Run: 2026-02-18-01KHQ91JDPG47AXN50JJ1E38K0

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Duration:
50.8s
Cost:
$0.032769
Provider:
Anthropic

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The call had come in at half past two in the morning — a body, Camden Underground, decommissioned stretch below the Tube lines that hadn't seen a passenger since 1968. Quinn had driven over in twelve minutes flat, which was six minutes faster than she should have managed on rain-slicked roads, but she'd never been good at respecting speed limits when a scene was waiting. She ducked under the blue-and-white tape and descended the maintenance stairs into the dark. The first thing that hit her was the smell. Not the expected damp rot of an unused tunnel, though that was underneath everything like an old bruise. No — this was something sharper. Sulfurous and sweet at the same time, the way she imagined a struck match might smell if you could set fire to something that didn't have a physical form. She'd smelled it once before. Three years ago. She pushed that thought back behind the door where she kept DS Morris and didn't open it. DC Brennan met her at the bottom of the stairs, a stocky young man with honest eyes and too much gel in his hair for two in the morning. He handed her a torch without being asked. Good instinct. "Victim's female," he said, falling into step beside her. "Early thirties, no ID on her. Scene photographer's done. Forensics are still processing the far end of the platform, but — " He paused. "You should just look at it, ma'am." Quinn appreciated that about Brennan. He knew when description was insufficient. The abandoned platform stretched away from them, the ghost of its signage still visible on cracked tiling — faded letters that spelled CAMDEN ROAD in the London Transport font of a different era. Emergency lighting had been rigged by the first response team, casting the space in a flat white glow that threw everything into planes of light and deep shadow. The body was positioned near the far wall. Quinn walked to it and stood for a long moment without speaking. The woman was lying on her back with her arms at her sides — not thrown, not curled, not contorted. Placed. Her dark coat was buttoned to the throat, her shoes were on, and there was no visible trauma. No blood. No bruising that Quinn could see on the pale skin of her face and hands. She looked, more than anything, like someone who had decided to lie down on an abandoned Tube platform and go to sleep, and had done so with great care and considerable composure. Around her — and this was the detail that had made Brennan lose his words — the concrete floor was marked. Not with paint or chalk but with something burned into the surface in overlapping rings and intersecting lines. Sigils. Quinn didn't know the word for them consciously, but some part of her older and less rational brain did, and it made her still. "Any witnesses?" she asked. "One. That's the other thing." Brennan pointed toward the far end of the platform, near the old ticket booth. A uniformed officer was standing beside a small, curly-haired woman in a canvas coat, who was hugging a leather satchel to her chest with both arms as though it contained something breakable. Even from forty feet away, Quinn could see the woman's shoulders were rigid with the particular tension of someone trying very hard to appear calm. Quinn took one more careful look at the body, at the position of the hands, at the floor around it, at the unmarked dust that should have shown footprints leading away and didn't, not in any direction that made physical sense. Then she walked toward the witness. The woman was younger than Quinn had estimated from a distance. Mid-twenties, freckled, red curls escaping from behind where she'd tucked them carefully behind her left ear. Round glasses. She was doing it again as Quinn approached — that small unconscious gesture, pressing a curl back into place, though it fell forward immediately. "I'm Detective Quinn," Quinn said. She didn't add her rank or her division. She'd learned that witnesses who were already frightened clammed up faster when you announced the full institutional weight of what was standing in front of them. "And you are?" "Eva." The woman's voice was steadier than her body language. "Eva Kowalski." "Ms. Kowalski. What brings you to a decommissioned Tube station at two in the morning?" A pause. A microscopic one, but Quinn caught it. "I was doing research. I work at the British Museum — the restricted archives. There are documented cases of Victorian-era use of abandoned stations for — " "You came here alone?" "Yes." "With a torch?" "I — yes. I had a torch." Quinn looked at the satchel. It was old leather, worn at the corners, and it was full — she could see the spines of several books pressing against the flap. It was also, she noticed, buttoned shut, and Eva Kowalski's hand was resting on the buckle. "I'll need to see the contents of the bag," Quinn said. Something moved behind the green eyes. Not guilt, exactly. More like calculation. "I don't think — " "Not a request, Ms. Kowalski." Another pause. Then Eva unsnapped the buckle and opened the satchel and held it toward Quinn with the posture of someone who has decided the game is up and is now betting that what's inside appears less interesting than it is. Books. A notebook, densely written in a hand too small to read at this angle. A Tupperware container of what appeared to be tea lights. And in the inside pocket, loose among pens and receipts — a small brass compass, no larger than a pocket watch. Verdigris on the casing. Something etched on its face that was not north-south-east-west. Quinn reached in and lifted it out. The needle swung immediately, not toward magnetic north, not toward any wall or door, but down toward the floor — toward, Quinn registered with a cold sliding sensation in her chest, the platform where the body lay. "Where did you get this?" she asked quietly. Eva Kowalski said nothing, but her left hand moved to tuck her hair back again, though there was nothing there to tuck. Quinn turned the compass over. The brass was warm in a way that had nothing to do with the ambient temperature of the tunnel. The sigils on its face were identical — she looked back at the floor, at the burned rings around the dead woman, and confirmed it with the certainty of someone who had spent eighteen years training herself to see what was actually in front of her rather than what was convenient — identical to the markings on the body's right palm, which she had noted and said nothing about to Brennan because she needed more data before she spoke. "Detective." Brennan had come up behind her. He had a tablet in his hand, the blue light of it making his face look washed out. "Lab just called up. Initial tox on the platform air — can't explain the chemical signature. Says nothing in their database matches it." "Tell them to look harder," Quinn said, not turning around. "And — forensics say no footprints leading to or from the body. I mean, nothing. The dust is undisturbed except in a two-meter radius of the victim." Quinn turned the compass over again in her palm. The needle trembled. "The door to this station," she said. "The maintenance entrance. When first response arrived, was it locked?" Brennan checked his notes. "Padlocked from outside. Undamaged. They had to cut it." She looked at Eva Kowalski. Eva Kowalski looked back at her with wide, steady, carefully neutral green eyes. "You're telling me," Quinn said, "that there is a woman with no identification and no visible cause of death, who appears to have walked to the center of an abandoned Tube platform, lain down, and died, inside a locked room with no footprints, surrounded by markings that match something you're carrying, and you found her while conducting archive research at two in the morning." She left it there, not as a question, just as the architecture of what didn't fit. Eva touched her hair again. "I'm happy to answer whatever questions — " "You're going to answer all of them," Quinn said. "Starting with what this compass points to, and why the floor smells like the last scene I worked where someone died in a way my reports still can't account for." She kept her voice level with the practice of someone who had made a career of keeping her voice level. "Brennan. Get her a car. She's coming to the station." She looked back at the platform. At the body lying in its perfect, deliberate stillness. At the burns in the floor still faintly radiating that sweetness and sulfur into the cold air. The compass needle swung in her palm and pointed straight down.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she asked quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.839
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.065
89.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1481
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1481
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"magnetic"
count1
4
word"database"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"weight"
2"etched"
3"magnetic"
4"database"
5"trembled"
6"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen77
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1495
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1170
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Underground1
Tube2
Morris1
Brennan7
Quinn21
London1
Transport1
Eva6
Kowalski4
Tupperware1
persons
0"Underground"
1"Tube"
2"Morris"
3"Brennan"
4"Quinn"
5"Eva"
6"Kowalski"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.603
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.007
wordCount1495
matches
0"Not with paint or chalk but with something burned into the surface in overlapping rings"
1"not toward magnetic north, not toward any wall or door, but down toward the floor"
2"not toward any wall or door, but down toward the floor"
38.46% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences104
matches
0"pushed that thought"
1"bruising that Quinn"
2"learned that witnesses"
3"radiating that sweetness"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean31.81
std26.31
cv0.827
sampleLengths
065
114
287
339
440
511
661
78
812
988
1064
114
1276
1347
1453
1542
1612
1715
1836
194
201
213
227
2346
2411
2517
265
2741
2859
297
3037
318
3222
33103
3448
3510
3627
3712
3817
3913
4018
4164
4216
4313
4469
4532
4611
89.13% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences87
matches
0"being asked"
1"been rigged"
2"was positioned"
3"was buttoned"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs195
matches
0"was waiting"
1"was lying"
2"was standing was hugging"
3"was doing"
4"was standing"
5"was resting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences104
ratio0.096
matches
0"The call had come in at half past two in the morning — a body, Camden Underground, decommissioned stretch below the Tube lines that hadn't seen a passenger since 1968."
1"No — this was something sharper."
2"The abandoned platform stretched away from them, the ghost of its signage still visible on cracked tiling — faded letters that spelled CAMDEN ROAD in the London Transport font of a different era."
3"The woman was lying on her back with her arms at her sides — not thrown, not curled, not contorted."
4"Around her — and this was the detail that had made Brennan lose his words — the concrete floor was marked."
5"She was doing it again as Quinn approached — that small unconscious gesture, pressing a curl back into place, though it fell forward immediately."
6"It was old leather, worn at the corners, and it was full — she could see the spines of several books pressing against the flap."
7"And in the inside pocket, loose among pens and receipts — a small brass compass, no larger than a pocket watch."
8"The needle swung immediately, not toward magnetic north, not toward any wall or door, but down toward the floor — toward, Quinn registered with a cold sliding sensation in her chest, the platform where the body lay."
9"The sigils on its face were identical — she looked back at the floor, at the burned rings around the dead woman, and confirmed it with the certainty of someone who had spent eighteen years training herself to see what was actually in front of her rather than what was convenient — identical to the markings on the body's right palm, which she had noted and said nothing about to Brennan because she needed more data before she spoke."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1166
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, curly-haired woman"
1"north-south-east-west."
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.029159519725557463
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.009433962264150943
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean14.38
std13.22
cv0.919
sampleLengths
030
135
214
39
418
56
629
75
83
917
1029
118
122
139
1424
157
165
176
1833
1928
208
2112
2220
231
2418
252
2615
2732
2821
2918
301
3124
324
3319
3432
3525
3641
376
3811
3916
402
4124
425
438
4426
453
4610
472
4815
492
62.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4326923076923077
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences72
matches
0"Then she walked toward the"
1"More like calculation."
2"Then Eva unsnapped the buckle"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences72
matches
0"She ducked under the blue-and-white"
1"She'd smelled it once before."
2"She pushed that thought back"
3"He handed her a torch"
4"he said, falling into step"
5"He knew when description was"
6"Her dark coat was buttoned"
7"She looked, more than anything,"
8"She was doing it again"
9"She didn't add her rank"
10"She'd learned that witnesses who"
11"It was old leather, worn"
12"It was also, she noticed,"
13"she asked quietly"
14"He had a tablet in"
15"She looked at Eva Kowalski."
16"She left it there, not"
17"She kept her voice level"
18"She looked back at the"
ratio0.264
71.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences72
matches
0"The call had come in"
1"Quinn had driven over in"
2"She ducked under the blue-and-white"
3"The first thing that hit"
4"She'd smelled it once before."
5"She pushed that thought back"
6"DC Brennan met her at"
7"He handed her a torch"
8"he said, falling into step"
9"Quinn appreciated that about Brennan."
10"He knew when description was"
11"The abandoned platform stretched away"
12"Emergency lighting had been rigged"
13"The body was positioned near"
14"Quinn walked to it and"
15"The woman was lying on"
16"Her dark coat was buttoned"
17"She looked, more than anything,"
18"Quinn didn't know the word"
19"Brennan pointed toward the far"
ratio0.778
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Even from forty feet away,"
ratio0.014
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Sulfurous and sweet at the same time, the way she imagined a struck match might smell if you could set fire to something that didn't have a physical form."
1"The abandoned platform stretched away from them, the ghost of its signage still visible on cracked tiling — faded letters that spelled CAMDEN ROAD in the London…"
2"Emergency lighting had been rigged by the first response team, casting the space in a flat white glow that threw everything into planes of light and deep shadow…"
3"She looked, more than anything, like someone who had decided to lie down on an abandoned Tube platform and go to sleep, and had done so with great care and cons…"
4"A uniformed officer was standing beside a small, curly-haired woman in a canvas coat, who was hugging a leather satchel to her chest with both arms as though it…"
5"Quinn took one more careful look at the body, at the position of the hands, at the floor around it, at the unmarked dust that should have shown footprints leadi…"
6"She'd learned that witnesses who were already frightened clammed up faster when you announced the full institutional weight of what was standing in front of the…"
7"Then Eva unsnapped the buckle and opened the satchel and held it toward Quinn with the posture of someone who has decided the game is up and is now betting that…"
8"Something etched on its face that was not north-south-east-west."
9"The sigils on its face were identical — she looked back at the floor, at the burned rings around the dead woman, and confirmed it with the certainty of someone …"
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn said, not turning around"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.29
leniency0.581
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.1674%