Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFZ3Y6M6Z8SJ472TW9KEQK

Run Details

Duration:
35.6s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside the grove shimmered with an unnatural stillness. Aurora stepped through the boundary marked by the ancient oak standing stones, and the world shifted around her. The familiar sounds of Richmond Park—the distant hum of traffic, the chatter of joggers, the rustle of wind through ordinary trees—vanished like a dream upon waking. She stood frozen, her boots sinking into moss that glowed faintly with its own inner light. The ground beneath her felt softer than any earth she'd known, almost like walking on velvet. Above, the canopy formed a perfect dome of interwoven branches, their leaves catching light that seemed to have no source. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shimmered like crushed gemstones, whites that glowed with their own luminescence, reds that pulsed as if alive. Nyx materialized beside her, their shadowy form rippling with the transition. "The Fae don't do anything by halves," they murmured, their voice barely more than a whisper carried on the stillness. "This place exists in the spaces between moments." Eva stepped through next, her breath catching audibly. "Bloody hell," she breathed, reaching out to touch a flower that bent toward her fingers like a curious pet. "It's like something out of a fairytale." The grove seemed to respond to their presence. The air warmed slightly, carrying the scent of honey and something older, wilder—like ancient forests and forgotten magic. Aurora felt a strange pull in her chest, as if the place recognized something in her, something she hadn't known was there. They moved deeper, following a path that appeared only as they walked it. The standing stones behind them had vanished, though Aurora could still feel their presence like a heartbeat at her back. Time behaved strangely here; she couldn't tell if minutes or hours had passed since they'd entered. A stream cut through the grove, its waters so clear they might have been air. Aurora knelt beside it, watching silver fish with too many fins dart between water lilies that bloomed in all seasons simultaneously. When she cupped her hands and brought the water to her lips, it tasted of morning dew and starlight. "Something's watching us," Nyx said suddenly, their form solidifying into something more substantial. "Not threatening, but... curious." The feeling crawled over Aurora's skin like a thousand tiny fingers. She rose slowly, scanning the grove. Movement flickered at the edge of her vision—figures half-glimpsed between the trees, too tall, too graceful, gone when she turned to look directly at them. "Show yourselves," Aurora called out, her voice carrying a resonance she didn't recognize. The words seemed to hang in the air, glowing faintly before dissipating. From behind a curtain of silver-barked trees stepped Isolde Varga. She moved without disturbing a single leaf, her bare feet leaving no impression on the moss. Her silver hair caught the impossible light, and her lavender eyes held depths that made Aurora's breath catch. "You seek answers," Isolde said, her voice like wind through chimes. "But answers have their own price, mortal child." Aurora stepped forward, the Heartstone pendant warm against her chest. "I need to understand what's happening. The Veil is thinning, and something's coming through." Isolde's smile held secrets older than cities. "The Veil always thins. It is its nature, like the tide or the turning of seasons. What concerns you is not the thinning, but the direction of the pull." "The pull?" Eva asked, moving to stand beside Aurora. "What pull?" Isolde gestured, and a branch heavy with fruit lowered itself. The fruit glowed like captured sunset, and when Isolde plucked one, it sang a note that resonated in Aurora's bones. "The Heartstone calls to its birthplace. Dymas sings to those who carry its children." Aurora's hand went to the pendant. It pulsed in response, warm and insistent. "You mean it's trying to take me back?" "Not take," Isolde corrected gently. "Guide. The stones remember their origin, and you carry a piece of that memory." She offered the glowing fruit to Aurora. "Taste, and perhaps you'll understand the nature of your burden." The fruit burst on Aurora's tongue like liquid sunlight, flooding her with images—vast banquet halls, endless tables groaning with impossible delicacies, a prince with eyes like molten gold watching her from across a crowded room. She saw herself standing at the edge of a vineyard that stretched to a horizon painted in amber light, the Heartstone pendant blazing on her chest like a beacon. She staggered back, nearly falling. Nyx's shadowy form caught her elbow, solid and steadying. "What did you see?" they asked, their whisper urgent. "Dymas," Aurora managed, the word tasting of wine and regret. "I saw Dymas. And him—Prince Belphegor. He was waiting for me." Eva's face had gone pale. "That's not possible. You've never been to Hel." "The Heartstone remembers for me," Aurora said, pressing her palm against her chest where the pendant still pulsed. "It carries the memory of its creation, and somehow, that memory is tied to me." Isolde moved closer, her presence filling the space between the trees like perfume. "The prince does not wait idly, mortal child. When a piece of Dymas crosses the Veil, it creates ripples. Ripples become waves. Waves become storms." Aurora met her lavender gaze, refusing to look away. "Then help me understand. What does he want with me?" "The question is not what he wants with you," Isolde said, her voice dropping to match Nyx's whisper. "The question is what you want with him." The grove seemed to hold its breath. Even the stream's gentle music paused, as if the very land awaited Aurora's answer. She thought of the prince's golden eyes, the way the Heartstone had called to her since the moment she'd first touched it. She thought of the warmth that spread through her whenever she was near it, like coming home to something she'd never known she'd lost. "I want to understand why I'm connected to it," Aurora said finally. "Why this keeps happening to me. Why I can't seem to escape whatever destiny the Heartstone has planned." Isolde nodded, as if Aurora had passed some unseen test. "Then you must go to the source. The Heartstone will guide you, but guidance comes with danger. Dymas is not a place for mortal souls, even those who carry its children." "I'm already connected," Aurora said, her voice steadier than she felt. "Might as well see it through." Nyx shifted, their form rippling with unease. "We don't know what we're walking into. Prince Belphegor isn't known for his hospitality to those who stumble into his domain uninvited." "Invited or not, the invitation has been extended," Isolde said, plucking another fruit from the branch. This one glowed with a different light, more silver than gold. "The prince has marked you, mortal child. The question is whether you'll answer the call, or whether you'll let fear keep you from your inheritance." Aurora reached for the silver fruit. It sang differently than the first, a note of resolve and determination. When she bit into it, the taste was of winter stars and iron will. "I'm going," she said, wiping juice from her chin. "But I won't go unprepared." Isolde's smile held approval. "Wise. The Fae-Forged Blade will serve you well in Dymas. Its edge cuts through more than flesh—it severs bonds and breaks chains." Aurora thought of the slender dagger hidden in her coat, the one Isolde had given her months ago. She'd never understood why a Fae seer would gift her a weapon, but now the reason seemed clear as crystal. "The blade is meant for Belphegor's chains," she said, understanding dawning. "It's not just a weapon—it's a key." "Or a lock," Isolde said cryptically. "Depends on which way you turn it." She stepped back, gesturing to the path that had appeared behind her. It wound through the trees, glowing with the same amber light Aurora had seen in her vision. "The way to Dymas lies through the heart of the grove. Follow the light that calls to your stone, and you'll find the threshold." Eva grabbed Aurora's arm. "You can't be serious about this. We don't know what's waiting on the other side." "I know enough," Aurora said, though her heart hammered against her ribs. "The Heartstone brought me this far. It won't abandon me now." Nyx's shadowy form solidified into something almost human, their violet eyes intense in the otherworldly light. "Then we go together. No more splitting up, no more going alone into danger." "Together," Aurora agreed, surprised by the relief that washed through her. She wasn't sure she could face Prince Belphegor's domain alone, even with the Heartstone's guidance. They followed the amber-lit path deeper into the grove, the air growing warmer with each step. The scent of wine and roasting meat drifted through the trees, though no kitchens or vineyards were in sight. Aurora's pendant grew hot against her skin, pulsing in time with her heartbeat. At the center of the grove stood a tree unlike any other. Its trunk was the color of burnished copper, and its branches bore fruit that shifted through every color of the sunset. At its base, a pool of liquid amber reflected not their three faces, but glimpses of another world—rolling vineyards, feasting tables, and a throne room where a figure in crimson robes watched them with golden eyes. "The threshold," Isolde's voice came from behind them, though Aurora hadn't heard her approach. "Step through, and there's no returning the same. The prince's domain changes all who enter." Aurora looked at Eva, then at Nyx. Both nodded, though fear tightened their expressions. She took a deep breath, tasting the honey-sweet air of the grove, and stepped toward the pool. The amber liquid rippled as she approached, and for a moment, she saw her own face reflected back—but older, harder, wearing a crown of twisted vines and holding a goblet of liquid gold. The reflection smiled, and it was not entirely a kind smile. "Ready or not," Aurora whispered, and stepped through the threshold into Dymas.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
53.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Nyx said suddenly [suddenly]"
1"Isolde corrected gently [gently]"
2"Aurora said finally [finally]"
3"Isolde said cryptically [cryptically]"
4"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.442
leniency0.885
rawRatio0.217
effectiveRatio0.192
85.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1686
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
3"gently"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1686
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"shimmered"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count3
5
word"whisper"
count3
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"resonance"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"resonated"
count1
11
word"beacon"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"resolve"
count1
14
word"crystal"
count1
15
word"otherworldly"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"familiar"
2"velvet"
3"perfect"
4"pulsed"
5"whisper"
6"scanning"
7"flickered"
8"resonance"
9"depths"
10"resonated"
11"beacon"
12"warmth"
13"resolve"
14"crystal"
15"otherworldly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences89
matches
0"g with unease"
78.65% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1671
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions67
wordCount1173
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.56
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Eva5
Aurora30
Isolde14
Varga1
Heartstone4
Nyx7
Fae1
Prince1
Belphegor1
Dymas1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Heartstone"
4"Nyx"
5"Prince"
6"Belphegor"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Dymas"
globalScore0.221
windowScore0.167
56.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"light that seemed to have no source"
1"seemed clear as crystal"
2"appeared behind her"
20.47% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.795
wordCount1671
matches
0"Not threatening, but"
1"not the thinning, but the direction of the pull"
2"not their three faces, but glimpses of another world"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
86.71% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean35.55
std16.12
cv0.453
sampleLengths
054
175
239
334
448
549
655
717
842
925
1044
1119
1224
1336
1411
1544
1621
1736
1864
1923
2021
2113
2233
2338
2419
2526
2667
2730
2841
2917
3029
3152
3246
3326
3438
3518
3666
3719
3823
3930
4026
4148
4269
4329
4431
4544
4612
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs213
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences118
ratio0.068
matches
0"The familiar sounds of Richmond Park—the distant hum of traffic, the chatter of joggers, the rustle of wind through ordinary trees—vanished like a dream upon waking."
1"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shimmered like crushed gemstones, whites that glowed with their own luminescence, reds that pulsed as if alive."
2"The air warmed slightly, carrying the scent of honey and something older, wilder—like ancient forests and forgotten magic."
3"Time behaved strangely here; she couldn't tell if minutes or hours had passed since they'd entered."
4"Movement flickered at the edge of her vision—figures half-glimpsed between the trees, too tall, too graceful, gone when she turned to look directly at them."
5"The fruit burst on Aurora's tongue like liquid sunlight, flooding her with images—vast banquet halls, endless tables groaning with impossible delicacies, a prince with eyes like molten gold watching her from across a crowded room."
6"At its base, a pool of liquid amber reflected not their three faces, but glimpses of another world—rolling vineyards, feasting tables, and a throne room where a figure in crimson robes watched them with golden eyes."
7"The amber liquid rippled as she approached, and for a moment, she saw her own face reflected back—but older, harder, wearing a crown of twisted vines and holding a goblet of liquid gold."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1184
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03125
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.015202702702702704
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean14.16
std6.99
cv0.493
sampleLengths
010
118
226
316
416
520
623
711
820
98
108
1119
127
138
1418
1522
1613
1720
1816
1915
2021
2119
2213
234
2411
256
2625
2713
2812
2910
3016
3118
3211
338
3410
3514
367
3729
389
392
4010
4120
4214
436
447
458
465
4721
4810
4935
55.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3728813559322034
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners44
37.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Even the stream's gentle music"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences89
matches
0"She stood frozen, her boots"
1"they murmured, their voice barely"
2"she breathed, reaching out to"
3"They moved deeper, following a"
4"She rose slowly, scanning the"
5"She moved without disturbing a"
6"Her silver hair caught the"
7"It pulsed in response, warm"
8"She offered the glowing fruit"
9"She saw herself standing at"
10"She staggered back, nearly falling."
11"they asked, their whisper urgent"
12"She thought of the prince's"
13"She thought of the warmth"
14"It sang differently than the"
15"she said, wiping juice from"
16"She'd never understood why a"
17"she said, understanding dawning"
18"She stepped back, gesturing to"
19"It wound through the trees,"
ratio0.27
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences89
matches
0"The air inside the grove"
1"Aurora stepped through the boundary"
2"The familiar sounds of Richmond"
3"She stood frozen, her boots"
4"The ground beneath her felt"
5"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets"
6"Nyx materialized beside her, their"
7"they murmured, their voice barely"
8"Eva stepped through next, her"
9"she breathed, reaching out to"
10"The grove seemed to respond"
11"The air warmed slightly, carrying"
12"Aurora felt a strange pull"
13"They moved deeper, following a"
14"The standing stones behind them"
15"Time behaved strangely here; she"
16"A stream cut through the"
17"Aurora knelt beside it, watching"
18"Nyx said suddenly, their form"
19"The feeling crawled over Aurora's"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
55.39% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shimmered like crushed gemstones, whites that glowed with their own luminescence, reds that pulsed as if a…"
1"Aurora felt a strange pull in her chest, as if the place recognized something in her, something she hadn't known was there."
2"Aurora knelt beside it, watching silver fish with too many fins dart between water lilies that bloomed in all seasons simultaneously."
3"Her silver hair caught the impossible light, and her lavender eyes held depths that made Aurora's breath catch."
4"She saw herself standing at the edge of a vineyard that stretched to a horizon painted in amber light, the Heartstone pendant blazing on her chest like a beacon…"
5"Its trunk was the color of burnished copper, and its branches bore fruit that shifted through every color of the sunset."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Nyx said suddenly, their form solidifying into something more substantial"
1"Aurora called out, her voice carrying a resonance she didn't recognize"
2"Eva asked, moving to stand beside Aurora"
3"they asked, their whisper urgent"
4"Isolde said, her voice dropping to match Nyx's whisper"
5"Aurora said, her voice steadier than she felt"
6"she said, understanding dawning"
7"Aurora said, though her heart hammered against her ribs"
34.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"Aurora called out (call out)"
3"Isolde corrected gently (correct)"
4"Aurora agreed (agree)"
5"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.365
leniency0.731
rawRatio0.316
effectiveRatio0.231
67.2772%