Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFTTVD61525XB2RSN4VGTT

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Duration:
9.1s
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Clarifai

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The brass knocker echoed like a gunshot in the cramped hallway. Aurora froze, her hand tightening on the handle of the wok she’d been wiping. Three deadbolts clicked open in sequence, each one a small victory against the world outside. She pushed the door open, expecting the usual delivery driver or a neighbor from the curry house below. Instead, Lucien Moreau stood there, dripping wet from the rain, his platinum hair plastered to his forehead, the ivory-handled cane tucked under his arm. His gaze swept the tiny flat with detached curiosity, landing on her. “Rory,” he said, his voice smooth as aged brandy. “Or should I say, Laila? Or Malphora? The aliases are as numerous as your scars.” He stepped inside, closing the door behind him with a soft click that seemed louder than the rain outside. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, leapt from the stack of occult journals to investigate the intruder, only to retreat with a hiss when Lucien’s amber eye fixed on him. Aurora’s breath hitched. The scar on her left wrist, a faint crescent moon, pulsed faintly under her skin. She crossed her arms, trying to project indifference. “Lucien. To what do I owe the… pleasure?” Her voice was cool, but her heart hammered against her ribs like a trapped bird. He didn’t answer immediately, his gaze lingering on the clutter of her life—the maps of ley lines pinned to the walls, the half-empty mugs of tea, the worn leather journal open on the coffee table. “I came to return something,” he finally said, pulling a small, velvet-lined box from his tailored charcoal coat. He placed it on the table. “Your mother’s locket. I found it in the ruins of the old library in Paris. Thought you might want it back.” Aurora’s fingers twitched towards the box, but she resisted. “You broke into a library in Paris?” The accusation hung in the air, thick and stale. “I have my ways,” he replied, a ghost of a smile touching his lips. “But that’s not why I’m here. I need information.” He leaned against the doorframe, his posture relaxed, yet radiating an unsettling power. “About the demon cult operating out of the Golden Empress. Your friend Eva mentioned you’ve been digging into their finances.” Aurora’s eyes narrowed. “You’re working for them now?” The words were sharp, cutting through the tension that had always simmered between them. “After everything?” “I’m a fixer, Rory,” he countered, his voice dropping to a lower, more intimate register. “I take jobs where the pay is good and the rules are flexible. The cult offered me a contract I couldn’t refuse.” He gestured vaguely towards the flat. “This place is a nest of secrets. I need to know who’s feeding them information.” She took a step closer, the scent of curry and old paper filling her senses. “And you think I’d help you? After you disappeared without a word? After…” She couldn’t finish, the memory of his cold eyes and the way he’d walked away from her life like it was nothing twisting her stomach. “I know you’re smart, Rory,” he said, his amber eye holding hers. “You’re the only one who can get past their security. The cult’s ledger is hidden behind a false panel in the library. I can get you in, but you need to get it out. And you need to know…” He paused, searching her face. “I didn’t leave because I stopped caring. I left because I couldn’t let them find you.” Aurora stared at him, the scar on her wrist burning. The attraction, the hurt, the things left unsaid – they swirled together, a dangerous cocktail. “Why now?” she whispered. “Why come back?” He straightened, his posture shifting back to its usual detached elegance. “Because the cult is moving. They’re planning something big, something that could destabilize everything. And I need to stop them. Alone. But I need your help to get the evidence.” He held out his hand, not for hers, but for the locket. “Take it. Consider it a down payment.” Aurora looked from his hand to his face, the rain streaking his cheeks. The world outside was dark and wet, but the tension inside her flat crackled like static. The past was a ghost in the room, and the future was a door she was being forced to open. She took a deep breath, the scent of him – leather, rain, something ancient and dangerous – filling her lungs. “What do you want me to do?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper, but steady. “Tell me everything.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
83.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he finally said [finally]"
1"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.133
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount763
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount763
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"tension"
count2
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"pulsed"
2"velvet"
3"tension"
4"stomach"
5"whisper"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences38
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences38
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences46
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords762
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.88% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount499
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Lucien2
Moreau1
Ptolemy1
Aurora6
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Ptolemy"
globalScore0.899
windowScore1
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed louder than the rain outside"
68.77% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.312
wordCount762
matches
0"not for hers, but for the locket"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
62.51% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean58.62
std21.62
cv0.369
sampleLengths
094
171
249
380
425
556
624
758
853
972
1032
1160
1288
96.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences38
matches
0"being forced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs78
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences46
ratio0.065
matches
0"He didn’t answer immediately, his gaze lingering on the clutter of her life—the maps of ley lines pinned to the walls, the half-empty mugs of tea, the worn leather journal open on the coffee table."
1"The attraction, the hurt, the things left unsaid – they swirled together, a dangerous cocktail."
2"She took a deep breath, the scent of him – leather, rain, something ancient and dangerous – filling her lungs."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount500
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, velvet-lined box"
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.024
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.012
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences46
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences46
mean16.57
std10.04
cv0.606
sampleLengths
011
114
215
318
424
512
69
734
828
93
1015
118
1223
1335
1418
156
1621
179
1816
1914
2022
2120
223
2319
242
2515
2628
2715
2815
2938
3012
3144
3216
3310
3415
354
363
3711
3842
397
4013
4116
4220
4320
4416
453
80.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5217391304347826
totalSentences46
uniqueOpeners24
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences37
matches
0"Instead, Lucien Moreau stood there,"
ratio0.027
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences37
matches
0"She pushed the door open,"
1"His gaze swept the tiny"
2"he said, his voice smooth"
3"He stepped inside, closing the"
4"She crossed her arms, trying"
5"Her voice was cool, but"
6"He didn’t answer immediately, his"
7"he finally said, pulling a"
8"He placed it on the"
9"he replied, a ghost of"
10"He leaned against the doorframe,"
11"he countered, his voice dropping"
12"He gestured vaguely towards the"
13"She took a step closer,"
14"She couldn’t finish, the memory"
15"he said, his amber eye"
16"He paused, searching her face"
17"He straightened, his posture shifting"
18"He held out his hand,"
19"She took a deep breath,"
ratio0.568
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences37
matches
0"The brass knocker echoed like"
1"Aurora froze, her hand tightening"
2"She pushed the door open,"
3"His gaze swept the tiny"
4"he said, his voice smooth"
5"He stepped inside, closing the"
6"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, leapt"
7"Aurora’s breath hitched."
8"The scar on her left"
9"She crossed her arms, trying"
10"Her voice was cool, but"
11"He didn’t answer immediately, his"
12"he finally said, pulling a"
13"He placed it on the"
14"Aurora’s fingers twitched towards the"
15"The accusation hung in the"
16"he replied, a ghost of"
17"He leaned against the doorframe,"
18"Aurora’s eyes narrowed."
19"The words were sharp, cutting"
ratio0.946
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Aurora froze, her hand tightening on the handle of the wok she’d been wiping."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, his voice smooth as aged brandy"
1"he replied, a ghost of a smile touching his lips"
2"he countered, his voice dropping to a lower, more intimate register"
3"she asked, her voice barely a whisper, but steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.083
75.4105%