Run: 2026-02-18-01KHQ92DAQCTN3F99T55VY184Q

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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Rain hammered against the pavement, turning the London streets into slick mirrors that reflected the fractured neon of the city. Detective Harlow Quinn pushed through the downpour, her breath coming in sharp, controlled bursts. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. The glow-in-the-dark hands were barely visible through the smear of water, but she knew the time. Too late. She had lost ground. Her salt-and-pepper hair was plastered to her scalp, heavy and cold, but she did not break stride. Eighteen years on the force had taught her that hesitation was the only true failure. Ahead, the shadow of the suspect detached itself from the wall of a shuttered shop. The figure was slight, moving with a desperate, scrambling gait that suggested fear rather than confidence. Quinn tightened her grip on the torch in her right hand, her left hand hovering near the holster at her hip. She maintained military precision in her movement, conserving energy, keeping her center of gravity low. The suspect turned sharply onto Camden High Street, weaving through the late-night stragglers who huddled under awnings, smoking against the damp. Quinn flashed her badge at a pair of startled teenagers who blocked the sidewalk, her voice cutting through the rain. Police. Move. They scattered. The suspect did not look back. They were heading for the old construction hoarding near the market stalls, the ones that concealed the entrance to the abandoned Tube station. Quinn knew the area. She had walked these streets during the search for DS Morris three years ago. The memory hit her like a physical blow, a dull ache behind her eyes. Morris had vanished down a rabbit hole of unexplained circumstances, leaving behind only a badge and a silence that still haunted her precinct. She had told herself it was a robbery gone wrong, but the lack of evidence, the strange weather reports, the whispers from informants about things that did not fit in a crime scene report. She had buried those thoughts under paperwork and overtime, but tonight they clawed their way back up. The suspect slipped through a gap in the plywood fencing. Quinn followed, squeezing through the narrow opening that scraped against her shoulder. The noise of the city muted instantly. The rain seemed to fall harder here, drumming against the corrugated metal roof of the temporary structure, but the air below was still. Stale. It smelled of ozone and old copper, a scent that reminded her of blood left too long on concrete. She descended the concrete stairs, her boots echoing in the hollow space. The graffiti here was different from the usual tags. The symbols were intricate, carved into the paint rather than sprayed, glowing with a faint, phosphorescent residue that made her sharp jaw tighten. At the bottom of the stairs, the tunnel mouth yawned open. It should have been dark. It should have been flooded with debris and rats. Instead, a warm, amber light pulsed from within, rhythmic like a heartbeat. Quinn stopped at the threshold. Her training screamed at her to call for backup, to secure the perimeter, to wait for daylight. But backup meant questions. Questions meant explanations she could not give. If she called it in, the file would go to Internal Affairs, and the trail would go cold before the uniforms arrived. This was hers. She watched the suspect approach a turnstile that had been rusted shut for a decade. The metal bars gleamed as if freshly oiled. The figure reached into a pocket and withdrew something small and white. Even from twenty feet away, Quinn recognized the shape. A bone. Not a replica, not a trick of the light. The suspect pressed the token against the sensor panel. The turnstile clicked, a sound like a breaking finger, and swung open. The suspect vanished into the amber glow. Quinn stepped closer, her brown eyes scanning the darkness. The air pressure dropped, popping her ears. This was the Veil Market. She had heard the rumors in the pubs near Soho, whispers exchanged over pints at the Raven's Nest when the patrons thought the police were too drunk to listen. A black market that moved every full moon. A place for things that should not exist. Enchanted goods. Banned alchemical substances. Information that could get a person killed. She touched the Saint Christopher medallion she kept in her pocket, a habit she had picked up after Morris disappeared, though she did not believe in saints. She believed in evidence. She believed in cause and effect. But there was no cause for this. There was no effect that explained the light. She looked at her watch again. The second hand ticked forward, normal and steady. Time still worked here, or at least it pretended to. If she walked through that turnstile, she was stepping out of jurisdiction. She was stepping out of the world she knew. If she died down there, no one would find her body. Morris had taught her that much. He had chased the weird cases, the ones that didn't fit the mold, and he had paid for it. Quinn felt the weight of her service weapon against her ribs. She thought of the clique she had been tracking, the network that seemed to pull strings from the shadows of the city. If this market was their supply line, then this was the breakthrough she had waited three years for. The rain above intensified, thunder rumbling like a warning. Quinn took a breath, filling her lungs with the cold, metallic air. She drew her weapon, the steel slick with rain. She checked the chamber. One in the pipe. She holstered the torch and gripped the gun with both hands, adopting a stance that felt as natural as breathing. Her height gave her reach, her training gave her discipline. She was not a victim. She was the hunter. She stepped up to the turnstile. The bone sensor glowed red, waiting for a token she did not have. She did not try to swipe a card. She did not try to force the bar. Instead, she aimed at the mechanism housing the sensor. If the market wanted a token, she would give it violence. She fired once. The sound was deafening in the enclosed space, the muzzle flash illuminating the tunnel walls where shadows seemed to detach themselves and recoil. The sensor sparked and died. The turnstile locked free. Quinn pushed through the bar. The amber light swallowed her whole. The temperature shifted instantly, becoming dry and hot, smelling of spices and sulfur. The sound of the rain vanished, replaced by a low hum of conversation and the clinking of glass. She stood at the top of a ramp looking down into a cavernous station platform that had been transformed into a bazaar. Stalls draped in velvet lined the tracks. Creatures that looked human but moved with wrong fluidity bartered over cages containing shifting smoke. She was inside. There was no going back now. The decision was made. Quinn lowered her weapon slightly, keeping it ready at her side. She adjusted her collar, hiding the badge, and descended into the Veil Market. Her heart beat steady against her ribs. She was walking into the dark to find the truth, and for the first time in three years, she did not feel afraid. She felt ready.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"structure"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"silence"
2"structure"
3"echoing"
4"intricate"
5"pulsed"
6"rhythmic"
7"scanning"
8"weight"
9"velvet"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
40.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tended to"
2"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1224
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1224
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn12
Camden1
High1
Street1
Tube1
Morris4
Internal1
Affairs1
Veil2
Market2
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"High"
3"Street"
4"Internal"
5"Veil"
6"Soho"
7"Raven"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"network that seemed to pull strings from the shadows of the city"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1224
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
79.41% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs14
mean87.43
std37.41
cv0.428
sampleLengths
098
1108
22
3137
4116
595
683
7115
815
9132
1077
1190
1286
1370
89.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences112
matches
0"was plastered"
1"been flooded"
2"been rusted"
3"been transformed"
4"was made"
44.24% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs214
matches
0"were heading"
1"was stepping"
2"was stepping"
3"was deafening"
4"was walking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences112
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1230
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.01951219512195122
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007317073170731708
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean10.93
std6.88
cv0.629
sampleLengths
020
114
210
316
42
54
617
715
815
916
1021
1115
1221
1320
141
151
162
176
1823
194
2014
2114
2223
2334
2417
2510
2612
277
2823
291
3019
3112
329
3323
3411
355
369
3712
385
3917
404
417
4222
433
4415
458
4612
479
482
499
33.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.29464285714285715
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners33
63.49% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"Instead, a warm, amber light"
1"Instead, she aimed at the"
ratio0.019
75.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences105
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"She had lost ground."
2"Her salt-and-pepper hair was plastered"
3"She maintained military precision in"
4"They were heading for the"
5"She had walked these streets"
6"She had told herself it"
7"She had buried those thoughts"
8"It smelled of ozone and"
9"She descended the concrete stairs,"
10"It should have been dark."
11"It should have been flooded"
12"Her training screamed at her"
13"She watched the suspect approach"
14"She had heard the rumors"
15"She touched the Saint Christopher"
16"She believed in evidence."
17"She believed in cause and"
18"She looked at her watch"
19"She was stepping out of"
ratio0.362
55.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences105
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn pushed through"
1"She checked the worn leather"
2"The glow-in-the-dark hands were barely"
3"She had lost ground."
4"Her salt-and-pepper hair was plastered"
5"The figure was slight, moving"
6"Quinn tightened her grip on"
7"She maintained military precision in"
8"The suspect turned sharply onto"
9"Quinn flashed her badge at"
10"The suspect did not look"
11"They were heading for the"
12"Quinn knew the area."
13"She had walked these streets"
14"The memory hit her like"
15"Morris had vanished down a"
16"She had told herself it"
17"She had buried those thoughts"
18"The suspect slipped through a"
19"Quinn followed, squeezing through the"
ratio0.81
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences105
matches
0"If she called it in,"
1"Even from twenty feet away,"
2"If she walked through that"
3"If she died down there,"
4"If this market was their"
5"If the market wanted a"
ratio0.057
8.09% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Rain hammered against the pavement, turning the London streets into slick mirrors that reflected the fractured neon of the city."
1"She maintained military precision in her movement, conserving energy, keeping her center of gravity low."
2"The suspect turned sharply onto Camden High Street, weaving through the late-night stragglers who huddled under awnings, smoking against the damp."
3"Quinn flashed her badge at a pair of startled teenagers who blocked the sidewalk, her voice cutting through the rain."
4"They were heading for the old construction hoarding near the market stalls, the ones that concealed the entrance to the abandoned Tube station."
5"Quinn followed, squeezing through the narrow opening that scraped against her shoulder."
6"The symbols were intricate, carved into the paint rather than sprayed, glowing with a faint, phosphorescent residue that made her sharp jaw tighten."
7"She holstered the torch and gripped the gun with both hands, adopting a stance that felt as natural as breathing."
8"She stood at the top of a ramp looking down into a cavernous station platform that had been transformed into a bazaar."
9"Creatures that looked human but moved with wrong fluidity bartered over cages containing shifting smoke."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.6791%