| 94.44% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the constable said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "she said slowly [slowly]" | | 2 | "She walked back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.296 | | leniency | 0.593 | | rawRatio | 0.188 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 94.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1692 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 73.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1692 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "firmly" | | 3 | "trembled" | | 4 | "wavered" | | 5 | "the last thing" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "database" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 146 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1681 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1193 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.92 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Morris" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 11 | | Thames | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Town | 1 | | Frowned | 1 | | Morris | 8 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Thames" | | 1 | "Camden" | | 2 | "Town" | | 3 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.595 | | wordCount | 1681 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just spirals but a path, a deliberate pattern" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 66 | | mean | 25.47 | | std | 21.56 | | cv | 0.847 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 85 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 48 | | 33 | 35 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 69 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 40 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 83 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 76 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 55 | | 49 | 35 |
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| 89.17% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "been flooded" | | 1 | "was etched" | | 2 | "been disturbed" | | 3 | "been convinced" | | 4 | "was turned" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 209 | | matches | | 0 | "was studying" | | 1 | "was pointing" | | 2 | "was pointing" |
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| 45.01% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 146 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "The stairs down to the platform had been flooded with rainwater for years—or so the reports said." | | 1 | "It spread from beneath him in patterns that didn't match any stabbing she'd ever seen—spirals and arcs, as if he had spun while bleeding out, leaving a trail that curved and branched in ways that made her stomach tighten." | | 2 | "Quinn reached into the dead man's coat—her gloves catching on the fabric, which was smoother than it should have been—and withdrew a small brass object." | | 3 | "Not just spirals but a path, a deliberate pattern that ended at the base of the wall and then—nothing." | | 4 | "She shone her flashlight along the surface, looking for anything—door, seam, anything." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1200 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.03916666666666667 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008333333333333333 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 146 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 146 | | mean | 11.51 | | std | 9.17 | | cv | 0.796 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 49.32% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.3698630136986301 | | totalSentences | 146 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Just brick and damp and" | | 1 | "Still pointed to that symbol" | | 2 | "Maybe it was time she" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Her torch cut through the" | | 1 | "She ducked under the tape" | | 2 | "She didn't elaborate" | | 3 | "He shook his head, gesturing" | | 4 | "It spread from beneath him" | | 5 | "She crouched, ignoring the protest" | | 6 | "He was right." | | 7 | "She turned it over" | | 8 | "She looked at the needle," | | 9 | "She shone her flashlight along" | | 10 | "she said slowly" | | 11 | "She walked back to the" | | 12 | "She didn't answer." | | 13 | "She was studying the compass" | | 14 | "She'd read the file three" | | 15 | "He'd gone looking for it," | | 16 | "She'd buried the file." | | 17 | "He hurried off, and Quinn" | | 18 | "She didn't know what it" | | 19 | "She knew because he'd drawn" |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 65.26% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The stairs down to the" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn descended anyway," | | 2 | "Her torch cut through the" | | 3 | "She ducked under the tape" | | 4 | "A constable she didn't recognize" | | 5 | "She didn't elaborate" | | 6 | "The detective in charge of" | | 7 | "That alone told her something" | | 8 | "The constable swallowed." | | 9 | "He shook his head, gesturing" | | 10 | "Quinn descended the final steps" | | 11 | "The body lay near the" | | 12 | "The man lay face down," | | 13 | "The blood was indeed wrong." | | 14 | "It spread from beneath him" | | 15 | "the constable said quietly" | | 16 | "She crouched, ignoring the protest" | | 17 | "He was right." | | 18 | "The constable paused" | | 19 | "Quinn reached into the dead" |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 52.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Either he hadn't seen his" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 29.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn descended anyway, her boots splashing through three inches of stagnant water that smelled of rust and something older, something that rem…" | | 1 | "Her torch cut through the darkness, illuminating tiles that had once been white and were now grey with decades of neglect." | | 2 | "Uniformed officers had cordoned off the entrance to the old Camden Town station platform with tape that seemed absurdly bright under her flashlight's beam." | | 3 | "It spread from beneath him in patterns that didn't match any stabbing she'd ever seen—spirals and arcs, as if he had spun while bleeding out, leaving a trail th…" | | 4 | "Quinn reached into the dead man's coat—her gloves catching on the fabric, which was smoother than it should have been—and withdrew a small brass object." | | 5 | "He'd gone looking for it, followed leads into the wrong parts of the city, and ended up dead in an alley with no witnesses and no evidence and a coroner's repor…" | | 6 | "But the compass in her pocket was pointing at a wall that shouldn't have anything behind it, and the man on the ground had been dead for hours before anyone fou…" |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "A constable she didn't, his face pale beneath the artificial light" | | 1 | "She pulled out, the way the light caught the carved lines" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.111 | | leniency | 0.222 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |