Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNG18CPGE9XW26G8E4GG688

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Duration:
58.3s
Cost:
$0.002188
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock was insistent, three sharp raps that cut through the muffled sounds of Brick Lane filtering up through the floorboards. Rory looked up from the grimoire she was attempting to decipher, her heart giving a single, hard thump against her ribs. It wasn’t the tentative tap of a neighbor or the impatient fist of a delivery driver. This knock was deliberate, confident, and entirely unwelcome. Ptolemy, the tabby cat sprawled across a folio of star charts, lifted his head and twitched an ear towards the door. Rory’s gaze flicked from the cat to the three deadbolts she’d slid home not an hour ago. Eva’s paranoia had become her own ritual. She marked her place in the book with a stray receipt and stood, the worn floorboards creaking under her weight. The air in the flat, heavy with the scent of old paper and turmeric from the restaurant below, suddenly felt thin. She approached the door, her movements quiet. She didn’t bother with the peephole; its fish-eye lens distorted everything into a meaningless blur. Instead, she pressed her palm flat against the cool wood, as if she could feel the presence on the other side. A foolish hope, a desperate fear—both whispered a name she hadn’t spoken in months. Rory slid the first bolt. The brass mechanism made a solid chunk. The second followed, then the third, the sounds unnaturally loud in the tense silence. She took a breath, bracing herself, and pulled the door open. The man standing in the dim hallway was a study in monochrome disruption. He leaned lightly on an ivory-handled cane, his posture impeccable even in repose. A tailored charcoal suit clung to his lean frame, a stark contrast to the peeling paint and grimy lighting of the landing. And his eyes—one a warm, liquid amber, the other a fathomless black—found hers immediately. Lucien Moreau. “Aurora,” he said, his voice a low, smooth baritone that curled around her name like smoke. It was the voice that had murmured promises in the dark and delivered truths that cut deeper than any blade. Rory’s grip tightened on the doorknob. Her own voice, when it came, was flat, stripped of all inflection. “Lucien.” “May I come in?” he asked, though it wasn’t really a question. It was a statement of intent, wrapped in a veneer of politeness. His gaze drifted past her shoulder, taking in the chaotic sanctuary of books and scrolls. “It appears you’ve been… busy.” She didn’t move. “What do you want?” A ghost of a smile touched his lips, not quite reaching his mismatched eyes. “Is it so impossible to believe I came to see you?” “Yes,” she said, the word blunt and final. The memory of their last encounter hung between them, a chasm of unspoken accusations and a bitterness that had yet to sour into indifference. He had used her, or she had used him; the distinction had blurred into a painful, tangled mess. He was a fixer, a broker of secrets in a world she’d been desperately trying to escape. He was poison, and she’d sworn she was done with toxins. His smile faded. “A matter has arisen. One that concerns you. May I,” he repeated, his tone shifting from vaguely amused to lethally serious, “come in?” Reluctance was a lead weight in her stomach, but curiosity, that treacherous thing, pricked at her. With a curt nod, she stepped back, allowing him to cross the threshold. He moved with a liquid grace that belied the cane, his presence immediately dominating the cramped space. He didn’t look at the mess; his attention was fixed solely on her. Rory closed the door, sliding the bolts back into place with a series of definitive thuds that sealed them in together. The sound seemed to echo in the sudden quiet. When she turned, he was standing by Eva’s cluttered desk, his gloved fingers hovering over an ancient-looking map she’d been studying. “Don’t touch that,” she said, sharper than she intended. He withdrew his hand, a picture of effortless compliance. “My apologies.” His heterochromatic eyes swept over her, taking in her worn jeans, the simple t-shirt, the straight black hair she’d hastily tied back. “You look tired, *mon petite chou*.” The old endearment, spoken in that fluid French of his, was a deliberate provocation. It ignited a spark of anger that felt better than the cold numbness. “Don’t call me that. And I’m not your little cabbage. What’s the matter, Lucien? Did one of your underworld deals go sour? Need a legman who knows how to keep her mouth shut?” He tilted his head, the slicked-back platinum hair catching the lamplight. “Always so quick to assume the worst of me.” “Experience is a harsh teacher.” “Indeed.” He took a slow step towards her. Ptolemy, sensing the shift in the atmosphere, let out a low growl from his perch on the sofa. Lucien glanced at the cat, a flicker of genuine amusement in his amber eye. “The sentinel disapproves.” “He has good instincts.” Rory crossed her arms over her chest, a defensive gesture she hated but couldn’t suppress. The small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist seemed to pulse, a reminder of a simpler, if painful, kind of hurt. This was different. This was a wound that had never properly healed. “Just say what you came to say.” “Evan,” Lucien said, and the name landed between them like a shard of ice. Rory went very still. The sounds of the street, the faint sizzle from the kitchen below, the hum of the refrigerator—everything receded into a dull roar. The face of her ex, all charming smiles and controlling hands, flashed in her mind. She had fled Cardiff, fled him, because of Lucien’s intervention. Because Lucien had shown her the depth of the trap she was in. And then, in the aftermath, he had offered her another kind of cage. “What about him?” she managed, her throat tight. “He’s in London.” The floor seemed to tilt. Rory’s cool-headedness, her prized asset, threatened to shatter. She took an involuntary step back, bumping into a precarious stack of books. They wobbled but didn’t fall. “That’s not possible. He wouldn’t… he doesn’t have the resources.” “He has new friends,” Lucien said softly. His gaze was intense, pinning her in place. “The wrong kind. The kind I warned you about. The kind that are very interested in a woman who associates with… well, with people like me.” The implication was clear. Her past with Evan had collided with her present entanglement with Lucien. She was the connection. The vulnerability. “Why are you telling me this?” she whispered, the anger draining away to be replaced by a cold, familiar dread. “To scare me? To prove you were right? That I still need your protection?” He closed the remaining distance between them. He was close enough now that she could smell the faint, clean scent of his cologne, something dark and spicy, mingling with the smell of rain on his coat. He lifted a hand, and for a heart-stopping moment, she thought he might touch her face. Instead, his gloved fingers gently brushed a stray strand of hair from her cheek, the leather cool against her skin. The gesture was intimate, possessive, and it sent a traitorous shiver down her spine. “I am telling you,” he said, his voice barely a murmur, “because regardless of what you think of me, regardless of the… complications… between us, I will not allow that man to lay a hand on you again. Ever.” The raw conviction in his tone undid her. It was the same ferocity that had drawn her to him in the first place, a dangerous loyalty that felt more like a claim. She saw the hurt in his black eye, the one that held the echo of his demonic heritage, a reflection of the hurt she had caused when she’d pushed him away. She saw the lingering attraction in his amber one, the heat that had once consumed them both. “Things were left unsaid, Aurora,” he continued, his gaze holding hers captive. “Words were spoken in anger that I regret. But my… concern for your safety was never a lie.” Her arms uncrossed, her hands falling uselessly to her sides. The fight went out of her, leaving her exposed. “I know,” she admitted, the words a fragile concession. The space between them crackled with everything that was unspoken—the remembered heat of his mouth, the sting of his betrayals, the terrifying possibility of a future where he was the only thing standing between her and the shadows of her past. He didn’t move closer. He simply stood there, a solid, immovable fact in her chaotic world, his mismatched eyes seeing straight through all her defenses to the scared woman underneath. The door was bolted shut, the city roared on oblivious outside, and inside Eva’s book-strewn flat, the complicated, painful, undeniable history between them finally had them cornered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
76.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1504
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"lightly"
2"really"
3"very"
4"softly"
5"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1504
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count2
6
word"sanctuary"
count1
7
word"encounter"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count2
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"treacherous"
count1
11
word"echo"
count2
12
word"effortless"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"sentinel"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count1
17
word"aftermath"
count1
18
word"implication"
count1
19
word"familiar"
count1
20
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"weight"
2"could feel"
3"silence"
4"stark"
5"chaotic"
6"sanctuary"
7"encounter"
8"unspoken"
9"stomach"
10"treacherous"
11"echo"
12"effortless"
13"flicker"
14"sentinel"
15"pulse"
16"reminder"
17"aftermath"
18"implication"
19"familiar"
20"down her spine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a spark of anger"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences95
matches
0"a spark of anger"
97.74% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1491
ratio0.002
matches
0"mon petite chou"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1255
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
Reluctance1
Eva3
French1
Ptolemy2
Rory8
Cardiff1
Lucien7
Evan1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite reaching his mismatched eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1491
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean42.6
std24.17
cv0.567
sampleLengths
066
186
257
337
464
536
619
744
87
925
1078
1126
1259
1351
149
1539
1660
1720
185
1943
2059
2114
2277
238
243
2541
2641
2722
2834
2986
3039
3180
3230
3369
3457
97.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"was fixed"
1"was bolted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs192
matches
0"was attempting"
1"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences110
ratio0.064
matches
0"She didn’t bother with the peephole; its fish-eye lens distorted everything into a meaningless blur."
1"A foolish hope, a desperate fear—both whispered a name she hadn’t spoken in months."
2"And his eyes—one a warm, liquid amber, the other a fathomless black—found hers immediately."
3"He had used her, or she had used him; the distinction had blurred into a painful, tangled mess."
4"He didn’t look at the mess; his attention was fixed solely on her."
5"The sounds of the street, the faint sizzle from the kitchen below, the hum of the refrigerator—everything receded into a dull roar."
6"The space between them crackled with everything that was unspoken—the remembered heat of his mouth, the sting of his betrayals, the terrifying possibility of a future where he was the only thing standing between her and the shadows of her past."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1268
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"complicated, painful, undeniable history"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.02996845425867508
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.015772870662460567
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean13.55
std7.84
cv0.579
sampleLengths
021
121
216
38
421
517
67
720
821
97
1015
1121
1214
135
147
1514
1611
1713
1813
1922
2014
212
2216
2320
246
2512
261
2712
2812
2915
305
313
324
3314
3411
358
3624
3718
3817
3911
403
4123
4216
4313
4417
4513
4621
479
4821
499
46.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.34545454545454546
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners38
71.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"Instead, she pressed her palm"
1"Instead, his gloved fingers gently"
ratio0.022
17.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences93
matches
0"It wasn’t the tentative tap"
1"She marked her place in"
2"She approached the door, her"
3"She didn’t bother with the"
4"She took a breath, bracing"
5"He leaned lightly on an"
6"he said, his voice a"
7"It was the voice that"
8"Her own voice, when it"
9"he asked, though it wasn’t"
10"It was a statement of"
11"His gaze drifted past her"
12"She didn’t move."
13"she said, the word blunt"
14"He had used her, or"
15"He was a fixer, a"
16"He was poison, and she’d"
17"His smile faded."
18"he repeated, his tone shifting"
19"He moved with a liquid"
ratio0.505
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences93
matches
0"The knock was insistent, three"
1"Rory looked up from the"
2"It wasn’t the tentative tap"
3"This knock was deliberate, confident,"
4"Ptolemy, the tabby cat sprawled"
5"Rory’s gaze flicked from the"
6"Eva’s paranoia had become her"
7"She marked her place in"
8"The air in the flat,"
9"She approached the door, her"
10"She didn’t bother with the"
11"A foolish hope, a desperate"
12"Rory slid the first bolt."
13"The brass mechanism made a"
14"The second followed, then the"
15"She took a breath, bracing"
16"The man standing in the"
17"He leaned lightly on an"
18"A tailored charcoal suit clung"
19"he said, his voice a"
ratio0.925
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Because Lucien had shown her"
ratio0.011
64.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The knock was insistent, three sharp raps that cut through the muffled sounds of Brick Lane filtering up through the floorboards."
1"Rory looked up from the grimoire she was attempting to decipher, her heart giving a single, hard thump against her ribs."
2"The memory of their last encounter hung between them, a chasm of unspoken accusations and a bitterness that had yet to sour into indifference."
3"He moved with a liquid grace that belied the cane, his presence immediately dominating the cramped space."
4"Rory closed the door, sliding the bolts back into place with a series of definitive thuds that sealed them in together."
5"The space between them crackled with everything that was unspoken—the remembered heat of his mouth, the sting of his betrayals, the terrifying possibility of a …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he repeated, his tone shifting from vaguely amused to lethally serious,"
1"Lucien said, and the name landed between them like a shard of ice"
2"she managed, her throat tight"
3"he said, his voice barely a murmur,"
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he continued (continue)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.733
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.267
74.4046%