Run: 2026-02-18-01KHQ927XW81JBPJT360D72KXQ

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3m 21s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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The first deadbolt clicked, a heavy metallic sound that echoed in the narrow hallway. The second followed, then the third. Aurora Carter paused with her hand on the final latch, the brass cold against her palm. She knew who it was before she opened the door. The silence on the other side was too specific, too weighted. It was the kind of quiet that held its breath. She turned the latch and pulled the door inward. The smell of the curry house below rushed up to meet her, a permanent layer of turmeric and cumin that had seeped into the plaster of the Brick Lane building years ago. Beyond the threshold, standing on the worn welcome mat, was Lucien Moreau. He looked exactly as he had the night they parted, and entirely different. The charcoal suit was tailored to within an inch of its life, hugging shoulders that seemed broader than she remembered. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, gleaming under the flickering hallway bulb. But it was the eyes that hit her first. The heterochromatic stare, one amber and one black, pinned her in place with an intensity that made the air in the cramped flat feel suddenly thin. Rory, he said. His voice was low, smoothed by a French accent that had never quite faded despite his years in London. Lucien. She kept her hand on the door, ready to push it closed. It was a reflex, born of the instinct that had kept her alive after Evan, and sharpened by the supernatural underworld she now navigated. What are you doing here? He shifted his weight. The ivory handle of his cane caught the light. She knew what lay beneath that ivory. A thin blade, concealed within the wood. A tool for walking, and a weapon for killing. He had never drawn it on her, but the knowledge of its presence hummed between them like a live wire. I was in the neighborhood, he said. A lie. They both knew it. Nothing brought Lucien Moreau to East London unless there was blood in the water or information to be brokered. You are a terrible liar, Rory said. She stepped back, just enough to allow the heat from the flat to spill out. It was a concession, and they both knew it. Lucien did not move immediately. His gaze dropped to her left wrist, where the sleeve of her jumper had ridden up. The small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood accident was visible against her skin. He had once traced that scar with a thumb that felt like fire. Now he looked at it as if it were a wound he had inflicted himself. May I come in? he asked. Rory hesitated. The flat behind her was a chaos of Eva's making. Every surface was covered with books, scrolls, and research notes. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, wove through the forest of paper legs, meowing softly at the stranger in the hallway. The security of the three deadbolts felt suddenly fragile. If you try to kill me, I scream, Rory said. Lucien's mouth quirked. A ghost of a smile that did not reach his eyes. If I wanted to kill you, Aurora, you would not have heard me approach. He stepped past her. The scent of him followed—rain, expensive tobacco, and something older, something sulfuric that hinted at the demon blood from Avaros running in his veins. He moved into the center of the room, the tip of his cane tapping softly against the floorboards. He did not look at the clutter. He looked at her. Rory closed the door and engaged the first lock. Then the second. She left the third open. A compromise. You look well, Lucien said. He ran a gloved hand over the back of a chair covered in scrolls. You are eating. Sleeping. I am working. Delivering noodles for the Golden Empress. It pays the rent. And the law degree? She crossed her arms over her chest. Her bright blue eyes narrowed. I told you. I am not doing that anymore. Cardiff feels like a different lifetime. It should not have to be, he said. He turned to face her fully. The amber eye seemed to glow in the dim light. You were meant for more than running deliveries through the rain. And you were meant for more than lurking in doorways, she shot back. The anger was there, hot and sudden. It covered the hurt. You left, Lucien. You vanished for six months. No calls. No messages. Just silence. I had matters to attend to. In Marseille. With my father. So you went to see the demon who sired you and forgot to tell the human who cared about you? Lucien flinched. It was subtle, a tightening of the jaw, but she saw it. He walked toward her, stopping just outside of arm's reach. The height difference was noticeable; at five eleven, he looked down at her, but Rory did not back away. She stood her ground at five six, chin lifted. I left to protect you, he said quietly. There were forces... things that knew about us. If I stayed, they would have used you to get to me. You do not get to make that choice for me. Her voice shook. She hated that it shook. She was cool-headed. She was the one who thought out of the box. But Lucien made her feel like she was walking on ice without knowing where the cracks were. I know, he said. He reached out, his hand hovering near her arm. He did not touch her. Not yet. But the heat of his palm radiated against her skin. I know I do not have the right. But I am here now. Why? Because the silence was worse. The honesty of it stripped the air from the room. Ptolemy rubbed against Lucien's leg, purring loudly, betraying them both. Lucien looked down at the cat, then back to Rory. The black pupil dilated, swallowing the amber iris for a moment. I heard rumors, Lucien said. About Evan. About what he did before you left Cardiff. Rory's hand instinctively covered her wrist again, though the scar was old. Evan was human evil. Lucien dealt with supernatural evil. Sometimes she wondered which was worse. He is in the past, Rory said. He is a threat if he finds you again. He will not find me. I have you to thank for the wards on the windows, don't I? Lucien nodded slowly. I wanted to ensure you were safe. Even from afar. You could have told me. I was afraid. The words hung there, heavy and raw. Lucien Moreau, the fixer, the information broker, the half-demon who walked through London's underworld with a blade in his cane and four languages on his tongue, was afraid. Rory looked at him. Really looked at him. She saw the fatigue lines around his eyes that the perfect suit could not hide. She saw the tension in his grip on the ivory handle. He was not the untouchable ally she had met in the shadows. He was a man who had made a mistake and come back to fix it. She reached out. Her fingers brushed the lapel of his charcoal suit. The fabric was cool, but beneath it, she could feel the warmth of his body. Lucien went still. He did not breathe. You are here now, she said softly. Yes. And you are not leaving? Not unless you tell me to. Rory glanced at the door. The third deadbolt remained unturned. The curry smell drifted up from below, mixing with the scent of rain on his coat. The books and scrolls of Eva's research surrounded them, a testament to the chaotic world they lived in. She looked back at his eyes. The amber and the black. Turn the lock, Lucien, she said. He did not move immediately. He searched her face, looking for the trap, for the rejection. When he found neither, he stepped closer. He reached past her, his body brushing hers, and slid the final bolt home. The click sounded like a period at the end of a long sentence. He did not step back. He stayed there, in the space she had allowed him to occupy. Rory lifted her hand, tracing the line of his jaw. His skin was warm. He leaned into her touch, closing his eyes for a brief second. Do not disappear again, she said. Lucien opened his eyes. The amber one burned bright. I give you my word, Aurora. No more silence. Outside, London rained on. Inside, amidst the clutter and the cat and the smell of spices, the distance between them closed until there was nothing left but the space of a breath.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
76.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1465
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count3
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1465
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"ensure"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"testament"
count1
13
word"chaotic"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
15
word"amidst"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"silence"
2"gleaming"
3"intensity"
4"navigated"
5"weight"
6"traced"
7"ensure"
8"perfect"
9"tension"
10"could feel"
11"warmth"
12"testament"
13"chaotic"
14"tracing"
15"amidst"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences172
matches
0"was afraid"
1"was afraid"
84.72% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences172
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
2"know"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"seemed to"
2"tend to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1461
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions13
matches
0"Rory, he said."
1"I was in the neighborhood, he said."
2"You are a terrible liar, Rory said."
3"If you try to kill me, I scream, Rory said."
4"You look well, Lucien said."
5"It should not have to be, he said."
6"I left to protect you, he said quietly."
7"I know, he said."
8"I heard rumors, Lucien said."
9"He is in the past, Rory said."
10"You are here now, she said softly."
11"Turn the lock, Lucien, she said."
12"Do not disappear again, she said."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1461
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien18
Moreau3
French1
London4
Evan3
East1
Rory12
Eva3
Aurora3
Avaros1
Golden1
Empress1
Marseille1
Cardiff2
You9
persons
0"Carter"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
5"Eva"
6"Aurora"
7"You"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"East"
4"Marseille"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore0.884
windowScore0.667
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed broader than she remembered"
1"felt like fire"
2"sounded like a period at the end of a long"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1461
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences172
matches
0"traced that scar"
1"make that choice"
2"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean27.06
std19.91
cv0.736
sampleLengths
067
19
244
381
422
542
656
732
831
962
106
1150
1210
1328
1457
1519
1623
1713
184
1927
2035
2138
2211
2320
2452
2528
2648
2743
281
295
3041
3115
3227
337
349
3518
3613
375
383
3935
4061
4134
427
431
445
456
4644
4711
486
4950
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences172
matches
0"was tailored"
1"was slicked"
2"were meant"
3"were meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs277
matches
0"was walking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences172
ratio0.012
matches
0"The scent of him followed—rain, expensive tobacco, and something older, something sulfuric that hinted at the demon blood from Avaros running in his veins."
1"The height difference was noticeable; at five eleven, he looked down at her, but Rory did not back away."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1465
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.029351535836177476
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.010921501706484642
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean8.49
std5.86
cv0.69
sampleLengths
014
16
216
310
411
510
69
732
812
913
1020
1113
129
1326
143
1519
161
1712
1824
195
204
219
227
237
249
2520
267
272
284
2919
307
3115
329
335
3416
3513
3613
3715
384
392
402
4110
4210
4319
449
4510
463
4711
4814
494
38.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.27906976744186046
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners48
63.69% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences157
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Sometimes she wondered which was"
2"Really looked at him."
ratio0.019
23.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount77
totalSentences157
matches
0"She knew who it was"
1"It was the kind of"
2"She turned the latch and"
3"He looked exactly as he"
4"His platinum blond hair was"
5"His voice was low, smoothed"
6"She kept her hand on"
7"It was a reflex, born"
8"He shifted his weight."
9"She knew what lay beneath"
10"He had never drawn it"
11"I was in the neighborhood,"
12"They both knew it."
13"You are a terrible liar,"
14"She stepped back, just enough"
15"It was a concession, and"
16"His gaze dropped to her"
17"He had once traced that"
18"He stepped past her."
19"He moved into the center"
ratio0.49
58.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount126
totalSentences157
matches
0"The first deadbolt clicked, a"
1"The second followed, then the"
2"Aurora Carter paused with her"
3"She knew who it was"
4"The silence on the other"
5"It was the kind of"
6"She turned the latch and"
7"The smell of the curry"
8"He looked exactly as he"
9"The charcoal suit was tailored"
10"His platinum blond hair was"
11"The heterochromatic stare, one amber"
12"Rory, he said."
13"His voice was low, smoothed"
14"She kept her hand on"
15"It was a reflex, born"
16"He shifted his weight."
17"The ivory handle of his"
18"She knew what lay beneath"
19"A thin blade, concealed within"
ratio0.803
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences157
matches
0"Now he looked at it"
1"If you try to kill"
2"If I wanted to kill"
3"If I stayed, they would"
4"Because the silence was worse."
5"Even from afar."
ratio0.038
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The smell of the curry house below rushed up to meet her, a permanent layer of turmeric and cumin that had seeped into the plaster of the Brick Lane building ye…"
1"The charcoal suit was tailored to within an inch of its life, hugging shoulders that seemed broader than she remembered."
2"The heterochromatic stare, one amber and one black, pinned her in place with an intensity that made the air in the cramped flat feel suddenly thin."
3"It was a reflex, born of the instinct that had kept her alive after Evan, and sharpened by the supernatural underworld she now navigated."
4"Ptolemy rubbed against Lucien's leg, purring loudly, betraying them both."
5"Lucien Moreau, the fixer, the information broker, the half-demon who walked through London's underworld with a blade in his cane and four languages on his tongu…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.0082%