Run: 2026-02-18-01KHQ9229CVJ9T74TY5B8PTNCW

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Duration:
42.4s
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$0.032145
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Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The second deadbolt was the stubborn one. Rory had learned to coax it — a half-turn left, then right, then a firm shove with her hip — but tonight her hands were full of Yu-Fei's leftovers and her patience was running on fumes. She'd already worked a double, her feet ached, and the smell of cardamom from the curry house below had saturated her jacket so thoroughly she suspected it was permanent. The knock came just as she'd finally wrestled the door open. She turned, one hand still braced on the frame, and there was Lucien Moreau standing in the narrow stairwell like he'd been conjured out of something expensive and inconvenient. Charcoal suit, not a crease out of place. Ivory cane held loosely in his left hand. His platinum hair caught the yellow light from the single bulb overhead and turned it gold, which seemed unfair. His mismatched eyes found her immediately — the amber one warm, the black one unreadable, as always. "You're not Eva," he said. "Brilliant deduction." Rory didn't move from the doorway. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" "Eva told me she'd be home." He had the audacity to check his watch. "It's half ten." "Eva's in Manchester until Thursday. She texted you." Rory had been there when Eva had sent the message, had in fact been the one to suggest she send it, given that their previous arrangement with Lucien had produced something nobody had anticipated and everyone had been carefully not discussing for approximately six weeks. "She told you specifically not to come." A pause. The amber eye did something complicated. "She may have mentioned that." "And here you are." "And here I am," he agreed. Ptolemy chose that moment to appear between Rory's ankles, a streak of tabby fur and bad timing, and wound himself with great purpose around her shins. The cat regarded Lucien with the same slow blink he gave everyone, which Rory had once found charming and now found infuriating because it meant Ptolemy had no useful opinions. She exhaled through her nose. Stepped back. It wasn't an invitation so much as a failure of resolve. Lucien entered the way he did everything — unhurried, taking stock. He paused just inside the threshold while she relocked the deadbolts, all three, including the stubborn one, which cooperated immediately for her this time as if to prove a point. She heard him navigate the stacks of Eva's books without disturbing them. He'd been here before. He knew the terrain. "You've been working," he said, not a question. "I do that. It's called employment." She set the takeaway containers on the kitchen counter, the only surface with any free space, and turned to find him standing in the middle of the room with his cane planted and his eyes moving over the notes pinned to every available wall. Eva's research. Circles and translations and photographs of things that had no business being photographed. "You look tired," Lucien said. "You look like you have something to say and you're working up to saying it." She crossed her arms. "Just say it." He turned to face her fully. In the lamplight his features were composed into that particular arrangement she'd spent weeks cataloguing without meaning to — the slight tension at the corner of his mouth, the way he held his jaw when he was choosing words instead of simply producing them. Lucien spoke four languages. He was, in her experience, never at a loss for one. Which meant the silence was deliberate. "I owe you an apology," he said finally. Rory went very still. "For what I said. The night at Silas' bar." He held her gaze steadily. "I was —" A brief pause, as though the word cost him something. "Unkind. I said things that were unkind, and I said them because you were right, and I didn't want you to be right, and that is not an excuse." She'd replayed that conversation many times. At two in the morning when sleep wouldn't come. On her delivery routes, the familiar streets blurring past. She'd edited it in her memory, sharpening the cruelty of certain phrases, softening others, trying to arrive at some interpretation that made more sense than the obvious one, which was that he had looked at her across Silas' battered bar top and said, with complete precision, exactly what would hurt most. "You called me naive," she said. "I did." "You said I didn't understand how the world I'd stumbled into actually worked." "Also true." He didn't flinch. "Also cruel, given the context." "Given the context." Her voice was remarkably level. She was rather proud of it. "You mean given that I'd just pulled you out of a situation that would have killed most people." "It would have killed anyone else," he said, and something shifted in his voice then, something underneath the composure. "That's rather the point, isn't it." Ptolemy jumped onto the arm of the sofa and sat between them like a small, indifferent mediator. "I don't understand what you want from me," Rory said. "You apologize and then what? We go back to how it was?" "How it was," Lucien repeated slowly, as though he were examining the phrase. "How was it?" "Complicated." "Mm." He tilted his head slightly. The amber eye caught the lamp again. "That's a careful word." "I'm a careful person." "You're really not," he said, and it wasn't unkind. It was something else — something with warmth buried in it like a coal under ash. "You're brave, which some people confuse with carefulness, but it isn't the same thing at all. A careful person wouldn't have gone into the Haverstock building alone. A careful person wouldn't have argued with Malthorne for twenty minutes in a language she'd learned from a three-hundred-year-old pamphlet." "It worked, didn't it." "Spectacularly." The word came out with something that was almost a smile. "Which was when I realized you terrified me." The room contracted slightly. Or maybe Rory's understanding of it did. "I terrify you." "Considerably." He said it with the same frank evenness he might use to confirm a dinner reservation. "You are twenty-five years old and you walked into my world like you'd always belonged in it, and you were right about things I've spent a decade being wrong about, and I handled that extraordinarily poorly." He paused. "So. Yes. I came here to tell you that." Rory looked at him for a long moment. At the mismatched eyes, the careful stillness, the hand resting on the ivory handle of the cane. She thought about six weeks of silence. She thought about standing in the rain outside Silas' bar with her jaw tight, telling herself it didn't matter, telling herself she'd misread something that had never been there to read. She thought about the moment in the Haverstock stairwell when he'd looked at her — really looked, stripped of the irony and the armour of the suit — and said her name in a way that suggested she might be the most alarming and inexplicable thing he'd encountered in thirty-two years of a life that had included quite a lot of alarming things. She'd been carrying the memory of that, too. Quietly. The way you carry something you don't entirely trust yourself to put down. "The takeaway's going cold," she said. He blinked. The composure cracked, slightly. "I beg your pardon?" "I have enough for two. It's from the Golden Empress." She turned back to the counter and started opening containers. "You can stay or you can go. But if you stay, you're explaining to me what you actually came here to say, because 'I owe you an apology' is not the whole sentence and we both know it." A silence stretched behind her. She heard him move — the soft tap of the cane on the floorboards, then nothing, which meant he'd stopped. "The whole sentence," he said carefully, "is rather longer." "Good." She found two mugs and put the kettle on. "We've got time." Ptolemy relocated from the sofa arm to Lucien's vacated spot, curled into a precise circle, and closed his eyes with an air of profound satisfaction, as though the entire evening had gone exactly as he'd intended.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.93% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"Lucien repeated slowly [slowly]"
2"She turned back [back]"
3"he said carefully [carefully]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.519
leniency1
rawRatio0.148
effectiveRatio0.148
63.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1374
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count3
5
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"loosely"
1"carefully"
2"very"
3"slowly"
4"slightly"
5"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1374
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"resolve"
count1
2
word"navigate"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"profound"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"resolve"
2"navigate"
3"tension"
4"silence"
5"familiar"
6"warmth"
7"profound"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences79
matches
0"g with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1376
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount932
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei1
Lucien8
Moreau1
Rory9
Eva3
Ptolemy4
Haverstock1
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Haverstock"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed unfair"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1376
matches(empty)
38.46% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences104
matches
0"given that their"
1"chose that moment"
2"replayed that conversation"
3"was that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean26.46
std23.98
cv0.906
sampleLengths
072
111
264
317
45
514
617
760
813
94
106
1156
1218
1361
148
1565
165
1722
1865
196
208
214
2256
2375
246
252
2613
2710
2832
2925
3017
3122
3216
331
3417
354
3672
374
3820
3911
403
4164
4263
4363
4422
456
4610
4758
4825
499
91.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences79
matches
0"been conjured"
1"being photographed"
2"were composed"
87.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was running"
1"was choosing"
2"were examining"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences104
ratio0.067
matches
0"Rory had learned to coax it — a half-turn left, then right, then a firm shove with her hip — but tonight her hands were full of Yu-Fei's leftovers and her patience was running on fumes."
1"His mismatched eyes found her immediately — the amber one warm, the black one unreadable, as always."
2"Lucien entered the way he did everything — unhurried, taking stock."
3"In the lamplight his features were composed into that particular arrangement she'd spent weeks cataloguing without meaning to — the slight tension at the corner of his mouth, the way he held his jaw when he was choosing words instead of simply producing them."
4"It was something else — something with warmth buried in it like a coal under ash."
5"She thought about the moment in the Haverstock stairwell when he'd looked at her — really looked, stripped of the irony and the armour of the suit — and said her name in a way that suggested she might be the most alarming and inexplicable thing he'd encountered in thirty-two years of a life that had included quite a lot of alarming things."
6"She heard him move — the soft tap of the cane on the floorboards, then nothing, which meant he'd stopped."
90.60% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount973
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.047276464542651594
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.023638232271325797
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean13.23
std12.89
cv0.974
sampleLengths
07
136
229
311
429
58
68
719
817
95
108
116
1214
133
1453
157
162
176
185
194
206
2126
2230
235
242
2511
2611
2730
2812
294
304
318
3250
332
3413
355
3619
373
386
3944
404
4111
426
438
444
4514
4613
4729
486
499
51.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.375
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
1.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences66
matches
0"She'd already worked a double,"
1"She turned, one hand still"
2"His platinum hair caught the"
3"His mismatched eyes found her"
4"He had the audacity to"
5"She exhaled through her nose."
6"It wasn't an invitation so"
7"He paused just inside the"
8"She heard him navigate the"
9"He'd been here before."
10"He knew the terrain."
11"he said, not a question"
12"She set the takeaway containers"
13"She crossed her arms"
14"He turned to face her"
15"He was, in her experience,"
16"he said finally"
17"He held her gaze steadily"
18"She'd replayed that conversation many"
19"She'd edited it in her"
ratio0.545
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences66
matches
0"The second deadbolt was the"
1"Rory had learned to coax"
2"She'd already worked a double,"
3"The knock came just as"
4"She turned, one hand still"
5"Charcoal suit, not a crease"
6"Ivory cane held loosely in"
7"His platinum hair caught the"
8"His mismatched eyes found her"
9"Rory didn't move from the"
10"He had the audacity to"
11"Rory had been there when"
12"The amber eye did something"
13"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
14"The cat regarded Lucien with"
15"She exhaled through her nose."
16"It wasn't an invitation so"
17"Lucien entered the way he"
18"He paused just inside the"
19"She heard him navigate the"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He paused just inside the threshold while she relocked the deadbolts, all three, including the stubborn one, which cooperated immediately for her this time as i…"
1"She thought about the moment in the Haverstock stairwell when he'd looked at her — really looked, stripped of the irony and the armour of the suit — and said he…"
2"Ptolemy relocated from the sofa arm to Lucien's vacated spot, curled into a precise circle, and closed his eyes with an air of profound satisfaction, as though …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Lucien repeated slowly, as though he were examining the phrase"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"Lucien repeated slowly (repeat)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.077
73.8601%