew the kinds of matters that required attention. She looked at him, really looked at him, and saw the tension in his shoulders, the new lines around his eyes, the way his hair, despite its careful styling, seemed thinner than before. Whatever had happened in Avaros, it had cost him something. "You came back," she said. "Yes." "And now you're here." "Yes." "Why?" He was quiet for a long moment. Then he moved toward her, slow, deliberate, the way he approached negotiations—measured, careful, giving her every chance to retreat. She didn't move. She couldn't. "Because I promised myself I wouldn't leave you again," he said. "Because I spent three months in a realm where time moves differently, and every day I thought about you. Because when I came back and heard you'd left Cardiff, left your whole life behind because of that bastard—" His voice cracked. "I couldn't stay away. I had to know if you were safe. I had to see you." Aurora's eyes burned. She blinked hard, refusing to cry, refusing to let herself fall apart the way she'd fallen apart three months ago when she'd packed a bag and got on a train to London and left everything behind. "I don't need a protector," she said. "I don't need you to save me." "I know." He stopped an arm's length away. "I'm not here to save you. I'm here because—" He reached out, slowly, giving her time to pull away, and brushed a strand of black hair from her face. His fingers were cool against her cheek. "I'm here because I love you, Rory. I should have said it before I left. I should have said it a hundred times. And I'm saying it now, even if you tell me to leave, even if you can't—" His voice wavered. "Even if you can't forgive me. I need you to know." She stared at him. Her chest was too tight, her throat too thick, her whole body shaking with the effort of holding herself together. "You can't just say that," she whispered. "You can't just—" "I know." "I was destroyed. When you left. I thought—" She pressed her palm to her chest, over the scar on her wrist, the old wound that still ached sometimes when the weather changed. "I thought you were like everyone else. I thought you got what you wanted and then you left." "I want you." His voice was fierce now, raw. "That's all I've wanted. That's all I'll ever want. The rest of it—the supernatural world, the politics, the things I have to do—they're just noise. You're the only thing that's real." Ptolemy meowed, winding between their legs again, oblivious to the weight of the moment. Aurora laughed—a broken, wet sound—and then she was crying, properly crying, the tears she'd been holding back for months spilling down her cheeks. Lucien pulled her into his arms. He smelled like cologne and something else, something darker, something that reminded her of the half of him that came from a place where the sun didn't shine. She pressed her face against his chest and sobbed, and he held her, his hand smoothing down her hair, his lips pressed to the top of her head. "I'm sorry," he murmured against her hair. "I'm so sorry. I should have told you. I should have—" "Shut up," she said, muffled against his shirt. "Just—shut up." He went still. Then, slowly, his arms tightened around her. She didn't pull away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.04
effectiveRatio0.033
80.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1764
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"really"
1"carefully"
2"deliberately"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1764
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"wavered"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"stark"
2"could feel"
3"perfect"
4"tension"
5"measured"
6"wavered"
7"weight"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of the moment"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1742
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions32
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1249
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora9
Eva5
Brick1
Lane1
Tube1
Carter1
Moreau1
London5
French2
Lucien6
Swallowed1
Ptolemy4
Avaros3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Carter"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Tube"
3"London"
4"Avaros"
globalScore1
windowScore1
34.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite meet the frame, lifted his head and blinked in the direction of the door"
1"seemed thinner than before"
2"smelled like cologne and something else, s"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1742
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean29.03
std25.88
cv0.891
sampleLengths
079
138
270
33
438
591
665
732
850
916
101
111
1240
1369
1413
157
164
171
183
1935
2042
2132
223
2310
2424
2511
265
274
2865
2937
3047
315
324
3331
3466
3516
3655
3757
3843
395
401
414
421
431
4431
4569
4639
4714
4897
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs223
matches
0"was fighting"
1"was working, was smoothing"
2"was giving"
3"was stepping"
4"was, standing"
5"was crying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences142
ratio0.077
matches
0"The deadbolt was the third one Aurora was fighting with when she heard it—a knock at the door, unhurried, almost polite."
1"She'd never gotten around to the third deadbolt—she never needed to, not really, not when Eva's research notes were scattered across every surface like autumn leaves and the only supernatural thing in the flat was the lingering residue of protective wards Eva had painted into the plaster years ago."
2"That had always been her problem—cool-headed, intelligent Aurora Carter, known for quick out-of-the-box thinking, and yet she could never stop herself from opening doors she should have left shut."
3"The fluorescent light above them flickered once, twice, casting his face in stark relief—the sharp cheekbones, the pale sweep of his slicked-back platinum hair, the sharp line of his jaw."
4"One amber, one black—heterochromatic, the word was too clinical for what they actually were."
5"His voice was exactly as she remembered—low, smooth, with that faint French curl to his consonants that he'd never quite shed despite a decade in London."
6"He watched her flinch, and something shifted in his expression—a tightening around his mouth, a darkness that flickered in the amber eye."
7"The curse was so unexpected—so far from his usual careful diction—that Aurora stared at him."
8"She'd heard of it—the demon realm, the place Lucien came from, the half of him that he kept carefully hidden beneath tailored suits and perfect French."
9"Then he moved toward her, slow, deliberate, the way he approached negotiations—measured, careful, giving her every chance to retreat."
10"Aurora laughed—a broken, wet sound—and then she was crying, properly crying, the tears she'd been holding back for months spilling down her cheeks."
85.49% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1267
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount63
adverbRatio0.049723756906077346
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.012628255722178374
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean12.27
std11.27
cv0.918
sampleLengths
021
113
25
34
436
530
63
75
87
949
1014
113
125
134
1429
1516
1630
177
1810
1928
206
2114
2221
237
244
2513
263
2726
283
292
3043
315
3212
334
341
351
364
3732
382
392
406
4142
427
4314
447
456
467
474
481
493
30.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats30
diversityRatio0.30985915492957744
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"Of course she did."
1"Then he moved toward her,"
2"Then, slowly, his arms tightened"
ratio0.034
4.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences89
matches
0"She froze, keys still in"
1"He didn't hiss."
2"She'd never gotten around to"
3"She stood on her toes"
4"It couldn't be."
5"She opened the door anyway."
6"He wore charcoal, as he"
7"She'd spent hours staring into"
8"She'd dreamed about them."
9"She'd woken up gasping, her"
10"His voice was exactly as"
11"She glanced behind her at"
12"He didn't move from the"
13"She could feel the small"
14"She'd had someone kiss that"
15"She'd had someone trace it"
16"He turned to face her"
17"He watched her flinch, and"
18"He'd told her once that"
19"He chose his words like"
ratio0.539
27.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences89
matches
0"The deadbolt was the third"
1"She froze, keys still in"
2"Nobody knocked at this hour."
3"Ptolemy, who had been sleeping"
4"He didn't hiss."
5"That was something, at least."
6"Aurora pulled the key from"
7"She'd never gotten around to"
8"She stood on her toes"
9"It couldn't be."
10"She opened the door anyway."
11"That had always been her"
12"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
13"The fluorescent light above them"
14"He wore charcoal, as he"
15"The suit of a man"
16"The amber one caught the"
17"She'd spent hours staring into"
18"She'd dreamed about them."
19"She'd woken up gasping, her"
ratio0.865
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The suit of a man who moved through London's supernatural underworld like he owned it, who brokered deals between creatures that didn't exist in the average cit…"
1"Not a demand, not the careful negotiation he used when he was working, when he was smoothing over some supernatural dispute or extracting information from someo…"
2"He watched her flinch, and something shifted in his expression—a tightening around his mouth, a darkness that flickered in the amber eye."
3"He chose his words like he chose his moves in the negotiations that kept London's supernatural world from tearing itself apart."
4"And yet here he was, standing in Eva's cramped flat, surrounded by research notes about things that shouldn't exist, his hand still resting on that cane that hi…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"She pressed (press)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.467
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.133
74.4430%