Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFWV61C0NHAH056V3YB10S

Run Details

Duration:
30.1s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air shifted the moment they stepped through the standing stones. Rory felt it first—a subtle change in pressure, like the world itself was holding its breath. The afternoon sun that had warmed their backs in Richmond Park vanished, replaced by a diffused golden light that seemed to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once. "Whoa," she breathed, blinking rapidly as her eyes adjusted to the new illumination. The clearing was larger than it had appeared from the outside, ringed by ancient oaks whose branches twisted upward in impossible spirals. Wildflowers bloomed in riotous color—violets, buttercups, and flowers she couldn't name, their petals catching the golden light like tiny lanterns. Nyx solidified beside her, their form rippling from shadow to something almost human. "The Grove," they whispered, voice barely audible over the sudden chorus of birdsong. "It's been centuries since I've seen this place." Isolde stood at the center, her silver hair catching the light like spun moonlight. She moved with deliberate grace, bare feet making no sound on the mossy ground. "Welcome," she said, though her eyes were fixed on something only she could see. "The Grove answers to no master but itself. Time bends here, memory lingers, and truths hide in plain sight." Rory stepped forward, drawn by the otherworldly beauty. The air smelled of honey and old stone, with an undercurrent of something wild and untamed. She reached out to touch a cluster of blue flowers, their petals impossibly soft. As her fingers brushed against them, the blossoms released a cloud of glittering spores that hung in the air like tiny stars. "Don't—" Isolde's warning came too late. The spores swirled around Rory's hand, and she felt a sudden rush of euphoria, like the first sip of wine on an empty stomach. Images flashed behind her eyes—her childhood home in Cardiff, Evan's face twisted with rage, Silas polishing glasses behind his bar. The memories played out in reverse, each one sharper than the last. She stumbled back, shaking her head to clear the sudden onslaught. "What was that?" "The flowers speak in memories," Isolde said, her expression unreadable. "They show you what you most need to remember." Nyx circled the clearing, their form shifting between shadow and substance. "The Veil is thin here," they murmured, pausing to examine a patch of moonlight that seemed to pool on the ground despite the sun still shining overhead. "I can feel the boundaries between realms pressing against each other." Rory followed them, her curiosity overcoming her initial unease. The trees grew denser toward the back of the clearing, their trunks twisted into shapes that resembled faces—some serene, others twisted in silent screams. Between them, she spotted a narrow path barely visible beneath a carpet of fallen leaves. "There's something back there," she said, pointing. "A way through." Isolde's head snapped toward her, eyes narrowing. "The path is not for the unprepared. It leads to places that even I do not tread lightly." But Rory was already moving, her boots making soft sounds on the moss. The path wound between the trees, the air growing cooler with each step. The golden light faded behind them, replaced by a silver glow that seemed to emanate from the very bark of the trees. She could hear water now—a gentle stream that grew louder as they progressed. The path opened into a smaller clearing, this one dominated by a circular pool fed by a miniature waterfall. The water was perfectly clear, reflecting the silver light in mesmerizing patterns. At the center of the pool stood a single white stone, its surface covered in intricate carvings that seemed to shift when viewed from different angles. Rory approached the water's edge, her reflection wavering in the surface. As she watched, her image began to change—her hair grew longer, her features softened, and for a moment she looked like someone else entirely. Someone older. Wiser. "What is this place?" she whispered. "A mirror of possibility," Isolde said from behind her. "The water shows not what is, but what could be." Nyx materialized beside the pool, their form solidifying into something almost human. They knelt and dipped a shadowy hand into the water, watching as ripples spread across the surface. "The carvings," they said, pointing to the stone. "They're a map. Of the realms." Rory leaned closer, squinting at the symbols. Some she recognized from her studies—the spiral for Earth, the broken circle for Hel, the intricate knotwork for the Fae Realms. But others were unfamiliar, their meanings lost to time. "The winter solstice approaches," Isolde said, her voice taking on a prophetic cadence. "When the Veil is at its thinnest, paths open that are closed the rest of the year. But beware—what crosses over may not be what you expect." A sudden gust of wind swept through the clearing, carrying with it the scent of snow and distant thunder. The trees around them seemed to lean inward, their branches creaking like old bones. Rory felt a chill that had nothing to do with the temperature, a sense of being watched by something ancient and hungry. "We should go back," she said, taking a step away from the pool. "This place... it doesn't want us here." Nyx rose to their feet, shadow pooling around their form like a living cloak. "She's right. The Grove is old, and it has rules. We've seen what we came to see." But as they turned to leave, Rory caught a glimpse of movement in the corner of her eye. Something large and dark slipped between the trees at the edge of the clearing, moving with a predator's grace. She froze, heart hammering against her ribs. "Did you see that?" she whispered. Isolde's hand found her shoulder, her touch cold as winter frost. "The Grove keeps its own counsel," she said softly. "Some doors, once opened, cannot be closed again." The wind died as suddenly as it had risen, leaving an unnatural silence in its wake. Rory looked back at the pool one last time, but her reflection had returned to normal—just a young woman from Cardiff, far from home and deeper into mystery than she'd ever imagined. As they made their way back through the twisted trees, she couldn't shake the feeling that something had changed. Not in the Grove—in herself. The memories the flowers had shown her, the possibilities reflected in the pool, the presence that had watched from the shadows—they had marked her in ways she didn't yet understand. The golden light of the outer clearing welcomed them back like an old friend. Rory breathed deeply, trying to ground herself in the familiar scents of earth and growing things. But even here, in this pocket of wild magic, she could feel the weight of what they'd discovered pressing against her thoughts. "The solstice is three days away," Isolde said, her voice cutting through Rory's reverie. "We must prepare. The paths between realms will be open, and with them, opportunities—and dangers—beyond imagining." Rory nodded, though her mind was already racing ahead. The Heartstone Pendant in her pocket pulsed once, a faint warmth against her fingers, as if in agreement. Whatever was coming, whatever secrets the Grove had revealed, she would need to be ready. The world was larger and stranger than she'd ever known, and she was no longer just a delivery girl from Cardiff. She was part of something ancient. Something that reached across realms and through time itself. And she had a feeling that the hardest part was only just beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.517
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
80.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"very"
2"perfectly"
3"softly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"intricate"
count2
4
word"wavering"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"sense of"
count1
7
word"predator"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"racing"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"stomach"
2"unreadable"
3"intricate"
4"wavering"
5"chill"
6"sense of"
7"predator"
8"silence"
9"familiar"
10"could feel"
11"weight"
12"racing"
13"pulsed"
14"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences75
matches
0"d with rage"
1"felt a chill"
28.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1252
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1037
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde8
Rory13
Cardiff3
Evan1
Silas1
Nyx4
Earth1
Hel1
Fae1
Realms1
Grove2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
4"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
3"Realms"
globalScore0.873
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"light that seemed to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once"
1"moonlight that seemed to pool on the ground despite the sun still shining overhead"
2"glow that seemed to emanate from the very bark of the trees"
3"carvings that seemed to shift when viewed from different angles"
4"looked like someone else entirely"
40.26% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.597
wordCount1252
matches
0"no master but"
1"not what is, but what could be"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"feeling that the"
91.99% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean36.82
std17.38
cv0.472
sampleLengths
055
155
234
361
460
562
614
719
849
948
1010
1125
1261
1357
1438
156
1619
1743
1837
1940
2055
2120
2231
2344
246
2528
2648
2754
2852
2930
3027
3136
3215
3313
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"were fixed"
1"being watched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs188
matches
0"was holding"
1"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences89
ratio0.112
matches
0"Rory felt it first—a subtle change in pressure, like the world itself was holding its breath."
1"Wildflowers bloomed in riotous color—violets, buttercups, and flowers she couldn't name, their petals catching the golden light like tiny lanterns."
2"Images flashed behind her eyes—her childhood home in Cardiff, Evan's face twisted with rage, Silas polishing glasses behind his bar."
3"The trees grew denser toward the back of the clearing, their trunks twisted into shapes that resembled faces—some serene, others twisted in silent screams."
4"She could hear water now—a gentle stream that grew louder as they progressed."
5"As she watched, her image began to change—her hair grew longer, her features softened, and for a moment she looked like someone else entirely."
6"Some she recognized from her studies—the spiral for Earth, the broken circle for Hel, the intricate knotwork for the Fae Realms."
7"Rory looked back at the pool one last time, but her reflection had returned to normal—just a young woman from Cardiff, far from home and deeper into mystery than she'd ever imagined."
8"Not in the Grove—in herself."
9"The memories the flowers had shown her, the possibilities reflected in the pool, the presence that had watched from the shadows—they had marked her in ways she didn't yet understand."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1047
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03533906399235912
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011461318051575931
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean14.07
std6.61
cv0.47
sampleLengths
011
116
228
313
422
520
613
713
88
914
1014
1114
1219
138
1416
1514
1622
176
1824
1920
2012
2111
223
2310
249
2511
2627
2711
289
2924
3015
317
323
337
3418
3513
3613
3722
3813
3919
4012
4126
4211
4324
442
451
466
479
4810
4912
54.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.34831460674157305
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences71
matches
0"she breathed, blinking rapidly as"
1"they whispered, voice barely audible"
2"She moved with deliberate grace,"
3"she said, though her eyes"
4"She reached out to touch"
5"She stumbled back, shaking her"
6"they murmured, pausing to examine"
7"she said, pointing"
8"She could hear water now—a"
9"They knelt and dipped a"
10"they said, pointing to the"
11"she said, taking a step"
12"She froze, heart hammering against"
13"she said softly"
14"She was part of something"
ratio0.211
37.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences71
matches
0"The air shifted the moment"
1"Rory felt it first—a subtle"
2"The afternoon sun that had"
3"she breathed, blinking rapidly as"
4"The clearing was larger than"
5"Wildflowers bloomed in riotous color—violets,"
6"Nyx solidified beside her, their"
7"they whispered, voice barely audible"
8"Isolde stood at the center,"
9"She moved with deliberate grace,"
10"she said, though her eyes"
11"Rory stepped forward, drawn by"
12"The air smelled of honey"
13"She reached out to touch"
14"Isolde's warning came too late"
15"The spores swirled around Rory's"
16"Images flashed behind her eyes—her"
17"The memories played out in"
18"She stumbled back, shaking her"
19"Isolde said, her expression unreadable"
ratio0.845
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"As her fingers brushed against them, the blossoms released a cloud of glittering spores that hung in the air like tiny stars."
1"The trees grew denser toward the back of the clearing, their trunks twisted into shapes that resembled faces—some serene, others twisted in silent screams."
2"But Rory was already moving, her boots making soft sounds on the moss."
3"At the center of the pool stood a single white stone, its surface covered in intricate carvings that seemed to shift when viewed from different angles."
4"Rory felt a chill that had nothing to do with the temperature, a sense of being watched by something ancient and hungry."
5"The Heartstone Pendant in her pocket pulsed once, a faint warmth against her fingers, as if in agreement."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"they whispered, voice barely audible over the sudden chorus of birdsong"
1"she said, though her eyes were fixed on something only she could see"
2"Isolde said, her expression unreadable"
3"Isolde said, her voice taking on a prophetic cadence"
4"Isolde said, her voice cutting through Rory's reverie"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.483
leniency0.966
rawRatio0.357
effectiveRatio0.345
66.8918%