Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFTGP126TKKGGFVK94PY9D

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Duration:
41.9s
Cost:
$0.001244
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain lashed against the windows of Eva’s flat, the drumming sound mixing with the distant hum of London traffic below. Rory sat curled on the sofa with Ptolemy purring in her lap, absently scrolling through her phone while the storm rattled the pane. The cat’s ears pricked up before she heard it—a sharp knock at the door. Three deadbolts. Whoever it was would need patience. Ptolemy bolted as Rory stood, rubbing her hands against her jeans before peering through the peephole. Her breath caught. Lucien stood on the other side, soaked through, his platinum hair darkened by rain and falling in loose strands across his forehead. A black coat clung to his frame, water dripping from the hem onto the worn hallway carpet. His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—flicked up as if sensing her gaze through the door. Rory’s fingers hesitated on the lock. The last time she’d seen him, he’d been leaning against the bar at Silas’ place, watching her with that unreadable half-smile while she walked out without looking back. That had been months ago. Another knock. She exhaled, then flipped the deadbolts open one by one. The door swung inward, letting in the damp chill of the hallway. Lucien’s gaze traveled over her—messy black hair, old college sweater, the crescent scar on her left wrist just visible beneath the pushed-up sleeve—before settling on her face. “Rory.” His voice was the same—smooth, faintly accented. It did things to her pulse she refused to acknowledge. “You’re dripping on the floor,” she said. His mouth quirked. “That I am.” A beat of silence. Water pooled at his feet. Rory stepped aside. “Come in before you flood the landing.” Lucien swept past her, bringing the scent of rain, cologne, and something darker—smoke and iron, the faint hint of the demonic. His coat brushed her arm as he passed, close enough that she caught the damp heat radiating from him. She shut the door, latching the deadbolts again before turning. Lucien stood in the middle of the cramped living space, taking in the stacks of books, the takeaway containers on the coffee table, the wilting plant Eva kept forgetting to water. His cane—ivory-handled, always within reach—tapped lightly against the floor. “So,” Rory crossed her arms. “Are we doing the part where I ask what you’re doing here, or are you skipping to the mysterious errand that requires my help?” Lucien turned, rainwater still gleaming on his cheekbones. “It’s good to see you too.” She refused to let that sting. “We’re not doing small talk, Luc.” “No,” he agreed quietly. “We never were very good at that.” A flash of memory—his mouth on hers in the dim light of Silas’ back room, hands tangled in her hair, the way he’d whispered her name like it was something sacred. Rory pushed it away. “Why are you here?” she asked again. Lucien sighed, running a hand through his damp hair. “I need your help.” “Shocking.” His gaze sharpened. “There’s a book—an old grimoire, stolen from a collector in Prague. It’s dangerous, Rory. More than the usual fare.” She snorted. “So call one of your other contacts.” “None of them think like you do.” The compliment, delivered in that low voice, did something treacherous to her ribs. Lucien took a step closer, rainwater still clinging to his lashes. “You know how these things work. The buyer won’t be human. If they crack the cipher—” “I’m out, Luc.” Rory forced herself to hold his gaze. “No more smuggling, no more favors. I deliver noodles now, remember?” His mouth pressed into a thin line. “I wouldn’t be here if it wasn’t important.” The silence stretched between them, thick with all the things they hadn’t said. The way he’d let her walk away. The way she hadn’t asked him to follow. Outside, the wind howled against the glass. Rory exhaled. “Tell me about the cipher.” Something flickered in Lucien’s eyes—relief, triumph, maybe something softer—before he schooled his expression into that cool neutrality she knew too well. “It’s written in a blend of Enochian and—” “—Etruscan sigils, obviously,” Rory finished, walking toward the shelf where Eva kept her reference texts. “Let me guess, it’s got silver-edged pages and smells like rotten honey?” Lucien stilled. “You’ve seen it.” “No.” She pulled down a thick volume, dust drifting in the lamplight. “But I know who has.” His cane tapped once, sharp against the floor. “Rory.” She turned back to him, the book heavy in her hands. His gaze was dark, intent—the way it always was when the game was on. For a heartbeat, she let herself remember how it felt to be the focus of that look. Then she tossed the book onto the sofa. “You’re buying me dinner first.” A slow smile curved Lucien’s mouth. “Noodles?” “Obviously.” The rain continued its relentless rhythm against the windows as he laughed, low and familiar, and Rory let herself—just for a moment—pretend this was how it always was.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
85.48% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he agreed quietly [quietly]"
1"she asked again [again]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.258
leniency0.516
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.129
88.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount845
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount845
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"treacherous"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"unreadable"
2"chill"
3"pulse"
4"silence"
5"gleaming"
6"treacherous"
7"flickered"
8"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords825
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
67.36% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount605
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva3
London1
Ptolemy2
Rory10
Lucien10
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.674
windowScore0.833
90.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if sensing her gaze through the door"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount825
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"let that sting"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean18.33
std14.35
cv0.783
sampleLengths
058
18
219
354
46
533
62
710
840
917
107
116
129
1310
1440
1550
1629
1714
1812
1911
2035
217
2213
231
2422
259
267
2713
2827
2921
3015
3128
327
337
3421
358
3627
375
3817
399
4042
4113
427
431
4428
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences83
ratio0.12
matches
0"The cat’s ears pricked up before she heard it—a sharp knock at the door."
1"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—flicked up as if sensing her gaze through the door."
2"Lucien’s gaze traveled over her—messy black hair, old college sweater, the crescent scar on her left wrist just visible beneath the pushed-up sleeve—before settling on her face."
3"His voice was the same—smooth, faintly accented."
4"Lucien swept past her, bringing the scent of rain, cologne, and something darker—smoke and iron, the faint hint of the demonic."
5"His cane—ivory-handled, always within reach—tapped lightly against the floor."
6"A flash of memory—his mouth on hers in the dim light of Silas’ back room, hands tangled in her hair, the way he’d whispered her name like it was something sacred."
7"Something flickered in Lucien’s eyes—relief, triumph, maybe something softer—before he schooled his expression into that cool neutrality she knew too well."
8"His gaze was dark, intent—the way it always was when the game was on."
9"The rain continued its relentless rhythm against the windows as he laughed, low and familiar, and Rory let herself—just for a moment—pretend this was how it always was."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount657
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.0365296803652968
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0060882800608828
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean9.94
std7.5
cv0.754
sampleLengths
021
123
214
32
46
516
63
722
817
915
106
1128
125
132
1410
1512
1627
171
187
1910
207
213
223
234
245
253
267
2721
2819
2910
3031
319
325
3324
348
356
366
376
384
397
4031
414
427
439
444
451
463
4719
482
497
67.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.42168674698795183
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners35
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Then she tossed the book"
ratio0.019
84.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences53
matches
0"Her breath caught."
1"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one"
2"She exhaled, then flipped the"
3"His voice was the same—smooth,"
4"It did things to her"
5"His mouth quirked."
6"His coat brushed her arm"
7"She shut the door, latching"
8"His cane—ivory—handled, always within reach—tapped"
9"She refused to let that"
10"he agreed quietly"
11"she asked again"
12"His gaze sharpened."
13"His mouth pressed into a"
14"She pulled down a thick"
15"His cane tapped once, sharp"
16"She turned back to him,"
17"His gaze was dark, intent—the"
ratio0.34
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences53
matches
0"The rain lashed against the"
1"Rory sat curled on the"
2"The cat’s ears pricked up"
3"Ptolemy bolted as Rory stood,"
4"Her breath caught."
5"Lucien stood on the other"
6"A black coat clung to"
7"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one"
8"Rory’s fingers hesitated on the"
9"The last time she’d seen"
10"That had been months ago."
11"She exhaled, then flipped the"
12"The door swung inward, letting"
13"Lucien’s gaze traveled over her—messy"
14"His voice was the same—smooth,"
15"It did things to her"
16"His mouth quirked."
17"A beat of silence."
18"Water pooled at his feet."
19"Rory stepped aside."
ratio0.925
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Whoever it was would need"
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—flicked up as if sensing her gaze through the door."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She pulled down, dust drifting in the lamplight"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed quietly (agree)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.097
leniency0.194
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.065
84.8022%