Run: 2026-02-18-01KHQ94M10Q5C1F9VHKBMY341W

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Duration:
43.5s
Cost:
$0.031824
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the Soho gutters into rivers and the neon signs into smeared watercolour. Quinn turned up the collar of her jacket and pressed herself against the wall of a shuttered newsagent, watching the green light above The Raven's Nest pulse and flicker in the downpour forty metres ahead. She'd been sitting on Tomás Herrera for three days. It had started with a tip — anonymous, typed on plain paper, slid under the door of her home address, which was the detail that had kept her awake that first night. Someone knew where she lived. The note contained one line: *Ask the medic what he buried in Barnet.* She'd pulled Herrera's file before breakfast: former NHS paramedic, licence revoked eighteen months ago, currently of no fixed employment on paper. In practice, her surveillance had shown a man who moved through the city like water finding its level — slipping into buildings, emerging from others, carrying a medical bag that never seemed to get any lighter. Tonight she'd followed him from a flat in Clerkenwell to a chip shop in Covent Garden he hadn't bought anything from, and then here, to the wet dark mouth of Old Compton Street. She'd watched him enter the Nest forty minutes ago. She was still watching when he came back out. He was moving fast. That was the first tell. He'd gone in with the easy loose-limbed saunter of a man dropping in for a drink; he came out checking behind him, shoulders tight, the medical bag clutched against his body instead of swinging from his hand. He turned right without pausing and broke into a jog. Quinn was moving before she'd consciously decided to. The rain hit her face like static. She kept him in sight — olive coat, dark curls plastered flat, the faint gleam of something metal at his throat. He was fast for a man carrying a bag, and he clearly knew the streets. He cut left down a narrow passage between restaurants, vaulting a low chain across a patio of upturned chairs without breaking stride. Quinn followed, catching the chain on her shin, swearing quietly, carrying on. He was heading north. She keyed her radio, remembered she'd switched it off — operational discretion, she'd told herself at the start of the evening, which meant she didn't want anyone asking questions about what she was doing working solo on a night she was technically stood down. Old habit, and a bad one. Morris had told her that repeatedly. *You're not a one-woman unit, Harlow.* He'd said it six days before he died, and she'd been turning the sentence over in her head for three years like a stone she couldn't put down. She put Morris away and kept running. Herrera crossed Oxford Street against the lights, horns erupting behind him, and Quinn followed into the gap, her hand out, a black cab braking with a shuddering hiss. She held her warrant card up to the windscreen on instinct, which achieved nothing except making her feel foolish, and ran on. Camden. He was making for Camden. She gained ground on the long straight stretch of Tottenham Court Road, close enough now to hear him breathing hard, close enough to see the scar on his left forearm as his sleeve rode up — a pale line that caught the streetlight for just a moment before the darkness swallowed it again. She thought about calling out, about the formal declaration, *Metropolitan Police, stop*. She thought about how many times she'd watched a suspect's back disappear the moment those words left her mouth. She said nothing. She ran. He ducked into a side street she didn't recognise, then another, and suddenly they were in a pocket of Camden she'd never worked — a dead zone between the market and the canal, industrial buildings with bricked-up windows, streetlights down to one in three. Herrera slowed to a walk and Quinn slowed with him, pressing into a doorway, watching. He stopped in front of what appeared to be the sealed entrance to a Tube station. Not one she knew — the signage had been removed long ago and the ironwork gates were chained and padlocked, threaded through with old police tape that the rain had softened to strips of wet tissue. Herrera didn't hesitate. He reached into his coat, produced something small — bone-white, flat, the size of a large coin — and pressed it against the padlock. The chain fell. Not unlocked. Fell, cleanly and completely, each link separating in sequence like a zip pulled open, the whole length dropping into the puddle at his feet without a sound that should have been physically possible. The gate swung inward on darkness. Herrera slipped through, and the gate swung shut behind him, and the chain rose. Quinn stood in the doorway for six full seconds. She checked her watch — the leather band dark with rain, the face fogged. Half eleven. She checked her phone: no signal, which told her something, though she couldn't have said exactly what. She was two kilometres from the nearest police station. She had no radio contact, no backup, no warrant, and no legal basis for anything she'd done in the last forty minutes beyond a note pushed under her door by someone who knew where she slept. She thought about what she'd seen at the padlock. The rational thing — the professional thing, the thing Morris would have approved of — was to note the location, photograph the entrance, go back and run it through channels in the morning. Build the case. Don't get ahead of yourself. She pulled her jacket tighter and walked to the gate. Up close she could hear it: a low murmur from below, like a city heard through a wall. Voices, perhaps music, the suggestion of light from somewhere deep down. The smell that came up through the dark gap between the gates was strange — old stone and something chemical, the metallic bite of things she didn't have names for. She thought about the note. *Ask the medic what he buried in Barnet.* She thought about DS Morris, and the case report she'd read forty times that still made no sense, and the gap at the centre of his death that three years and eighteen decorated years of service hadn't given her so much as a word to fill. Quinn checked her phone again. Still no signal. She pushed the gate. It opened. She wasn't surprised — not entirely. Some part of her, the part that had been accumulating small impossibilities for three years and storing them carefully in a room she didn't open, had understood what she was going to do the moment she'd watched that chain fall. The gate admitted her with the easy indifference of a thing that didn't particularly care who passed through it, and she stepped across the threshold into the dark stairwell and started down. The steps were original Tube tile, cracked and damp, and her footsteps were too loud no matter how carefully she placed them. The murmur grew. The light resolved itself — not electric, not fluorescent, but something warmer and more erratic, torchlight or gas, pooled and scattered across a vast underground space that opened before her at the bottom of the stairs in a way that made her stop with one hand braced against the tunnel wall. The market was enormous. Stalls crowded the old platform and spread out across tracks that had been boarded over, lit by lanterns in colours she couldn't immediately categorise — amber and green and something that was almost violet, throwing strange shadows across faces that were not, in several cases, quite the faces she was used to seeing on the street. The noise was the layered cacophony of a bazaar, shouts and laughter and haggling, and the smells were dense and overlapping: burnt herbs, something sour and chemical, food she couldn't identify, old stone, rain carried down on the coats of people who were still arriving behind her and pressing past without a second glance. No one looked at her the way people looked at police. That, more than anything, straightened her spine. She was invisible here. She was, for once, simply a woman standing at the edge of something large and unfamiliar and dangerous, without the armour of authority that had defined every room she'd entered for eighteen years. She touched the worn leather of her watch strap without thinking — a habit when she was recalibrating — and scanned the crowd for an olive coat and dark curls. Tomás Herrera was forty feet away, speaking urgently to a figure behind a stall draped in what appeared to be surgical implements and glass jars of uncertain contents. He hadn't looked back. He didn't know she was here. Quinn stepped into the crowd.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
86.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1465
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"completely"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1465
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"resolved"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"cacophony"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"flicker"
2"footsteps"
3"resolved"
4"electric"
5"cacophony"
6"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
40.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"watch "
2"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords25
totalWords1479
ratio0.017
matches
0"Ask the medic what he buried in Barnet."
1"You're not a one-woman unit, Harlow."
2"Metropolitan Police, stop"
3"Ask the medic what he buried in Barnet."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1479
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest2
Tomás2
Herrera7
Clerkenwell1
Covent1
Garden1
Old2
Compton1
Street2
Morris4
Oxford1
Quinn8
Camden3
Tottenham1
Court1
Road1
Police1
Tube2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
4"Quinn"
places
0"Soho"
1"Clerkenwell"
2"Covent"
3"Garden"
4"Old"
5"Compton"
6"Street"
7"Oxford"
8"Tottenham"
9"Court"
10"Road"
11"Tube"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
64.77% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.352
wordCount1479
matches
0"not electric, not fluorescent, but something warmer"
1"not fluorescent, but something warmer"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"watched that chain"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean39.97
std33.32
cv0.833
sampleLengths
054
19
2107
351
456
58
677
74
890
97
1050
116
1284
135
1459
1579
163
1755
189
1978
209
2141
2210
2359
2459
258
264
272
2878
2976
304
31110
3211
3344
3430
3538
365
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"been removed"
1"were chained"
2"been boarded"
93.33% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs250
matches
0"was heading"
1"was doing"
2"was making"
3"was recalibrating "
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences84
ratio0.19
matches
0"It had started with a tip — anonymous, typed on plain paper, slid under the door of her home address, which was the detail that had kept her awake that first night."
1"In practice, her surveillance had shown a man who moved through the city like water finding its level — slipping into buildings, emerging from others, carrying a medical bag that never seemed to get any lighter."
2"He'd gone in with the easy loose-limbed saunter of a man dropping in for a drink; he came out checking behind him, shoulders tight, the medical bag clutched against his body instead of swinging from his hand."
3"She kept him in sight — olive coat, dark curls plastered flat, the faint gleam of something metal at his throat."
4"She keyed her radio, remembered she'd switched it off — operational discretion, she'd told herself at the start of the evening, which meant she didn't want anyone asking questions about what she was doing working solo on a night she was technically stood down."
5"She gained ground on the long straight stretch of Tottenham Court Road, close enough now to hear him breathing hard, close enough to see the scar on his left forearm as his sleeve rode up — a pale line that caught the streetlight for just a moment before the darkness swallowed it again."
6"He ducked into a side street she didn't recognise, then another, and suddenly they were in a pocket of Camden she'd never worked — a dead zone between the market and the canal, industrial buildings with bricked-up windows, streetlights down to one in three."
7"Not one she knew — the signage had been removed long ago and the ironwork gates were chained and padlocked, threaded through with old police tape that the rain had softened to strips of wet tissue."
8"He reached into his coat, produced something small — bone-white, flat, the size of a large coin — and pressed it against the padlock."
9"She checked her watch — the leather band dark with rain, the face fogged."
10"The rational thing — the professional thing, the thing Morris would have approved of — was to note the location, photograph the entrance, go back and run it through channels in the morning."
11"The smell that came up through the dark gap between the gates was strange — old stone and something chemical, the metallic bite of things she didn't have names for."
12"She wasn't surprised — not entirely."
13"The light resolved itself — not electric, not fluorescent, but something warmer and more erratic, torchlight or gas, pooled and scattered across a vast underground space that opened before her at the bottom of the stairs in a way that made her stop with one hand braced against the tunnel wall."
14"Stalls crowded the old platform and spread out across tracks that had been boarded over, lit by lanterns in colours she couldn't immediately categorise — amber and green and something that was almost violet, throwing strange shadows across faces that were not, in several cases, quite the faces she was used to seeing on the street."
15"She touched the worn leather of her watch strap without thinking — a habit when she was recalibrating — and scanned the crowd for an olive coat and dark curls."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1465
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"easy loose-limbed saunter"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.028668941979522185
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.012286689419795221
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean17.61
std15.13
cv0.859
sampleLengths
019
135
29
332
45
534
636
733
89
99
104
115
1237
1310
148
157
1621
1715
1822
1912
204
2144
226
236
2434
257
2628
2722
281
295
3053
3112
3219
333
342
3544
3615
3716
3836
393
4024
413
422
4333
446
4514
469
4714
482
4917
33.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.32142857142857145
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.66% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences79
matches
0"She'd been sitting on Tomás"
1"It had started with a"
2"She'd watched him enter the"
3"She was still watching when"
4"He was moving fast."
5"He'd gone in with the"
6"He turned right without pausing"
7"She kept him in sight"
8"He was fast for a"
9"He cut left down a"
10"He was heading north."
11"She keyed her radio, remembered"
12"*You're not a one-woman unit,"
13"She put Morris away and"
14"She held her warrant card"
15"He was making for Camden."
16"She gained ground on the"
17"She thought about calling out,"
18"She thought about how many"
19"She said nothing."
ratio0.468
29.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences79
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Quinn turned up the collar"
2"She'd been sitting on Tomás"
3"It had started with a"
4"Someone knew where she lived."
5"The note contained one line:"
6"Tonight she'd followed him from"
7"She'd watched him enter the"
8"She was still watching when"
9"He was moving fast."
10"That was the first tell."
11"He'd gone in with the"
12"He turned right without pausing"
13"Quinn was moving before she'd"
14"The rain hit her face"
15"She kept him in sight"
16"He was fast for a"
17"He cut left down a"
18"Quinn followed, catching the chain"
19"He was heading north."
ratio0.861
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"It had started with a tip — anonymous, typed on plain paper, slid under the door of her home address, which was the detail that had kept her awake that first ni…"
1"In practice, her surveillance had shown a man who moved through the city like water finding its level — slipping into buildings, emerging from others, carrying …"
2"Quinn followed, catching the chain on her shin, swearing quietly, carrying on."
3"She keyed her radio, remembered she'd switched it off — operational discretion, she'd told herself at the start of the evening, which meant she didn't want anyo…"
4"She gained ground on the long straight stretch of Tottenham Court Road, close enough now to hear him breathing hard, close enough to see the scar on his left fo…"
5"Fell, cleanly and completely, each link separating in sequence like a zip pulled open, the whole length dropping into the puddle at his feet without a sound tha…"
6"She had no radio contact, no backup, no warrant, and no legal basis for anything she'd done in the last forty minutes beyond a note pushed under her door by som…"
7"Some part of her, the part that had been accumulating small impossibilities for three years and storing them carefully in a room she didn't open, had understood…"
8"The gate admitted her with the easy indifference of a thing that didn't particularly care who passed through it, and she stepped across the threshold into the d…"
9"The light resolved itself — not electric, not fluorescent, but something warmer and more erratic, torchlight or gas, pooled and scattered across a vast undergro…"
10"Stalls crowded the old platform and spread out across tracks that had been boarded over, lit by lanterns in colours she couldn't immediately categorise — amber …"
11"The noise was the layered cacophony of a bazaar, shouts and laughter and haggling, and the smells were dense and overlapping: burnt herbs, something sour and ch…"
12"She was, for once, simply a woman standing at the edge of something large and unfamiliar and dangerous, without the armour of authority that had defined every r…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.9300%