Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNG4DQ37J00VGVXMF11J4TK

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Duration:
52.2s
Cost:
$0.002596
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling for three hours, turning the streets of Camden into a river of reflected neon. Detective Harlow Quinn ran through it anyway, her boots splashing through puddles that soaked through to her socks, the cold seeping up through the pavement and into her bones. Eighteen years on the force had taught her to ignore the weather, ignore the pain, ignore everything except the figure twenty meters ahead. The suspect was fast. Younger than her by a decade, maybe more. Dark hoodie, dark jeans, dark intentions. She'd been watching the clique for seven months now, and tonight—tonight she'd finally gotten a lead. A tip from a snitch who owed her favors dating back to her DS Morris days. The kind of tip that smelled real. She'd found the meeting in an abandoned warehouse near the canal. Four figures exchanging something small and glittering under the beam of a torch. She'd waited too long to move, and now one of them had spotted her, and now she was running. The suspect cut left down a narrow alley, knocking over a stack of bins. Quinn shouldered through the debris, her breath coming in sharp bursts. Forty-one years old and she could still run like this, could still feel the adrenaline singing in her veins the way it had in her early days on the streets. Before Morris. Before the case that had taken everything from her and left her with nothing but questions she couldn't answer and a suspicion that lived in her chest like a second heartbeat. The suspect emerged onto Camden High Street, dodging between late-night tourists and street vendors closing up their stalls. Quinn lost sight of him for a heart-stopping moment, then spotted him again, ducking into the entrance of an Underground station that had been closed for decades. She didn't slow down. The station had been sealed off after an accident five years ago—something about structural damage, something the council had never properly explained. Quinn had walked past it a hundred times and never thought much about it. Now she followed the suspect through a gap in the fencing, down the stairs, into the darkness below. The air changed down here. It was cooler, yes, but also thicker, carrying a smell she couldn't name. Something between copper and ozone, between old stone and something else, something that made the hairs on her arms stand up. Emergency lighting flickered along the platform, casting long shadows against the tiled walls. The suspect was halfway across, moving toward a door that shouldn't have been there—a door that opened onto a corridor that definitely hadn't existed the last time Quinn had been on the Tube. She didn't think. She just ran. The corridor stretched longer than it should have, the walls lined with candles that burned with flames too steady, too blue. Her footsteps echoed, but the sound came back wrong, distorted, as if the space around her was breathing. She could feel it now—something in the air, a pressure against her chest, a whisper at the edge of her hearing. The suspect was gone. But the corridor wasn't empty. She passed doors that were slightly wrong, windows that showed glimpses of streets she didn't recognize, markets stacked with goods that gleamed with an inner light. A woman stood at a stall, her face half-hidden by a hood, arranging bottles of something that moved on its own. A man with too many fingers sat behind a table covered in clocks, each one showing a different time. Further on, she heard voices, music, the clatter of commerce in a place that shouldn't exist. Quinn's hand went to her holster. Her fingers found the grip of her service weapon, and the cold metal steadied her. She was a detective. She was Metropolitan Police. Whatever this was, she had authority here. She had— The thought crumbled. What authority? What force? She was standing in a place that violated every law of physics she understood, in a market that existed in the margins of a world she'd spent her life trying to make sense of. The suspect was gone. She was alone. And the people around her were beginning to notice. They had the look, she realized. The same look she'd seen in the eyes of the men at that meeting, the same look she'd been chasing for seven months. The clique. This was their territory. This was where they operated, where they traded, where they— "Looking for someone?" Quinn spun. A man stood behind her, close enough to touch. He was tall, dark-skinned, with eyes that caught the candlelight and reflected it back too sharply. He smiled, and the smile didn't reach those strange eyes. "I'm a police officer," she said. The words came out steadier than she felt. "I'm pursuing a suspect. A man in a dark hoodie. Have you seen him?" The man's smile widened. "Many people come and go here, Detective. Many people with many purposes." He tilted his head, studying her. "You came from above. From the streets. You don't have a token." "A token?" "The key to the door. The bone that opens the lock." He held up his own hand, and she saw it then—a small object hanging from a cord around his wrist, white and curved and unmistakably organic. "Without it, you cannot leave. Not the way you came." Quinn's stomach dropped. She thought of the corridor behind her, the blue candles, the impossible distances. Thought of the gap in the fence, the closed station, the rain-slicked streets above. "Then I'll find another way," she said. "You might." The man's smile faded. "But you should know—the Market moves. Every full moon, the doors change. The streets shift. What was north becomes south, becomes nowhere at all." He stepped closer, and she forced herself not to step back. "You've come a long way to find your suspect, Detective. Are you sure you want to stay?" She thought of Morris. Of the case that had killed him, the case that had left her with a partner-shaped hole in her life and questions she couldn't answer. The supernatural origins she'd sensed but never understood. The clique and their criminal activity, their meetings in the dark, their secrets. She thought of the seven months of surveillance. The dead ends. The near-misses. The leads that went cold the moment she got close. This was it. This was the heart of it. Whatever they were selling, whoever they were selling it to, this was where it happened. The man was still watching her. Waiting. "If the Market moves," she said slowly, "then the doors change. That means there's always a way out. And there's always a way in." "Indeed." "Then someone else will have a token. Someone who came with my suspect, or who'll leave after him." She met the man's eyes. "I'm going to find him. And I'm going to bring him in. Whatever it takes." The man was silent for a long moment. Then he laughed—a low, genuine sound that seemed to surprise even him. "Forty years I've walked this Market," he said. "Seen police before. Bought and sold. But never one like you." He reached into his coat and pulled out a second token, identical to the first. He held it out to her. "A gift, Detective. Consider it an investment. I'm curious to see how this ends." Quinn took the token. The bone was warm in her palm, almost alive, humming with a faint vibration she felt in her teeth. "First lesson," the man said, turning away. "In the Market, information is worth more than bullets. Find the barkeep at the Raven's Nest in Soho. Tell him Saleh sent you. He'll know what questions to ask." Then he was gone, swallowed by the crowd, and Quinn was alone again in the flickering blue light. She closed her fingers around the token. Drew a breath that tasted of copper and ozone and something sweet. And she walked deeper into the Market.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.524
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
88.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"sense of"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"almost alive"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"footsteps"
2"echoed"
3"could feel"
4"whisper"
5"sense of"
6"stomach"
7"almost alive"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1334
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1101
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Harlow1
Quinn10
Morris3
High1
Street1
Underground1
Tube1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Market"
globalScore1
windowScore1
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"Something between copper and ozone, between old"
1"sound that seemed to surprise even him"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1334
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean34.21
std22.3
cv0.652
sampleLengths
071
157
243
388
445
54
654
739
846
96
1060
119
1282
1338
1457
1545
163
1737
1828
1934
202
2147
2230
237
2458
2550
2623
2724
287
2924
301
3138
3220
3354
3423
3536
3618
3719
387
87.54% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences99
matches
0"been closed"
1"been sealed"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
4"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was running"
1"was breathing"
2"was standing"
3"were beginning"
4"were selling, were selling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences109
ratio0.073
matches
0"She'd been watching the clique for seven months now, and tonight—tonight she'd finally gotten a lead."
1"The station had been sealed off after an accident five years ago—something about structural damage, something the council had never properly explained."
2"The suspect was halfway across, moving toward a door that shouldn't have been there—a door that opened onto a corridor that definitely hadn't existed the last time Quinn had been on the Tube."
3"She could feel it now—something in the air, a pressure against her chest, a whisper at the edge of her hearing."
4"She had—"
5"This was where they operated, where they traded, where they—"
6"\"The key to the door. The bone that opens the lock.\" He held up his own hand, and she saw it then—a small object hanging from a cord around his wrist, white and curved and unmistakably organic."
7"Then he laughed—a low, genuine sound that seemed to surprise even him."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1115
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.026905829596412557
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007174887892376682
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean12.24
std8.87
cv0.724
sampleLengths
019
129
223
34
48
56
616
716
87
911
1013
1119
1214
1311
1430
152
1631
1718
1827
194
2022
2114
2218
235
2413
2521
2613
2733
283
293
3021
3118
3221
334
345
3526
3621
3719
3816
396
4015
414
424
437
442
453
462
472
4834
494
48.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3577981651376147
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"Further on, she heard voices,"
1"Then he laughed—a low, genuine"
2"Then he was gone, swallowed"
ratio0.034
88.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences88
matches
0"She'd been watching the clique"
1"She'd found the meeting in"
2"She'd waited too long to"
3"She didn't slow down."
4"It was cooler, yes, but"
5"She didn't think."
6"She just ran."
7"Her footsteps echoed, but the"
8"She could feel it now—something"
9"She passed doors that were"
10"Her fingers found the grip"
11"She was a detective."
12"She was Metropolitan Police."
13"She was standing in a"
14"She was alone."
15"They had the look, she"
16"He was tall, dark-skinned, with"
17"He smiled, and the smile"
18"He tilted his head, studying"
19"He held up his own"
ratio0.33
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences88
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ran through"
2"The suspect was fast."
3"She'd been watching the clique"
4"A tip from a snitch"
5"The kind of tip that"
6"She'd found the meeting in"
7"She'd waited too long to"
8"The suspect cut left down"
9"Quinn shouldered through the debris,"
10"The suspect emerged onto Camden"
11"Quinn lost sight of him"
12"She didn't slow down."
13"The station had been sealed"
14"Quinn had walked past it"
15"The air changed down here."
16"It was cooler, yes, but"
17"Something between copper and ozone,"
18"Emergency lighting flickered along the"
19"The suspect was halfway across,"
ratio0.818
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"Before the case that had"
1"Now she followed the suspect"
ratio0.023
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"A tip from a snitch who owed her favors dating back to her DS Morris days."
1"Before the case that had taken everything from her and left her with nothing but questions she couldn't answer and a suspicion that lived in her chest like a se…"
2"Quinn lost sight of him for a heart-stopping moment, then spotted him again, ducking into the entrance of an Underground station that had been closed for decade…"
3"Something between copper and ozone, between old stone and something else, something that made the hairs on her arms stand up."
4"The suspect was halfway across, moving toward a door that shouldn't have been there—a door that opened onto a corridor that definitely hadn't existed the last t…"
5"The corridor stretched longer than it should have, the walls lined with candles that burned with flames too steady, too blue."
6"Her footsteps echoed, but the sound came back wrong, distorted, as if the space around her was breathing."
7"She was standing in a place that violated every law of physics she understood, in a market that existed in the margins of a world she'd spent her life trying to…"
8"He was tall, dark-skinned, with eyes that caught the candlelight and reflected it back too sharply."
9"Of the case that had killed him, the case that had left her with a partner-shaped hole in her life and questions she couldn't answer."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.238
leniency0.476
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.5854%