Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFVGV1YD8XWZ6QKNBR4YN5

Run Details

Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.001155
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain fell in silver sheets, turning the cobblestones of Soho into a treacherous mirror of neon and shadow. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath came in sharp clouds as she pushed forward, the weight of her soaked coat dragging at her shoulders. Her eyes, brown and unblinking, stayed locked on the figure forty yards ahead—Tomás Herrera, the former paramedic, moving with a panicked, darting grace. “Herrera! Stop!” Her command was swallowed by the downpour and the relentless city hum. He didn’t look back. He just ducked into an alley beside a familiar green neon glow. The Raven’s Nest. Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened. She’d had him under observation for a week, this ghost medic for the city’s unseen underbelly. Tonight, a tip about a purchase of unregistered medical supplies had finally given her a reason to bring him in for questioning. He’d bolted the moment he’d seen her, confirming every suspicion. She reached the mouth of the alley, pressing herself against the wet brick. The green sign buzzed overhead, casting an eerie light on the rain. She saw the back door to the Nest swing shut. Quinn gave it a three-count, then followed, her hand resting on the grip of her service weapon. The door opened into a narrow, dim corridor that stank of stale beer and disinfectant. No Herrera. At the end of the corridor was another door, slightly ajar. Beyond it, she could see the main bar area, empty at this hour save for the silent, watchful proprietor, Silas. But to her left, the wall of bookshelves. She’d heard rumors about this place. A hidden room. Her worn leather watch felt tight on her wrist as she approached the shelves. Military precision had taught her to notice anomalies. A slight scuff on the floorboards, a volume on cartography jutting out a half-inch further than its neighbors. She pulled it. With a soft, well-oiled click, a section of the shelf swung inward. Quinn stepped into darkness, drawing her gun. A narrow staircase led down. The air grew colder, damper, carrying a strange mélange of scents—ozone, dried herbs, wet stone, and something coppery. She descended, the sound of her own footsteps masked by the distant drumming of rain on the street above. The staircase ended in a brick archway, beyond which flickered the light of torches, not electric bulbs. She emerged not into a basement, but into a cavernous space that stole her breath. An abandoned Tube station, its old platform signs still faintly legible: Camden Town. But now, it thrummed with illicit life. Stalls lined the curved tile walls, lit by lanterns and glowing orbs that hovered in the air. The crowd was a mosaic of the impossible: figures in hooded robes, creatures with too many eyes, humans with skin that shimmered like mother-of-pearl. This was the stuff of her partner Morris’s fevered, final notes. Notes she’d dismissed as trauma-induced psychosis. The Veil Market. And there, weaving through the crowd by a stall selling bottled lightning, was Tomás Herrera. He glanced back, his olive skin pale under the strange lights, his hand instinctively clutching at the Saint Christopher medallion on his chest. He saw her. His eyes widened, and he bolted deeper into the market. Quinn holstered her gun. Drawing it here would cause a riot. She moved after him, her bearing rigid, cutting through the crowd like a knife. Eyes followed her. Human eyes, inhuman eyes. Whispers slithered around her in languages that grated on the ear. “Police…” “Mortal law.” “Quinn.” They knew her name. A chill that had nothing to do with the damp traced her spine. She kept Herrera in sight, his dark curly hair a beacon. He was heading for a section cordoned off by heavy velvet drapes, where the air smelled of antiseptic and grave dirt. A black-market clinic. He was almost there. Then, a hand caught her arm. It was a large hand, scaled and cool. “The surface world’s justice has no writ here, Detective,” a voice rumbled. The owner was a hulking figure with a bull-like head, his nostrils flaring. A minotaur, her mind supplied, hysterically. “You are uninvited.” She looked at the hand on her coat, then up at his eyes. “I’m in pursuit of a suspect involved in the distribution of controlled substances. That’s my writ.” The minotaur snorted. “Your writ is paper. This place runs on older currencies. You have no token. Your presence is a trespass.” From the corner of her eye, Quinn saw Herrera slip behind the drapes. Gone. Her suspect was vanishing into a world she did not understand, a world that might hold the answers to what really happened to Morris. He’d been found down here, somewhere, his notebook filled with sketches of bone tokens and descriptions of a market that moved. His death was ruled a cardiac arrest. She’d never believed it. She could turn back now. Climb the stairs, return to the rain-slicked streets of her jurisdiction, her case file, her rational world. She could report the location, let a specialized unit—if one even existed—handle it. It was the prudent move. The safe move. Morris hadn’t been safe. He’d followed the mystery. The minotaur tightened his grip. “You will leave.” Quinn’s free hand moved, not to her gun, but to her inner coat pocket. She pulled out her badge, its metal gleaming dully in the torchlight. She pressed it into the minotaur’s palm, over his scales. “That’s my token,” she said, her voice low and steady. “It’s all I have. It’s what I am. Now, are you going to arrest me, or are you going to let me do my job?” The creature looked at the badge, perplexed. It was an object of a foreign power, meaningless here, yet heavy with a kind of intent. The standoff stretched for three heartbeats. Around them, the market’s noise had hushed, watching. With a grunt, the minotaur released her arm and dropped the badge back into her hand. “Your mortal courage is your currency, then. It may not spend far. The clinic,” he nodded toward the drapes, “is not a place for your kind. The physician there… collects things. Memories. Regrets. Scars.” Quinn looked at the scar running down her own forearm, a reminder of a knife fight years ago. She thought of Herrera’s scar, the one on his left arm from a knife attack. A coincidence, or a calling card? “Thank you,” she said, and it wasn’t for the warning, but for the clearance. She walked toward the drapes, feeling the weight of a hundred gazes. The fabric was thick, muffling sound. She pushed through. The space beyond was a jarring fusion of a Victorian surgery and an alchemist’s den. Glass cabinets held organs floating in amber fluid. Dried herbs hung from the ceiling. And behind a steel table, Tomás Herrera stood, panting, his back to a curtained-off examination area. Before him was the physician—a tall, gaunt man with too-long fingers, his eyes obscured by smoked quartz lenses. “You led a pollutant here, Tomás,” the physician said, his voice a dry rustle. “I didn’t mean to, I swear,” Herrera pleaded, his Spanish accent thickening with stress. He saw Quinn and flinched. “Detective, you don’t understand. You need to leave.” “You’re coming with me, Herrera. Questions. About your supplies. About who you treat.” The physician turned his head slowly toward Quinn. The lenses seemed to drink the light. “He treats those your world forgets. As do I. You are hunting a saint, detective. A flawed one, but a saint nonetheless.” “I’m hunting a man who broke the law,” Quinn countered, but her conviction felt thin in this room. Her eyes scanned the table. Surgical tools. A small, carved bone box. And a file, with a name tab she could just read: *Morris, D.S.* Her blood went cold. The physician followed her gaze. “Ah. You recognize the name. A curious man. He, too, came asking questions. He lacked your… conviction. He paid with his curiosity.” The pieces, the wild pieces she had refused to assemble, clicked into a horrific picture. Morris hadn’t had a heart attack. He’d come here, asking questions about the clinic, about the market. And he’d been answered. Herrera saw her expression change. “He was trying to help,” the former paramedic said desperately. “He found a kid, a changeling, left for dead by the river. He brought him to me. I tried… but the procedures, the medicines… they’re not human. The police surgeon would have asked questions. Morris was covering for me. He started poking around here, asking about sources. He stumbled onto *him*.” He jerked his head toward the physician. “And what did he stumble onto?” Quinn asked, her voice dangerously quiet. The physician smiled, a thin stretching of lips. “The truth that some knowledge is a terminal condition. His memories were quite insightful. A tidy archive of Metropolitan Police procedure.” Quinn’s hand itched for her gun. This was the thing that had killed her partner. Not a suspect, not a gangland hit. This… collector. She was off the map. There was no backup, no protocol for this. “You’re under arrest,” she said, the words automatic, hollow. The physician laughed, a sound like breaking glass. “For what crime? Existing? My trade is sanctioned here. You are the intruder. You have two choices, Detective Quinn. Leave now, and forget this path. Or stay, and join your partner in my collection. I lack a detective’ perspective. It would be a valuable addition.” Herrera looked from the physician to Quinn, terror in his warm brown eyes. He was a man caught between two worlds, a man who’d lost his license for trying to bridge them. Quinn made her decision. It wasn’t about the law anymore. It was about Morris. It was about the scar on her arm and the one on Herrera’s, and the fact that some things needed cutting out. “I’m not leaving without him,” she said, nodding at Herrera. “And I’m not leaving without that file.” She took a step forward, into the heart of the clinic, into the territory where her badge was just a piece of metal and her only real weapon was the terrible, clarifying certainty that she had already stepped too far to go back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1718
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1718
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"treacherous"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"mosaic"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"beacon"
count1
11
word"velvet"
count1
12
word"grave"
count1
13
word"hulking"
count1
14
word"gleaming"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count1
16
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"treacherous"
1"weight"
2"familiar"
3"footsteps"
4"flickered"
5"electric"
6"mosaic"
7"shimmered"
8"chill"
9"traced"
10"beacon"
11"velvet"
12"grave"
13"hulking"
14"gleaming"
15"reminder"
16"scanned"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences137
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords3
totalWords1703
ratio0.002
matches
0"Morris, D.S."
1"him"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1360
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn15
Tomás3
Herrera12
Raven1
Nest2
Silas1
Tube1
Camden1
Town1
Morris6
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
Victorian1
Spanish1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Raven"
5"Silas"
6"Morris"
7"Saint"
8"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
1"Nest"
2"Camden"
3"Town"
4"Market"
globalScore0.949
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
82.56% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.174
wordCount1703
matches
0"not into a basement, but into a cavernous space"
1"not to her gun, but to her inner coat pocket"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean34.76
std24.61
cv0.708
sampleLengths
064
114
271
3117
455
566
693
73
851
943
101
112
121
1317
1439
1514
1634
1729
1822
1970
2043
218
228
2336
2435
2538
2650
2739
2814
2921
3063
3114
3227
3313
3437
3543
364
3727
3836
3973
4012
4129
4237
439
4453
4532
4636
4717
4843
95.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences137
matches
0"was swallowed"
1"been found"
2"was ruled"
3"been answered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs213
matches
0"was heading"
1"was vanishing"
67.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences152
ratio0.026
matches
0"Her eyes, brown and unblinking, stayed locked on the figure forty yards ahead—Tomás Herrera, the former paramedic, moving with a panicked, darting grace."
1"The air grew colder, damper, carrying a strange mélange of scents—ozone, dried herbs, wet stone, and something coppery."
2"She could report the location, let a specialized unit—if one even existed—handle it."
3"Before him was the physician—a tall, gaunt man with too-long fingers, his eyes obscured by smoked quartz lenses."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1375
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.024
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.009454545454545455
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean11.2
std8.4
cv0.75
sampleLengths
019
122
223
314
44
512
63
74
816
922
1010
1113
1212
1310
1417
1515
162
1711
1820
198
206
213
2214
238
2418
253
2612
277
285
2918
3019
3117
3215
3313
347
3517
3624
3711
386
393
4015
4123
423
4310
444
457
4614
473
484
4911
47.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3223684210526316
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners49
25.25% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"Then, a hand caught her"
ratio0.008
59.39% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences132
matches
0"Her eyes, brown and unblinking,"
1"Her command was swallowed by"
2"He didn’t look back."
3"He just ducked into an"
4"She’d had him under observation"
5"He’d bolted the moment he’d"
6"She reached the mouth of"
7"She saw the back door"
8"She’d heard rumors about this"
9"Her worn leather watch felt"
10"She pulled it."
11"She descended, the sound of"
12"She emerged not into a"
13"He glanced back, his olive"
14"He saw her."
15"His eyes widened, and he"
16"She moved after him, her"
17"They knew her name."
18"She kept Herrera in sight,"
19"He was heading for a"
ratio0.402
31.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount113
totalSentences132
matches
0"The rain fell in silver"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath came"
2"Her eyes, brown and unblinking,"
3"Her command was swallowed by"
4"He didn’t look back."
5"He just ducked into an"
6"The Raven’s Nest."
7"Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened."
8"She’d had him under observation"
9"Tonight, a tip about a"
10"He’d bolted the moment he’d"
11"She reached the mouth of"
12"The green sign buzzed overhead,"
13"She saw the back door"
14"Quinn gave it a three-count,"
15"The door opened into a"
16"She’d heard rumors about this"
17"A hidden room."
18"Her worn leather watch felt"
19"Military precision had taught her"
ratio0.856
37.88% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"Before him was the physician—a"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The crowd was a mosaic of the impossible: figures in hooded robes, creatures with too many eyes, humans with skin that shimmered like mother-of-pearl."
1"Her suspect was vanishing into a world she did not understand, a world that might hold the answers to what really happened to Morris."
2"He’d been found down here, somewhere, his notebook filled with sketches of bone tokens and descriptions of a market that moved."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, her voice low and steady"
1"the physician said, his voice a dry rustle"
2"Herrera pleaded, his Spanish accent thickening with stress"
3"Quinn countered, but her conviction felt thin in this room"
4"Quinn asked, her voice dangerously quiet"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Herrera pleaded (plead)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.071
80.6369%