Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSSW0E4SGYBJAAHK299RQ14

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Duration:
34.7s
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$0.024978
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The yellow tape had gone up around half the abandoned Tube platform before Quinn arrived, and the scene already smelled wrong — not the usual cocktail of blood and forensic spray, but something older. Mineral. Like the inside of a church that hadn't been opened in decades. She ducked under the tape and straightened, letting her eyes move slowly across the platform before her feet did anything. Chalk markings covered the tiles in concentric rings — not graffiti, not gang tags, but something deliberate. Geometric. The kind of thing that took hours and knowledge to produce. A single body lay at the centre of the outermost ring, face-up, arms arranged with the careful symmetry of someone who had taken their time. Male, mid-forties, well-dressed. No visible wounds. "Quinn." DS Peters materialised from a cluster of uniforms near the old ticket booth, a tablet tucked under his arm. Younger than her by a decade, with the rosy-cheeked confidence of someone who had never had a case they couldn't close. "Bit of a weird one." "When did Control call it in?" "Anonymous tip at half three this morning. Camden Council works team found the access point had been forced. They thought it was rough sleepers." He gestured at the body with his tablet. "Victor Ashworth. Solicitor. His firm's in Mayfair." Quinn crouched at the edge of the chalk markings without crossing into them. The lines were clean, unsmudged. They had not been disturbed by Ashworth falling or struggling. Either he had walked calmly to the centre of the rings himself, or he had been placed there after they were drawn. "No signs of a struggle," Peters said, reading from the screen. "No ligature marks, no blunt force, no obvious cause. The pathologist thinks cardiac, but she flagged it as provisional." "How old is this station?" "Closed in 1967. Camden uses the upper level for storage." He paused. "You think someone has been coming here regularly?" Quinn stood. Her torch swept along the platform wall and found what she was already looking for — scratch marks at hip height, dozens of them, concentrated around a section of tile near the far arch. Not random. Repeated. The same spot. She walked to it, and the marks resolved into something that had been made by many hands over many visits: a groove worn into the mortar, roughly the size and shape of a fifty-pence piece. Circular. With a slight concave depression in the centre. "Get me a list of everyone reported missing in Camden in the last six months," she said. "Ashworth wasn't reported missing —" "Not for Ashworth." Peters typed something. Quinn moved back toward the body, and this time she looked at the floor between the chalk rings rather than the rings themselves. The dust lay thick and even across the platform except for two things: a worn path cutting in from the southern arch — foot traffic, recent, multiple visitors — and a small clean circle of tile roughly a metre from Ashworth's right hand, where something had been removed. She hunkered down and examined the clean circle with her torch. The tile was lighter here. An object had rested in that spot long enough to prevent the dust settling. Small. Circular or slightly irregular. Perhaps the size of a compass. "Cardiac makes sense," Peters said, appearing at her shoulder. "Man comes down here alone, some kind of urban explorer situation, gets spooked by the dark, his heart gives out. The markings might be old. Previous occupants." Quinn kept her torch on the clean tile. "The chalk isn't old." "How can you tell?" "Because the dust sits on top of the lines." She drew her finger parallel to the chalk, not touching it, and tilted her head so he could see the elevation. "If these had been here for months, the dust would have filled them in. These were drawn recently. Within the last few days." Peters chewed the inside of his cheek. "Could still be unconnected to Ashworth." "He's dead at the centre of them." "Coincidence." Quinn looked at him. He had the good grace to stop talking. She moved back toward the arch and crouched at the worn path. The foot traffic had come through the southern access repeatedly and moved in one direction: directly toward the platform and then stopped at the ticket booth. Several people. Different shoe sizes. The booth itself had been cleared of decades of detritus — she could see the clean rectangle of the counter beneath a film of recently settled grime, as though someone had wiped it down weeks ago and the station had since begun to reclaim it. A market. The thought arrived fully formed. This place had operated as a site of exchange. Regular visits. A worn groove for some kind of token or entry mechanism. A clear counter surface. Multiple visitors of different sizes. And then one night, someone who should not have been here at all. She turned and found Peters watching her with the expression of someone waiting to be told what to think. "Pull every Council access log for this station going back twelve months," she said. "And I want to know who owns the buildings on either side of the southern tunnel exit." "You think someone runs a — what, an illegal market down here?" "I think Victor Ashworth came into contact with something he didn't understand, and whoever was using this platform knew how to disappear before we arrived." She looked back at the clean circle of tile. "Something was taken from beside the body." "Could have been personal effects. Robbery." "Then why arrange him so carefully?" She straightened, rolling her left wrist to check her watch without looking away from the scene. "Robbery leaves mess. This was housekeeping." Peters made a note. Quinn walked a slow circuit of the outer chalk ring, her torch cutting across the geometry, and paused at the eastern edge where the markings were densest. Nested within the outer ring, so subtle she had almost read it as decoration: a row of small symbols, eight of them, pressed into the chalk with a stylus or a fine tool. She photographed each one separately with her phone, kept her expression neutral, and said nothing to Peters. She had seen that script before. Not on this case. Three years ago, in the rain, on the pavement outside a warehouse in Bermondsey where Morris had gone in alone and had not come back out again the same man.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1082
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1082
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"resolved"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1084
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.75% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount796
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Peters"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Quinn7
Peters8
Younger1
Ashworth2
Bermondsey1
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Peters"
2"Ashworth"
3"Morris"
places
0"Bermondsey"
globalScore0.997
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.768
wordCount1084
matches
0"not the usual cocktail of blood and forensic spray, but something older"
1"not graffiti, not gang tags, but something deliberate"
2"not gang tags, but something deliberate"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"seen that script"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean30.97
std24.78
cv0.8
sampleLengths
047
120
260
346
46
539
650
730
85
920
1086
1117
125
133
1474
1541
1636
1712
184
1953
2013
217
221
2312
2488
257
2644
2719
2831
2912
3041
316
3228
3381
3440
73.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences67
matches
0"been opened"
1"been disturbed"
2"been placed"
3"were drawn"
4"been made"
5"been removed"
6"been cleared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs112
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences87
ratio0.057
matches
0"The yellow tape had gone up around half the abandoned Tube platform before Quinn arrived, and the scene already smelled wrong — not the usual cocktail of blood and forensic spray, but something older."
1"Chalk markings covered the tiles in concentric rings — not graffiti, not gang tags, but something deliberate."
2"Her torch swept along the platform wall and found what she was already looking for — scratch marks at hip height, dozens of them, concentrated around a section of tile near the far arch."
3"The dust lay thick and even across the platform except for two things: a worn path cutting in from the southern arch — foot traffic, recent, multiple visitors — and a small clean circle of tile roughly a metre from Ashworth's right hand, where something had been removed."
4"The booth itself had been cleared of decades of detritus — she could see the clean rectangle of the counter beneath a film of recently settled grime, as though someone had wiped it down weeks ago and the station had since begun to reclaim it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount465
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.01935483870967742
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.008602150537634409
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean12.46
std10.94
cv0.878
sampleLengths
034
11
212
320
417
51
611
725
83
93
1020
1121
125
136
1432
157
1613
175
1810
1922
2011
2119
225
2312
248
252
2634
272
281
293
3035
311
328
3317
345
353
363
3723
3848
3911
405
4114
421
434
446
459
4627
478
484
494
94.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5862068965517241
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners51
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Perhaps the size of a"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences54
matches
0"She ducked under the tape"
1"He gestured at the body"
2"They had not been disturbed"
3"Her torch swept along the"
4"She walked to it, and"
5"She hunkered down and examined"
6"She drew her finger parallel"
7"He had the good grace"
8"She moved back toward the"
9"She turned and found Peters"
10"She looked back at the"
11"She straightened, rolling her left"
12"She photographed each one separately"
13"She had seen that script"
ratio0.259
89.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences54
matches
0"The yellow tape had gone"
1"She ducked under the tape"
2"Chalk markings covered the tiles"
3"The kind of thing that"
4"A single body lay at"
5"DS Peters materialised from a"
6"He gestured at the body"
7"Quinn crouched at the edge"
8"The lines were clean, unsmudged."
9"They had not been disturbed"
10"Peters said, reading from the"
11"Her torch swept along the"
12"The same spot."
13"She walked to it, and"
14"Peters typed something."
15"Quinn moved back toward the"
16"The dust lay thick and"
17"She hunkered down and examined"
18"The tile was lighter here."
19"An object had rested in"
ratio0.741
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Either he had walked calmly"
ratio0.019
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A single body lay at the centre of the outermost ring, face-up, arms arranged with the careful symmetry of someone who had taken their time."
1"Younger than her by a decade, with the rosy-cheeked confidence of someone who had never had a case they couldn't close."
2"She walked to it, and the marks resolved into something that had been made by many hands over many visits: a groove worn into the mortar, roughly the size and s…"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"DS Peters materialised, a tablet tucked under his arm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.6250%