Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFSPVB725J74JHM5RX4P3B

Run Details

Duration:
5m 3s
Cost:
$0.000903
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain didn't fall so much as it attacked, a needle-sharp volley driven sideways by a Thames-born wind. Detective Harlow Quinn kept her shoulders hunched, the collar of her worn leather jacket turned up, but the water had already found the nape of her neck, a cold trickle tracing her spine. Her eyes, sharp and brown, never left the figure forty yards ahead, a dark smudge moving against the glittering smear of Soho’s neon. Tomás Herrera moved with a paramedic’s economy, but there was a tension in his stride that spoke of a man expecting a tail. He’d emerged from The Raven’s Nest ten minutes ago, the green neon of the sign bleeding color onto the wet pavement. Quinn had been leaning against a delivery van, sipping terrible coffee from a paper cup, her surveillance a study in boredom until he’d appeared. He hadn’t looked her way, but he’d checked his watch—the same worn leather watch she wore on her own left wrist, a habit she’d picked up from Morris—and then he’d started walking, fast. Not running. Running would have been an admission. She followed, her own pace measured, military-precision footfalls swallowed by the hiss of tires on wet tarmac and the drumming on countless awnings. Three years. For three years, since the night Morris’s radio had dissolved into a scream that was half static, half something else, she’d been picking at threads. Loose ends that led to places like The Raven’s Nest, to people like Herrera. A licensed medic turned back-alley sawbones for a crowd that never seemed to visit proper hospitals. His file said he’d lost his credentials for “ethical violations.” Her gut, and the coroner’s bizarre, unofficial notes on a certain John Doe with faint, impossible phosphorescence around his wounds, said otherwise. Herrera turned down a side street, then another, the commerce of Soho giving way to the grimy brick and industrial silence of the railway arches near Camden. The rain intensified, sheeting down in gusts. Quinn wiped water from her eyes, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her scalp. He was heading for the old Tube station. The disused one, its entrance a yawning mouth of black Victorian ironwork half-swallowed by scaffolding and safety fencing. He didn’t hesitate. He ducked under a frayed plastic barrier and vanished into the darkness. Quinn stopped at the mouth of the archway, the wind howling around its curve. This was it. The street ended here, both literally and procedurally. She had no warrant for this location. No backup. Her request for a surveillance team on Herrera had been denied, called a “fishing expedition” by a DCI who thought her obsession with Morris’s death was a grief-stricken liability. Going in alone, off-book, into an unsecured subterranean structure was career suicide. It was also, quite possibly, the kind of suicide that didn’t leave a body for an inquest. Morris’s face flashed in her mind, not as he was in life—laughing, a little rumpled—but as he was in the morgue: pale, confused, with a tiny, inexplicable burn mark on his palm in the shape of a spiraling rune. She ducked under the barrier. The darkness inside was absolute, smelling of damp brick, stale urine, and something older: ozone and cold stone. A flicker of movement ahead—Herrera’s silhouette against a faint, greenish light emanating from deeper within. She heard his footsteps echoing, then the distinctive scrape of a heavy metal door. The green light vanished, then reappeared as a thin line beneath the door. Quinn moved forward, one hand on the damp wall for guidance, the other resting on the grip of her service weapon. She reached the door. It was riveted iron, like something from a ship, set incongruously into the old station tilework. No handle. She pushed. It didn’t budge. Then she saw the slot. A narrow, dark opening at waist-height. Instinct made her reach into her pocket. Her fingers closed not around her warrant card, but around a small, smooth object she’d found tucked into the pages of Morris’s personal notebook after his death. She’d never understood what it was—a pale, lightweight disc, like polished bone, etched with minute, swirling lines. She’d kept it as a talisman, a piece of the puzzle. Almost without thought, she slid the bone token into the slot. There was a soft, clicking sound, like falling dominoes. The door swung inward silently. The noise hit her first. It was the low, bustling murmur of a marketplace, but layered with stranger sounds: a low, melodic humming that seemed to come from the air itself, the clink of glass on glass, the sizzle of something cooking that smelled of spices and burnt sugar. The green light she’d seen was from countless glass globes hanging from the curved, tiled ceiling of the abandoned Tube platform, each glowing with a captive, bioluminescent shimmer. The Veil Market stretched out before her, a scene from a hallucination taking root in London’s bedrock. Stalls constructed from old train parts and rich, dark fabrics lined the platform. Vendors haggled with customers whose forms seemed to shift at the edge of vision—a tall figure with an unnaturally graceful neck, a squat, bearded man whose shadow didn’t match his shape. The air was thick with the scent of exotic incense, pungent herbs, and the iron tang of ozone. And there, already blending into the crowd, was Tomás Herrera. He was talking to a woman whose hair seemed to be made of living ivy, accepting a small, clay jar from her. He tucked it into his coat, his Saint Christopher medallion glinting for a second in the green light. Quinn’s training screamed at her to retreat, to call for support, to categorize this as a mass hallucination or an elaborate trap. But her detective’s mind, the part that solved puzzles, was already cataloging. The goods on the stalls weren’t normal contraband. Vials of liquid that swirled with internal light. Books bound in what looked like scaled hide. Jagged crystals that pulsed with a slow rhythm. This was the source. This was where the threads led. The banned substances, the information, the tools of a hidden world that had taken Morris. Herrera began to move again, heading for the far end of the platform where a tunnel-mouth led into deeper darkness. To follow him was to leave the last vestige of the world she knew. The rules here were not her rules. The dangers were not named in any Metropolitan Police manual. She saw a stallkeeper with eyes like polished jet watching her, his gaze knowing and assessing. She was an intruder here, armed only with a badge that meant nothing and a grief that drove her forward. Her sharp jaw tightened. She thought of the scar on Herrera’s forearm, noted in his file as stemming from a “knife attack.” She looked at the strange, glowing goods around her. A different kind of knife, perhaps. Morris had followed a thread. It had gotten him killed, but it had also gotten him close to the truth. She could almost hear him. *Come on, Harlow. Since when do you wait for permission?* Harlow Quinn took a deep breath of the strange, spiced air, let her hand fall away from her gun, and stepped fully into the green glow of the Veil Market. She moved with purposeful stride, not hiding now, but not challenging anyone either. Her eyes remained locked on Herrera’s back as he slipped into the tunnel. The worn leather watch on her wrist felt heavy with cold rainwater and the weight of three years of questions. The chase was no longer on the rain-soaked streets of her city. It was here, in the belly of a different London altogether. And she would see it through.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1305
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1305
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"structure"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"constructed"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"tension"
2"measured"
3"silence"
4"structure"
5"flicker"
6"footsteps"
7"echoing"
8"etched"
9"constructed"
10"glinting"
11"pulsed"
12"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
17.27% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"watch—watch"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords10
totalWords1286
ratio0.008
matches
0"Come on, Harlow. Since when do you wait for permission?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1280
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Thames-born1
Harlow3
Quinn7
Soho2
Herrera9
Raven2
Nest2
Morris7
John1
Doe1
Camden1
Tube2
Victorian1
Veil2
Market2
London2
Tomás2
Saint1
Christopher1
Metropolitan1
Police1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Raven"
4"Morris"
5"John"
6"Doe"
7"Market"
8"Tomás"
9"Saint"
10"Christopher"
places
0"Thames-born"
1"Soho"
2"Camden"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
81.51% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"humming that seemed to come from the air itself, the clink of glass on glass, the sizzle of something cooking that smelled of spices and burnt sugar"
1"looked like scaled hide"
44.48% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.555
wordCount1286
matches
0"not around her warrant card, but around a small, smooth object she’d found tucked into the pa"
1"not hiding now, but not challenging anyone either"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean58.45
std32.54
cv0.557
sampleLengths
074
1109
2112
373
415
592
639
75
860
948
1073
1111
1214
1377
1479
1550
1691
1720
1867
1937
2035
21105
97.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"been denied"
1"was riveted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs192
matches
0"was heading"
1"was talking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences91
ratio0.055
matches
0"He hadn’t looked her way, but he’d checked his watch—the same worn leather watch she wore on her own left wrist, a habit she’d picked up from Morris—and then he’d started walking, fast."
1"Morris’s face flashed in her mind, not as he was in life—laughing, a little rumpled—but as he was in the morgue: pale, confused, with a tiny, inexplicable burn mark on his palm in the shape of a spiraling rune."
2"A flicker of movement ahead—Herrera’s silhouette against a faint, greenish light emanating from deeper within."
3"She’d never understood what it was—a pale, lightweight disc, like polished bone, etched with minute, swirling lines."
4"Vendors haggled with customers whose forms seemed to shift at the edge of vision—a tall figure with an unnaturally graceful neck, a squat, bearded man whose shadow didn’t match his shape."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1299
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.024634334103156273
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006928406466512702
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean14.13
std9.28
cv0.657
sampleLengths
018
133
223
323
421
524
633
72
86
923
102
1125
1214
1316
1432
1527
167
1713
188
1918
203
2112
2214
233
248
257
262
2729
2812
2917
3039
315
3218
3315
3414
3513
3621
374
3816
392
402
413
425
436
447
4527
4617
4711
4811
499
54.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners35
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then she saw the slot."
1"Almost without thought, she slid"
ratio0.023
75.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences86
matches
0"Her eyes, sharp and brown,"
1"He’d emerged from The Raven’s"
2"He hadn’t looked her way,"
3"She followed, her own pace"
4"His file said he’d lost"
5"He was heading for the"
6"He didn’t hesitate."
7"He ducked under a frayed"
8"She had no warrant for"
9"Her request for a surveillance"
10"It was also, quite possibly,"
11"She ducked under the barrier."
12"She heard his footsteps echoing,"
13"She reached the door."
14"It was riveted iron, like"
15"It didn’t budge."
16"Her fingers closed not around"
17"She’d never understood what it"
18"She’d kept it as a"
19"It was the low, bustling"
ratio0.36
35.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences86
matches
0"The rain didn't fall so"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn kept her"
2"Her eyes, sharp and brown,"
3"Tomás Herrera moved with a"
4"He’d emerged from The Raven’s"
5"Quinn had been leaning against"
6"He hadn’t looked her way,"
7"Running would have been an"
8"She followed, her own pace"
9"A licensed medic turned back-alley"
10"His file said he’d lost"
11"Herrera turned down a side"
12"The rain intensified, sheeting down"
13"Quinn wiped water from her"
14"He was heading for the"
15"The disused one, its entrance"
16"He didn’t hesitate."
17"He ducked under a frayed"
18"Quinn stopped at the mouth"
19"This was it."
ratio0.849
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"To follow him was to"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"For three years, since the night Morris’s radio had dissolved into a scream that was half static, half something else, she’d been picking at threads."
1"It was the low, bustling murmur of a marketplace, but layered with stranger sounds: a low, melodic humming that seemed to come from the air itself, the clink of…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Herrera had (have)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
79.7421%