Run: 2026-02-18-01KHQ9218TT86BQF2DF1Z3CXZX

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Duration:
42.6s
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$0.034980
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt always stuck. Rory jiggled the key with practiced irritation, shouldering the door open into the familiar smell of cardamom and old paper. She was still in her delivery jacket, her hair damp from the drizzle outside, a plastic bag of leftover spring rolls dangling from two fingers — Yu-Fei's parting gift at the end of the shift. Ptolemy appeared instantly from behind a stack of grimoires, winding a figure-eight around her ankles before she'd even cleared the threshold. "Yeah, yeah," she muttered, toeing off her trainers. "I know you're starving. You're always starving." She was halfway to the kitchen when the knock came at the door she'd just locked behind her. Three precise raps. Not loud. Not urgent. Just — certain. Rory set the spring rolls on the counter and stood very still for a moment. She knew that knock. She crossed back to the door and pressed her palm flat against it, the wood cool under her hand. Three deadbolts. She'd thrown all three of them without thinking, muscle memory, the habit Eva had drilled into her. She stared at the chain lock she hadn't fastened. "I know you're standing there," said the voice on the other side. "I can see the shadow under the door." The accent was Marseille softened by years in London — that particular lilt that turned vowels into something between a question and a statement. Rory closed her eyes briefly. She opened the door. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway with rainwater on the shoulders of his charcoal suit, his platinum hair slightly less pristine than its usual slicked architecture, one strand fallen across his forehead. He held his ivory-handled cane loosely at his side. His mismatched eyes — amber and black, always unnerving in the way that made your brain insist something was wrong with what it was seeing — moved over her face with an expression that was not quite the carefully assembled neutrality he usually wore. "You look terrible," he said. "You're at my door uninvited," she said. "We're both having a night." She stepped back, which was not the same as inviting him in, but he took it as such — which was very Lucien — stepping across the threshold and glancing around Eva's cramped, scroll-covered flat with the air of a man reassessing something he'd seen before and filed away and was now revising his notes on. Ptolemy approached him with great suspicion, sniffed his trouser leg once, and retreated to the windowsill to observe from a safe distance. "Eva's not here," Rory said. She folded her arms, leaning against the kitchen doorframe. "She's in Edinburgh until Thursday. If you need something from her—" "I don't need something from Eva." "Then what do you need?" He turned to look at her. The line of his jaw was tight. That was new, or — not new, she'd seen it before, once, but she'd told herself she'd imagined it. "There's a situation developing," he said. "In Vauxhall. You should know about it before it becomes your problem by proximity." "Then send a text, Lucien. Like a normal—" She stopped herself. "Like most people." "I tried," he said. "You've blocked my number." The flat was very quiet except for the muted noise of the curry house below — voices, the clatter of a pan, a brief burst of music. "I unblocked it last week," Rory said, which was true and which she hadn't meant to tell him. Something shifted in his expression, quick as a card turned face-down. He looked away, toward Eva's bookshelves, the spines of a dozen languages pressed together in no particular order. "I didn't know that," he said. "No." She pushed off from the doorframe and went to put the kettle on because she needed something to do with her hands and standing in the middle of the room looking at him felt like standing on a surface she wasn't sure would hold. She heard him move behind her, the faint tap of the cane on the floorboards, and then the creak of the chair at Eva's research table — the one with the wonky back leg. He'd always favoured that chair, which had annoyed Eva enormously. She got two mugs out. Then she stood there with a mug in each hand and thought about putting one back. She left them both on the counter. "Tell me about Vauxhall," she said. He told her. It was, as he'd said, a situation — a border dispute between two entities neither of them wanted near their respective orbits, a crossing of influence that had already resulted in two missing persons cases the Met would never solve. He spoke concisely, no wasted words, the way he always did when the information was the point and not the performance. She listened, her back still half-turned, watching the kettle. When he finished, she poured the water. "How long have you known?" she asked. "Four days." "And you came here tonight." "Yes." She turned around and put his tea on the edge of the table near his elbow — no milk, no sugar, she still knew that — and carried her own mug back to the kitchen doorframe. He was watching her with both eyes, amber and black, and she met them steadily because she'd learned early that looking away from Lucien Moreau felt like conceding something. "The last time I saw you," she said, "you told me that getting involved in my problems wasn't something you did for free." "I remember what I said." "And then you left." "I remember that as well." His hands were around the mug now, and she noticed that his knuckles were slightly split on the right hand, which meant he'd been somewhere he shouldn't have been recently, or that the Vauxhall situation was less preliminary than he was making it sound. "Lucien." "Rory." It was the name, that was what did it — the way he said it, not the clipped Carter he used when he was keeping his distance, but Rory, two syllables that he didn't soften or stretch, just said plainly, and it meant something different in his mouth than it did in anyone else's, and she was very aware that she'd spent four months not thinking about that and was now thinking about it in Eva's cramped flat with rain against the windows. "You didn't come here about Vauxhall," she said. He was quiet for a moment. Outside, a car passed, headlights moving across the ceiling. "No," he said. "Not entirely." She looked at him — at the rain still drying on his shoulders, the fallen strand of hair, the split knuckles around the mug. Thirty-two years old and half something that had no business sitting in a kitchen chair drinking tea and looking at her like that. "You could have texted," she said again, quieter this time. "I know." He turned the mug slightly in his hands, a small unconscious movement. "I didn't want to." Ptolemy dropped from the windowsill and padded across the floor with great dignity and jumped into Lucien's lap without invitation, turned twice, and settled. Lucien looked down at the cat with an expression of mild alarm that he smoothed almost immediately into something more composed. Rory, against her better judgment, laughed. It broke something in the room — not fixed it, nothing as neat as that, but loosened it, made the air a little easier to breathe. Lucien looked up at her, and the careful architecture of his face had slipped another degree. "He hates me," he said. "He sat on you," she said. "He hates me and he's making a point." "He does that." She pushed off from the doorframe one more time and crossed the room and sat in the chair across from him — close enough that their knees were nearly level, the small table between them with their two mugs steaming. She set her wrist on the table edge without thinking, and the crescent scar caught the lamplight, a pale curve on her skin. He noticed it — she saw him notice it — and looked away. "Tell me the rest," she said. "The part that isn't Vauxhall." He was quiet long enough that she thought he wouldn't. Then he set down his mug, and his mismatched eyes settled on her face, and he said, "I was wrong. About what I said. Before." The curry house music drifted up through the floor. "Okay," she said carefully. "I'm not — good at this," he said. "At whatever this is." "I know." "That's not an excuse." "I know that too." He looked at her. She looked back. Ptolemy shifted and began to purr, indifferent to both of them, and the rain picked up against the glass, and Rory thought about the three deadbolts on the door and how she'd opened it anyway, and how that probably said everything she hadn't said out loud. "Stay and finish your tea," she said. "And tell me the rest." Something in him settled. Fractionally, barely visible, but she'd learned to read him in small increments. "All right," said Lucien Moreau.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said again [again]"
1"she said carefully [carefully]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.472
leniency0.943
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.075
66.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"very"
count4
1
adverb"slightly"
count3
2
adverb"loosely"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"loosely"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"lilt"
2"pristine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"notice"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen83
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1523
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1277
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei1
Eva6
Marseille1
London1
Moreau3
Lucien7
Met1
Vauxhall1
Carter1
Rory8
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Met"
5"Carter"
6"Rory"
7"Ptolemy"
places
0"Marseille"
1"London"
2"Vauxhall"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"something between a question and a statement"
1"not quite the carefully assembled neutrality he usually wore"
2"felt like standing on a surface she was"
3"felt like conceding something"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.626
wordCount1523
matches
0"not the same as inviting him in, but he took it as such"
1"not new, she'd seen it before, once, but she'd told herself she'd imagined it"
2"not the clipped Carter he used when he was keeping his distance, but Rory, two syllables"
3"not fixed it, nothing as neat as that, but loosened it, made the air a little easier to breathe"
79.71% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences115
matches
0"knew that knock"
1"favoured that chair"
2"noticed that his"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean21.45
std23.32
cv1.087
sampleLengths
05
176
215
318
410
515
64
747
820
929
104
1185
125
1312
1456
1522
1625
176
185
1932
2020
2114
228
2327
2418
2529
266
271
2888
2921
307
316
3273
337
347
352
365
371
3865
3923
405
414
4249
431
441
4583
468
4715
485
4947
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
80.42% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs223
matches
0"was seeing "
1"was watching"
2"was making"
3"was keeping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences115
ratio0.13
matches
0"She was still in her delivery jacket, her hair damp from the drizzle outside, a plastic bag of leftover spring rolls dangling from two fingers — Yu-Fei's parting gift at the end of the shift."
1"Just — certain."
2"The accent was Marseille softened by years in London — that particular lilt that turned vowels into something between a question and a statement."
3"His mismatched eyes — amber and black, always unnerving in the way that made your brain insist something was wrong with what it was seeing — moved over her face with an expression that was not quite the carefully assembled neutrality he usually wore."
4"She stepped back, which was not the same as inviting him in, but he took it as such — which was very Lucien — stepping across the threshold and glancing around Eva's cramped, scroll-covered flat with the air of a man reassessing something he'd seen before and filed away and was now revising his notes on."
5"That was new, or — not new, she'd seen it before, once, but she'd told herself she'd imagined it."
6"The flat was very quiet except for the muted noise of the curry house below — voices, the clatter of a pan, a brief burst of music."
7"She heard him move behind her, the faint tap of the cane on the floorboards, and then the creak of the chair at Eva's research table — the one with the wonky back leg."
8"It was, as he'd said, a situation — a border dispute between two entities neither of them wanted near their respective orbits, a crossing of influence that had already resulted in two missing persons cases the Met would never solve."
9"She turned around and put his tea on the edge of the table near his elbow — no milk, no sugar, she still knew that — and carried her own mug back to the kitchen doorframe."
10"It was the name, that was what did it — the way he said it, not the clipped Carter he used when he was keeping his distance, but Rory, two syllables that he didn't soften or stretch, just said plainly, and it meant something different in his mouth than it did in anyone else's, and she was very aware that she'd spent four months not thinking about that and was now thinking about it in Eva's cramped flat with rain against the windows."
11"She looked at him — at the rain still drying on his shoulders, the fallen strand of hair, the split knuckles around the mug."
12"It broke something in the room — not fixed it, nothing as neat as that, but loosened it, made the air a little easier to breathe."
13"\"He does that.\" She pushed off from the doorframe one more time and crossed the room and sat in the chair across from him — close enough that their knees were nearly level, the small table between them with their two mugs steaming."
14"He noticed it — she saw him notice it — and looked away."
91.42% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1265
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount63
adverbRatio0.04980237154150197
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.015810276679841896
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean13.24
std13.54
cv1.023
sampleLengths
05
120
235
321
48
57
618
73
82
92
103
1115
124
1319
142
1517
169
1712
188
1924
205
214
2232
239
2444
255
267
275
2856
2922
305
319
3211
336
345
356
367
3719
386
3914
4011
413
424
434
4427
4518
4611
4718
486
491
42.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3130434782608696
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences70
matches
0"Just — certain."
1"Then she stood there with"
2"Then he set down his"
3"Fractionally, barely visible, but she'd"
ratio0.057
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences70
matches
0"She was still in her"
1"she muttered, toeing off her"
2"She was halfway to the"
3"She knew that knock."
4"She crossed back to the"
5"She'd thrown all three of"
6"She stared at the chain"
7"She opened the door."
8"He held his ivory-handled cane"
9"His mismatched eyes — amber"
10"She stepped back, which was"
11"She folded her arms, leaning"
12"He turned to look at"
13"She stopped herself"
14"He looked away, toward Eva's"
15"She pushed off from the"
16"She heard him move behind"
17"He'd always favoured that chair,"
18"She got two mugs out."
19"She left them both on"
ratio0.571
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences70
matches
0"The third deadbolt always stuck."
1"Rory jiggled the key with"
2"She was still in her"
3"Ptolemy appeared instantly from behind"
4"she muttered, toeing off her"
5"She was halfway to the"
6"Rory set the spring rolls"
7"She knew that knock."
8"She crossed back to the"
9"She'd thrown all three of"
10"She stared at the chain"
11"The accent was Marseille softened"
12"Rory closed her eyes briefly."
13"She opened the door."
14"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
15"He held his ivory-handled cane"
16"His mismatched eyes — amber"
17"She stepped back, which was"
18"Ptolemy approached him with great"
19"She folded her arms, leaning"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"His mismatched eyes — amber and black, always unnerving in the way that made your brain insist something was wrong with what it was seeing — moved over her face…"
1"It was, as he'd said, a situation — a border dispute between two entities neither of them wanted near their respective orbits, a crossing of influence that had …"
2"It was the name, that was what did it — the way he said it, not the clipped Carter he used when he was keeping his distance, but Rory, two syllables that he did…"
3"Thirty-two years old and half something that had no business sitting in a kitchen chair drinking tea and looking at her like that."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.377
leniency0.755
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.038
75.0071%