| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.346 | | leniency | 0.692 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 95.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1077 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
|
| | highlights | | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 81.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1077 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "framework" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "electric" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1083 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 871 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.8 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Quinn | 7 | | Victorian | 1 | | Patel | 3 | | Dr | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.77 | | wordCount | 1083 | | matches | | 0 | "not the slack vacancy of a man surprised by death but something closer to relief" | | 1 | "not graffiti, not the bored geometry of teenagers, but careful, repeating symbols, the kind" | | 2 | "not the bored geometry of teenagers, but careful, repeating symbols, the kind" |
| |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 27.77 | | std | 25.05 | | cv | 0.902 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 84 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 61 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 89 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 68 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 53 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 42 | | 38 | 8 |
| |
| 89.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "were handwritten" | | 1 | "been swept" | | 2 | "was gone" |
| |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 134 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station smelled of damp concrete and something older — a mineral sharpness that caught at the back of Quinn's throat the moment she ducked under the police tape." | | 1 | "A row of old enamel signs — CAMDEN TOWN in faded blue — and beneath them, along the base of the wall, a collection of objects that stopped her mid-stride." | | 2 | "He wore a good coat — good enough that its presence in this place was its own kind of evidence." | | 3 | "The concrete was dusty with age, and in the dust she could see the impressions of feet — dozens of them, overlapping, a record of movement that spoke to regular use of this space." | | 4 | "Around its perimeter someone had scratched marks into the concrete — not graffiti, not the bored geometry of teenagers, but careful, repeating symbols, the kind that carried intention in every line." | | 5 | "The cold came out of it steadily, and there was something beneath the mineral smell now — a warmth that had no business being there, faint and electric, like the air before a storm breaks." |
| |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 866 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.019630484988452657 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006928406466512702 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 12.89 | | std | 10.43 | | cv | 0.809 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 31 | | 47 | 38 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 1 |
| |
| 75.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4880952380952381 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 84.41% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Her torch swept the platform" | | 1 | "She checked her watch." | | 2 | "She directed the question at" | | 3 | "He tilted his head toward" | | 4 | "She walked the length of" | | 5 | "She crouched in front of" | | 6 | "She'd learned over eighteen years" | | 7 | "He wore a good coat" | | 8 | "She looked at his face." | | 9 | "Her torchlight dropped to the" | | 10 | "She walked to it now." | | 11 | "He came over." | | 12 | "He looked at the circle," | | 13 | "She was not a superstitious" | | 14 | "She had no framework for" | | 15 | "She stood and turned back" | | 16 | "It had sat in the" | | 17 | "She looked at the tunnel." | | 18 | "She moved to the tunnel" | | 19 | "She was about to step" |
| | ratio | 0.339 | |
| 36.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station smelled" | | 1 | "Her torch swept the platform" | | 2 | "The beam caught fractured Victorian" | | 3 | "She checked her watch." | | 4 | "Half two in the morning." | | 5 | "She directed the question at" | | 6 | "He tilted his head toward" | | 7 | "She walked the length of" | | 8 | "A row of old enamel" | | 9 | "Tables fashioned from wooden pallets." | | 10 | "Brass fittings and glass jars" | | 11 | "She crouched in front of" | | 12 | "Powders in colours she had" | | 13 | "A sealed vessel with something" | | 14 | "The labels were handwritten in" | | 15 | "Patel appeared at her shoulder" | | 16 | "Quinn straightened and moved on" | | 17 | "She'd learned over eighteen years" | | 18 | "The body was at the" | | 19 | "The forensic pathologist, a compact" |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station smelled of damp concrete and something older — a mineral sharpness that caught at the back of Quinn's throat the moment she ducked un…" | | 1 | "The beam caught fractured Victorian tiles, a collapsed ticket booth, and three forensic officers in white suits who moved between numbered yellow markers like g…" | | 2 | "A row of old enamel signs — CAMDEN TOWN in faded blue — and beneath them, along the base of the wall, a collection of objects that stopped her mid-stride." | | 3 | "The concrete was dusty with age, and in the dust she could see the impressions of feet — dozens of them, overlapping, a record of movement that spoke to regular…" | | 4 | "Around its perimeter someone had scratched marks into the concrete — not graffiti, not the bored geometry of teenagers, but careful, repeating symbols, the kind…" | | 5 | "The cold came out of it steadily, and there was something beneath the mineral smell now — a warmth that had no business being there, faint and electric, like th…" |
| |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.154 | | leniency | 0.308 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |