Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNG54PGV1ATXAV1MVN4FN7E

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Duration:
35.0s
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$0.002005
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Novita

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock at the door was sharp, precise—three quick raps that made Rory’s fingers freeze over the kettle she’d just set to boil. Eva wasn’t due back for hours, and no one else bothered with the formality of knocking. The curry house downstairs had long since closed, leaving the flat in an uneasy silence. Ptolemy, sprawled across a pile of Eva’s research notes, lifted his head and flicked an ear. Rory wiped her hands on her jeans and moved toward the door, the floorboards creaking underfoot. Through the peephole, the hallway light caught the platinum blond of slicked-back hair, the sharp line of a charcoal suit. Her breath hitched. Lucien. She hadn’t seen him in months—not since the night she’d walked out of his office and into the rain, leaving behind the scent of bergamot and the weight of his silence. Her fingers hovered over the deadbolts. Three locks, all engaged. She could pretend she wasn’t home. Another knock. “Aurora,” came his voice, smooth and low, the French accent curling around her name like it always did. “I know you’re there.” She exhaled through her nose and undid the locks. The door swung open, and there he stood, cane in hand, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her with an intensity that made her pulse jump. He looked the same as ever: impeccable, unruffled, the faintest hint of a smirk playing at the corner of his mouth. “You’re late,” she said, crossing her arms. His eyebrow arched. “For?” “The part where you vanish for half a year and then show up like nothing happened.” Lucien leaned slightly on his cane, the ivory handle catching the dim light. “I had business.” “Business.” She scoffed. “Right.” He studied her, his gaze lingering on the crescent scar on her wrist before flicking back up. “Are you going to invite me in, or do we have this conversation in the hallway?” Rory hesitated, then stepped aside. The flat felt smaller with him in it. He moved with practiced ease, his cane tapping softly against the floor as he took in the mess of books and scrolls. Ptolemy, ever the traitor, stretched and trotted over to rub against Lucien’s leg. “Still collecting strays, I see,” Lucien murmured, scratching the cat behind the ears. “He’s Eva’s.” “Mm.” He straightened, turning to face her. “You look well.” She didn’t answer. The kettle whistled in the kitchen, a shrill interruption. “Tea?” she asked, already retreating. “If you’re offering.” She busied herself with mugs, her back to him, listening to the quiet sounds of him moving through the flat. The scrape of a chair. The rustle of papers. The weight of his presence was impossible to ignore. “Why are you here, Luc?” she asked, pouring hot water over the tea leaves. Silence. Then, closer than she expected, his voice: “I heard about Evan.” Her hands stilled. He was standing just behind her now, close enough that she could feel the warmth of him, smell the faint spice of his cologne. She didn’t turn around. “What about him?” “That he’s back in London.” She forced a laugh. “And you came to warn me? How gallant.” “I came,” he said, his voice dropping, “because I wanted to see you.” The admission hung between them, raw and unexpected. Rory turned slowly, mug in hand, and found him closer than she’d realized. His eyes were dark, unreadable. “You could’ve called,” she said. “Would you have answered?” She didn’t have a response for that. Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing hers as he took the mug. His touch sent a jolt through her, familiar and electric. “You left,” he said quietly. “You let me.” He exhaled, a slow, controlled breath. “I thought it was what you wanted.” Rory looked away, her throat tight. “Maybe it was.” “And now?” She met his gaze again. “I don’t know.” The air between them was charged, thick with everything unsaid. Lucien set the mug aside, his cane propped against the counter, and took a step closer. His hand lifted, hesitating just before it touched her face. “May I?” She didn’t trust herself to speak, so she nodded. His fingers traced the line of her jaw, feather-light. “I missed you,” he murmured. The words unraveled something in her chest. She leaned into his touch, her eyes fluttering shut. “This is a bad idea,” she whispered. “Probably.” When she opened her eyes, he was smiling—that rare, genuine smile that softened the edges of him. Rory let out a shaky breath. “You’re impossible.” “So I’ve been told.” And then, because she was tired of fighting it, she kissed him. His lips were warm, yielding, his hand sliding into her hair to pull her closer. The taste of him was intoxicating—dark coffee and something faintly metallic, the hint of his demon heritage. She fisted her hands in his suit jacket, anchoring herself as the world tilted. When they broke apart, Lucien rested his forehead against hers, his breathing uneven. “Stay,” she said, the word slipping out before she could stop it. He pulled back just enough to search her face. “Are you sure?” No. Yes. “Stay,” she repeated. His thumb brushed her lower lip. “As you wish.” Outside, the rain began to fall, soft against the windowpane. Inside, the kettle cooled, forgotten.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.359
leniency0.718
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.051
83.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount889
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount889
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"practiced ease"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"charged"
count1
13
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"flicked"
2"weight"
3"intensity"
4"pulse"
5"eyebrow"
6"practiced ease"
7"could feel"
8"warmth"
9"unreadable"
10"familiar"
11"electric"
12"charged"
13"traced"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his silence"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords881
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount736
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Eva2
French1
Lucien7
Silence1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount881
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean13.98
std12.78
cv0.914
sampleLengths
054
116
239
31
431
516
62
722
89
948
107
114
1216
1316
144
1533
165
1743
1813
192
2010
2112
225
233
2438
2514
2612
273
2828
293
305
3112
3213
3326
345
354
367
3722
385
393
4013
419
422
438
4436
452
469
4714
4816
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was standing"
1"was smiling"
2.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences102
ratio0.049
matches
0"The knock at the door was sharp, precise—three quick raps that made Rory’s fingers freeze over the kettle she’d just set to boil."
1"She hadn’t seen him in months—not since the night she’d walked out of his office and into the rain, leaving behind the scent of bergamot and the weight of his silence."
2"The door swung open, and there he stood, cane in hand, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her with an intensity that made her pulse jump."
3"When she opened her eyes, he was smiling—that rare, genuine smile that softened the edges of him."
4"The taste of him was intoxicating—dark coffee and something faintly metallic, the hint of his demon heritage."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount744
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03763440860215054
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006720430107526882
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean8.64
std6.45
cv0.746
sampleLengths
023
116
215
316
416
520
63
71
831
96
104
116
122
1318
144
159
1627
1721
187
193
201
2116
2213
233
243
251
2617
2716
285
298
3022
3113
3213
332
347
353
363
379
385
393
4020
415
424
439
4414
451
4611
473
4824
494
65.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4117647058823529
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners42
49.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Then, closer than she expected,"
ratio0.015
14.12% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences68
matches
0"Her breath hitched."
1"She hadn’t seen him in"
2"Her fingers hovered over the"
3"She could pretend she wasn’t"
4"She exhaled through her nose"
5"He looked the same as"
6"she said, crossing her arms"
7"His eyebrow arched."
8"He studied her, his gaze"
9"He moved with practiced ease,"
10"He straightened, turning to face"
11"She didn’t answer."
12"she asked, already retreating"
13"She busied herself with mugs,"
14"she asked, pouring hot water"
15"Her hands stilled."
16"He was standing just behind"
17"She didn’t turn around."
18"She forced a laugh."
19"he said, his voice dropping"
ratio0.515
26.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences68
matches
0"The knock at the door"
1"Eva wasn’t due back for"
2"The curry house downstairs had"
3"Ptolemy, sprawled across a pile"
4"Rory wiped her hands on"
5"Her breath hitched."
6"She hadn’t seen him in"
7"Her fingers hovered over the"
8"She could pretend she wasn’t"
9"She exhaled through her nose"
10"The door swung open, and"
11"He looked the same as"
12"she said, crossing her arms"
13"His eyebrow arched."
14"Lucien leaned slightly on his"
15"He studied her, his gaze"
16"Rory hesitated, then stepped aside."
17"The flat felt smaller with"
18"He moved with practiced ease,"
19"Ptolemy, ever the traitor, stretched"
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The knock at the door was sharp, precise—three quick raps that made Rory’s fingers freeze over the kettle she’d just set to boil."
1"The door swung open, and there he stood, cane in hand, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her with an intensity that made her pulse jump."
2"He studied her, his gaze lingering on the crescent scar on her wrist before flicking back up."
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He straightened, turning to face her"
1"he said, his voice dropping,"
2"she said, the word slipping out before she could stop it"
47.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.282
leniency0.564
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.205
74.8747%