Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFWXE5MFE5677CK01558SQ

Run Details

Duration:
46.9s
Cost:
$0.002122
Provider:
DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pulsed faintly against Aurora’s chest as she stepped through the shimmering rift in Richmond Park. The distortion in the air tugged at her skin, warm and cold all at once, like stepping into a static-charged mist. Her breath caught in her throat as she emerged on the other side. The forest was alive in ways she couldn’t describe. The trees towered above her, their bark smooth and silver, leaves shimmering with an unearthly luminescence. The air was thick with the scent of wildflowers and honey, and the ground beneath her boots was soft, cushioned by moss that glowed faintly in the twilight. It was twilight, wasn’t it? Aurora glanced up and frowned. The sky was a muted lavender, streaked with streaks of gold, but there was no sun, no moon—just an ambient light that seemed to emanate from everything around her. “Isolde’s grove,” Nyx murmured behind her, their voice a whisper that seemed to blend with the rustling leaves. Aurora turned to see the shade solidifying into their humanoid form, their silhouette coalescing from the shadows. Their violet eyes glowed faintly, reflecting the eerie light of the grove. “Strange,” they added, their tone both curious and wary. “It’s been centuries since I’ve felt the touch of Faerie.” Aurora swallowed, her hand instinctively reaching for the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. The hilt was cool to the touch, even through the leather of her glove. She glanced at Nyx. “You’ve been here before?” “Once,” they replied, their gaze sweeping the clearing. “It was… different then. More alive. More dangerous.” Before Aurora could ask what they meant, a soft voice called out from deeper in the grove. It was melodic, lilting, and carried an undercurrent of something ancient and untouchable. “Welcome, seekers.” They turned in unison to see Isolde approaching. The Half-Fae seer moved with an otherworldly grace, her bare feet leaving no imprint on the glowing moss. Her silver hair flowed like water, and her pale lavender eyes seemed to pierce through Aurora’s very soul. She wore a gown of woven vines and flowers, and her presence carried a weight that made the air hum. “You’re late,” Isolde said, her voice tinged with amusement. “The grove has been waiting.” Aurora blinked. “Late? We came as soon as you told us to.” Isolde tilted her head, her expression unreadable. “Time moves differently here, mortal. An hour within the grove can be but a moment in your world, or a lifetime. It is as the grove wills it.” Nyx shifted beside Aurora, their form flickering faintly. “We’re here for the prophecy, Isolde. Not riddles.” The seer’s smile deepened, though there was no warmth in it. “Prophecies *are* riddles, Shade. But very well. Follow me.” She turned and glided deeper into the grove, leaving them no choice but to follow. The path ahead was narrow, winding between the silver-barked trees. The underbrush was thick with flowers in colors Aurora couldn’t name—shades that seemed to shift and shimmer as she passed. She reached out to touch one, but Isolde’s voice stopped her. “Do not touch what you do not understand,” the seer warned. “The grove’s flora is not like your earthly plants. Some are harmless. Others… less so.” Aurora withdrew her hand quickly, her heart racing. She glanced at Nyx, who gave her a subtle nod of affirmation. “Best to listen to her,” they murmured. “Fae magic is unpredictable.” They walked in silence for a while, the unnatural twilight casting long shadows across the path. The air grew denser, the scent of honey thickening until it was almost overwhelming. Aurora’s pulse quickened as they approached a clearing dominated by a circle of ancient oak standing stones. Each stone was carved with intricate runes that glowed faintly, pulsing in rhythm with the Heartstone around her neck. In the center of the circle stood a pool of crystal-clear water, its surface perfectly still. Isolde gestured toward it. “The Pool of Visions,” she said. “Approach, and the grove will grant you the answers you seek.” Aurora hesitated, her instincts screaming at her to be cautious. She glanced at Nyx, who remained at her side, their violet eyes narrowed in suspicion. “What’s the catch?” Aurora asked, her voice steady despite the unease twisting in her gut. Isolde smiled, her expression enigmatic. “There is always a price, mortal. But the grove will decide what that is.” Aurora exchanged a glance with Nyx, who nodded once. “We’ve come this far,” they said softly. “Best to see it through.” Taking a deep breath, Aurora stepped into the circle of stones. The moment her boots touched the moss within the boundary, the runes on the stones flared brighter, their glow intensifying until it was almost blinding. The Pool of Visions rippled violently, though there was no wind. Isolde’s voice rang out, sharp and commanding. “Look into the water, Aurora Carter. See what lies ahead.” Aurora knelt beside the pool, her reflection staring back at her. For a moment, nothing happened. Then, as if a stone had been dropped into its depths, the surface churned violently, and her reflection dissolved into a swirl of colors. Images began to form—a city engulfed in flames, streets filled with panicked crowds, a figure cloaked in shadow, their eyes glowing red. She felt a wave of dread crash over her, cold and suffocating. “What is this?” she whispered, her voice trembling. “The future,” Isolde replied. “A possibility. A warning. The path ahead is fraught with danger, and the choices you make will shape what comes to pass.” Aurora tore her gaze away from the pool, her heart pounding. “How do I stop it? How do I prevent this?” Isolde’s expression softened, though her eyes remained distant. “The grove does not offer solutions, only visions. The rest is up to you.” Nyx stepped forward, their form flickering with agitation. “That’s not good enough. You brought us here for answers, not more questions.” Isolde turned to them, her gaze piercing. “The grove has spoken, Shade. The rest is not mine to give.” Aurora stood, her mind reeling. The images from the pool lingered in her thoughts, haunting and vivid. She tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade, the cool metal grounding her. “We need to leave,” she said, her voice firm. “There’s nothing more for us here.” Isolde inclined her head. “As you wish. But remember, Aurora Carter—the grove has shown you what it will. Whether you heed its warning is your choice.” As they turned to leave, the light in the grove dimmed, the once-glowing moss fading into shadows. The path back was darker, the trees closing in around them. Aurora’s unease grew with every step, the Heartstone pulsing faintly against her chest. She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see Isolde watching them, but the seer was gone. When they finally stepped back through the rift, emerging into the crisp night air of Richmond Park, Aurora felt a wave of relief wash over her. The stars above were familiar, grounding, and the faint hum of the grove was replaced by the distant sound of traffic. Nyx solidified beside her, their violet eyes gleaming in the darkness. “Well,” they said, their tone dry. “That was… illuminating.” Aurora let out a shaky laugh, her nerves slowly unraveling. “Illuminating doesn’t even begin to cover it.” She touched the Heartstone pendant, its warmth a reassuring presence. “We’ve got work to do.” Nyx nodded, their expression serious. “Indeed. But for now, let’s get out of here. This place still smells too much like Faerie for my liking.” As they walked away, Aurora couldn’t shake the feeling that the grove’s eyes were still on her, watching, waiting. The Pool of Visions had shown her a path fraught with danger, but she knew one thing for certain—there was no turning back now.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"they said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.359
leniency0.718
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.051
77.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1312
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"quickly"
2"perfectly"
3"softly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1312
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"otherworldly"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"tinged"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"quickened"
count1
12
word"intricate"
count1
13
word"crystal"
count1
14
word"enigmatic"
count1
15
word"depths"
count1
16
word"churned"
count1
17
word"pounding"
count1
18
word"familiar"
count1
19
word"gleaming"
count1
20
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"charged"
2"whisper"
3"otherworldly"
4"weight"
5"tinged"
6"unreadable"
7"warmth"
8"racing"
9"silence"
10"pulse"
11"quickened"
12"intricate"
13"crystal"
14"enigmatic"
15"depths"
16"churned"
17"pounding"
18"familiar"
19"gleaming"
20"unraveling"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"wave of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was thick with"
2"a wave of relief"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences82
matches
0"a wave of dread"
1"a wave of relief"
55.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1299
ratio0.001
matches
0"are"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
37.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount982
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.24
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Aurora22
Richmond2
Park2
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Nyx9
Isolde12
Half-Fae1
Taking1
Pool2
Visions2
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Visions"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Pool"
globalScore0.38
windowScore0.5
32.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"light that seemed to emanate from everything around her"
1"whisper that seemed to blend with the rustling leaves"
2"shades that seemed to shift and shimmer as she passed"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.77
wordCount1299
matches
0"no choice but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean35.11
std19.48
cv0.555
sampleLengths
051
192
266
335
416
532
664
714
812
935
1016
1120
1256
1326
1431
1566
1637
1740
1819
1921
2047
2117
2274
238
2426
2521
2622
2721
2819
2945
3026
3157
3247
3320
3432
3525
3643
88.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences82
matches
0"was carved"
1"been dropped"
2"was gone"
3"was replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs183
matches(empty)
36.05% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences107
ratio0.037
matches
0"The sky was a muted lavender, streaked with streaks of gold, but there was no sun, no moon—just an ambient light that seemed to emanate from everything around her."
1"The underbrush was thick with flowers in colors Aurora couldn’t name—shades that seemed to shift and shimmer as she passed."
2"Images began to form—a city engulfed in flames, streets filled with panicked crowds, a figure cloaked in shadow, their eyes glowing red."
3"The Pool of Visions had shown her a path fraught with danger, but she knew one thing for certain—there was no turning back now."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount994
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.028169014084507043
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01609657947686117
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean12.14
std6.23
cv0.514
sampleLengths
017
121
213
39
416
528
65
75
829
918
1017
1112
129
1310
1413
1514
164
174
188
198
2017
2113
222
238
2418
2518
2620
279
285
292
3010
317
3228
338
348
3511
369
3715
3810
3920
4011
4111
4215
438
4412
457
464
4716
4814
4917
55.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3644859813084112
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners39
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then, as if a stone"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences78
matches
0"Her breath caught in her"
1"It was twilight, wasn’t it?"
2"Their violet eyes glowed faintly,"
3"they added, their tone both"
4"She glanced at Nyx."
5"they replied, their gaze sweeping"
6"It was melodic, lilting, and"
7"They turned in unison to"
8"Her silver hair flowed like"
9"She wore a gown of"
10"She turned and glided deeper"
11"She reached out to touch"
12"She glanced at Nyx, who"
13"They walked in silence for"
14"She glanced at Nyx, who"
15"they said softly"
16"She felt a wave of"
17"she whispered, her voice trembling"
18"She tightened her grip on"
19"she said, her voice firm"
ratio0.295
11.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences78
matches
0"The Heartstone pulsed faintly against"
1"The distortion in the air"
2"Her breath caught in her"
3"The forest was alive in"
4"The trees towered above her,"
5"The air was thick with"
6"It was twilight, wasn’t it?"
7"Aurora glanced up and frowned."
8"The sky was a muted"
9"Nyx murmured behind her, their"
10"Aurora turned to see the"
11"Their violet eyes glowed faintly,"
12"they added, their tone both"
13"Aurora swallowed, her hand instinctively"
14"The hilt was cool to"
15"She glanced at Nyx."
16"they replied, their gaze sweeping"
17"It was melodic, lilting, and"
18"They turned in unison to"
19"The Half-Fae seer moved with"
ratio0.897
64.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Before Aurora could ask what"
ratio0.013
68.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The air was thick with the scent of wildflowers and honey, and the ground beneath her boots was soft, cushioned by moss that glowed faintly in the twilight."
1"Aurora turned to see the shade solidifying into their humanoid form, their silhouette coalescing from the shadows."
2"She wore a gown of woven vines and flowers, and her presence carried a weight that made the air hum."
3"She glanced at Nyx, who remained at her side, their violet eyes narrowed in suspicion."
4"The moment her boots touched the moss within the boundary, the runes on the stones flared brighter, their glow intensifying until it was almost blinding."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"they added, their tone both curious and wary"
1"they replied, their gaze sweeping the clearing"
2"Aurora asked, her voice steady despite the unease twisting in her gut"
3"she whispered, her voice trembling"
4"she said, her voice firm"
5"they said, their tone dry"
6"She touched, its warmth a reassuring presence"
21.79% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"they added (add)"
2"the seer warned (warn)"
3"they murmured (murmur)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.385
effectiveRatio0.256
72.4736%