Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNG2YQM161WXWT6Z6E6708R

Run Details

Duration:
45.9s
Cost:
$0.001994
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came just as Aurora was settling in with a cup of tea and Ptolemy purring in her lap. Three sharp raps—too precise to be Eva, too impatient to be a delivery. The tabby flicked his ears but didn’t bother lifting his head. She set her mug down, dislodging Ptolemy with an indignant mewl, and padded to the door. The deadbolts clicked open one by one under her fingers. When she pulled the door ajar, the scent of bergamot and something darker, smokier hit her first. Lucien stood on the threshold, his gloved hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane. The amber and black of his eyes caught the dim hallway light, unreadable as ever. His charcoal suit was impeccable, not a thread out of place despite the drizzle clinging to his shoulders. "Rory," he said, her name smooth in that French-accented baritone. Aurora’s fingers tightened on the doorframe. "You’re supposed to be in Marseille." He inclined his head. "Plans change." The silence stretched, brittle. She could still taste the bitterness of their last conversation—his clipped words, the way he'd turned his back on her in that alley behind Silas’ bar. Three months of radio silence, and now here he was, standing in Eva’s hallway like he had every right to be. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, his tail flicking against her calf. Lucien’s gaze dropped to the cat, then back to her face. "May I come in?" She should say no. Should shut the door, bolt it, pretend this never happened. But the set of his jaw was tighter than usual, the shadows under his eyes deeper. Something was wrong. Aurora stepped back. Lucien moved past her, the brush of his sleeve against her arm sending a traitorous shiver down her spine. He surveyed the cluttered flat with a slow sweep of his gaze—the stacks of Eva’s research, the half-empty mugs littering every surface, the single bed barely visible through the open bedroom door. "You’re staying here now?" he asked. "Temporarily." She crossed her arms. "Eva’s in Cairo. Someone had to feed the cat." "Ah." He leaned his cane against the armchair, the motion effortless. "I’d heard about her expedition." Of course he had. Lucien always heard everything. Aurora bit the inside of her cheek. "Why are you here, Luc?" He turned to face her fully. The amber eye caught the light, molten gold. "I need your help." The laugh burst out of her before she could stop it. "You’re joking." "I don’t joke." "No, you just disappear for months and then waltz back in like nothing happened." Her voice cracked on the last word. Damn it. Lucien went very still. "You’re angry." "Observant as ever." He took a step closer. The scent of him wrapped around her—bergamot, leather, the faintest trace of demonic ozone. "I had reasons." "Did you?" His gloved hand lifted, hovered near her face before he seemed to think better of it and let it fall. "I couldn’t involve you in what I was doing. It was too dangerous." Aurora scoffed. "Because I’m so fragile?" "Because I care about you." The words were quiet, raw. Her breath caught. Lucien’s mismatched eyes held hers. "I’m asking for your help now because there’s no one else I trust with this." Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the coffee table, sending a stack of Eva’s notes fluttering to the floor. The tension splintered. Aurora bent to gather the papers, her hands unsteady. "What’s the job?" she asked, deliberately not looking at him. "A retrieval. Someone’s taken something of mine." She glanced up. "Demons?" "Worse. Humans with delusions of grandeur." His mouth twisted. "They think they can harness what they don’t understand." Aurora straightened, the papers clutched to her chest. "And you need me because…?" "Because you see angles no one else does." His gaze dropped to her left wrist, to the small crescent scar there. "And because I’ve missed you." The admission hung between them, fragile as spun glass. Aurora’s pulse thudded in her throat. Three months of telling herself she was better off without him, three months of burying the memory of his hands in her hair, his voice murmuring French endearments against her skin. Lucien took another step forward. Close enough to touch now. "Say something," he murmured. She exhaled shakily. "You’re an asshole." The corner of his mouth lifted. "I know." "And I’m probably an idiot for agreeing." His gloved hand came up to cradle her cheek, the leather cool against her skin. "But you will agree." Aurora leaned into the touch despite herself. "Tell me one thing." "Anything." "Did you mean to come back?" Lucien’s thumb brushed her cheekbone. "Every damn day." The papers slipped from her fingers, scattering across the floor again. Ptolemy gave a disgruntled chirp and stalked off toward the bedroom. Aurora closed the last inch between them, her lips meeting his in a kiss that tasted like bergamot and unresolved history. Lucien’s arms came around her, pulling her flush against him, his cane clattering forgotten to the floor. When they broke apart, breathless, he rested his forehead against hers. "Does this mean you’re in?" She nipped his lower lip. "Shut up and kiss me again, Moreau." He obliged.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.488
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount878
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount878
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"effortless"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"unreadable"
2"silence"
3"down her spine"
4"effortless"
5"tension"
6"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords872
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount674
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora10
Ptolemy5
Eva4
French-accented1
Three3
Damn1
French2
Lucien9
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.758
windowScore0.667
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like bergamot and unresolved histo"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount872
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean17.1
std14.02
cv0.82
sampleLengths
044
143
249
310
412
56
651
711
815
933
103
1151
126
1314
1416
1520
1618
1713
183
1923
206
213
2222
232
2433
256
2610
273
2820
2932
3010
317
324
3318
3413
3526
3646
3714
386
398
407
4119
4211
431
446
458
4622
4738
4816
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
83.04% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs114
matches
0"was settling"
1"was, standing"
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences100
ratio0.04
matches
0"Three sharp raps—too precise to be Eva, too impatient to be a delivery."
1"She could still taste the bitterness of their last conversation—his clipped words, the way he'd turned his back on her in that alley behind Silas’ bar."
2"He surveyed the cluttered flat with a slow sweep of his gaze—the stacks of Eva’s research, the half-empty mugs littering every surface, the single bed barely visible through the open bedroom door."
3"The scent of him wrapped around her—bergamot, leather, the faintest trace of demonic ozone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount682
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.030791788856304986
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005865102639296188
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean8.72
std6.62
cv0.759
sampleLengths
020
113
211
316
410
517
616
715
818
910
106
116
124
132
144
1526
1621
1711
1811
194
204
2110
2216
233
243
2519
2632
276
285
299
3011
315
324
334
347
355
366
378
384
3911
402
413
4221
432
444
452
463
475
4814
493
67.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.41
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners41
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Of course he had."
ratio0.016
88.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences64
matches
0"She set her mug down,"
1"His charcoal suit was impeccable,"
2"he said, her name smooth"
3"He inclined his head."
4"She could still taste the"
5"She should say no."
6"He surveyed the cluttered flat"
7"She crossed her arms"
8"He leaned his cane against"
9"He turned to face her"
10"Her voice cracked on the"
11"He took a step closer."
12"His gloved hand lifted, hovered"
13"Her breath caught."
14"she asked, deliberately not looking"
15"She glanced up."
16"His mouth twisted"
17"His gaze dropped to her"
18"She exhaled shakily."
19"His gloved hand came up"
ratio0.328
30.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences64
matches
0"The knock came just as"
1"The tabby flicked his ears"
2"She set her mug down,"
3"The deadbolts clicked open one"
4"Lucien stood on the threshold,"
5"The amber and black of"
6"His charcoal suit was impeccable,"
7"he said, her name smooth"
8"Aurora’s fingers tightened on the"
9"He inclined his head."
10"The silence stretched, brittle."
11"She could still taste the"
12"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
13"Lucien’s gaze dropped to the"
14"She should say no."
15"Something was wrong."
16"Aurora stepped back."
17"Lucien moved past her, the"
18"He surveyed the cluttered flat"
19"She crossed her arms"
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the coffee table, sending a stack of Eva’s notes fluttering to the floor."
1"Three months of telling herself she was better off without him, three months of burying the memory of his hands in her hair, his voice murmuring French endearme…"
2"Aurora closed the last inch between them, her lips meeting his in a kiss that tasted like bergamot and unresolved history."
3"Lucien’s arms came around her, pulling her flush against him, his cane clattering forgotten to the floor."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.098
leniency0.195
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.049
82.9569%