Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFW1984ZGYYA3RKHTTPMVW

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Duration:
9.3s
Cost:
$0.000335
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The smell of curry andstale beer hit Aurora the moment she pushed open the heavy door to her flat above Silas’s bar. Her flat was a cramped, chaotic sanctuary, a single bedroom stacked with books, scrolls, and research notes that spilled onto every surface like a landslide of knowledge. Three deadbolts, each reinforced with a heavy chain, secured the front door, a silent testament to the fear that still clung to her like a second skin. She’d fled Cardiff, not just Evan, but the ghosts of her past, and this flat, above the raucous bar and the pungent curry house, felt like the safest place she’d ever known. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, a sleek, indifferent creature, was sprawled across her worn leather armchair, blinking slowly at the intrusion. “Ptolemy, you’re not helping,” she murmured, stepping inside, the door thudding shut behind her. She’d just finished a late shift delivering for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, the smell of spices still clinging to her clothes. She’d planned a quiet evening: a bath, a book, and maybe some much-needed sleep. Instead, the flat felt suddenly too small, the air thick with the unspoken weight of the past. She’d thought she’d left all that behind when she’d fled Evan, the abusive ex who’d left that crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. But here he was, not Evan, but someone else, someone who’d been part of a different kind of chaos. Lucien Moreau. The name echoed in her mind, a sharp, discordant note. They’d met in the tangled web of London’s supernatural underworld, a world she’d stumbled into while trying to escape her own. He’d been a fixer, impeccably dressed in charcoal suits, speaking four languages with unnerving fluency. He’d helped her, once, but there’d been a cost, a betrayal that still stung. She’d thought she’d seen the last of him when she’d left London for Cardiff, only to return months later, drawn back by Eva’s frantic call about something... something dangerous. Now, he stood on her doorstep, the ivory-handled cane tapping a precise rhythm on the worn wooden step. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, sharp angles framing his face, one amber eye and one black eye fixed on her with unnerving intensity. The scent of expensive cologne, sharp and clean, cut through the curry and beer. He didn’t look like he belonged in this cramped, book-filled flat, but then, he never had. “Aurora,” he said, his voice smooth, low, carrying an accent that was undeniably French. “Or should I call you Rory? Laila? Malphora?” The names rolled off his tongue like a practiced incantation, each one a different facet of her fractured identity. “I know you’re here. Eva told me. She’s worried. About you. About everything.” She didn’t move, didn’t speak, just watched him as he pushed the door open wider, letting the cool night air and the distant sound of Silas’s bar chatter seep in. Ptolemy, sensing a stranger, hissed and scrambled off the chair, vanishing under the sofa. The silence stretched, thick and charged, filled only by the distant clang of a pot in the curry house below. “You shouldn’t be here,” she finally said, her voice cool, controlled, though her heart hammered against her ribs like a trapped bird. “This isn’t a place for... for your kind.” He chuckled, a low, dry sound. “My kind? Aurora, you know as well as I do that this city is a patchwork quilt of many kinds. Humans, demons, things in between. And you, my dear, are very much a part of it now.” He took a step closer, his polished shoes clicking on the worn floorboards. “You’ve changed. Cardiff suits you, the law degree abandoned, the delivery job. But the fire’s still there. The quick thinking. The... resilience.” He paused, his amber eye studying her, then flicked to the scar on her wrist, a faint, pale crescent moon against her skin. “Evan’s gone, I assume? The abuse ended?” The question hung in the air, sharp and unexpected, cutting through the carefully constructed facade of calm. “He’s gone,” she replied, her voice tight. “He’s irrelevant now.” She forced herself to meet his gaze, to hold it steady. “What do you want, Lucien? Why are you here?” He didn’t answer directly. Instead, he lifted his cane, tapping it lightly against the floor. “I need your help, Rory. Eva’s in trouble. Deep trouble. Something ancient, something... hungry, is stirring in the shadows of this city. Something that even my connections can’t fully grasp. And she’s caught in its path.” The words landed like stones. Eva, her childhood friend, dragged back into the nightmare she’d fled. The ancient hunger, the supernatural threat – it all tied back to the world Lucien inhabited, the world she’d tried to escape. “Why me?” she demanded, the cool mask slipping slightly. “Why not your usual network of informants?” He smiled, a ghost of a smile that didn’t reach his eyes. “Because, Aurora, you’re the only one who can see it. The only one who can navigate the human world and the supernatural with equal ease. You’re the key, the wildcard. And Eva... she’s always been impulsive. She’s dug herself into a hole, and now she needs someone who knows how to climb out.” He took another step, closing the distance between them. The scent of his cologne mingled with the curry, a potent, unfamiliar mix. “I know we parted badly. I know I hurt you. But this... this is bigger than us. Bigger than the past.” His black eye held hers, unwavering. “Can you look past it? For Eva? For London?” The question hung between them, heavy with unspoken history and the weight of the impending danger. The scar on her wrist pulsed faintly, a reminder of the pain she’d endured, but also of her survival. The fire Lucien mentioned still burned within her, a fierce, protective instinct. Eva was in trouble. London was in danger. And Lucien Moreau, the half-demon fixer, was offering a lifeline, however tangled and painful the path might be. The choice wasn’t just about him; it was about everything she’d fought to build, everything she’d lost, and everything she might lose again. The door to her past had opened, and standing on the threshold was the man who’d been part of both the pain and the salvation. The decision, as always, rested with her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
71.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1064
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"lightly"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
3"carefully"
4"lightly"
5"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1064
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"testament"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count2
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"intensity"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"charged"
count1
10
word"flicked"
count1
11
word"constructed"
count1
12
word"facade"
count1
13
word"navigate"
count1
14
word"unwavering"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"sanctuary"
2"testament"
3"unspoken"
4"weight"
5"echoed"
6"intensity"
7"fractured"
8"silence"
9"charged"
10"flicked"
11"constructed"
12"facade"
13"navigate"
14"unwavering"
15"pulsed"
16"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1059
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount813
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Silas2
Cardiff2
Evan3
Ptolemy2
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Moreau2
London3
Eva3
French1
Lucien4
persons
0"Silas"
1"Evan"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Moreau"
6"Eva"
7"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like the safest place she’d ever k"
11.14% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.889
wordCount1059
matches
0"not just Evan, but the ghosts of her past"
1"not Evan, but someone else, someone who’d been part of a different kind of"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
87.60% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean70.6
std32.24
cv0.457
sampleLengths
0128
166
2133
373
454
564
630
778
847
930
1051
1154
1265
1358
14128
92.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences53
matches
0"was sprawled"
1"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs126
matches
0"was offering"
49.18% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences61
ratio0.033
matches
0"The ancient hunger, the supernatural threat – it all tied back to the world Lucien inhabited, the world she’d tried to escape."
1"The choice wasn’t just about him; it was about everything she’d fought to build, everything she’d lost, and everything she might lose again."
87.93% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount818
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.05378973105134474
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.014669926650366748
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean17.36
std10.09
cv0.581
sampleLengths
022
127
227
332
420
514
621
714
817
923
1019
112
1210
1321
1415
1514
1627
172
1818
1925
2014
2116
2214
2327
2413
2530
2614
2720
2822
298
306
3150
3222
3323
3424
357
3614
379
384
3911
4036
415
4211
4322
449
457
4612
4753
489
4913
60.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4426229508196721
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences51
matches
0"Instead, the flat felt suddenly"
1"Instead, he lifted his cane,"
ratio0.039
23.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences51
matches
0"Her flat was a cramped,"
1"She’d fled Cardiff, not just"
2"she murmured, stepping inside, the"
3"She’d just finished a late"
4"She’d planned a quiet evening:"
5"She’d thought she’d left all"
6"They’d met in the tangled"
7"He’d been a fixer, impeccably"
8"He’d helped her, once, but"
9"She’d thought she’d seen the"
10"His platinum blond hair was"
11"He didn’t look like he"
12"he said, his voice smooth,"
13"She didn’t move, didn’t speak,"
14"she finally said, her voice"
15"He chuckled, a low, dry"
16"He took a step closer,"
17"He paused, his amber eye"
18"she replied, her voice tight"
19"She forced herself to meet"
ratio0.49
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences51
matches
0"The smell of curry andstale"
1"Her flat was a cramped,"
2"She’d fled Cardiff, not just"
3"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, a"
4"she murmured, stepping inside, the"
5"She’d just finished a late"
6"She’d planned a quiet evening:"
7"She’d thought she’d left all"
8"The name echoed in her"
9"They’d met in the tangled"
10"He’d been a fixer, impeccably"
11"He’d helped her, once, but"
12"She’d thought she’d seen the"
13"His platinum blond hair was"
14"The scent of expensive cologne,"
15"He didn’t look like he"
16"he said, his voice smooth,"
17"The names rolled off his"
18"She didn’t move, didn’t speak,"
19"Ptolemy, sensing a stranger, hissed"
ratio0.882
98.04% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"Now, he stood on her"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"But here he was, not Evan, but someone else, someone who’d been part of a different kind of chaos."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He took, his polished shoes clicking on the worn floorboards"
1"she replied, her voice tight"
2"she demanded, the cool mask slipping slightly"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.556
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.222
78.2127%