| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.524 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 88.88% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1349 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1349 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "sense of" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "almost alive" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1334 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1101 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.91 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 2 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 10 | | Morris | 3 | | High | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Underground | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "High" | | 2 | "Street" | | 3 | "Market" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 73.08% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Something between copper and ozone, between old" | | 1 | "sound that seemed to surprise even him" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1334 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 34.21 | | std | 22.3 | | cv | 0.652 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 88 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 60 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 82 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 58 | | 25 | 50 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 54 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 7 |
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| 87.54% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "been closed" | | 1 | "been sealed" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "was running" | | 1 | "was breathing" | | 2 | "was standing" | | 3 | "were beginning" | | 4 | "were selling, were selling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0.073 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been watching the clique for seven months now, and tonight—tonight she'd finally gotten a lead." | | 1 | "The station had been sealed off after an accident five years ago—something about structural damage, something the council had never properly explained." | | 2 | "The suspect was halfway across, moving toward a door that shouldn't have been there—a door that opened onto a corridor that definitely hadn't existed the last time Quinn had been on the Tube." | | 3 | "She could feel it now—something in the air, a pressure against her chest, a whisper at the edge of her hearing." | | 4 | "She had—" | | 5 | "This was where they operated, where they traded, where they—" | | 6 | "\"The key to the door. The bone that opens the lock.\" He held up his own hand, and she saw it then—a small object hanging from a cord around his wrist, white and curved and unmistakably organic." | | 7 | "Then he laughed—a low, genuine sound that seemed to surprise even him." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1115 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.026905829596412557 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007174887892376682 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 12.24 | | std | 8.87 | | cv | 0.724 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 34 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 48.62% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3577981651376147 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Further on, she heard voices," | | 1 | "Then he laughed—a low, genuine" | | 2 | "Then he was gone, swallowed" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 88.18% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been watching the clique" | | 1 | "She'd found the meeting in" | | 2 | "She'd waited too long to" | | 3 | "She didn't slow down." | | 4 | "It was cooler, yes, but" | | 5 | "She didn't think." | | 6 | "She just ran." | | 7 | "Her footsteps echoed, but the" | | 8 | "She could feel it now—something" | | 9 | "She passed doors that were" | | 10 | "Her fingers found the grip" | | 11 | "She was a detective." | | 12 | "She was Metropolitan Police." | | 13 | "She was standing in a" | | 14 | "She was alone." | | 15 | "They had the look, she" | | 16 | "He was tall, dark-skinned, with" | | 17 | "He smiled, and the smile" | | 18 | "He tilted his head, studying" | | 19 | "He held up his own" |
| | ratio | 0.33 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain had been falling" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ran through" | | 2 | "The suspect was fast." | | 3 | "She'd been watching the clique" | | 4 | "A tip from a snitch" | | 5 | "The kind of tip that" | | 6 | "She'd found the meeting in" | | 7 | "She'd waited too long to" | | 8 | "The suspect cut left down" | | 9 | "Quinn shouldered through the debris," | | 10 | "The suspect emerged onto Camden" | | 11 | "Quinn lost sight of him" | | 12 | "She didn't slow down." | | 13 | "The station had been sealed" | | 14 | "Quinn had walked past it" | | 15 | "The air changed down here." | | 16 | "It was cooler, yes, but" | | 17 | "Something between copper and ozone," | | 18 | "Emergency lighting flickered along the" | | 19 | "The suspect was halfway across," |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Before the case that had" | | 1 | "Now she followed the suspect" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "A tip from a snitch who owed her favors dating back to her DS Morris days." | | 1 | "Before the case that had taken everything from her and left her with nothing but questions she couldn't answer and a suspicion that lived in her chest like a se…" | | 2 | "Quinn lost sight of him for a heart-stopping moment, then spotted him again, ducking into the entrance of an Underground station that had been closed for decade…" | | 3 | "Something between copper and ozone, between old stone and something else, something that made the hairs on her arms stand up." | | 4 | "The suspect was halfway across, moving toward a door that shouldn't have been there—a door that opened onto a corridor that definitely hadn't existed the last t…" | | 5 | "The corridor stretched longer than it should have, the walls lined with candles that burned with flames too steady, too blue." | | 6 | "Her footsteps echoed, but the sound came back wrong, distorted, as if the space around her was breathing." | | 7 | "She was standing in a place that violated every law of physics she understood, in a market that existed in the margins of a world she'd spent her life trying to…" | | 8 | "He was tall, dark-skinned, with eyes that caught the candlelight and reflected it back too sharply." | | 9 | "Of the case that had killed him, the case that had left her with a partner-shaped hole in her life and questions she couldn't answer." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.238 | | leniency | 0.476 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |