| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.517 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 80.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1265 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1265 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "unreadable" | | 3 | "intricate" | | 4 | "wavering" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "predator" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "racing" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "d with rage" | | 1 | "felt a chill" |
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| 28.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1252 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.32% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1037 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Rory | 13 | | Cardiff | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Earth | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Realms | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Realms" |
| | globalScore | 0.873 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "light that seemed to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 1 | "moonlight that seemed to pool on the ground despite the sun still shining overhead" | | 2 | "glow that seemed to emanate from the very bark of the trees" | | 3 | "carvings that seemed to shift when viewed from different angles" | | 4 | "looked like someone else entirely" |
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| 40.26% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.597 | | wordCount | 1252 | | matches | | 0 | "no master but" | | 1 | "not what is, but what could be" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 91.99% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 36.82 | | std | 17.38 | | cv | 0.472 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 57 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 55 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 48 | | 27 | 54 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 13 |
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| 95.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "were fixed" | | 1 | "being watched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.112 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt it first—a subtle change in pressure, like the world itself was holding its breath." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in riotous color—violets, buttercups, and flowers she couldn't name, their petals catching the golden light like tiny lanterns." | | 2 | "Images flashed behind her eyes—her childhood home in Cardiff, Evan's face twisted with rage, Silas polishing glasses behind his bar." | | 3 | "The trees grew denser toward the back of the clearing, their trunks twisted into shapes that resembled faces—some serene, others twisted in silent screams." | | 4 | "She could hear water now—a gentle stream that grew louder as they progressed." | | 5 | "As she watched, her image began to change—her hair grew longer, her features softened, and for a moment she looked like someone else entirely." | | 6 | "Some she recognized from her studies—the spiral for Earth, the broken circle for Hel, the intricate knotwork for the Fae Realms." | | 7 | "Rory looked back at the pool one last time, but her reflection had returned to normal—just a young woman from Cardiff, far from home and deeper into mystery than she'd ever imagined." | | 8 | "Not in the Grove—in herself." | | 9 | "The memories the flowers had shown her, the possibilities reflected in the pool, the presence that had watched from the shadows—they had marked her in ways she didn't yet understand." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1047 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.03533906399235912 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011461318051575931 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 14.07 | | std | 6.61 | | cv | 0.47 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 54.68% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.34831460674157305 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, blinking rapidly as" | | 1 | "they whispered, voice barely audible" | | 2 | "She moved with deliberate grace," | | 3 | "she said, though her eyes" | | 4 | "She reached out to touch" | | 5 | "She stumbled back, shaking her" | | 6 | "they murmured, pausing to examine" | | 7 | "she said, pointing" | | 8 | "She could hear water now—a" | | 9 | "They knelt and dipped a" | | 10 | "they said, pointing to the" | | 11 | "she said, taking a step" | | 12 | "She froze, heart hammering against" | | 13 | "she said softly" | | 14 | "She was part of something" |
| | ratio | 0.211 | |
| 37.46% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted the moment" | | 1 | "Rory felt it first—a subtle" | | 2 | "The afternoon sun that had" | | 3 | "she breathed, blinking rapidly as" | | 4 | "The clearing was larger than" | | 5 | "Wildflowers bloomed in riotous color—violets," | | 6 | "Nyx solidified beside her, their" | | 7 | "they whispered, voice barely audible" | | 8 | "Isolde stood at the center," | | 9 | "She moved with deliberate grace," | | 10 | "she said, though her eyes" | | 11 | "Rory stepped forward, drawn by" | | 12 | "The air smelled of honey" | | 13 | "She reached out to touch" | | 14 | "Isolde's warning came too late" | | 15 | "The spores swirled around Rory's" | | 16 | "Images flashed behind her eyes—her" | | 17 | "The memories played out in" | | 18 | "She stumbled back, shaking her" | | 19 | "Isolde said, her expression unreadable" |
| | ratio | 0.845 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "As her fingers brushed against them, the blossoms released a cloud of glittering spores that hung in the air like tiny stars." | | 1 | "The trees grew denser toward the back of the clearing, their trunks twisted into shapes that resembled faces—some serene, others twisted in silent screams." | | 2 | "But Rory was already moving, her boots making soft sounds on the moss." | | 3 | "At the center of the pool stood a single white stone, its surface covered in intricate carvings that seemed to shift when viewed from different angles." | | 4 | "Rory felt a chill that had nothing to do with the temperature, a sense of being watched by something ancient and hungry." | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant in her pocket pulsed once, a faint warmth against her fingers, as if in agreement." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, voice barely audible over the sudden chorus of birdsong" | | 1 | "she said, though her eyes were fixed on something only she could see" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her expression unreadable" | | 3 | "Isolde said, her voice taking on a prophetic cadence" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice cutting through Rory's reverie" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.483 | | leniency | 0.966 | | rawRatio | 0.357 | | effectiveRatio | 0.345 | |