Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFVP7KR5ZHKS51GYXH20TK

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Duration:
31.2s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the pavement like a thousand tiny fists, each drop exploding against concrete with a sound that echoed through the narrow London street. Harlow Quinn's leather shoes splashed through puddles that reflected the neon glow of shop windows and streetlamps, her breath coming in sharp, measured bursts as she kept pace with the figure darting ahead. "Metropolitan Police! Stop!" Her voice cut through the night, authoritative and sharp, but the suspect didn't even glance back. Instead, he ducked into a narrow alley between two buildings, disappearing into the darkness like smoke through fingers. Quinn didn't hesitate. She followed, her hand already reaching for the radio at her shoulder. "Control, this is Detective Quinn. I'm in pursuit of a suspect heading east on—" The transmission cut out as she rounded the corner, the buildings too close together for the signal to penetrate. Damn. She'd have to handle this herself. The alley was a narrow throat of darkness, the walls pressing in on either side. Quinn's eyes adjusted quickly, scanning for movement. There—a flash of dark clothing disappearing through a doorway at the far end. She pushed herself harder, her lungs burning with the effort. The door swung shut behind the suspect, but Quinn caught it with her shoulder, the metal protesting with a screech. Inside, she found herself in a labyrinth of corridors, the air thick with the smell of damp concrete and something else—something old and musty that made the hairs on the back of her neck stand up. She moved quickly, her footsteps echoing off the walls as she navigated the maze. The suspect was fast, but Quinn had been running down criminals for eighteen years. She knew these streets, knew how to cut corners, how to anticipate movement. The corridor opened into a wider space, and Quinn skidded to a halt. Before her stretched what looked like an abandoned Tube station, the curved walls and tiled floors speaking to its former life as part of London's underground network. But this wasn't any ordinary station—the air hummed with a different kind of energy, and the shadows seemed to move with a life of their own. Her suspect was nowhere to be seen. Quinn drew her service weapon, the weight familiar and comforting in her hand. She moved forward, her footsteps silent on the tiled floor. The station was vast, stretching out into darkness in both directions. Old advertisements for products long discontinued clung to the walls, their colors faded and peeling. "Police! Show yourself!" Her voice echoed through the space, but there was no response. Then she heard it—the faint sound of footsteps, moving away from her. Quinn set off in pursuit, her weapon held ready. The footsteps led her deeper into the station, past abandoned turnstiles and shuttered kiosks. She was aware of eyes watching her from the shadows, of movement just at the edge of her vision, but she didn't let herself be distracted. The footsteps stopped. Quinn froze, listening. Silence. Then, from somewhere ahead, a door creaked open. She approached cautiously, pressing herself against the wall beside the doorframe. The space beyond was dark, but she could smell it now—the distinctive scent of the Veil Market. The hidden supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon, accessible only to those with a bone token. Her suspect had just led her to one of the most closely guarded secrets in London's supernatural community. Quinn holstered her weapon and pulled out her phone, activating the flashlight. The beam cut through the darkness, revealing a small room filled with crates and boxes. And there, pressed against the far wall, was her suspect. He was younger than she'd expected, maybe mid-twenties, with dark hair and eyes that widened in fear as the light hit him. He was breathing hard, his chest rising and falling rapidly. "Metropolitan Police," Quinn said, her voice steady. "You're under arrest. Hands where I can see them." The young man raised his hands slowly, but his eyes darted around the room, looking for an escape route. Quinn moved forward, keeping her distance. "What's your name?" she asked. "Doesn't matter," he replied, his voice shaking slightly. "You shouldn't be here. This isn't your world." "Maybe not," Quinn agreed. "But I'm here now, and I need some answers. What were you running from?" The young man laughed, a bitter, humorless sound. "You think I was running from you? I was running from them." He jerked his head toward the door. "Who's 'them'?" "The people who run this place. The people who'll kill me if they find out what I did." Quinn's interest sharpened. "What did you do?" The young man glanced at the door again, his fear palpable. "I stole something. Something important. And now they're looking for me." "What did you steal?" He shook his head. "I can't tell you that. But if they catch me, they'll kill me. And they won't stop there. They'll come after everyone I care about." Quinn studied him, taking in the fear in his eyes, the tension in his posture. She'd seen this before—the look of someone who'd gotten in over their head, who was desperately trying to find a way out. "I can protect you," she said. "But you have to give me something in return. Information. Names. Anything that can help me shut this place down." The young man hesitated, then nodded slowly. "Okay. Okay, I'll tell you what I know. But we have to get out of here first. They could be here any minute." Quinn reached for her handcuffs, but before she could move, the door behind her burst open. She spun around, her weapon coming up— —and found herself face to face with a man who looked like he'd stepped out of a nightmare. His eyes were black, his skin pale and stretched tight over his bones. He smiled, revealing teeth that were far too sharp. "Well, well," he said, his voice like oil over gravel. "What have we here?" Quinn didn't hesitate. She fired, the shot echoing through the small room. The man staggered back, but he didn't fall. Instead, he laughed, the sound sending chills down Quinn's spine. "You shouldn't have come here, detective," he said, advancing on her. "This is our world. Our rules." Quinn fired again, but the man moved with inhuman speed, dodging the bullet. She knew then that she was in trouble. This wasn't just some black market—this was something else entirely. The young man behind her screamed, and Quinn turned to see him being dragged away by shadowy figures that seemed to materialize from the darkness. She fired at them, but her bullets passed through as if they were made of smoke. The man with the sharp teeth was on her then, his hand closing around her throat with strength that belied his appearance. Quinn struggled, but it was like fighting against iron. Her vision began to darken at the edges. "Remember this, detective," the man hissed, his breath hot against her face. "This is what happens when you stick your nose where it doesn't belong." Then he released her, and Quinn fell to the floor, gasping for air. When she looked up, the room was empty. The young man, the shadowy figures, the man with the sharp teeth—all of them were gone. Quinn pushed herself to her feet, her hand going to her throat. She could still feel the imprint of those fingers, could still taste the fear in the air. She knew then that she'd stumbled onto something far bigger than she'd realized, something that went beyond the boundaries of her world. And she knew, with a certainty that settled in her bones, that she wouldn't rest until she'd uncovered the truth. No matter where it led her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1304
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count2
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"cautiously"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1304
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count5
4
word"echoing"
count2
5
word"navigated"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"comforting"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"palpable"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"measured"
2"scanning"
3"footsteps"
4"echoing"
5"navigated"
6"weight"
7"familiar"
8"comforting"
9"silence"
10"palpable"
11"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences87
matches
0"d in fear"
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1295
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
43.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1078
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.13
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London3
Quinn23
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Quinn"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.433
windowScore0.5
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like an abandoned Tube station, th"
1"looked like he'd stepped out of a nightma"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1295
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean29.43
std15.66
cv0.532
sampleLengths
059
137
229
326
445
556
641
766
87
949
1014
1161
1215
1347
1418
1537
1632
1716
1825
195
2016
2118
2227
232
2418
257
2622
274
2829
2937
3026
3130
3223
3340
3414
3530
3617
3731
3841
3939
4025
4137
4251
4326
93.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences87
matches
0"being dragged"
1"were made"
2"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs193
matches
0"was breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences102
ratio0.098
matches
0"There—a flash of dark clothing disappearing through a doorway at the far end."
1"Inside, she found herself in a labyrinth of corridors, the air thick with the smell of damp concrete and something else—something old and musty that made the hairs on the back of her neck stand up."
2"But this wasn't any ordinary station—the air hummed with a different kind of energy, and the shadows seemed to move with a life of their own."
3"Then she heard it—the faint sound of footsteps, moving away from her."
4"The space beyond was dark, but she could smell it now—the distinctive scent of the Veil Market."
5"She'd seen this before—the look of someone who'd gotten in over their head, who was desperately trying to find a way out."
6"She spun around, her weapon coming up—"
7"—and found herself face to face with a man who looked like he'd stepped out of a nightmare."
8"This wasn't just some black market—this was something else entirely."
9"The young man, the shadowy figures, the man with the sharp teeth—all of them were gone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1087
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03955841766329347
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010119595216191352
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean12.7
std7.01
cv0.552
sampleLengths
026
133
219
318
43
512
614
719
81
96
1015
117
1213
1310
1420
1536
1614
1714
1813
1913
2027
2126
227
2313
2410
2511
2615
2714
2812
299
3014
3126
323
333
341
358
3611
3717
3819
3918
4012
4115
4210
4322
4410
457
469
4719
486
495
49.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3137254901960784
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences82
matches
0"Instead, he ducked into a"
1"Then she heard it—the faint"
2"Then, from somewhere ahead, a"
3"Instead, he laughed, the sound"
4"Then he released her, and"
ratio0.061
78.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences82
matches
0"Her voice cut through the"
1"She followed, her hand already"
2"She'd have to handle this"
3"She pushed herself harder, her"
4"She moved quickly, her footsteps"
5"She knew these streets, knew"
6"Her suspect was nowhere to"
7"She moved forward, her footsteps"
8"Her voice echoed through the"
9"She was aware of eyes"
10"She approached cautiously, pressing herself"
11"Her suspect had just led"
12"He was younger than she'd"
13"He was breathing hard, his"
14"he replied, his voice shaking"
15"He jerked his head toward"
16"He shook his head."
17"She'd seen this before—the look"
18"She spun around, her weapon"
19"His eyes were black, his"
ratio0.354
45.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences82
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"Harlow Quinn's leather shoes splashed"
2"Her voice cut through the"
3"Quinn didn't hesitate."
4"She followed, her hand already"
5"The transmission cut out as"
6"She'd have to handle this"
7"The alley was a narrow"
8"Quinn's eyes adjusted quickly, scanning"
9"There—a flash of dark clothing"
10"She pushed herself harder, her"
11"The door swung shut behind"
12"She moved quickly, her footsteps"
13"The suspect was fast, but"
14"She knew these streets, knew"
15"The corridor opened into a"
16"Her suspect was nowhere to"
17"Quinn drew her service weapon,"
18"She moved forward, her footsteps"
19"The station was vast, stretching"
ratio0.829
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences82
matches
0"Before her stretched what looked"
1"—and found herself face to"
2"No matter where it led"
ratio0.037
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The rain hammered against the pavement like a thousand tiny fists, each drop exploding against concrete with a sound that echoed through the narrow London stree…"
1"Harlow Quinn's leather shoes splashed through puddles that reflected the neon glow of shop windows and streetlamps, her breath coming in sharp, measured bursts …"
2"The hidden supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon, accessible only to those with a bone token."
3"He was breathing hard, his chest rising and falling rapidly."
4"The man with the sharp teeth was on her then, his hand closing around her throat with strength that belied his appearance."
5"She knew then that she'd stumbled onto something far bigger than she'd realized, something that went beyond the boundaries of her world."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice steady"
1"he replied, his voice shaking slightly"
2"the man hissed, his breath hot against her face"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn agreed (agree)"
1"the man hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.154
80.8546%