| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 86.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1471 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loosely" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1471 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "comfortable" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "etched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1482 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1316 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.91 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 12 | | Heartstone | 2 | | November | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | English | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Nyx | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "November" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Neither, apparently, did Nyx, which was" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.374 | | wordCount | 1482 | | matches | | 0 | "no particular light source but" | | 1 | "not the absence of it, not silence, but something more specific" | | 2 | "not silence, but something more specific" | | 3 | "not evasion, exactly, but the careful architecture of a truth being arranged into a sh" | | 4 | "not opaque but not quite legible, either" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 29.06 | | std | 26.52 | | cv | 0.913 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 99 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 73 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 90 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 61 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 53 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 81 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 68 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 49 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 69 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 44 | | 44 | 51 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 49 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 87.54% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "was inhabited" | | 1 | "been warned" | | 2 | "being arranged" | | 3 | "was etched" | | 4 | "were, continued" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 207 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "was providing" | | 2 | "were looking" | | 3 | "was listening were listening" | | 4 | "was answering" | | 5 | "was asking was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.127 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone didn't announce itself loudly — no sudden heat, no dramatic pulse — just a slow, gathering warmth, like pressing a hand to a sun-warmed stone." | | 1 | "They didn't so much walk as exist at a different proximity — one moment a step behind, the next close enough that their absence of warmth was its own particular presence." | | 2 | "The standing stones — and Rory used the term loosely, because they were oaks, impossibly old oaks, their trunks fused into archways by centuries of patient growth — framed the entrance in a way that made the space between them look thin." | | 3 | "It was more like the difference between a room at comfortable temperature and stepping outside into warm summer air — an abrupt and total change that registered in the body before the mind caught up." | | 4 | "Not thicker, not perfumed, just — more." | | 5 | "But here, the grass was deeply, unreasonably green, and growing up through it in dense, jewel-colored clusters were flowers she couldn't name — some resembling primroses but with petals that caught the nonexistent light in the way gemstones did, some tall and violet-stemmed and moving gently despite no wind." | | 6 | "She heard the shift of them — that brief sound like a silk hem dragging across stone — and glanced over to find their silhouette sharper here, the faintly glowing violet of their eyes brighter against the ambient strangeness of the grove." | | 7 | "There was no birdsong here, she noticed — not the absence of it, not silence, but something more specific." | | 8 | "The inner glow — usually so faint she second-guessed herself — was unmistakable here, a slow ember-beat that matched nothing so much as a pulse." | | 9 | "The grove felt bigger from the inside — not impossibly so, just more than it looked, like a room where the walls were slightly farther apart than they should be." | | 10 | "The cold of it was immediate and familiar — moonsilver never warmed, not to body heat, not to friction, not to anything Rory had tried — and its faint luminescence seemed to deepen here, as if the blade recognized something in the air and was answering it." | | 11 | "The seer's lavender eyes held that particular expression she sometimes wore — not evasion, exactly, but the careful architecture of a truth being arranged into a shape that would be honest without being complete." | | 12 | "The light between the trees was different — older-feeling, denser — and the bark of the nearest oak was etched with something she'd have taken for natural patterning at a distance." | | 13 | "Not carved — grown, the lines as smooth and organic as the tree itself, as if whoever made them had simply asked the wood to remember a shape." |
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| 80.21% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1305 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "dense, jewel-colored clusters" |
| | adverbCount | 70 | | adverbRatio | 0.05363984674329502 | | lyAdverbCount | 29 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.022222222222222223 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 13.47 | | std | 11.1 | | cv | 0.824 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 49 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 42 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 50.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.36363636363636365 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 40.16% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the violet of their" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 70.60% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd learned to pay attention" | | 1 | "She pressed two fingers to" | | 2 | "They moved single-file along the" | | 3 | "Their trunks had the swollen," | | 4 | "Their roots had split the" | | 5 | "They didn't so much walk" | | 6 | "Her silver hair caught no" | | 7 | "she said, which was either" | | 8 | "It was a strange smile," | | 9 | "She went first." | | 10 | "It was more like the" | | 11 | "It was richer, somehow." | | 12 | "She heard the shift of" | | 13 | "They were looking at the" | | 14 | "She moved toward the center," | | 15 | "It lay warm and still" | | 16 | "She tilted her head" | | 17 | "She stood and turned slowly," | | 18 | "She'd been warned about that." | | 19 | "She couldn't tell if they'd" |
| | ratio | 0.373 | |
| 38.31% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant warmed against Rory's" | | 1 | "She'd learned to pay attention" | | 2 | "The Heartstone didn't announce itself" | | 3 | "She pressed two fingers to" | | 4 | "Nyx would already know." | | 5 | "Nyx always already knew." | | 6 | "They moved single-file along the" | | 7 | "Richmond Park stretched grey and" | | 8 | "The oaks here were older" | | 9 | "Rory could see that much" | | 10 | "Their trunks had the swollen," | | 11 | "Their roots had split the" | | 12 | "Nyx said from just behind" | | 13 | "They didn't so much walk" | | 14 | "Rory had stopped finding it" | | 15 | "Isolde was already inside." | | 16 | "The seer stood at the" | | 17 | "Her silver hair caught no" | | 18 | "she said, which was either" | | 19 | "It was a strange smile," |
| | ratio | 0.843 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "As if every breath here" | | 1 | "As if the grove was" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Their trunks had the swollen, arthritic look of trees that had been growing since people still died of tooth infections as a matter of course." | | 1 | "Their roots had split the earth into ridges, and the path between them had narrowed to something that was more suggestion than trail." | | 2 | "The standing stones — and Rory used the term loosely, because they were oaks, impossibly old oaks, their trunks fused into archways by centuries of patient grow…" | | 3 | "It was more like the difference between a room at comfortable temperature and stepping outside into warm summer air — an abrupt and total change that registered…" | | 4 | "As if every breath here was providing something that ordinary air was quietly withholding." | | 5 | "But here, the grass was deeply, unreasonably green, and growing up through it in dense, jewel-colored clusters were flowers she couldn't name — some resembling …" | | 6 | "As if the grove was listening to them the way they were listening to it." | | 7 | "The inner glow — usually so faint she second-guessed herself — was unmistakable here, a slow ember-beat that matched nothing so much as a pulse." | | 8 | "The cold of it was immediate and familiar — moonsilver never warmed, not to body heat, not to friction, not to anything Rory had tried — and its faint luminesce…" | | 9 | "The seer's lavender eyes held that particular expression she sometimes wore — not evasion, exactly, but the careful architecture of a truth being arranged into …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |