Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSWEX6FA5P3S4A8P3JERM5G

Run Details

Duration:
37.2s
Cost:
$0.006213
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The amber light hit Aurora's face like a warm palm, strange and heavy against her skin. She blinked, eyes struggling to adjust after the darkness of the portal. Her boots sank into something soft—grass, but thicker than any grass she'd felt before, each blade rising to her ankle like the fur of some sleeping beast. "By all the—" She caught herself, one hand flying to the Heartstone at her collarbone. The crimson gem pulsed against her fingers, warm as fresh tea, warmer than it had ever been. Nyx materialised beside her, their shadowy form coalescing from the darkness beneath an ancient oak that twisted sideways out of soil the colour of rust. Their violet eyes swept the landscape. "We are not alone in this place." "That's comforting. Thanks for that." The Shadow drifted forward, their form leaving no impression in the strange grass. Aurora followed, each step accompanied by a soft crunch that sounded too loud in the stillness. She looked back. No footprints. The grass straightened behind her like nothing had passed. Ahead, the land rolled in gentle hills covered in vineyards. Grapes the size of plums hung in heavy clusters, their skins gleaming purple-black in the perpetual amber twilight. No sun hung in the sky—just that warm diffuse glow, sourceless, as if the air itself remembered what daylight felt like and couldn't quite let go. "Where is this?" "Dymas." Nyx's whisper carried an edge Aurora had never heard before. "One of the seven realms of Hel." Aurora stopped walking. Her hand moved from the Heartstone to the Fae blade at her hip, fingers brushing the moonsilver hilt. Cold. Always cold, even here. "Hell. We're in actual Hell." "Hel. There is a distinction, though you may not appreciate it yet." "Try me." Nyx turned, their features shifting within the shadows of their face—a trick of the light, or something more intentional, Aurora couldn't tell. "Hell is your religion's invention. Hel is older. Seven principalities, seven... inclinations. This one belongs to Belphegor." "And what's his thing? What's this place about?" The Shadow said nothing. Instead, they gestured toward the horizon, where the vineyards gave way to orchards heavy with fruit Aurora couldn't name—globes of sunset orange and deep violet, things that looked like crosses between pomegranates and lanterns, their skins translucent enough to show the glow of seeds within. A smell reached her then. Sweet, overwhelmingly so. Honey and wine and something like roasting meat, all layered together in a way that made her stomach clench with sudden violent hunger. Her mouth watered. She swallowed hard. "I wouldn't." Nyx's voice came from directly beside her ear, though they hadn't appeared to move. Aurora flinched, stepping back. "Wouldn't what?" "Trust your appetite here." She looked down at her hands. They were trembling. Not from fear—from want. The ache in her stomach felt like a living thing, clawing upward toward her throat. "What is this?" "Gluttony." Nyx drifted toward the nearest vine, reaching with a hand that passed through the leaves without disturbing them. "Everything here is meant to be consumed. And everything here consumes in return." Aurora forced her feet to move, putting distance between herself and the grapes. Each step felt like wading through warm honey. The air had weight here, pressing against her skin like hands. They walked in silence for what might have been minutes or hours—time moved strangely, she realised, the amber light never shifting, never dimming. The vineyards gave way to gardens where flowers bloomed in spirals, their petals shifting through colours as she watched—blue to purple to red to gold, never settling, always hungry for attention. A fountain appeared ahead, carved from white stone worn smooth by centuries of water. The liquid that cascaded down its tiers wasn't water. It was too thick, too golden, catching the light like syrup. The smell of it hit her before she could identify what it was—mead, maybe, or something older, sweeter, fermented from fruits that hadn't grown on Earth in millennia. A figure sat on the fountain's edge. Aurora's hand found her blade. The figure was human-shaped, but wrong in ways that made her eyes hurt. Too tall, limbs stretching into shadow at the edges. Its face shifted constantly—young, old, beautiful, grotesque—never settling long enough for her to pin down a single feature. It wore what might have been fine clothes once, now stained with the golden liquid from the fountain. It hadn't seen them yet. Or was pretending not to. "Helbound." Nyx's whisper barely qualified as sound. "A soul contracted to this place." "A soul? Like... a dead person?" "Like someone who traded themselves for something. Now they serve the realm. Serve its appetite." The Helbound raised its head. Its shifting face stretched into something like a smile. "Guests." The word came out sticky, slow. "We haven't had guests in so very long." Aurora held her ground. Her heart hammered against her ribs, but her voice came out steady enough. "We're just passing through." "Passing through." The thing laughed, a sound like wind through dead leaves. "No one passes through Dymas. You stay. You taste. You become." It rose from the fountain's edge. Its movements were jerky, puppet-like, as if strings attached to limbs it could no longer feel. "Prince Belphegor will want to see you. He so loves new faces." "We're not here to see anyone." "Everyone is here to see him." The Helbound shuffled closer. Up close, Aurora could see the details she'd missed before—the way its skin seemed too thin, stretched over bones that showed through at the joints, the way its eyes held too many colours at once, swirling like oil on water. "He sees everything. Feeds on everything. This whole realm is his table, and you—" Nyx moved between them. Their shadowy form expanded, darkness spilling outward like ink in water. The temperature dropped sharply. "She said we are passing through." The Helbound recoiled. Its shifting face cycled through fear, hunger, rage, and something else—something like recognition. "Shade." The word came out as a hiss. "One of the in-between." "I will not ask again." For a moment, nothing moved. The amber light seemed to darken, shadows lengthening toward the Helbound like reaching fingers. Then the creature stepped back, its form flickering. "The grove. You seek the Seer's grove." Aurora's grip on her blade tightened. "How do you know that?" "Everyone seeks something." The Helbound's face settled briefly into an expression of pity. "The grove lies beyond the orchards. Follow the smell of pomegranates, but do not eat. Do not drink. Do not accept what is offered." It turned away, shuffling back toward the fountain. "Your friend knows the way. The in-between always know the paths." Nyx made no move to stop it. They watched the Helbound sink back onto the fountain's edge, reaching with trembling hands to cup the golden liquid, drinking deeply, its form flickering with each swallow. "This way." The Shadow moved without waiting for her. Aurora followed, her boots sinking into the rust-coloured soil, her hand still on her blade. Behind her, the fountain continued to flow, and the Helbound continued to drink, and the amber light pressed down like a hand on her shoulder. She didn't look back.
created_at"2026-02-19T02:42:57.147Z" 2/19/2026, 2:42:57 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.175
leniency0.35
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"stomach"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"comforting"
2"gleaming"
3"whisper"
4"stomach"
5"weight"
6"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
89.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1200
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount945
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Heartstone2
Shadow3
Fae1
Earth1
Helbound7
Nyx8
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Shadow"
2"Helbound"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Heartstone"
1"Fae"
globalScore0.812
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"quite let go"
1"felt like and couldn't quite let go"
2"looked like crosses between pomegranates"
3"something like roasting meat, all layered to"
4"felt like a living thing, clawing upwar"
5"felt like wading through warm honey"
6"appeared ahead carved from white stone worn smooth by centuries of water"
7"something like a smile"
8"something like recognition"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1200
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean20.34
std17.56
cv0.864
sampleLengths
055
132
231
37
45
543
654
73
818
926
105
1112
122
1339
148
1549
1631
176
182
1918
202
214
2228
233
2432
2532
2654
2762
287
295
3058
3110
3213
336
3415
3514
3615
3717
384
3923
4022
4112
426
4364
4419
456
4616
4712
485
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was pretending"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences112
ratio0.098
matches
0"Her boots sank into something soft—grass, but thicker than any grass she'd felt before, each blade rising to her ankle like the fur of some sleeping beast."
1"No sun hung in the sky—just that warm diffuse glow, sourceless, as if the air itself remembered what daylight felt like and couldn't quite let go."
2"Nyx turned, their features shifting within the shadows of their face—a trick of the light, or something more intentional, Aurora couldn't tell."
3"Instead, they gestured toward the horizon, where the vineyards gave way to orchards heavy with fruit Aurora couldn't name—globes of sunset orange and deep violet, things that looked like crosses between pomegranates and lanterns, their skins translucent enough to show the glow of seeds within."
4"Not from fear—from want."
5"They walked in silence for what might have been minutes or hours—time moved strangely, she realised, the amber light never shifting, never dimming."
6"The vineyards gave way to gardens where flowers bloomed in spirals, their petals shifting through colours as she watched—blue to purple to red to gold, never settling, always hungry for attention."
7"The smell of it hit her before she could identify what it was—mead, maybe, or something older, sweeter, fermented from fruits that hadn't grown on Earth in millennia."
8"Its face shifted constantly—young, old, beautiful, grotesque—never settling long enough for her to pin down a single feature."
9"Up close, Aurora could see the details she'd missed before—the way its skin seemed too thin, stretched over bones that showed through at the joints, the way its eyes held too many colours at once, swirling like oil on water."
10"Its shifting face cycled through fear, hunger, rage, and something else—something like recognition."
94.94% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount961
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.045785639958376693
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008324661810613945
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean10.71
std8.07
cv0.754
sampleLengths
016
112
227
315
417
525
66
77
85
913
1016
113
122
139
1410
1518
1626
173
1811
197
203
2118
221
234
245
2512
262
2722
2817
298
304
3145
325
333
3423
353
363
372
3814
394
402
414
426
433
444
4515
463
4719
4813
4913
77.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4732142857142857
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners53
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences79
matches
0"Always cold, even here."
1"Instead, they gestured toward the"
2"Too tall, limbs stretching into"
3"Then the creature stepped back,"
ratio0.051
98.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences79
matches
0"She blinked, eyes struggling to"
1"Her boots sank into something"
2"She caught herself, one hand"
3"Their violet eyes swept the"
4"She looked back."
5"Her hand moved from the"
6"Her mouth watered."
7"She swallowed hard."
8"She looked down at her"
9"They were trembling."
10"They walked in silence for"
11"It was too thick, too"
12"Its face shifted constantly—young, old,"
13"It wore what might have"
14"It hadn't seen them yet."
15"Its shifting face stretched into"
16"Her heart hammered against her"
17"It rose from the fountain's"
18"Its movements were jerky, puppet-like,"
19"Their shadowy form expanded, darkness"
ratio0.304
35.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences79
matches
0"The amber light hit Aurora's"
1"She blinked, eyes struggling to"
2"Her boots sank into something"
3"She caught herself, one hand"
4"The crimson gem pulsed against"
5"Nyx materialised beside her, their"
6"Their violet eyes swept the"
7"The Shadow drifted forward, their"
8"Aurora followed, each step accompanied"
9"She looked back."
10"The grass straightened behind her"
11"Grapes the size of plums"
12"Nyx's whisper carried an edge"
13"Aurora stopped walking."
14"Her hand moved from the"
15"Nyx turned, their features shifting"
16"The Shadow said nothing."
17"A smell reached her then."
18"Honey and wine and something"
19"Her mouth watered."
ratio0.848
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Aurora followed, each step accompanied by a soft crunch that sounded too loud in the stillness."
1"No sun hung in the sky—just that warm diffuse glow, sourceless, as if the air itself remembered what daylight felt like and couldn't quite let go."
2"Instead, they gestured toward the horizon, where the vineyards gave way to orchards heavy with fruit Aurora couldn't name—globes of sunset orange and deep viole…"
3"Honey and wine and something like roasting meat, all layered together in a way that made her stomach clench with sudden violent hunger."
4"The vineyards gave way to gardens where flowers bloomed in spirals, their petals shifting through colours as she watched—blue to purple to red to gold, never se…"
5"The smell of it hit her before she could identify what it was—mead, maybe, or something older, sweeter, fermented from fruits that hadn't grown on Earth in mill…"
6"Its movements were jerky, puppet-like, as if strings attached to limbs it could no longer feel."
7"Up close, Aurora could see the details she'd missed before—the way its skin seemed too thin, stretched over bones that showed through at the joints, the way its…"
8"They watched the Helbound sink back onto the fountain's edge, reaching with trembling hands to cup the golden liquid, drinking deeply, its form flickering with …"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"The word came out, slow"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"The thing laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.025
leniency0.05
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.05
79.5344%