| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 76.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1465 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1465 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "gleaming" | | 3 | "intensity" | | 4 | "navigated" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "ensure" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "testament" | | 13 | "chaotic" | | 14 | "tracing" | | 15 | "amidst" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "was afraid" | | 1 | "was afraid" |
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| 84.72% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 4 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 172 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "try to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tend to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 172 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1461 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory, he said." | | 1 | "I was in the neighborhood, he said." | | 2 | "You are a terrible liar, Rory said." | | 3 | "If you try to kill me, I scream, Rory said." | | 4 | "You look well, Lucien said." | | 5 | "It should not have to be, he said." | | 6 | "I left to protect you, he said quietly." | | 7 | "I know, he said." | | 8 | "I heard rumors, Lucien said." | | 9 | "He is in the past, Rory said." | | 10 | "You are here now, she said softly." | | 11 | "Turn the lock, Lucien, she said." | | 12 | "Do not disappear again, she said." |
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| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 66 | | wordCount | 1461 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.23 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Lucien | 18 | | Moreau | 3 | | French | 1 | | London | 4 | | Evan | 3 | | East | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Eva | 3 | | Aurora | 3 | | Avaros | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | You | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Aurora" | | 7 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "East" | | 4 | "Marseille" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.884 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 76.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed broader than she remembered" | | 1 | "felt like fire" | | 2 | "sounded like a period at the end of a long" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1461 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "traced that scar" | | 1 | "make that choice" | | 2 | "hated that it" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 27.06 | | std | 19.91 | | cv | 0.736 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 81 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 62 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 52 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 48 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 61 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 44 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 50 |
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| 97.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "was tailored" | | 1 | "was slicked" | | 2 | "were meant" | | 3 | "were meant" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 277 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 172 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of him followed—rain, expensive tobacco, and something older, something sulfuric that hinted at the demon blood from Avaros running in his veins." | | 1 | "The height difference was noticeable; at five eleven, he looked down at her, but Rory did not back away." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1465 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.029351535836177476 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010921501706484642 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 172 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 172 | | mean | 8.49 | | std | 5.86 | | cv | 0.69 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 38.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.27906976744186046 | | totalSentences | 172 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 63.69% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the second." | | 1 | "Sometimes she wondered which was" | | 2 | "Really looked at him." |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 23.82% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew who it was" | | 1 | "It was the kind of" | | 2 | "She turned the latch and" | | 3 | "He looked exactly as he" | | 4 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 5 | "His voice was low, smoothed" | | 6 | "She kept her hand on" | | 7 | "It was a reflex, born" | | 8 | "He shifted his weight." | | 9 | "She knew what lay beneath" | | 10 | "He had never drawn it" | | 11 | "I was in the neighborhood," | | 12 | "They both knew it." | | 13 | "You are a terrible liar," | | 14 | "She stepped back, just enough" | | 15 | "It was a concession, and" | | 16 | "His gaze dropped to her" | | 17 | "He had once traced that" | | 18 | "He stepped past her." | | 19 | "He moved into the center" |
| | ratio | 0.49 | |
| 58.73% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 126 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "The first deadbolt clicked, a" | | 1 | "The second followed, then the" | | 2 | "Aurora Carter paused with her" | | 3 | "She knew who it was" | | 4 | "The silence on the other" | | 5 | "It was the kind of" | | 6 | "She turned the latch and" | | 7 | "The smell of the curry" | | 8 | "He looked exactly as he" | | 9 | "The charcoal suit was tailored" | | 10 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 11 | "The heterochromatic stare, one amber" | | 12 | "Rory, he said." | | 13 | "His voice was low, smoothed" | | 14 | "She kept her hand on" | | 15 | "It was a reflex, born" | | 16 | "He shifted his weight." | | 17 | "The ivory handle of his" | | 18 | "She knew what lay beneath" | | 19 | "A thin blade, concealed within" |
| | ratio | 0.803 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "Now he looked at it" | | 1 | "If you try to kill" | | 2 | "If I wanted to kill" | | 3 | "If I stayed, they would" | | 4 | "Because the silence was worse." | | 5 | "Even from afar." |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 74.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell of the curry house below rushed up to meet her, a permanent layer of turmeric and cumin that had seeped into the plaster of the Brick Lane building ye…" | | 1 | "The charcoal suit was tailored to within an inch of its life, hugging shoulders that seemed broader than she remembered." | | 2 | "The heterochromatic stare, one amber and one black, pinned her in place with an intensity that made the air in the cramped flat feel suddenly thin." | | 3 | "It was a reflex, born of the instinct that had kept her alive after Evan, and sharpened by the supernatural underworld she now navigated." | | 4 | "Ptolemy rubbed against Lucien's leg, purring loudly, betraying them both." | | 5 | "Lucien Moreau, the fixer, the information broker, the half-demon who walked through London's underworld with a blade in his cane and four languages on his tongu…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |