Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSSW0E6E18K1AZ4WJS62Z5P

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Duration:
31.9s
Cost:
$0.024084
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past ten, three sharp raps that cut through the low hum of Brick Lane below. Rory looked up from the notes she'd spread across Eva's kitchen table — borrowed space while Eva was in Edinburgh for the week — and listened. Ptolemy lifted his head from the pile of scrolls he'd claimed as a bed, ears swivelling. Three more knocks. She crossed the room and pressed her eye to the peephole. The distorted fish-eye view gave her a pale figure in charcoal, silver-tipped cane resting against the corridor wall, platinum hair catching the single bare bulb overhead. She recognised the line of his shoulders before she'd even registered his face. Lucien. She held very still for a moment, one hand flat against the door, as if it were a living thing she was calming. Then she worked through the three deadbolts — Eva's paranoid installation, top to bottom — and pulled the door open. He looked, as he always looked, like something that had wandered in from a different and more expensive century. The charcoal suit was immaculate despite the hour, collar open by exactly one button. His mismatched eyes — amber and absolute black — moved over her with that particular efficiency of his, cataloguing, before they settled on her face. "Carter." "You have a phone," Rory said. "A very good phone. I've seen it." "I do." He reached down and retrieved his cane from the wall. "May I come in?" She leaned against the doorframe rather than stepping aside. The smell of the curry house drifted up the stairwell — turmeric, fenugreek, the ghost of a long evening service. Behind her, Ptolemy had relocated from the scrolls to the back of the sofa and was watching proceedings with professional disdain. "It's late," she said. "It is." He didn't elaborate, and he didn't apologise, and both of those things were so completely him that she felt something loosen in her chest despite herself. She stepped back. He moved through the doorway and his eyes swept the flat the way they always swept any room — exits, surfaces, occupants. He took in the tower of books on the side table, the research notes covering the floor in concentric circles of Eva's incomprehensible filing system, the remains of Rory's dinner still on the counter. He said nothing about any of it. She shut the door. Left the deadbolts. "Eva's away," she said, moving past him toward the kitchen. She needed something to do with her hands. "So whatever you need from her—" "I know she's away." Rory stopped. She turned around. He was still standing near the door, cane held loosely, watching her with that careful neutrality he'd perfected. It gave nothing away and it never had, except that she'd learned — over months, then absence, then the specific silence after Shoreditch — that the neutrality itself was information. "So you knew I'd be here," she said. "I thought it likely." "Right." She turned back to the counter, filled the kettle because the alternative was standing there with nothing between them but the question she wasn't going to ask. "Tea." It wasn't an offer. He accepted it anyway by pulling out a chair at the kitchen table, moving her notes aside with the kind of care that suggested he'd actually read them before touching them. The kettle ticked on its base. Ptolemy dropped from the sofa to the floor and walked directly to Lucien and sat on his shoe. Traitor. "You could have texted," Rory said to the kettle. "I could have." A pause. "I wasn't certain you'd respond." The honesty of that landed differently than she'd expected. She'd braced for the deflection, the lateral step he usually took around anything personal. She poured the water, fished out two mugs, and had to consciously loosen her grip on the handle of the second one. She set them both on the table and sat down across from him. The notes were between them — Eva's handwriting and Rory's, two different kinds of chaos overlapping. Lucien's hands rested on the table, long fingers loose, the faint old scar along his right knuckle catching the overhead light. He was looking at her rather than the tea. "You left," she said. It came out quieter than she'd intended. "I did." "After Shoreditch." She wrapped both hands around her mug. The heat was almost too much. "You were just gone." "There were complications." His jaw tightened, fractional, the only visible crack. "With the Avaros situation. I had to move quickly and I couldn't—" He stopped. Started again. "I made a calculation." "That's a very Lucien word for it." "Rory." The use of her name rather than her surname did something specific to the space between her ribs. He so rarely used it. She looked up. The amber eye and the black eye held equal weight when he looked at her like that — no hierarchy between them, no deflection. Just him, the real version she'd caught in unguarded moments and never been entirely sure she hadn't invented. "I calculated," he said, "that if I explained I was leaving, you would try to come with me." "I would have." "Yes." Something moved across his face. "That was the problem." The kettle had long since gone quiet. Somewhere below them, the curry house was closing up, the last of its noise filtering up through the floorboards. Ptolemy had curled himself across Lucien's foot and begun to purr at a volume entirely disproportionate to his size. Rory looked at the man across the table — the careful construction of him, suit and cane and fluency in four languages and the particular loneliness she recognised because she knew its shape from the inside — and felt the months of silence rearrange themselves into something she hadn't let herself name before. "You should have asked," she said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.968
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.065
69.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount969
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"loosely"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"completely"
2"loosely"
3"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount969
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"calculated"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"calculated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords981
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount858
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Eva5
Edinburgh1
Ptolemy4
Rory7
Shoreditch1
Lucien4
Started1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Edinburgh"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount981
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean21.33
std18.7
cv0.877
sampleLengths
062
13
211
339
41
523
620
758
81
913
1016
1150
124
1328
143
1563
167
1724
184
192
2051
218
224
2329
2435
256
2619
279
2810
2945
3013
3146
3211
332
3419
3531
367
371
3826
3942
4018
413
4210
4345
4453
456
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs131
matches
0"was watching"
1"was standing"
2"was looking"
3"was closing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences82
ratio0.11
matches
0"Rory looked up from the notes she'd spread across Eva's kitchen table — borrowed space while Eva was in Edinburgh for the week — and listened."
1"Then she worked through the three deadbolts — Eva's paranoid installation, top to bottom — and pulled the door open."
2"His mismatched eyes — amber and absolute black — moved over her with that particular efficiency of his, cataloguing, before they settled on her face."
3"The smell of the curry house drifted up the stairwell — turmeric, fenugreek, the ghost of a long evening service."
4"He moved through the doorway and his eyes swept the flat the way they always swept any room — exits, surfaces, occupants."
5"It gave nothing away and it never had, except that she'd learned — over months, then absence, then the specific silence after Shoreditch — that the neutrality itself was information."
6"The notes were between them — Eva's handwriting and Rory's, two different kinds of chaos overlapping."
7"The amber eye and the black eye held equal weight when he looked at her like that — no hierarchy between them, no deflection."
8"Rory looked at the man across the table — the careful construction of him, suit and cane and fluency in four languages and the particular loneliness she recognised because she knew its shape from the inside — and felt the months of silence rearrange themselves into something she hadn't let herself name before."
92.59% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount846
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.04846335697399527
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.014184397163120567
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean11.96
std9.7
cv0.811
sampleLengths
020
126
216
33
411
526
613
71
823
920
1019
1114
1225
131
146
157
1612
174
189
1920
2021
214
2228
233
2422
2534
267
274
283
2910
308
316
324
332
343
3518
3630
378
384
3928
401
414
4231
436
4418
451
469
475
485
499
52.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.36585365853658536
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences55
matches
0"Then she worked through the"
1"Just him, the real version"
2"Somewhere below them, the curry"
ratio0.055
1.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences55
matches
0"She crossed the room and"
1"She recognised the line of"
2"She held very still for"
3"He looked, as he always"
4"His mismatched eyes — amber"
5"He reached down and retrieved"
6"She leaned against the doorframe"
7"He didn't elaborate, and he"
8"She stepped back."
9"He moved through the doorway"
10"He took in the tower"
11"He said nothing about any"
12"She shut the door."
13"she said, moving past him"
14"She needed something to do"
15"She turned around."
16"He was still standing near"
17"It gave nothing away and"
18"She turned back to the"
19"It wasn't an offer."
ratio0.545
14.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences55
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory looked up from the"
2"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
3"She crossed the room and"
4"The distorted fish-eye view gave"
5"She recognised the line of"
6"She held very still for"
7"He looked, as he always"
8"The charcoal suit was immaculate"
9"His mismatched eyes — amber"
10"He reached down and retrieved"
11"She leaned against the doorframe"
12"The smell of the curry"
13"He didn't elaborate, and he"
14"She stepped back."
15"He moved through the doorway"
16"He took in the tower"
17"He said nothing about any"
18"She shut the door."
19"she said, moving past him"
ratio0.891
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The knock came at half past ten, three sharp raps that cut through the low hum of Brick Lane below."
1"She held very still for a moment, one hand flat against the door, as if it were a living thing she was calming."
2"He looked, as he always looked, like something that had wandered in from a different and more expensive century."
3"He accepted it anyway by pulling out a chair at the kitchen table, moving her notes aside with the kind of care that suggested he'd actually read them before to…"
4"Somewhere below them, the curry house was closing up, the last of its noise filtering up through the floorboards."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.258
leniency0.516
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.7869%