Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNG0YWZV8DHXKY1NFF0WNT6

Run Details

Duration:
32.4s
Cost:
$0.001216
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts clicked open in quick succession before Aurora could think better of it. The scent of curry from downstairs clung to her clothes as she stood there, one hand still on the knob, suddenly uncertain. The man on the doorstep hadn't changed. Not really. Still that same platinum blond hair slicked back, the same too-perfect posture that made her think of old film reels—gentlemen thieves and wartime spies. His heterochromatic eyes caught the dim hall light—one amber, one black—and for a heartbeat, she forgot how to breathe. Lucien leaned lightly on his cane, lips curling in that faint, infuriating smirk. "Hello, Rory." The sound of her nickname on his tongue sent an unwanted warmth through her chest. She crossed her arms, leaning against the doorframe. "You’re supposed to call first." "I would have," he said smoothly, adjusting his cufflinks, "but last I checked, you changed your number." She had. After the argument. After the way he'd looked at her when she walked out—like she was the one who'd turned into a stranger. Downstairs, the curry house radio blared something Bollywood and bright, a sharp contrast to the sudden silence between them. Ptolemy wound between her legs, purring audibly, then sauntered right up to Lucien as if he hadn't been gone for months. Traitor. "That cane new?" she asked, flicking a glance at the ivory handle. "A gift." His thumb brushed over the carved detail, casual. "From an admirer." Of course he had admirers. Aurora rolled her eyes. "You honestly expect me to believe you just happened to be in the neighborhood?" "I didn't," he said, oddly sincere. "I came because I need your help." She exhaled sharply, half amused, half exasperated. "Right. Because that always ends well." Behind her, the flat was a mess—scrolls and books stacked haphazardly on the coffee table, Eva’s ancient Persian rug half-buried beneath notes in three different languages. The air smelled like ink and stale coffee. Not exactly the picture of someone who had her life together. She stepped aside before she could second-guess herself. "Fine. But you get five minutes." Lucien swept past her, cane tapping lightly against the floorboards. He glanced around, taking in the chaos with that same infuriating half-smile. "Cozy." Aurora shut the door harder than necessary. Ptolemy leapt onto the sagging sofa, curling up like a smug little judge. "You’re staring," she said. "You cut your hair." Her fingers instinctively brushed the ends where they barely grazed her shoulders now—shorter than when he’d last seen her. "Yeah, well. Things change." His gaze lingered a second too long before he turned to examine a crumbling grimoire left open on the kitchen counter. "Avarian demonology. Charming bedtime reading." "It’s Eva’s." Aurora grabbed two mismatched mugs and filled them with water from the tap. No point offering tea. He’d refuse anyway—always did. "What do you want, Luc?" He leaned against the counter, cane between them like a barrier. "There’s a relic. Missing from a private collection. Dangerous, in the wrong hands." "And naturally, you know whose hands those are." "Naturally." His tone was light, but there was something underneath—something she recognized from the last job. The one that had ended with them shouting at each other in a rain-soaked alley. She handed him the water. Their fingers brushed. He didn’t pull away. "And why come to me?" she asked, quieter now. For the first time, his smile slipped. "Because I trust you." The words hung between them, weighted and too honest. Ptolemy yawned loudly, breaking the spell. Aurora turned away, busying herself with straightening already-neat stacks of paper. "Last time you said that, I ended up with a knife at my throat." "I got you out." "Yeah. After." Silence. The distant clatter of pans downstairs. He set his untouched water down. "If you’re not interested, say so. I’ll go." She looked up. His expression was unreadable—polished marble, perfectly controlled. But she knew him better than that. Knew the tension in his jaw, the slight tightness around his eyes. Knew, too, the way his fingers flexed around the cane—not pain, but anticipation. Like he was already bracing for her to say no. Aurora exhaled. "Tell me about the relic." Something flickered in his eyes—relief? Satisfaction? She couldn’t tell. Lucien reached into his coat and pulled out a photograph, sliding it across the counter toward her. "It’s called the Dusk Vessel. And if we don’t find it first, a lot of people are going to die." She picked up the photo, studying the eerie silver artifact. "We," she repeated. His gaze held hers. "If you’ll have me." Ptolemy hopped down from the sofa and padded over, weaving between Lucien’s legs like he wasn’t the worst kind of magnet—impossible to resist, dangerous to touch. Aurora traced the crescent scar on her wrist, an old habit. "Five minutes," she said again. But neither of them moved.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
87.50% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said smoothly [smoothly]"
1"she said again [again]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.125
63.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount828
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count2
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
2"lightly"
3"sharply"
4"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount828
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"marble"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"anticipation"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"unreadable"
4"marble"
5"tension"
6"anticipation"
7"flickered"
8"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords811
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount636
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora7
Bollywood1
Lucien5
Eva1
Persian1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.95
windowScore1
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like ink and stale coffee"
76.70% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.233
wordCount811
matches
0"not pain, but anticipation"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean19.31
std12.75
cv0.66
sampleLengths
037
152
215
328
417
525
641
712
813
923
1013
1113
1245
1314
1423
1520
164
174
1823
1926
2028
2124
228
2331
2412
259
2611
2715
2825
294
302
317
3214
3352
347
359
3637
3713
388
3926
4016
415
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"been gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences90
ratio0.122
matches
0"Still that same platinum blond hair slicked back, the same too-perfect posture that made her think of old film reels—gentlemen thieves and wartime spies."
1"His heterochromatic eyes caught the dim hall light—one amber, one black—and for a heartbeat, she forgot how to breathe."
2"After the way he'd looked at her when she walked out—like she was the one who'd turned into a stranger."
3"Behind her, the flat was a mess—scrolls and books stacked haphazardly on the coffee table, Eva’s ancient Persian rug half-buried beneath notes in three different languages."
4"Her fingers instinctively brushed the ends where they barely grazed her shoulders now—shorter than when he’d last seen her."
5"He’d refuse anyway—always did."
6"\"Naturally.\" His tone was light, but there was something underneath—something she recognized from the last job."
7"His expression was unreadable—polished marble, perfectly controlled."
8"Knew, too, the way his fingers flexed around the cane—not pain, but anticipation."
9"Something flickered in his eyes—relief?"
10"Ptolemy hopped down from the sofa and padded over, weaving between Lucien’s legs like he wasn’t the worst kind of magnet—impossible to resist, dangerous to touch."
79.56% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount653
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same infuriating half-smile."
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.055130168453292494
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.021439509954058193
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean9.01
std6.24
cv0.693
sampleLengths
015
122
27
32
424
519
613
72
815
98
105
1117
122
133
1420
1519
1621
171
1812
1910
203
215
224
2314
246
257
267
276
2826
298
3011
318
326
3310
3412
351
367
3713
384
394
4019
414
4221
435
4415
454
464
475
4811
4913
78.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5111111111111111
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners46
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Of course he had admirers."
ratio0.017
53.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences60
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes caught the"
1"She crossed her arms, leaning"
2"he said smoothly, adjusting his"
3"she asked, flicking a glance"
4"His thumb brushed over the"
5"he said, oddly sincere"
6"She exhaled sharply, half amused,"
7"She stepped aside before she"
8"He glanced around, taking in"
9"Her fingers instinctively brushed the"
10"His gaze lingered a second"
11"He’d refuse anyway—always did."
12"He leaned against the counter,"
13"His tone was light, but"
14"She handed him the water."
15"Their fingers brushed."
16"He didn’t pull away."
17"she asked, quieter now"
18"He set his untouched water"
19"She looked up."
ratio0.417
68.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences60
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked open"
1"The scent of curry from"
2"The man on the doorstep"
3"His heterochromatic eyes caught the"
4"Lucien leaned lightly on his"
5"The sound of her nickname"
6"She crossed her arms, leaning"
7"he said smoothly, adjusting his"
8"Downstairs, the curry house radio"
9"Ptolemy wound between her legs,"
10"she asked, flicking a glance"
11"His thumb brushed over the"
12"Aurora rolled her eyes."
13"he said, oddly sincere"
14"She exhaled sharply, half amused,"
15"The air smelled like ink"
16"She stepped aside before she"
17"Lucien swept past her, cane"
18"He glanced around, taking in"
19"Aurora shut the door harder"
ratio0.783
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Still that same platinum blond hair slicked back, the same too-perfect posture that made her think of old film reels—gentlemen thieves and wartime spies."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His thumb brushed, casual"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.219
leniency0.438
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.063
82.2010%