Run: 2026-02-18-01KHQ93993MNQKB2TFS13TFQYN

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Duration:
43.1s
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$0.035889
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Amazon Bedrock

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The pendant warmed against Rory's sternum a full minute before the grove came into view. She'd learned to pay attention to that. The Heartstone didn't announce itself loudly — no sudden heat, no dramatic pulse — just a slow, gathering warmth, like pressing a hand to a sun-warmed stone. She pressed two fingers to the outside of her jacket, feeling the faint throb through the leather, and said nothing. Nyx would already know. Nyx always already knew. They moved single-file along the deer trail, the November grass bleached pale on either side. Richmond Park stretched grey and wide behind them, the distant rumble of a jogger's playlist fading with each step. The oaks here were older than the surrounding woodland. Rory could see that much without supernatural sight. Their trunks had the swollen, arthritic look of trees that had been growing since people still died of tooth infections as a matter of course. Their roots had split the earth into ridges, and the path between them had narrowed to something that was more suggestion than trail. "This is the boundary," Nyx said from just behind her left shoulder. They didn't so much walk as exist at a different proximity — one moment a step behind, the next close enough that their absence of warmth was its own particular presence. Rory had stopped finding it unsettling sometime around week three. "How can you tell?" she asked. "The shadows here point the wrong way." She looked. They did. Long, leafless tree-shadows stretched north when the afternoon light was coming from the south, and the wrongness of it sat in her stomach like a swallowed stone. Isolde was already inside. The seer stood at the center of the clearing as though she had simply always been there, as though the grove had arranged itself around her and not the other way around. Her silver hair caught no particular light source but shone anyway, and her pale lavender eyes tracked their approach with the detached patience of someone watching clouds. "You came later than the vision showed," she said, which was either a greeting or a reproach and, with Isolde, could be both. "Traffic on the A316," Rory said. Isolde smiled. It was a strange smile, narrow and old. "Step through." The standing stones — and Rory used the term loosely, because they were oaks, impossibly old oaks, their trunks fused into archways by centuries of patient growth — framed the entrance in a way that made the space between them look thin. Like a gap between pages. Like something that, once stepped through, could not be entirely unstepped. She went first. The Heartstone flared. Not painfully. It was more like the difference between a room at comfortable temperature and stepping outside into warm summer air — an abrupt and total change that registered in the body before the mind caught up. The air on the other side of the stones was different. It was richer, somehow. Not thicker, not perfumed, just — more. As if every breath here was providing something that ordinary air was quietly withholding. The wildflowers were the next thing. November had no right to wildflowers. The ground outside the grove was dull and dormant, waiting for spring with that particular stoicism of English soil. But here, the grass was deeply, unreasonably green, and growing up through it in dense, jewel-colored clusters were flowers she couldn't name — some resembling primroses but with petals that caught the nonexistent light in the way gemstones did, some tall and violet-stemmed and moving gently despite no wind. The clearing was perhaps thirty feet across, and every inch of it was inhabited, growing, alive. Nyx materialized beside her. She heard the shift of them — that brief sound like a silk hem dragging across stone — and glanced over to find their silhouette sharper here, the faintly glowing violet of their eyes brighter against the ambient strangeness of the grove. They were looking at the trees. "They're watching," Nyx said. "The trees?" "The things inside the trees." A pause. "They're not hostile. Curious." Rory decided not to look too hard at the tree line. She moved toward the center, grass bending silently under her boots. There was no birdsong here, she noticed — not the absence of it, not silence, but something more specific. A held breath. As if the grove was listening to them the way they were listening to it. Near the center, she crouched. The pendant had stopped pulsing. It lay warm and still against her, the deep crimson of the heartstone oddly vivid when she drew it out and held it in her palm. The inner glow — usually so faint she second-guessed herself — was unmistakable here, a slow ember-beat that matched nothing so much as a pulse. "It's responding to this place," she said. "It responds to the boundary between realms," Isolde said, appearing at her shoulder with the complete absence of footsteps that Rory still had not fully made her peace with. "This grove shares its nature. It sits between. As you do." She tilted her head. "As all three of you do, for different reasons." "Was that a prophecy or an observation?" "Does it matter?" Rory tucked the pendant back. She stood and turned slowly, taking inventory. The grove felt bigger from the inside — not impossibly so, just more than it looked, like a room where the walls were slightly farther apart than they should be. The quality of time was strange here, too. She'd been warned about that. She couldn't tell if they'd been inside for three minutes or thirty, and the uncertainty sat in her chest alongside the residual warmth of the stone. She drew the Fae blade. It made sense to. The cold of it was immediate and familiar — moonsilver never warmed, not to body heat, not to friction, not to anything Rory had tried — and its faint luminescence seemed to deepen here, as if the blade recognized something in the air and was answering it. The leaf-shaped edge caught the sourceless light and scattered it in small bright fractions across the grass. "Will it do what I need it to do?" she asked. She was asking Isolde, but she was watching the light on the blade. Isolde was quiet long enough that Rory looked up. The seer's lavender eyes held that particular expression she sometimes wore — not evasion, exactly, but the careful architecture of a truth being arranged into a shape that would be honest without being complete. "What the blade is," Isolde said, "will be equal to what you are, when the time comes." "That's not an answer." "It is an answer." She paused. "Whether it is the answer you hoped for is a different question entirely." Nyx drifted to the far edge of the clearing, their form thinning briefly as they moved between two of the old oaks, and for a moment Rory lost them entirely against the shadowed bark. Then the violet of their eyes reappeared, lower than expected, as if they had crouched. "There's a marking here," they said. She crossed to them. The light between the trees was different — older-feeling, denser — and the bark of the nearest oak was etched with something she'd have taken for natural patterning at a distance. Up close, it was clearly deliberate. Not carved — grown, the lines as smooth and organic as the tree itself, as if whoever made them had simply asked the wood to remember a shape. She didn't recognize the symbol. Neither, apparently, did Nyx, which was notable enough to feel like information. "Isolde," she called. The seer moved to join them without any appearance of haste. She looked at the marking for a long moment, her silver hair falling forward over her shoulder, and when she raised her eyes again they were not opaque but not quite legible, either. "Old," she said. "Older than the Courts. Older than the name Fae." She touched the marking with two fingers, and the flowers nearest the tree's roots turned briefly, faintly luminescent, then stilled. "It means this grove has been here longer than anyone living can remember." She removed her hand. "Including me." The word settled over the clearing like the opening measure of something they hadn't agreed to hear. Rory looked at the marking, at the dark interior of the grove, at the pendant faintly warm against her chest and the blade cold in her hand. Around them the nameless flowers swayed in their windless air. The things inside the trees, whatever they were, continued their patient watching. She had a feeling they'd only found the edge of the thing, not the thing itself. She had a feeling the grove knew that too. "Right," she said quietly. "Where do we go from here?" Isolde looked at her with that narrow, ancient smile. "Deeper," she said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.056
86.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1471
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
1"gently"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1471
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"comfortable"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"throb"
3"stomach"
4"comfortable"
5"silk"
6"silence"
7"footsteps"
8"familiar"
9"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1482
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1316
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Heartstone2
November2
Park1
Isolde8
English1
Fae1
Nyx7
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"November"
3"Isolde"
4"Nyx"
places
0"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"Neither, apparently, did Nyx, which was"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords3.374
wordCount1482
matches
0"no particular light source but"
1"not the absence of it, not silence, but something more specific"
2"not silence, but something more specific"
3"not evasion, exactly, but the careful architecture of a truth being arranged into a sh"
4"not opaque but not quite legible, either"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"see that much"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean29.06
std26.52
cv0.913
sampleLengths
015
162
299
312
441
56
67
731
84
959
1023
116
1212
1358
146
1573
166
1790
1852
194
202
2111
2211
2348
2461
257
2653
277
283
2981
305
3168
3224
339
3434
3517
364
3719
3849
396
4069
4117
423
4344
4451
4517
4649
4725
4810
499
87.54% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences99
matches
0"was inhabited"
1"been warned"
2"being arranged"
3"was etched"
4"were, continued"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs207
matches
0"was coming"
1"was providing"
2"were looking"
3"was listening were listening"
4"was answering"
5"was asking was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount20
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences110
ratio0.127
matches
0"The Heartstone didn't announce itself loudly — no sudden heat, no dramatic pulse — just a slow, gathering warmth, like pressing a hand to a sun-warmed stone."
1"They didn't so much walk as exist at a different proximity — one moment a step behind, the next close enough that their absence of warmth was its own particular presence."
2"The standing stones — and Rory used the term loosely, because they were oaks, impossibly old oaks, their trunks fused into archways by centuries of patient growth — framed the entrance in a way that made the space between them look thin."
3"It was more like the difference between a room at comfortable temperature and stepping outside into warm summer air — an abrupt and total change that registered in the body before the mind caught up."
4"Not thicker, not perfumed, just — more."
5"But here, the grass was deeply, unreasonably green, and growing up through it in dense, jewel-colored clusters were flowers she couldn't name — some resembling primroses but with petals that caught the nonexistent light in the way gemstones did, some tall and violet-stemmed and moving gently despite no wind."
6"She heard the shift of them — that brief sound like a silk hem dragging across stone — and glanced over to find their silhouette sharper here, the faintly glowing violet of their eyes brighter against the ambient strangeness of the grove."
7"There was no birdsong here, she noticed — not the absence of it, not silence, but something more specific."
8"The inner glow — usually so faint she second-guessed herself — was unmistakable here, a slow ember-beat that matched nothing so much as a pulse."
9"The grove felt bigger from the inside — not impossibly so, just more than it looked, like a room where the walls were slightly farther apart than they should be."
10"The cold of it was immediate and familiar — moonsilver never warmed, not to body heat, not to friction, not to anything Rory had tried — and its faint luminescence seemed to deepen here, as if the blade recognized something in the air and was answering it."
11"The seer's lavender eyes held that particular expression she sometimes wore — not evasion, exactly, but the careful architecture of a truth being arranged into a shape that would be honest without being complete."
12"The light between the trees was different — older-feeling, denser — and the bark of the nearest oak was etched with something she'd have taken for natural patterning at a distance."
13"Not carved — grown, the lines as smooth and organic as the tree itself, as if whoever made them had simply asked the wood to remember a shape."
80.21% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1305
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"dense, jewel-colored clusters"
adverbCount70
adverbRatio0.05363984674329502
lyAdverbCount29
lyAdverbRatio0.022222222222222223
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean13.47
std11.1
cv0.824
sampleLengths
015
17
227
320
44
54
615
719
89
98
1025
1123
1212
1331
1410
156
167
172
182
1927
204
2132
2227
2323
246
252
268
272
2842
295
3011
313
323
332
3435
3511
364
377
3814
396
406
4119
4249
4316
444
4542
466
474
482
497
50.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners40
40.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Then the violet of their"
ratio0.012
70.60% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences83
matches
0"She'd learned to pay attention"
1"She pressed two fingers to"
2"They moved single-file along the"
3"Their trunks had the swollen,"
4"Their roots had split the"
5"They didn't so much walk"
6"Her silver hair caught no"
7"she said, which was either"
8"It was a strange smile,"
9"She went first."
10"It was more like the"
11"It was richer, somehow."
12"She heard the shift of"
13"They were looking at the"
14"She moved toward the center,"
15"It lay warm and still"
16"She tilted her head"
17"She stood and turned slowly,"
18"She'd been warned about that."
19"She couldn't tell if they'd"
ratio0.373
38.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences83
matches
0"The pendant warmed against Rory's"
1"She'd learned to pay attention"
2"The Heartstone didn't announce itself"
3"She pressed two fingers to"
4"Nyx would already know."
5"Nyx always already knew."
6"They moved single-file along the"
7"Richmond Park stretched grey and"
8"The oaks here were older"
9"Rory could see that much"
10"Their trunks had the swollen,"
11"Their roots had split the"
12"Nyx said from just behind"
13"They didn't so much walk"
14"Rory had stopped finding it"
15"Isolde was already inside."
16"The seer stood at the"
17"Her silver hair caught no"
18"she said, which was either"
19"It was a strange smile,"
ratio0.843
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"As if every breath here"
1"As if the grove was"
ratio0.024
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Their trunks had the swollen, arthritic look of trees that had been growing since people still died of tooth infections as a matter of course."
1"Their roots had split the earth into ridges, and the path between them had narrowed to something that was more suggestion than trail."
2"The standing stones — and Rory used the term loosely, because they were oaks, impossibly old oaks, their trunks fused into archways by centuries of patient grow…"
3"It was more like the difference between a room at comfortable temperature and stepping outside into warm summer air — an abrupt and total change that registered…"
4"As if every breath here was providing something that ordinary air was quietly withholding."
5"But here, the grass was deeply, unreasonably green, and growing up through it in dense, jewel-colored clusters were flowers she couldn't name — some resembling …"
6"As if the grove was listening to them the way they were listening to it."
7"The inner glow — usually so faint she second-guessed herself — was unmistakable here, a slow ember-beat that matched nothing so much as a pulse."
8"The cold of it was immediate and familiar — moonsilver never warmed, not to body heat, not to friction, not to anything Rory had tried — and its faint luminesce…"
9"The seer's lavender eyes held that particular expression she sometimes wore — not evasion, exactly, but the careful architecture of a truth being arranged into …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.9885%