Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNG3P5X4G1QA72X3NBPXH36

Run Details

Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.001641
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock at the door startled Rory. She froze midway through pouring herself a cup of tea, the steaming liquid spilling over the edge of the mug. Ptolemy leapt off the windowsill, his tail lashing as he darted beneath the couch. Rory glanced at the clock above Eva’s cluttered bookshelf. Nearly midnight. She wasn’t expecting anyone, and Eva was still out chasing leads on whatever obscure supernatural artifact had caught her attention this week. Another knock, sharper this time, echoed through the small flat. Rory set the kettle down with a shaky hand, her pulse quickening. Only a handful of people knew about the flat on Brick Lane, and none of them would show up unannounced at this hour without calling first. She crossed the room, her socked feet silent on the worn hardwood floor, and peered through the peephole. Her breath caught in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood on the other side of the door, his platinum blond hair slicked back as always, his amber and black eyes fixed on the peephole as though he knew she was watching. A charcoal suit hugged his lean frame, his ivory-handled cane resting casually against his side. He looked as composed and untouchable as the last time she’d seen him—like a man who had never been ruffled by anything, least of all her. Rory hesitated, her hand hovering over the deadbolts. The memory of their last encounter flashed through her mind—sharp words, colder silences, and the way he’d turned his back on her without a second glance. She hadn’t seen him in months, though she’d heard whispers of him in the supernatural underground. He was everywhere and nowhere, a ghost who left no trace unless he wanted to. She unlocked the door and pulled it open, her expression guarded. “Lucien.” “Rory,” he said, his voice smooth and velvety, with just a hint of his French accent. He inclined his head slightly, a gesture that was both polite and infuriatingly formal. “Apologies for the late hour. May I come in?” She folded her arms across her chest, her black hair falling over her shoulders as she leaned against the doorframe. “Depends. What brings you here?” His gaze flicked over her, lingering on her face for a moment before he met her eyes. Despite herself, Rory felt a familiar flutter in her chest—a reaction she swiftly tamped down. She wouldn’t let him see how he still affected her. “Business,” he said simply. “Business,” she repeated, her tone flat. “Right. Because we’re such regular business associates these days.” A faint smile tugged at the corner of his mouth, though it didn’t quite reach his eyes. “Indulge me.” Rory studied him for a moment, searching for any hint of what he might be after. But Lucien’s face was as inscrutable as ever, his expression giving nothing away. Finally, she stepped aside, gesturing for him to enter. “Fine. But make it quick.” He stepped into the flat, his cane tapping softly against the floor. Rory closed the door behind him, ensuring all three deadbolts were securely in place before turning to face him. He was already surveying the room, his sharp gaze taking in the stacks of books, the scrolls pinned to the walls, and Ptolemy’s glowing eyes peering out from beneath the couch. “Charming,” he said, his tone dry. “I see Eva’s decorating hasn’t improved.” “She’s not here,” Rory said, crossing the room to pick up her abandoned mug of tea. “So, whatever it is, you’ll have to deal with me.” “Dealing with you was my intention,” Lucien replied smoothly. He leaned casually on his cane, his posture relaxed, though Rory knew better than to mistake it for vulnerability. Lucien was always armed, always ready, no matter how at ease he appeared. She sipped her tea, the warmth spreading through her chest as she watched him over the rim of the mug. “Out with it, then. What do you want?” He tilted his head slightly, his amber eye catching the light. “Straight to the point.” “We’re not friends, Lucien,” she said, her voice cooler than she intended. “Cut the small talk.” His expression hardened for a fraction of a second before he smoothed it over, the mask slipping seamlessly back into place. “Very well. I need your help.” Rory raised an eyebrow. “My help?” “Yes,” he said, his tone matter-of-fact. “You have resources, connections, and a certain... ingenuity that could prove useful.” “Useful for what?” “A delicate matter,” he replied vaguely. “One that requires discretion.” Rory set her mug down on the cluttered coffee table, her arms crossing over her chest again. “You’re going to have to be more specific if you want my cooperation.” Lucien’s gaze dropped to her arms, lingering on the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—the one she’d gotten as a child when she fell off her bike. His eyes darkened slightly, and Rory felt a strange ache in her chest at the memory of when he’d first noticed that scar, when his touch had been gentle instead of distant. “I’m tracking an artifact,” he said finally, his voice low. “One that could cause significant harm if it falls into the wrong hands.” “And you need me to help you find it,” Rory surmised. “Precisely.” She exhaled sharply, her frustration bubbling up. “Why me? You’ve got half the underworld at your disposal. Why come to me after months of silence?” Lucien’s jaw tightened, and for a moment, Rory thought she saw a crack in his composure—a flicker of something raw and unguarded. But it was gone as quickly as it appeared. “Because,” he said quietly, “there’s no one else I trust to get the job done.” The words hung between them, heavy and loaded. Rory looked away, her heart pounding in her chest. She hated how easily he could still throw her off balance with just a few words, how the sound of his voice could unravel her resolve. “You’re asking a lot,” she said after a moment, her voice softer than she intended. “I know,” he replied. “And I wouldn’t ask if it weren’t important.” Rory glanced at him, her bright blue eyes meeting his mismatched ones. She searched for any hint of deception, any sign that he was playing her, but all she saw was sincerity—something rare and disarming in Lucien Moreau. “Fine,” she said finally. “I’ll help you. But this doesn’t mean things are fixed between us.” “Noted,” he said, his tone neutral. “Shall we discuss the details?” She nodded, gesturing toward the couch. “Have a seat. You’re going to need to catch me up.” Lucien moved to the couch, his movements graceful and controlled. Rory hesitated for a moment before joining him, leaving a careful distance between them. As he began to explain the situation, Rory couldn’t shake the feeling that this was more than just a job—it was a crossroads, a turning point that neither of them could ignore. And for better or worse, they were in it together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"he said simply [simply]"
1"Lucien replied smoothly [smoothly]"
2"he replied vaguely [vaguely]"
3"he said finally [finally]"
4"he said quietly [quietly]"
5"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.3
65.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1173
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
5
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"very"
3"precisely"
4"sharply"
5"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1173
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"encounter"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"ensuring"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"pounding"
count1
11
word"unravel"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"pulse"
2"encounter"
3"flicked"
4"familiar"
5"ensuring"
6"warmth"
7"eyebrow"
8"silence"
9"flicker"
10"pounding"
11"unravel"
12"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1163
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount938
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory18
Eva2
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau2
French1
Lucien8
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.541
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1163
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"noticed that scar"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean27.05
std18.44
cv0.682
sampleLengths
041
133
248
324
475
565
612
739
825
942
104
1115
1219
1338
145
1562
1612
1726
1841
1928
2015
2116
2227
236
2418
253
2610
2730
2860
2923
3011
311
3225
3331
3415
3543
3615
3712
3838
3916
4011
4117
4266
95.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"been ruffled"
1"was gone"
78.05% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs164
matches
0"wasn’t expecting"
1"was watching"
2"was playing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences93
ratio0.075
matches
0"He looked as composed and untouchable as the last time she’d seen him—like a man who had never been ruffled by anything, least of all her."
1"The memory of their last encounter flashed through her mind—sharp words, colder silences, and the way he’d turned his back on her without a second glance."
2"Despite herself, Rory felt a familiar flutter in her chest—a reaction she swiftly tamped down."
3"Lucien’s gaze dropped to her arms, lingering on the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—the one she’d gotten as a child when she fell off her bike."
4"Lucien’s jaw tightened, and for a moment, Rory thought she saw a crack in his composure—a flicker of something raw and unguarded."
5"She searched for any hint of deception, any sign that he was playing her, but all she saw was sincerity—something rare and disarming in Lucien Moreau."
6"As he began to explain the situation, Rory couldn’t shake the feeling that this was more than just a job—it was a crossroads, a turning point that neither of them could ignore."
86.64% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount948
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.04535864978902954
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.023206751054852322
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean12.51
std7.65
cv0.612
sampleLengths
07
120
214
39
42
522
610
712
826
918
106
1134
1215
1326
148
1526
1616
1715
1811
191
2016
2114
229
2320
245
2517
2615
2710
284
296
309
3117
322
3316
3413
359
365
3712
3819
3931
406
416
4216
4310
449
4519
4613
4720
488
4911
75.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.46236559139784944
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"Only a handful of people"
1"Finally, she stepped aside, gesturing"
ratio0.03
7.88% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences66
matches
0"She froze midway through pouring"
1"She wasn’t expecting anyone, and"
2"She crossed the room, her"
3"Her breath caught in her"
4"He looked as composed and"
5"She hadn’t seen him in"
6"He was everywhere and nowhere,"
7"She unlocked the door and"
8"he said, his voice smooth"
9"He inclined his head slightly,"
10"She folded her arms across"
11"His gaze flicked over her,"
12"She wouldn’t let him see"
13"he said simply"
14"she repeated, her tone flat"
15"He stepped into the flat,"
16"He was already surveying the"
17"he said, his tone dry"
18"He leaned casually on his"
19"She sipped her tea, the"
ratio0.53
13.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences66
matches
0"The knock at the door"
1"She froze midway through pouring"
2"Ptolemy leapt off the windowsill,"
3"Rory glanced at the clock"
4"She wasn’t expecting anyone, and"
5"Another knock, sharper this time,"
6"Rory set the kettle down"
7"She crossed the room, her"
8"Her breath caught in her"
9"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
10"A charcoal suit hugged his"
11"He looked as composed and"
12"Rory hesitated, her hand hovering"
13"The memory of their last"
14"She hadn’t seen him in"
15"He was everywhere and nowhere,"
16"She unlocked the door and"
17"he said, his voice smooth"
18"He inclined his head slightly,"
19"She folded her arms across"
ratio0.894
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood on the other side of the door, his platinum blond hair slicked back as always, his amber and black eyes fixed on the peephole as though he k…"
1"He looked as composed and untouchable as the last time she’d seen him—like a man who had never been ruffled by anything, least of all her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she repeated, her tone flat"
1"he said, his tone dry"
2"she said, her voice cooler than she intended"
3"he said finally, his voice low"
4"she said, her voice softer than she intended"
5"he said, his tone neutral"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"Rory surmised (surmise)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.1
73.9054%