Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFXMJFVXTP1KJE4AHXBHDA

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Duration:
16.5s
Cost:
$0.000399
Provider:
Clarifai

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The brass knocker on Eva’sflat door sounded like a gunshot in the quiet of the early evening. Aurora Carter, her back pressed against the worn wallpaper of the cramped hallway, flinched. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird trapped in her chest. She’d heard the knock, sharp and insistent, and her breath hitched. Not now. Not ever again. She straightened, forcing her breathing to slow, her cool-headedness a thin veneer over a churning sea of memories. The flat above Silas’ bar was her sanctuary, a place of books and quiet, but tonight, it felt like a cage. She moved towards the door, fingers brushing the cold metal of the deadbolt. Three locks. Three barriers against the world, against the past she’d fled. Her hand hovered over the final lock, her knuckles white. She took a deep, steadying breath, the scent of curry from downstairs mingling with the faint, familiar smell of old paper and ink. She turned the lock, the click echoing in the stillness. She pulled the door open, her gaze sweeping the hallway beyond, searching for any sign of the person who’d dared interrupt her solitude. Lucien Moreau stood there, framed in the doorway. The late afternoon sun caught the platinum blond hair slicked back, making it gleam like spun gold. He wore his usual charcoal suit, impeccably tailored, the fabric smooth against his lean frame. His ivory-handled cane rested against his thigh, but his posture was relaxed, almost casual, a stark contrast to the tension radiating from Aurora. His eyes, one amber, one black, held hers, unreadable, yet intensely aware. “Rory,” he said, his voice low and smooth, like dark velvet. The name rolled off his tongue, familiar and charged. “Long time, no see.” Aurora’s breath caught. The scar on her left wrist, a small crescent moon, pulsed faintly beneath her skin. She remembered how it had gotten there, the sharp sting of Evan’s fist, the taste of blood. Lucien had been there, a blur of movement, pulling her away from the chaos. But the memory was a shard of ice in her gut, cold and sharp. “Lucien,” she managed, her voice tight, devoid of warmth. She didn’t step aside, didn’t invite him in. The flat was small, cluttered with books and scrolls, the air thick with the scent of old paper and something else – something she couldn’t place. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, blinked sleepily from the windowsill, his fur a soft orange blur. “I didn’t expect you,” she added, her gaze flicking to the cane, then back to his face. The cane was just a cane, she told herself, but the memory of the thin blade it concealed was a ghost in her mind. “Expectations are overrated,” he replied, a ghost of a smile touching his lips. He pushed off the doorframe, stepping into the narrow hallway. His presence filled the space, warm and dangerous, like a predator entering its territory. “I needed to see you. To talk.” Aurora felt the walls of her sanctuary close in. She took a step back, her eyes darting towards the small kitchenette, then the bedroom door. She couldn’t let him in. Not here. Not now. “Talk?” she echoed, the word bitter on her tongue. “What is there to talk about, Lucien? We’re done. Finished.” “Is that what you told Evan?” he asked, his voice dropping to a murmur. He followed her gaze, his amber eye tracking her movement. “Or did you just run?” The accusation, sharp and precise, landed like a physical blow. Aurora flinched, her hand flying up to press against her chest. The scar on her wrist burned. “Don’t,” she whispered, her voice trembling. “Don’t bring him into this.” Lucien’s smile faded, replaced by a look of profound sadness. He leaned against the wall, his cane resting beside him. “I didn’t mean to,” he said, his voice softer now. “I just… I saw you. Delivering for the Empress. You looked… lost. Like you’re running again.” Aurora stared at him, the memories flooding back – the chaos of the bar, the smell of spilled beer and fried food, the desperate need to escape Evan’s violence. She’d thought she’d left it all behind in Cardiff. But here he was, a ghost from her past, materializing in the hallway of her tiny flat. “I’m not running,” she said, her voice stronger now, though her hands were still trembling. “I’m surviving. Just like you said I would.” She gestured vaguely around her. “This is survival, Lucien. Books, curry, a cat. It’s quiet.” “Quiet?” he repeated, a wry twist to his lips. “You’ve always been anything but quiet, Rory. Even when you were trying to be.” He pushed off the wall, taking a step closer. His eyes, the amber one fixed on her scar, the black one holding her gaze. “You’re not just surviving, are you? You’re hiding.” Aurora felt the heat rise in her cheeks. She looked away, down at her scuffed boots. “I’m not hiding,” she insisted, though the lie tasted sour. “I’m… I’m just living.” Lucien’s hand reached out, not to touch her, but to brush a stray strand of black hair from her forehead. His touch was surprisingly gentle, a contrast to the sharpness of his words. “You’re beautiful, Rory,” he murmured, his voice low and intimate. “Even now, hiding in your little flat.” The words, simple and true, struck her like lightning. The attraction, the raw, undeniable pull she’d always felt for him, surged back, a tidal wave threatening to drown her carefully constructed walls. She remembered the heat of his body against hers, the dangerous allure of his world, the way he’d made her feel alive, even as he’d shattered her heart. “Don’t,” she breathed, her voice barely a whisper. She didn’t pull away from his touch, didn’t close the distance between them. She just stood there, trembling, the scent of his expensive cologne mingling with the smell of old paper and curry, a potent, intoxicating mix. “I know why you ran, Rory,” he said, his voice rough with emotion. “I know about Evan. I saw the bruises, the fear in your eyes. I should have helped you sooner.” He paused, his gaze searching hers. “I’m sorry, Rory. For everything.” The apology hung in the air, thick and heavy. Aurora felt the walls she’d built start to crumble. The hurt, the anger, the betrayal – it all surged back, a tidal wave of emotion. But beneath it, a different current was flowing, one of longing and regret. “You should go,” she said finally, her voice stronger, though her hands were still clenched at her sides. “You shouldn’t be here.” Lucien didn’t move. He just looked at her, his amber eye holding hers, the black one reflecting the fading light of the hallway. “I need to know,” he said, his voice low and urgent. “Are you okay? Really okay?” The question, simple and profound, cut through the tension. Aurora looked at him, really looked at him – the sharp lines of his face, the intensity in his eyes, the quiet strength radiating from him. She saw the man who’d saved her, the man who’d broken her heart, and the man who still, somehow, made her feel like she was the only person in the world. “I’m… I’m trying,” she admitted, the words a fragile thing. “It’s hard.” Lucien nodded, a small, understanding gesture. He reached into the pocket of his suit, pulling out a small, intricately carved wooden box. He held it out to her. “For the scar,” he said simply. “A reminder that you survived. That you’re stronger than you think.” Aurora took the box, her fingers brushing his. The wood was cool and smooth, the carving delicate. Inside, nestled in velvet, was a small, polished stone – the color of twilight, shifting between deep blue and violet. It felt warm in her palm. “Thank you,” she whispered, the words choked with emotion. She looked up at him, her eyes shining. “You shouldn’t have come.” “I know,” he replied, his voice thick. He took a step back, towards the door. “But I had to. For you.” He paused in the doorway, looking back at her. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, stretched languidly on the windowsill, watching Lucien with sleepy curiosity. “You’re not alone, Rory,” Lucien said, his voice soft in the quiet flat. “Not anymore.” He turned and walked away, the sound of his footsteps fading down the hallway. Aurora stood in the doorway, the small stone warm in her palm, the scent of his cologne lingering in the air. The silence of the flat was profound, broken only by the distant hum of the city and the soft purr of Ptolemy. She closed the door, leaning her forehead against the cool wood, the weight of the past and the promise of the future pressing down on her shoulders. The scar on her wrist pulsed, a constant reminder, but beneath it, a different kind of warmth spread through her chest – a warmth that was both terrifying and exhilarating. The game was far from over.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
87.50% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"he said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
83.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1507
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"intensely"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"languidly"
count1
highlights
0"intensely"
1"carefully"
2"really"
3"languidly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1507
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"churning"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"tension"
count2
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count2
8
word"charged"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count2
10
word"warmth"
count3
11
word"predator"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"profound"
count3
14
word"constructed"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"intensity"
count1
18
word"reminder"
count2
19
word"footsteps"
count1
20
word"silence"
count1
21
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"churning"
1"sanctuary"
2"familiar"
3"echoing"
4"stark"
5"tension"
6"unreadable"
7"velvet"
8"charged"
9"pulsed"
10"warmth"
11"predator"
12"echoed"
13"profound"
14"constructed"
15"shattered"
16"whisper"
17"intensity"
18"reminder"
19"footsteps"
20"silence"
21"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"start to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1511
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"The cane was just a cane, she told herself, but the memory of the thin blade it concealed was a ghost in her mind."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1278
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Aurora11
Evan2
Lucien8
Cardiff1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Evan"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like a gunshot in the quiet of the"
1"felt like a cage"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.662
wordCount1511
matches
0"not to touch her, but to brush a stray strand of black hair from her forehead"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
77.91% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean47.22
std19.96
cv0.423
sampleLengths
060
164
266
375
424
563
658
741
844
953
1029
1138
1246
1355
1438
1555
1630
1750
1860
1945
2043
2147
2222
2339
2466
2512
2645
2743
2821
2921
3038
31120
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"was relaxed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs189
matches(empty)
4.61% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences124
ratio0.048
matches
0"The flat was small, cluttered with books and scrolls, the air thick with the scent of old paper and something else – something she couldn’t place."
1"Aurora stared at him, the memories flooding back – the chaos of the bar, the smell of spilled beer and fried food, the desperate need to escape Evan’s violence."
2"The hurt, the anger, the betrayal – it all surged back, a tidal wave of emotion."
3"Aurora looked at him, really looked at him – the sharp lines of his face, the intensity in his eyes, the quiet strength radiating from him."
4"Inside, nestled in velvet, was a small, polished stone – the color of twilight, shifting between deep blue and violet."
5"The scar on her wrist pulsed, a constant reminder, but beneath it, a different kind of warmth spread through her chest – a warmth that was both terrifying and exhilarating."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1292
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.033281733746130034
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01238390092879257
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean12.19
std6.8
cv0.558
sampleLengths
017
114
213
311
42
53
618
721
813
92
1010
1110
1223
1310
1423
158
1617
1715
1823
1912
2011
219
224
233
2415
2517
2614
2714
289
298
3026
3115
3217
3324
3413
3510
3614
377
389
3916
405
412
422
439
4410
4514
4610
475
4810
4911
35.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.24193548387096775
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences102
matches
0"Her heart hammered against her"
1"She’d heard the knock, sharp"
2"She straightened, forcing her breathing"
3"She moved towards the door,"
4"Her hand hovered over the"
5"She took a deep, steadying"
6"She turned the lock, the"
7"She pulled the door open,"
8"He wore his usual charcoal"
9"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
10"His eyes, one amber, one"
11"he said, his voice low"
12"She remembered how it had"
13"she managed, her voice tight,"
14"She didn’t step aside, didn’t"
15"she added, her gaze flicking"
16"he replied, a ghost of"
17"He pushed off the doorframe,"
18"His presence filled the space,"
19"She took a step back,"
ratio0.578
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences102
matches
0"The brass knocker on Eva’sflat"
1"Aurora Carter, her back pressed"
2"Her heart hammered against her"
3"She’d heard the knock, sharp"
4"She straightened, forcing her breathing"
5"The flat above"
6"She moved towards the door,"
7"Her hand hovered over the"
8"She took a deep, steadying"
9"She turned the lock, the"
10"She pulled the door open,"
11"Lucien Moreau stood there, framed"
12"The late afternoon sun caught"
13"He wore his usual charcoal"
14"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
15"His eyes, one amber, one"
16"he said, his voice low"
17"The name rolled off his"
18"Aurora’s breath caught."
19"The scar on her left"
ratio0.941
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She pulled the door open, her gaze sweeping the hallway beyond, searching for any sign of the person who’d dared interrupt her solitude."
1"The scar on her wrist pulsed, a constant reminder, but beneath it, a different kind of warmth spread through her chest – a warmth that was both terrifying and e…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount15
matches
0"he said, his voice low and smooth, like dark velvet"
1"she managed, her voice tight, devoid of warmth"
2"he replied, a ghost of a smile touching his lips"
3"he asked, his voice dropping to a murmur"
4"she whispered, her voice trembling"
5"he said, his voice softer now"
6"she insisted, though the lie tasted sour"
7"he murmured, his voice low and intimate"
8"she breathed, her voice barely a whisper"
9"he said, his voice rough with emotion"
10"He paused, his gaze searching hers"
11"he said, his voice low and urgent"
12"she whispered, the words choked with emotion"
13"he replied, his voice thick"
14"Lucien said, his voice soft in the quiet flat"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she added (add)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he repeated (repeat)"
3"she insisted (insist)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
5"she breathed (breathe)"
6"she admitted (admit)"
7"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.452
leniency0.905
rawRatio0.421
effectiveRatio0.381
69.5241%