Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFV879XSGB0V622EGAH6KB

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9.7s
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$0.000382
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Clarifai

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The amber sky bled into the horizonlike molten gold, casting long, distorted shadows across the sprawling vineyards that choked the valley floor. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, her breath misting in the unnaturally warm air. Nyx, a shifting silhouette of living shadow, flowed soundlessly beside her, their violet eyes fixed on the distant, impossibly tall stone archway that marked the entrance to Dymas. Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer, walked with an ethereal grace, her silver hair catching the strange light, her pale lavender eyes scanning the surroundings with unsettling calm. “This place feels... heavy,” Isolde murmured, her voice a whisper carried on the wind. “Like the weight of a thousand forgotten sins.” “Heavy with what?” Nyx asked, their form flickering as they passed a cluster of oversized, glowing mushrooms that pulsed with a soft, internal light. “The air tastes of decay and ripe fruit. Like a banquet left out too long.” Aurora’s gaze swept over the endless rows of vines heavy with impossibly large, jewel-toned grapes, and orchards bursting with fruits she couldn’t name – some shimmering with iridescent skin, others emitting faint, musical chimes as they swayed. The ground beneath her boots was soft, yielding slightly, carpeted with a thick, velvety moss that absorbed sound. She felt a prickle of unease, a familiar tension coiling in her gut, the scar on her left wrist itching faintly. She’d fled this place once before, but the pull of the unknown, the lure of the Heartstone Pendant she’d found hidden in her delivery bag, was stronger than her fear. They passed a fountain, not of water, but of liquid amber that bubbled and hissed, steaming slightly. A group of helbound souls, gaunt and pale, tended to the vines, their movements slow and dreamlike. They didn’t seem to notice the intruders, lost in their own silent toil. Aurora’s hand drifted towards the pendant at her neck, the small, crimson gem pulsing with a faint, warm heat against her skin. It felt like a living thing, a tiny heart beating in time with her own. “Look,” Nyx breathed, their shadow form coalescing into a more solid, imposing silhouette. They pointed towards a clearing where a grand feast was laid out on a table carved from a single, impossibly ancient tree. Silverware glittered, and platters overflowed with meats that seemed to steam even in the cold air, fruits that glowed with inner light, and pastries that looked like spun sugar and starlight. But the diners were not human. They were demons, their forms twisted and grotesque, feasting with ravenous abandon, their laughter echoing like cracked bells. Prince Belphegor, a figure of immense, corpulent power, presided over the table, his eyes fixed on the newcomers with predatory interest. “A spectacle,” Isolde stated, her voice devoid of emotion. “Gluttony’s true face. They feast on souls, Rory. On the essence of the living. That’s why the Veil weakens here. The barrier between realms is thinner where desire runs deepest.” Aurora felt a cold dread settle in her chest. The Veil. The barrier between Earth and Hel. She remembered Isolde’s compulsion – she couldn’t lie, but she could mislead. The seer’s words were riddles, but the implication was clear: they were in grave danger. The winter solstice was approaching, and the Veil would be at its most vulnerable. Demons could slip through. They moved deeper into the realm, the air growing thicker, the scents more potent – spices, decay, ripe fruit, and something else, metallic and cold. Nyx flowed ahead, their shadow form dissolving into the darkness between the vines, reappearing moments later, seemingly from nowhere. Aurora kept her hand near the Fae-Forged Blade Isolde had given her, the cold steel a reassuring weight in her pocket. The blade hummed faintly, a low, resonant note that vibrated in her bones, promising protection against the darkness. They entered a vast, domed hall, its ceiling lost in shadow, supported by pillars carved from petrified wood. The floor was polished obsidian, reflecting the flickering light of countless, unseen torches. At the far end, a throne made of twisted bone and obsidian awaited. Prince Belphegor stood, his form shifting and shimmering, a grotesque parody of majesty. He raised a hand, and the air crackled with dark energy. “Intruders,” he rasped, his voice like gravel and rot. “In the realm of Gluttony. How quaint. What brings you to my table?” Aurora stepped forward, her voice steady despite the pounding of her heart. “We seek passage. Through the Veil. We need to reach the Fae Grove.” Belphegor’s laughter echoed, a sound that made the obsidian floor tremble. “The Veil? A mere crack in the wall. But you seek the Grove? Ah, the place where time itself is a prisoner. A foolish quest, child. The Grove is guarded by the Seer herself, and she is not easily found.” Nyx shifted, their shadow form coiling like a serpent. “Then we shall find her. Or you shall find us.” The Prince’s eyes narrowed, a flicker of something like amusement crossing his face. “Very well. But know this: the weakening of the Veil makes this realm... unstable. Demons stir. The feast is never-ending, but the guests grow restless. You tread on thin ice, mortals.” As he spoke, Aurora felt the air around her thicken, the amber light distorting, shimmering like heat haze. A tear in the Veil, visible only to her heightened senses, flickered weakly nearby, a faint, shimmering distortion in the air. Nyx’s form flickered violently, as if buffeted by an unseen wind. Isolde closed her eyes, her silver hair swirling, and murmured a riddle that sounded like wind through dead leaves. “The heartstone burns, the blade sings cold. The seer’s riddle, the demon’s hold. The feast ends when the veil is whole.” Aurora clutched the Heartstone Pendant, feeling its warmth intensify. Nyx’s shadow form solidified, becoming a towering, imposing figure of darkness. “We are not here for your feast, Belphegor,” Nyx stated, their voice a low rumble that vibrated in the stone floor. “We are here for the truth. And the Veil.” The Prince’s laughter died in his throat, replaced by a low growl. “Truth? In Gluttony? You seek the impossible. But perhaps... perhaps you are the key. The catalyst. The one who can tip the scales.” He raised his hand again, and a wave of dark energy washed over them. Aurora felt a surge of power, the Heartstone pulsing violently, the Fae-Forged Blade humming with a fierce, protective light. Nyx’s shadow form flared, a protective shroud around them. Isolde’s eyes snapped open, wide and pale lavender, fixed on the Prince with unnerving intensity. “The seer speaks,” she intoned, her voice cutting through the dark energy like a knife. “The heartstone burns, the blade sings cold. The feast ends when the veil is whole. But the veil is weak, Prince. Very weak. And the guests... they are hungry.” A low, guttural growl echoed from the throne, and the obsidian floor trembled violently. Demons, drawn by the disturbance, began to stir from the shadows, their forms coalescing from the darkness. The feast was over. The hunt had begun. The realm of Gluttony, weakened by the approaching solstice, had awakened. The small group stood together, the Heartstone burning hot against Aurora’s skin, the Fae-Forged Blade humming a defiant note, Nyx’s shadow a shield, and Isolde’s gaze fixed on the Prince, a silent challenge hanging in the charged, amber air. The exploration had only just begun, and the dangers were far greater than they had imagined.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1259
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1259
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"imposing"
count2
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"desire"
count1
9
word"implication"
count1
10
word"grave"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count2
12
word"pounding"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count2
14
word"flicker"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count2
16
word"warmth"
count1
17
word"intensity"
count1
18
word"trembled"
count1
19
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"whisper"
2"weight"
3"pulsed"
4"familiar"
5"tension"
6"imposing"
7"echoing"
8"desire"
9"implication"
10"grave"
11"vibrated"
12"pounding"
13"echoed"
14"flicker"
15"flickered"
16"warmth"
17"intensity"
18"trembled"
19"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences63
matches
0"felt a prickle"
52.15% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seem to"
2"seemed to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1256
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount992
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory1
Dymas1
Varga1
Half-Fae1
Nyx10
Aurora10
Heartstone4
Pendant2
Belphegor3
Veil3
Earth1
Hel1
Isolde8
Fae-Forged3
Blade3
Prince6
Gluttony1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Aurora"
4"Heartstone"
5"Belphegor"
6"Isolde"
7"Blade"
8"Prince"
9"Gluttony"
places
0"Dymas"
1"Fae-Forged"
globalScore0.996
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like a living thing, a tiny heart"
1"meats that seemed to steam even in the cold air, fruits that glowed with inner light, and pastries that looked like spun sugar and starlight"
2"looked like spun sugar and starlight"
3"moments later, seemingly from nowhere"
4"something like amusement crossing his face"
5"sounded like wind through dead leaves"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.796
wordCount1256
matches
0"not of water, but of liquid amber"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean57.09
std29.34
cv0.514
sampleLengths
0100
122
239
3106
484
5111
639
762
883
968
1022
1125
1251
1319
1444
1569
1621
1750
1835
1957
2044
21105
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"was laid"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was approaching"
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences75
ratio0.04
matches
0"Aurora’s gaze swept over the endless rows of vines heavy with impossibly large, jewel-toned grapes, and orchards bursting with fruits she couldn’t name – some shimmering with iridescent skin, others emitting faint, musical chimes as they swayed."
1"She remembered Isolde’s compulsion – she couldn’t lie, but she could mislead."
2"They moved deeper into the realm, the air growing thicker, the scents more potent – spices, decay, ripe fruit, and something else, metallic and cold."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount994
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"large, jewel-toned grapes,"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.029175050301810865
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01609657947686117
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean16.75
std8.06
cv0.481
sampleLengths
022
123
228
327
414
58
624
715
837
918
1021
1130
1217
1317
1413
1522
1615
1713
1822
1931
206
2118
2221
239
2430
259
262
276
2812
2915
3014
314
3225
3319
3421
3518
3618
3713
3813
3913
4011
419
4213
4312
4413
4511
4640
479
4810
4913
48.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.36
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences62
matches
0"She felt a prickle of"
1"She’d fled this place once"
2"They passed a fountain, not"
3"They didn’t seem to notice"
4"It felt like a living"
5"They pointed towards a clearing"
6"They were demons, their forms"
7"She remembered Isolde’s compulsion –"
8"They moved deeper into the"
9"They entered a vast, domed"
10"He raised a hand, and"
11"he rasped, his voice like"
12"He raised his hand again,"
13"she intoned, her voice cutting"
ratio0.226
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences62
matches
0"The amber sky bled into"
1"Aurora Carter, known to her"
2"Nyx, a shifting silhouette of"
3"Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer,"
4"Isolde murmured, her voice a"
5"Nyx asked, their form flickering"
6"Aurora’s gaze swept over the"
7"The ground beneath her boots"
8"She felt a prickle of"
9"She’d fled this place once"
10"They passed a fountain, not"
11"A group of helbound souls,"
12"They didn’t seem to notice"
13"Aurora’s hand drifted towards the"
14"It felt like a living"
15"Nyx breathed, their shadow form"
16"They pointed towards a clearing"
17"Silverware glittered, and platters overflowed"
18"They were demons, their forms"
19"Prince Belphegor, a figure of"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The amber sky bled into the horizonlike molten gold, casting long, distorted shadows across the sprawling vineyards that choked the valley floor."
1"Nyx, a shifting silhouette of living shadow, flowed soundlessly beside her, their violet eyes fixed on the distant, impossibly tall stone archway that marked th…"
2"Silverware glittered, and platters overflowed with meats that seemed to steam even in the cold air, fruits that glowed with inner light, and pastries that looke…"
3"The blade hummed faintly, a low, resonant note that vibrated in her bones, promising protection against the darkness."
4"Prince Belphegor stood, his form shifting and shimmering, a grotesque parody of majesty."
5"Belphegor’s laughter echoed, a sound that made the obsidian floor tremble."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Isolde murmured, her voice a whisper carried on the wind"
1"Nyx breathed, their shadow form coalescing into a more solid, imposing silhouette"
2"Isolde stated, her voice devoid of emotion"
3"she intoned, her voice cutting through the dark energy like a knife"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
2"Isolde stated (state)"
3"Nyx stated (state)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.421
68.0090%