Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSSW0E7VVA8TSFATTZN0G9D

Run Details

Duration:
34.8s
Cost:
$0.028668
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The portal had tasted like copper and cold fire, and now Rory stood on the other side of it with her boots sinking slightly into earth that was too soft, too warm, too alive beneath her feet. Dymas. She didn't say it aloud. None of them did. The word felt presumptuous against a place like this. The sky above her was the colour of a bruised peach, amber deepening at the horizon into something almost molten, though there was no visible sun to account for it. The light simply existed, sourceless and thick, pressing against her skin like standing too close to an open oven. She lifted her hand and watched the light pool strangely across her knuckles, casting shadows in the wrong directions. "We're moving." Nyx didn't step through the portal so much as peel away from the shadow it left behind, their silhouette assembling itself at the edge of Rory's peripheral vision. Their violet eyes swept the landscape with an expression that was hard to read on a face made of darkness. "Standing at the threshold makes us visible." "Visible to what?" Rory asked. "Everything." She moved. The ground rose gently ahead of them, terraced in wide shallow steps like a hillside carved by a patient and obsessive hand. Vines covered every level. They climbed iron trellises shaped into forms that, if she looked at them directly, resembled reaching hands — fingers spread wide, knuckles bent. She looked away from them. The grapes that hung from the vines were extraordinary things, swollen far beyond any natural proportion, clusters of them drooping nearly to the earth, their skins stretched translucent and luminous. Deep purple, deep black, deep red. Some she couldn't name a colour for at all. Isolde moved at her left side, silver hair catching the amber light, and left no footprints in the soft earth behind her. Rory had stopped finding that unsettling three weeks ago. Mostly. "The air is wrong," Isolde said. She tilted her head up, pale lavender eyes half-closed. "It carries too much. Sweetness upon sweetness until the sweetness becomes a kind of pressure." She was right. The air tasted of fermenting fruit and something underneath that — something headier and less definable, like the memory of a meal eaten somewhere long ago. It sat at the back of Rory's throat and refused to clear. "Don't eat anything," Rory said, mostly to herself. "A redundant instruction for those of us without appetite," Nyx replied. "I was talking to myself." They crested the first terrace and stopped. Below them, the vineyard opened into a valley so wide and so dense with life that for a moment Rory couldn't organise what she was seeing into separate components. Orchards ran in long geometric rows, trees laden past reason with fruit in impossible colours — gold rinds, silver skins, flesh that glowed faintly from within as though lit by something small and warm buried at each core. Between the orchards, market paths wound through stalls and open-air kitchens, each one attended by figures bent over clay pots or long stone tables. Smoke rose from a dozen fires in thin, sweetly scented columns. Somewhere beneath all of it, a sound like a vast and distant crowd — not chaotic, but rhythmic, almost ceremonial. "A competition," Isolde said. "They are mid-feast." "Good." Rory pressed her fingers briefly against the outside of her jacket, felt the faint warmth of the Heartstone through the fabric. It pulsed — slow, steady, almost like a second heartbeat slotting alongside her own. "That means they're distracted." Nyx shifted beside her, their edges softening. In daylight — or whatever passed for daylight here — it was harder for them to fully dissolve, but their silhouette blurred and stretched, bleeding shadow across the path ahead like ink dropped into water. "The soul we're looking for is in the lower kitchens," they said. "Near the third orchard. I can feel the binding from here." "How?" "Bound souls have a particular silence to them." A pause. "Everything around them vibrates. They do not." They descended. The path between the terraces was narrow and paved with flat stones that had been laid without mortar and had since grown apart, pale yellow moss filling the gaps between them. The moss was warm underfoot, almost uncomfortably so, and Rory found herself taking slightly longer strides than necessary to keep contact with it brief. Above her, the iron trellises continued their reaching. She kept her eyes forward. At the base of the second terrace, they passed a fountain. It was the first thing she'd seen in Dymas that was clearly decorative rather than functional, and it arrested her for a moment in spite of herself. The basin was white stone, carved in relief with figures frozen in the act of reaching toward its centre, where water flowed upward in a single column before spreading in a wide curtain back down into the basin. Not a trick of pressure or pipe. The water simply rose. It caught the amber light and fractured it into dozens of small burning points, scattering across the path. Rory reached out and let a single drop land on the back of her hand. It was warm. It smelled of overripe plum and something older beneath it, something she had no name for — the smell of deep earth and great age and things fermenting in darkness over very long spans of time. She wiped her hand on her jacket and moved on. Isolde had paused a few steps ahead, her posture very still, her face turned toward the nearest orchard. One of the trees had a fruit she couldn't identify — roughly pear-shaped, but black, perfectly black, with a surface that reflected no light at all. A small absence in the shape of a fruit. "What is it?" Rory asked quietly. "An answer I was not yet asked a question for." Isolde turned away from the tree. "Continue." They reached the lower path. Around them the noise of the feast grew, the rhythmic sound resolving itself into something closer to music — low and repetitive, punctuated by sounds that might have been approval or might have been something else entirely. And then Rory felt it. Amid all the warmth and sweetness and living pressure of this place, something ahead was cold. Not cold the way the Fae blade was cold, not the cool of shadow or stone. Cold the way absence was cold. The space where something should have been vibrating and wasn't. Nyx was already looking at her. "The third orchard," she said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
59.09% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory asked quietly [quietly]"
1"Isolde turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.182
67.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1089
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"sweetly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"sweetly"
3"very"
4"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1089
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"fractured"
count1
6
word"resolving"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"rhythmic"
2"warmth"
3"pulsed"
4"silence"
5"fractured"
6"resolving"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences71
matches
0"d in relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1095
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.90% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount982
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Nyx4
Heartstone1
Dymas2
Isolde5
Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Dymas"
globalScore0.889
windowScore1
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like copper and cold fire, and now"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.913
wordCount1095
matches
0"not chaotic, but rhythmic, almost ceremonial"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean28.82
std29.71
cv1.031
sampleLengths
037
11
218
368
457
55
61
72
899
932
1030
1141
128
1311
145
157
16122
177
1840
1942
2023
211
2217
232
2468
2511
2694
2715
2839
2910
3053
316
3217
3342
345
3548
366
375
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"been laid"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was seeing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences81
ratio0.111
matches
0"They climbed iron trellises shaped into forms that, if she looked at them directly, resembled reaching hands — fingers spread wide, knuckles bent."
1"The air tasted of fermenting fruit and something underneath that — something headier and less definable, like the memory of a meal eaten somewhere long ago."
2"Orchards ran in long geometric rows, trees laden past reason with fruit in impossible colours — gold rinds, silver skins, flesh that glowed faintly from within as though lit by something small and warm buried at each core."
3"Somewhere beneath all of it, a sound like a vast and distant crowd — not chaotic, but rhythmic, almost ceremonial."
4"It pulsed — slow, steady, almost like a second heartbeat slotting alongside her own."
5"In daylight — or whatever passed for daylight here — it was harder for them to fully dissolve, but their silhouette blurred and stretched, bleeding shadow across the path ahead like ink dropped into water."
6"It smelled of overripe plum and something older beneath it, something she had no name for — the smell of deep earth and great age and things fermenting in darkness over very long spans of time."
7"One of the trees had a fruit she couldn't identify — roughly pear-shaped, but black, perfectly black, with a surface that reflected no light at all."
8"Around them the noise of the feast grew, the rhythmic sound resolving itself into something closer to music — low and repetitive, punctuated by sounds that might have been approval or might have been something else entirely."
84.60% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount975
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, pressing against her"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.050256410256410255
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.020512820512820513
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean13.52
std10.54
cv0.779
sampleLengths
037
11
25
34
49
530
619
719
830
920
107
115
121
132
1422
154
1623
175
1830
196
209
2122
229
231
246
259
2615
273
2826
2912
308
3111
325
337
3429
3538
3624
3711
3820
394
403
4122
4214
434
447
4535
4612
4711
481
4910
83.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5308641975308642
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners43
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Somewhere beneath all of it,"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences60
matches
0"She didn't say it aloud."
1"She lifted her hand and"
2"Their violet eyes swept the"
3"They climbed iron trellises shaped"
4"She looked away from them."
5"She tilted her head up,"
6"She was right."
7"It sat at the back"
8"They crested the first terrace"
9"It pulsed — slow, steady,"
10"She kept her eyes forward."
11"It was the first thing"
12"It caught the amber light"
13"It was warm."
14"It smelled of overripe plum"
15"She wiped her hand on"
16"They reached the lower path."
ratio0.283
76.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences60
matches
0"The portal had tasted like"
1"She didn't say it aloud."
2"None of them did."
3"The word felt presumptuous against"
4"The sky above her was"
5"The light simply existed, sourceless"
6"She lifted her hand and"
7"Nyx didn't step through the"
8"Their violet eyes swept the"
9"The ground rose gently ahead"
10"Vines covered every level."
11"They climbed iron trellises shaped"
12"She looked away from them."
13"The grapes that hung from"
14"Some she couldn't name a"
15"Isolde moved at her left"
16"Rory had stopped finding that"
17"She tilted her head up,"
18"She was right."
19"The air tasted of fermenting"
ratio0.767
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The portal had tasted like copper and cold fire, and now Rory stood on the other side of it with her boots sinking slightly into earth that was too soft, too wa…"
1"The grapes that hung from the vines were extraordinary things, swollen far beyond any natural proportion, clusters of them drooping nearly to the earth, their s…"
2"Orchards ran in long geometric rows, trees laden past reason with fruit in impossible colours — gold rinds, silver skins, flesh that glowed faintly from within …"
3"The path between the terraces was narrow and paved with flat stones that had been laid without mortar and had since grown apart, pale yellow moss filling the ga…"
4"It was the first thing she'd seen in Dymas that was clearly decorative rather than functional, and it arrested her for a moment in spite of herself."
5"One of the trees had a fruit she couldn't identify — roughly pear-shaped, but black, perfectly black, with a surface that reflected no light at all."
6"Around them the noise of the feast grew, the rhythmic sound resolving itself into something closer to music — low and repetitive, punctuated by sounds that migh…"
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, mostly to herself"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.409
leniency0.818
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.091
81.7450%