Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFTBE8RGHY1MD6JYPNPT3E

Run Details

Duration:
56.0s
Cost:
$0.001991
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the last metal rung of the maintenance ladder and onto the cracked concrete platform of the abandoned Tube station. Her boots scuffed the grimy floor, disturbing a fine layer of dust that hadn’t been touched in years. The air was thick with the scent of mildew and something metallic, like old pennies. Her flashlight cut through the gloom, revealing faded advertisements peeling off the tiled walls. The station was a relic of another era, its once-bustling platforms now silent and eerie. She adjusted her jacket, her sharp jaw tightening as she surveyed the scene. A handful of uniformed officers stood near the far end of the platform, their voices hushed but carrying in the cavernous space. Eva Kowalski stood apart from them, her curly red hair catching the faint light as she perched on the edge of an overturned bench. Her round glasses gleamed as she looked up from the worn leather satchel on her lap, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear. “Detective Quinn,” Eva greeted, her voice soft but steady. She closed the satchel and stood, brushing dust off her skirt. “I wasn’t expecting you to come down here.” Harlow’s brown eyes flicked over the scene, noting the yellow tape cordoning off a section of the platform. “Neither was I,” she said, her tone clipped. “But when I heard the Veil Market was involved, I thought I’d take a look.” Eva hesitated, her green eyes narrowing slightly. “The Market’s been cleared out for days. Nothing to see here.” Harlow didn’t reply, her military-precision stride carrying her past Eva toward the taped-off area. The officers moved aside, recognizing her authority. Beneath their feet, faint chalk lines outlined the remnants of a ritual circle, its symbols smudged but still legible. Harlow crouched, her flashlight beam tracing the arcane markings. They were precise, deliberate—not the work of amateurs. “When did this happen?” she asked, her voice low. “Two nights ago,” Eva said from behind her. “We think it was a summoning gone wrong. Someone tried to call something they couldn’t control.” Harlow’s gaze lingered on the scorch marks radiating outward from the circle. “And the body?” Eva hesitated again, her freckled complexion paling slightly. “There wasn’t one.” Harlow stood, brushing dust off her slacks. “No body? Just a summoning circle and a lot of scorch marks?” “Right.” Eva shifted her satchel on her shoulder, her fingers tightening on the strap. “We think whatever they summoned took them. Or... obliterated them.” Harlow’s sharp jaw tightened as she studied the scene again. Something was off. The scorch marks were too uniform, too symmetrical. If something had gone wrong, the damage would’ve been chaotic. “And you’re sure this was a summoning?” Eva nodded. “The symbols match known summoning rituals. And...” She hesitated, then reached into her satchel, pulling out a small brass compass. Its surface was darkened with verdigris, the face etched with intricate sigils. “The Veil Compass points straight to this spot. It’s definitely a supernatural hotspot.” Harlow took the compass, feeling its weight in her hand. The needle quivered slightly before settling, pointing directly at the circle. Her brow furrowed. She’d seen enough strange things in her career to know better than to dismiss it outright, but this still didn’t feel right. “Who reported this?” Eva glanced at the officers, who were now absorbed in their own conversation. “An anonymous tip,” she said quietly. “Someone claimed they heard screams coming from the station.” “Screams,” Harlow repeated, her tone skeptical. “And no one thought to investigate until two days later?” Eva shrugged, her nervous habit returning as she tucked her hair behind her ear. “It’s Camden. People hear screams all the time down here.” Harlow handed the compass back, her gaze lingering on the scorch marks. “You said the Market’s been cleared out. Where did the compass come from?” Eva hesitated, her grip tightening on the compass. “It was... left behind. Probably by whoever tried the summoning.” Harlow’s eyes narrowed. “Convenient.” Eva met her gaze, her expression unreadable. “I know what you’re thinking, Detective. But I’m just here to help.” Harlow didn’t reply, turning instead to inspect the edges of the platform. Her flashlight beam caught on something glinting near the tracks. She crouched again, her worn leather watch brushing against the ground as she reached for it. It was a bone token, the kind used to gain entry to the Veil Market. She turned it over in her hand, noting the faint etching of a crescent moon. “This yours?” she asked, holding it up. Eva’s eyes widened slightly, but she shook her head. “No. I’ve never seen it before.” Harlow pocketed the token, her mind racing. If the Market had been cleared out, why was a token left behind? And why here, of all places? She stood, her flashlight beam sweeping the platform again. Her eyes caught on something else—a faint smear of red near the wall. She stepped closer, crouching to examine it. It wasn’t blood; it was paint. Or something like it. She reached out, touching it lightly with her fingertips. It was dry, but the color was fresh. “What is it?” Eva asked, her voice tense. Harlow didn’t answer, her gaze fixed on the smear. It was small, barely noticeable, but it didn’t belong. She straightened, her flashlight beam tracing the wall upward. There, near the ceiling, was another mark—a symbol, hastily painted but unmistakable. It wasn’t part of the summoning circle. It was something else entirely. “Eva,” she said, her voice low. “What’s this?” Eva stepped closer, her breath catching as she saw the symbol. Her hand flew to her mouth, her eyes widening behind her glasses. “That’s... that’s a warding sigil. But it’s not for summoning. It’s for containment.” Harlow’s brow furrowed. “Containment? Of what?” Eva hesitated, her fingers tightening around the compass again. “Of something already here.” The words hung in the air, heavy and ominous. Harlow’s gaze swept the platform again, her mind piecing together the fragments of the scene. The scorch marks, the token, the warding sigil—none of it added up to a botched summoning. It was something else. Something deliberate. Her sharp jaw tightened as she turned to Eva. “You’re holding something back.” Eva’s eyes flickered, but she didn’t deny it. “I’m not,” she said softly. “But... I think we’re missing something.” Harlow stepped closer, her tone firm. “What aren’t you telling me?” Eva hesitated, her fingers brushing the compass again. “There’s... there’s a pattern. Rituals like this, they’ve been happening all over the city. Small, unnoticed. But this is the first time there’s been evidence.” Harlow’s eyes narrowed. “Evidence of what?” Eva’s voice dropped to a whisper. “Of someone trying to control something. Something dangerous.” Harlow’s pulse quickened, her mind flashing back to three years ago—to Morris, to the case that had ended in tragedy. She clenched her fists, forcing the memory away. “Who?” Eva shook her head, her green eyes clouded with uncertainty. “I don’t know. But whatever they’re doing, they’re close. And we’re running out of time.” Harlow’s gaze flickered to the warding sigil, then back to Eva. “Close to what?” Eva hesitated, her fingers tightening on the compass. “Close to opening something. Something we can’t close.” The words settled over the platform like a shadow, heavy and unspoken. Harlow’s jaw tightened as she turned back to the scene, her mind racing. Whoever was behind this, they weren’t amateurs. They were organized, methodical. And they were hiding in plain sight. She glanced at Eva, her tone firm. “We need to find them. Before it’s too late.” Eva nodded, her expression grim. “I’ll help. But we need to be careful. Whatever they’re doing, they’re dangerous.” Harlow’s gaze lingered on the warding sigil, her sharp jaw set in determination. “So are we.” The platform was silent once more, the weight of their discovery hanging in the air. Somewhere in the darkness, something stirred—a presence unseen but felt. Harlow’s hand tightened on her flashlight as she stepped forward, her resolve hardening. Whatever was coming, she’d be ready.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
87.50% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She hesitated then [then]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
2"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.125
77.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count4
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lightly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count2
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"quivered"
count1
8
word"furrowed"
count2
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"etching"
count1
12
word"racing"
count2
13
word"flickered"
count2
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"quickened"
count1
17
word"unspoken"
count1
18
word"methodical"
count1
19
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"flicked"
2"tracing"
3"chaotic"
4"etched"
5"intricate"
6"weight"
7"quivered"
8"furrowed"
9"unreadable"
10"glinting"
11"etching"
12"racing"
13"flickered"
14"whisper"
15"pulse"
16"quickened"
17"unspoken"
18"methodical"
19"resolve"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches6
maxInWindow5
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count3
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
2
label"air was thick with"
count1
3
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"clenched her fists"
3"The air was thick with"
4"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences102
matches
0"t in determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1340
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1011
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.47
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Harlow23
Quinn1
Tube1
Kowalski1
Eva25
Veil1
Market2
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Market"
5"Morris"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.264
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1340
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean27.35
std20.52
cv0.75
sampleLengths
086
183
228
341
418
557
69
724
815
911
1019
1124
1238
1347
1449
1528
1616
1724
1825
1918
204
2119
2268
237
2415
2582
268
2751
288
2936
306
3113
3246
3313
3419
3511
3633
376
3814
3929
4025
4114
4216
4343
4416
4518
4616
4738
486
94.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences102
matches
0"been touched"
1"was darkened"
2"been cleared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs194
matches
0"were hiding"
1"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences138
ratio0.051
matches
0"They were precise, deliberate—not the work of amateurs."
1"Her eyes caught on something else—a faint smear of red near the wall."
2"It wasn’t blood; it was paint."
3"There, near the ceiling, was another mark—a symbol, hastily painted but unmistakable."
4"The scorch marks, the token, the warding sigil—none of it added up to a botched summoning."
5"Harlow’s pulse quickened, her mind flashing back to three years ago—to Morris, to the case that had ended in tragedy."
6"Somewhere in the darkness, something stirred—a presence unseen but felt."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1020
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03725490196078431
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013725490196078431
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean9.71
std5.09
cv0.524
sampleLengths
024
118
215
314
415
513
622
724
824
99
1011
118
1218
138
1415
157
1611
1714
187
1919
209
218
229
238
2416
2512
263
278
283
297
3012
3114
3210
3310
343
358
3610
377
382
3920
4012
4113
4210
4311
443
4522
463
4713
486
499
49.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.2971014492753623
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners41
33.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"Somewhere in the darkness, something"
ratio0.01
76.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences100
matches
0"Her boots scuffed the grimy"
1"Her flashlight cut through the"
2"She adjusted her jacket, her"
3"Her round glasses gleamed as"
4"She closed the satchel and"
5"she said, her tone clipped"
6"They were precise, deliberate—not the"
7"she asked, her voice low"
8"She hesitated, then reached into"
9"Its surface was darkened with"
10"Her brow furrowed."
11"She’d seen enough strange things"
12"she said quietly"
13"Her flashlight beam caught on"
14"She crouched again, her worn"
15"It was a bone token,"
16"She turned it over in"
17"she asked, holding it up"
18"She stood, her flashlight beam"
19"Her eyes caught on something"
ratio0.36
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences100
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
1"Her boots scuffed the grimy"
2"The air was thick with"
3"Her flashlight cut through the"
4"The station was a relic"
5"She adjusted her jacket, her"
6"A handful of uniformed officers"
7"Eva Kowalski stood apart from"
8"Her round glasses gleamed as"
9"Eva greeted, her voice soft"
10"She closed the satchel and"
11"Harlow’s brown eyes flicked over"
12"she said, her tone clipped"
13"Eva hesitated, her green eyes"
14"Harlow didn’t reply, her military-precision"
15"The officers moved aside, recognizing"
16"Harlow crouched, her flashlight beam"
17"They were precise, deliberate—not the"
18"she asked, her voice low"
19"Eva said from behind her"
ratio0.92
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"If something had gone wrong,"
1"If the Market had been"
2"Whoever was behind this, they"
ratio0.03
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Her boots scuffed the grimy floor, disturbing a fine layer of dust that hadn’t been touched in years."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Eva greeted, her voice soft but steady"
1"she said, her tone clipped"
2"she asked, her voice low"
3"Eva shifted, her fingers tightening on the strap"
4"Harlow repeated, her tone skeptical"
5"Eva asked, her voice tense"
6"she said, her voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Harlow repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.042
74.7606%