| 7.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx drifted alongside [alongside]" | | 1 | "Nyx said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.476 | | leniency | 0.952 | | rawRatio | 0.3 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |
| 96.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1410 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1410 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footfall" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "complex" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "weight" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "let out a breath" | | 1 | "eyes narrowed" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1418 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1345 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.12 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 15 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 10 | | Close | 1 | | Bermondsey | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | London | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.942 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 75.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite soft enough to be unsettling but enough to make her conscious of every footfall" | | 1 | "felt like a furnace waiting to exhale," |
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| 58.96% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.41 | | wordCount | 1418 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite soft enough to be unsettling but enough to make her conscious of every footfall" | | 1 | "not brighter, but deeper" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 31.51 | | std | 34.48 | | cv | 1.094 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 3 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 88 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 117 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 109 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 89 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 64 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 85 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 59 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 73 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 123 | | 38 | 62 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 62 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 5 |
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| 94.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "is given" | | 1 | "is taken" | | 2 | "been warned" | | 3 | "been stained" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | | 0 | "weren't asking" | | 1 | "was grounding" | | 2 | "was walking" | | 3 | "were weeping" | | 4 | "was doing" | | 5 | "were looking" | | 6 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.135 | | matches | | 0 | "Not painfully — more like pressing a palm to sun-warmed stone — but the heat had been building for the past ten minutes, and Aurora couldn't ignore it anymore." | | 1 | "The rift had opened three days ago in an abandoned rail arch in Bermondsey — a shimmering seam in the air like a heat mirage that refused to move." | | 2 | "The arch was behind them now, on the other side of a transition Aurora's mind was still refusing to fully process — a step forward into a shimmer, a moment of pressure like diving underwater, and then the world had simply become something else." | | 3 | "The terrain changed gradually — the dark soil giving way to something richer, almost black-red, and then the first plants appeared." | | 4 | "The leaves were fleshy and dense, almost succulent, and there was a smell rising from the ground that she couldn't immediately name — sweet, layered, something beneath the sweetness that was darker and more complex." | | 5 | "One moment she was walking through scattered growth, and then the vines were everywhere — great dark rows of them, wound around structures that had no obvious purpose, heavy with fruit that ranged in colour from near-black to a bruised purple-red." | | 6 | "Some had split and were weeping a dark liquid onto the soil below, and small pale insects — if they were insects — circled the wet patches without landing." | | 7 | "The sweet-dark smell was stronger here and it was doing something Aurora didn't appreciate — making her mouth water." | | 8 | "Her hand came up — a reflex, an instruction to Nyx who was already still — and she stood listening." | | 9 | "A soul-bound worker, Aurora realised — human in form, the face slack and preoccupied in the way she'd been warned about, wearing simple linen that had been stained repeatedly and dried stiff." | | 10 | "Beyond the ambient warmth of the place, beyond the faint unconscious drip of the ruptured fruit, beyond the nothing-sound of that sourceless sky — yes." | | 11 | "The idea of something older still, humming beneath the surface of a place like this, making itself felt through bone and breath and the warm copper pulse of a stone she still didn't fully understand — she filed it under problems to worry about once they'd survived the current problem." | | 12 | "Or something that wore the shape of a city the way a dream wears the shape of a room — recognisable and wrong, simultaneously." | | 13 | "And everywhere, the smell — intensified now to the point where it pressed against her like a physical thing, rich and sweet and wrong in its richness, a sensory excess that her mind kept trying to catalogue and giving up on." | | 14 | "But the violet light of their eyes had shifted — not brighter, but deeper." |
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| 91.81% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1337 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 66 | | adverbRatio | 0.0493642483171279 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014210919970082274 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 12.77 | | std | 11.12 | | cv | 0.871 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 3 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 41 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 64.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.44144144144144143 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 78.43% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Just that warm, impossible colour" | | 1 | "Then the vines rustled again," |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached up through the" | | 1 | "They weren't asking." | | 2 | "She focused on that chill." | | 3 | "They moved deeper." | | 4 | "She thought of overripe fruit." | | 5 | "She thought of a kitchen" | | 6 | "She stood up and kept" | | 7 | "She hadn't eaten since the" | | 8 | "She pressed her lips together" | | 9 | "Her hand came up —" | | 10 | "She felt them change register" | | 11 | "she said quietly" | | 12 | "Their form re-solidified gradually, edges" | | 13 | "They were looking at the" | | 14 | "She moved forward." | | 15 | "She'd been around them long" |
| | ratio | 0.188 | |
| 77.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned." | | 1 | "She reached up through the" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted alongside her, their" | | 3 | "Aurora turned the word over" | | 4 | "The rift had opened three" | | 5 | "Isolde had told them what" | | 6 | "The crack where hunger breathes," | | 7 | "Aurora had stared at her." | | 8 | "Isolde had smiled." | | 9 | "The arch was behind them" | | 10 | "The ground under her boots" | | 11 | "The sky above was amber." | | 12 | "A deep, breathless amber, like" | | 13 | "Nyx said quietly" | | 14 | "They weren't asking." | | 15 | "Aurora's grip on the blade" | | 16 | "The moonsilver was cold even" | | 17 | "She focused on that chill." | | 18 | "Nyx made a sound that" | | 19 | "They moved deeper." |
| | ratio | 0.765 | |
| 58.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Even through her fist, the" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 14.29% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The rift had opened three days ago in an abandoned rail arch in Bermondsey — a shimmering seam in the air like a heat mirage that refused to move." | | 1 | "The moonsilver was cold even here, even under a sky that felt like a furnace waiting to exhale, and the contrast was grounding." | | 2 | "Low sprawling things with leaves the colour of old wine, threaded with veins that caught the amber light and glowed faintly gold at the edges." | | 3 | "The leaves were fleshy and dense, almost succulent, and there was a smell rising from the ground that she couldn't immediately name — sweet, layered, something …" | | 4 | "One moment she was walking through scattered growth, and then the vines were everywhere — great dark rows of them, wound around structures that had no obvious p…" | | 5 | "Her hand came up — a reflex, an instruction to Nyx who was already still — and she stood listening." | | 6 | "A soul-bound worker, Aurora realised — human in form, the face slack and preoccupied in the way she'd been warned about, wearing simple linen that had been stai…" | | 7 | "Or something that wore the shape of a city the way a dream wears the shape of a room — recognisable and wrong, simultaneously." | | 8 | "A vertical seam in the amber air, maybe thirty feet tall, shimmering with a light that wasn't the warm amber of this place but something cooler, something that …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.381 | | leniency | 0.762 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |