Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFS38951T7RV3WZ5MNB9E5

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Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.000968
Provider:
AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the pavements of Soho, turning the neon reflections into liquid smears of color. Detective Harlow Quinn moved with a tense, predatory grace, her shoulders hunched against the downpour, her eyes fixed on the figure fifty yards ahead. He was just a silhouette, a darting shadow between the sheets of rain, but she knew him. Tomás Herrera. The unlicensed medic. The man who patched up monsters. She’d been watching the green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest for three hours, a cold cup of awful coffee turning to sludge in her gut, when he’d slipped out the service entrance. He carried a heavy-looking satchel, his head on a constant swivel. He’d clocked her unmarked car, she was sure of it. The chase had begun on foot, a silent, splashing pursuit through the labyrinthine backstreets. Her worn leather watch was soaked, the strap chafing her wrist. Eighteen years in the Met, and she was running through puddles after a ghost. Morris wouldn’t have approved. Morris, whose death report was a masterpiece of obfuscation. *Unexplained circumstances. Structural collapse. No further investigation warranted.* The memory was a cold stone in her chest, sharper than the rain. Herrera was fast, but Quinn had endurance carved from military drills and years of chasing down alleyways. She kept the distance steady, letting him think he might lose her, reading his panic in the erratic changes of direction. He wasn’t heading for a main road or a tube station. He was leading her deeper, toward Camden. The rain muffled the city’s roar, reducing it to a hiss and the rhythmic slap of their footsteps. They crossed bridges over dark canals, dashed through deserted mews where overflowing bins bled garbage into the gutters. Quinn’s sharp jaw was set, her breath pluming in the chilled air. She saw him glance back once, his face a pale oval under a streetlamp, his expression unreadable. Then he vanished. Quinn skidded to a halt, water splashing up her trousers. The street was a dead end, bounded by a high brick wall and the rusted gates of a long-closed textile warehouse. There was no door, no alley. She approached slowly, hand hovering near the holster under her sodden jacket. A drain? A sewer grate? Her foot scuffed something metallic. She knelt, ignoring the cold seep through her knees. A circular iron token, smaller than a ten-pence piece, lay in a puddle. She fished it out. It was bone, yellowed and smooth, carved with a tiny, intricate symbol that seemed to writhe under the touch of the rain. An entry requirement. The phrase surfaced from a buried file, a whisper from an informant she’d never fully believed. *The Veil Market.* She looked up at the warehouse gates. Between two bars, nearly invisible, was a narrow gap leading not to the warehouse yard, but to a set of worn stone steps descending into darkness. The entrance was hidden in plain sight, an architectural sleight-of-hand that made her eyes ache to look at directly. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Herrera had gone down there. Quinn stood, the bone token cool in her palm. This was it. The threshold. Following a suspect into an unsecured, unknown subterranean location alone was a violation of a dozen protocols. It was stupid. It was what got partners killed. Morris’s face flashed in her mind—not as he was in life, laughing over a terrible canteen curry, but as he was in her last image of him: pale, terrified, whispering into his radio about things that “shouldn’t be” before the line went dead with a sound like tearing silk. She had a choice. Call it in. Wait for backup that would never be authorized for a hunch based on a bone chip and a ghost story. Or go down. The rain dripped from the salt-and-pepper stubble of her hair, tracing a cold path down her neck. Her career was a series of closed doors and filed-away reports. This was an open one, however dark. She clenched the token in her fist, felt its slight, unnerving warmth. With military precision, she checked her sidearm, ensured her torch was secure. Then, without another moment’s hesitation, she slipped between the iron bars and started down the steps. The air changed instantly. The smell of rain and city grime was replaced by something older: damp stone, ozone, incense, and a coppery tang that might have been blood or magic. The sound of the storm vanished, swallowed by a deep, humming silence that was somehow full of whispers. The steps spiraled down, the walls shifting from brick to slick, ancient-looking stone etched with faint, phosphorescent glyphs that provided a sickly green glow. At the bottom, the corridor opened out. Quinn stopped, her breath catching. The abandoned Camden Town station had been transformed. The old ticket hall was now a cavernous, bustling plaza. Stalls constructed from salvaged wood, rich fabric, and rusted metal lined the curved walls where advertisements once hung. Vendor carts glowing with bioluminescent fungi or flickering witch-lights were parked on the tracks where trains no longer ran. The air shimmered with heat haze and other, less nameable distortions. This was the Veil Market. People—*beings*—moved through the shadows. A woman with skin like polished obsidian sold vials of liquid moonlight. A hulking figure with the head of a ram bargained over a set of iron teeth. Whispers in languages that scratched at the inner ear coiled through the humid air. Quinn felt a primal fear, cold and clean, settle in her spine. This was real. All of it. The world had a basement, and she’d just walked down the stairs. She saw Herrera. He was at a stall near the far wall, under a crumbling arch that read “Northern Line.” He was talking urgently with a vendor, a gaunt individual wrapped in grey rags, handing over his satchel. Quinn moved, keeping to the deeper shadows, her senses screaming. Her training insisted on procedure: identify, assess, call for support. But there was no signal here, only the thrum of the unnatural. She passed a stall selling what looked like bottled memories, swirling mist behind glass. Another offered contracts written on what she hoped was vellum. Her foot brushed against a small cage containing a creature that was all eyes and shivering fear; she looked away, her stomach turning. She was ten yards from Herrera when he turned. Their eyes met across the crowded, surreal space. His warm brown eyes widened in recognition and something else—not guilt, but alarm. For her. He touched the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat, a quick, reflexive gesture. Then he ducked away, melting into a flow of cloaked figures heading toward a deeper tunnel. Quinn pushed forward, ignoring the vendor who hissed at her in a sibilant tongue. She reached the stall where Herrera had been. The rag-wrapped vendor was already packing the satchel’s contents—glass jars holding strange organs suspended in amber fluid, bundles of dark herbs, polished bones etched with runes—into a lacquered box. “Where did he go?” Quinn demanded, her voice harder than she felt. The vendor turned a shrouded head. Where a face should be, there was only a deeper shadow and the faint glint of two points of light. “The trade is concluded. The path is his own.” The voice was like dry leaves scraping stone. “I’m a police officer. I need to speak with him.” A low chuckle echoed from the hood. “No warrant here, little sun-light. Only the trade.” One long, skeletal finger pointed toward the dark tunnel mouth. “He runs to the Grey Gate. The moon-tide turns soon. The market moves. If you follow, you will be moved with it.” The words were a threat and a warning. Quinn looked at the tunnel. It was darker than the rest of the market, the air flowing from it cold and smelling of gravesoil and distant, salty air. The Grey Gate. It meant nothing to her. Following Herrera in there meant leaving the world she knew behind in a way that was terrifyingly literal. She thought of her flat, her desk piled with cold cases. She thought of Morris’s empty chair. She thought of the official, sanitized report that covered up whatever truth had taken him. That truth was down that tunnel. It was in the jars of strange organs, in the fear in Herrera’s eyes, in the very stones of this place. Staying here was safe. Returning to the rain-soaked streets above was sane. But she hadn’t joined the force to be safe or sane. She’d joined to find answers. With a final glance at the bone token still clutched in her hand, Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out of the sickly light of the market and into the waiting dark of the tunnel, following the scent of herbs and the ghost of a medic who knew how to stitch together things that were broken, both in body and in the fabric of the world itself. The whispers of the market faded behind her, replaced by a profound silence, broken only by the drip of water and the sound of her own determined footsteps, moving deeper into the unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.714
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1542
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1542
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"chilled"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"etched"
count2
11
word"constructed"
count1
12
word"shimmered"
count1
13
word"hulking"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"surreal"
count1
16
word"glint"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
18
word"profound"
count1
19
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"footsteps"
2"chilled"
3"unreadable"
4"intricate"
5"whisper"
6"silk"
7"tracing"
8"warmth"
9"silence"
10"etched"
11"constructed"
12"shimmered"
13"hulking"
14"stomach"
15"surreal"
16"glint"
17"echoed"
18"profound"
19"determined"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences122
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords12
totalWords1524
ratio0.008
matches
0"Unexplained circumstances. Structural collapse. No further investigation warranted."
1"The Veil Market."
2"beings"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1467
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow2
Quinn12
Herrera8
Raven1
Nest1
Met1
Camden3
Veil2
Tube1
Town1
Market2
Saint1
Christopher1
Grey1
Gate1
Morris4
Detective2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Raven"
4"Market"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Met"
2"Camden"
3"Town"
4"Grey"
globalScore1
windowScore1
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"symbol that seemed to writhe under the touch of the rain"
1"looked like bottled memories, swirling mi"
3.15% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.969
wordCount1524
matches
0"not to the warehouse yard, but to a set of worn stone steps descending into darkness"
1"not as he was in life, laughing over a terrible canteen curry, but as he was in her last image of him: pale, terrified, whisper"
2"not guilt, but alarm"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean47.63
std25.64
cv0.538
sampleLengths
067
168
259
356
465
53
654
775
863
940
1049
1130
1275
1373
147
155
1666
175
1876
1970
2047
2161
2251
2312
2443
2510
2647
2762
2859
2912
3016
3198
88.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences122
matches
0"was soaked"
1"was hidden"
2"was replaced"
3"been transformed"
4"were parked"
5"were broken"
87.48% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs237
matches
0"was running"
1"wasn’t heading"
2"was leading"
3"was talking"
27.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences124
ratio0.04
matches
0"Morris’s face flashed in her mind—not as he was in life, laughing over a terrible canteen curry, but as he was in her last image of him: pale, terrified, whispering into his radio about things that “shouldn’t be” before the line went dead with a sound like tearing silk."
1"People—*beings*—moved through the shadows."
2"Her foot brushed against a small cage containing a creature that was all eyes and shivering fear; she looked away, her stomach turning."
3"His warm brown eyes widened in recognition and something else—not guilt, but alarm."
4"The rag-wrapped vendor was already packing the satchel’s contents—glass jars holding strange organs suspended in amber fluid, bundles of dark herbs, polished bones etched with runes—into a lacquered box."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1483
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.018880647336480108
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.008091706001348618
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean12.29
std9.37
cv0.763
sampleLengths
015
124
217
32
43
56
633
711
810
914
1011
1114
124
139
142
152
1617
1717
1821
1911
207
2118
2218
2312
2417
253
2610
2721
286
2912
302
313
325
339
3413
354
3622
373
3816
393
407
4126
4219
436
445
459
463
472
4817
493
45.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3467741935483871
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners43
86.21% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences116
matches
0"Then he vanished."
1"Then, without another moment’s hesitation,"
2"Then he ducked away, melting"
ratio0.026
88.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences116
matches
0"He was just a silhouette,"
1"She’d been watching the green"
2"He carried a heavy-looking satchel,"
3"He’d clocked her unmarked car,"
4"Her worn leather watch was"
5"She kept the distance steady,"
6"He wasn’t heading for a"
7"He was leading her deeper,"
8"They crossed bridges over dark"
9"She saw him glance back"
10"She approached slowly, hand hovering"
11"Her foot scuffed something metallic."
12"She knelt, ignoring the cold"
13"She fished it out."
14"It was bone, yellowed and"
15"She looked up at the"
16"It was stupid."
17"It was what got partners"
18"She had a choice."
19"Her career was a series"
ratio0.328
59.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences116
matches
0"Rain lashed the pavements of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn moved with"
2"He was just a silhouette,"
3"The unlicensed medic."
4"The man who patched up"
5"She’d been watching the green"
6"He carried a heavy-looking satchel,"
7"He’d clocked her unmarked car,"
8"The chase had begun on"
9"Her worn leather watch was"
10"Morris wouldn’t have approved."
11"Morris, whose death report was"
12"Herrera was fast, but Quinn"
13"She kept the distance steady,"
14"He wasn’t heading for a"
15"He was leading her deeper,"
16"The rain muffled the city’s"
17"They crossed bridges over dark"
18"Quinn’s sharp jaw was set,"
19"She saw him glance back"
ratio0.802
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
ratio0
42.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"It was bone, yellowed and smooth, carved with a tiny, intricate symbol that seemed to writhe under the touch of the rain."
1"The entrance was hidden in plain sight, an architectural sleight-of-hand that made her eyes ache to look at directly."
2"The smell of rain and city grime was replaced by something older: damp stone, ozone, incense, and a coppery tang that might have been blood or magic."
3"The steps spiraled down, the walls shifting from brick to slick, ancient-looking stone etched with faint, phosphorescent glyphs that provided a sickly green glo…"
4"Whispers in languages that scratched at the inner ear coiled through the humid air."
5"Her foot brushed against a small cage containing a creature that was all eyes and shivering fear; she looked away, her stomach turning."
6"Quinn pushed forward, ignoring the vendor who hissed at her in a sibilant tongue."
7"Following Herrera in there meant leaving the world she knew behind in a way that was terrifyingly literal."
8"With a final glance at the bone token still clutched in her hand, Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out of the sickly light of the market and into the waiting dark…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn demanded, her voice harder than she felt"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.286
75.8077%