| 85.48% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he agreed quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "she asked again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.258 | | leniency | 0.516 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.129 | |
| 88.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 845 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.83% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 845 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicked" | | 1 | "unreadable" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "gleaming" | | 6 | "treacherous" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 825 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.36% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 605 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.65 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | London | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Rory | 10 | | Lucien | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.674 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 90.48% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sensing her gaze through the door" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 825 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 18.33 | | std | 14.35 | | cv | 0.783 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 42 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.12 | | matches | | 0 | "The cat’s ears pricked up before she heard it—a sharp knock at the door." | | 1 | "His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—flicked up as if sensing her gaze through the door." | | 2 | "Lucien’s gaze traveled over her—messy black hair, old college sweater, the crescent scar on her left wrist just visible beneath the pushed-up sleeve—before settling on her face." | | 3 | "His voice was the same—smooth, faintly accented." | | 4 | "Lucien swept past her, bringing the scent of rain, cologne, and something darker—smoke and iron, the faint hint of the demonic." | | 5 | "His cane—ivory-handled, always within reach—tapped lightly against the floor." | | 6 | "A flash of memory—his mouth on hers in the dim light of Silas’ back room, hands tangled in her hair, the way he’d whispered her name like it was something sacred." | | 7 | "Something flickered in Lucien’s eyes—relief, triumph, maybe something softer—before he schooled his expression into that cool neutrality she knew too well." | | 8 | "His gaze was dark, intent—the way it always was when the game was on." | | 9 | "The rain continued its relentless rhythm against the windows as he laughed, low and familiar, and Rory let herself—just for a moment—pretend this was how it always was." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 657 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.0365296803652968 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0060882800608828 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 9.94 | | std | 7.5 | | cv | 0.754 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 67.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.42168674698795183 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 62.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she tossed the book" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 84.15% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath caught." | | 1 | "His mismatched eyes—one amber, one" | | 2 | "She exhaled, then flipped the" | | 3 | "His voice was the same—smooth," | | 4 | "It did things to her" | | 5 | "His mouth quirked." | | 6 | "His coat brushed her arm" | | 7 | "She shut the door, latching" | | 8 | "His cane—ivory—handled, always within reach—tapped" | | 9 | "She refused to let that" | | 10 | "he agreed quietly" | | 11 | "she asked again" | | 12 | "His gaze sharpened." | | 13 | "His mouth pressed into a" | | 14 | "She pulled down a thick" | | 15 | "His cane tapped once, sharp" | | 16 | "She turned back to him," | | 17 | "His gaze was dark, intent—the" |
| | ratio | 0.34 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain lashed against the" | | 1 | "Rory sat curled on the" | | 2 | "The cat’s ears pricked up" | | 3 | "Ptolemy bolted as Rory stood," | | 4 | "Her breath caught." | | 5 | "Lucien stood on the other" | | 6 | "A black coat clung to" | | 7 | "His mismatched eyes—one amber, one" | | 8 | "Rory’s fingers hesitated on the" | | 9 | "The last time she’d seen" | | 10 | "That had been months ago." | | 11 | "She exhaled, then flipped the" | | 12 | "The door swung inward, letting" | | 13 | "Lucien’s gaze traveled over her—messy" | | 14 | "His voice was the same—smooth," | | 15 | "It did things to her" | | 16 | "His mouth quirked." | | 17 | "A beat of silence." | | 18 | "Water pooled at his feet." | | 19 | "Rory stepped aside." |
| | ratio | 0.925 | |
| 94.34% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Whoever it was would need" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—flicked up as if sensing her gaze through the door." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled down, dust drifting in the lamplight" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he agreed quietly (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.097 | | leniency | 0.194 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |