| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.36 | | leniency | 0.72 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1218 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1218 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "quickened" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "lurched" | | 8 | "tinged" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "resonated" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "silk" | | 14 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.17% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1226 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1063 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.22 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Heartstone | 2 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Fae-forged" |
| | globalScore | 0.889 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like polished glass" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.447 | | wordCount | 1226 | | matches | | 0 | "not people, she realised, but something else" | | 1 | "not the strange sky above, but something else entirely" | | 2 | "not painfully, but urgently, pulling her forward" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 29.19 | | std | 23.29 | | cv | 0.798 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 85 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 71 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 55 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 58 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 41 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 71 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 48 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 19 |
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| 88.15% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "been carved" | | 1 | "were made" | | 2 | "were worn" | | 3 | "been woven" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.133 | | matches | | 0 | "Each oak trunk had been carved with symbols she didn't recognise — spirals that hurt to look at directly, and shapes that shifted when she turned her head." | | 1 | "They passed between two stones — and vanished." | | 2 | "Colours bled past her peripheral vision — greens too vivid, purples that had no business existing in nature." | | 3 | "Between their trunks, she caught glimpses of deeper forest — shadows that moved with purpose, shapes that watched." | | 4 | "In this place, they almost looked human — if humans were made of darkness and starlight and regret." | | 5 | "Not warmth, not cold — something else." | | 6 | "Her shoulder-length hair lifted in a breeze she couldn't feel, and the crescent scar on her wrist began to itch — an old sensation, one she hadn't experienced since childhood." | | 7 | "Benches of woven silver branches that supported sleeping figures — not people, she realised, but something else." | | 8 | "A sound drifted through the clearing — pipes, maybe, or wind through hollow reeds." | | 9 | "The surface reflected not the strange sky above, but something else entirely — a constellation she didn't recognise, stars arranged in patterns that hurt to look at for too long." | | 10 | "\"Careful.\" A hand caught her elbow — solid, unexpectedly warm." | | 11 | "It burned against her skin — not painfully, but urgently, pulling her forward." | | 12 | "Their surfaces were worn nearly smooth, but she could still make out carvings — hands reaching toward one another, never quite touching." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1055 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "ice-cold against her" | | 1 | "different: sweeter, heavier, like" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.037914691943127965 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009478672985781991 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 12.51 | | std | 8.17 | | cv | 0.653 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 71.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.45918367346938777 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 85.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Then her feet found solid" | | 1 | "Even the light seemed to" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed with gentle warmth" | | 1 | "They passed between two stones" | | 2 | "Her trainers squelched in the" | | 3 | "She could see her own" | | 4 | "She stepped through." | | 5 | "It swirled with colours she" | | 6 | "She knelt, pressing her palm" | | 7 | "Her shoulder-length hair lifted in" | | 8 | "She rubbed at it absently" | | 9 | "It wound between the trees" | | 10 | "She stepped back." | | 11 | "Her heel caught on a" | | 12 | "She glimpsed something beneath the" | | 13 | "Their form flowed backward, becoming" | | 14 | "It burned against her skin" | | 15 | "Their surfaces were worn nearly" | | 16 | "Her skin held the luminescence" | | 17 | "She wore a gown that" | | 18 | "Her voice layered over itself," | | 19 | "Its hilt was ice against" |
| | ratio | 0.256 | |
| 49.74% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Rory counted seven of them," | | 2 | "Each oak trunk had been" | | 3 | "Nyx's voice came from everywhere" | | 4 | "Rory's hand drifted to the" | | 5 | "It pulsed with gentle warmth" | | 6 | "The silver chain felt ice-cold" | | 7 | "Nyx flowed forward, their violet" | | 8 | "They passed between two stones" | | 9 | "Rory swore under her breath." | | 10 | "Her trainers squelched in the" | | 11 | "The air here tasted different:" | | 12 | "She could see her own" | | 13 | "She stepped through." | | 14 | "The world folded." | | 15 | "Colours bled past her peripheral" | | 16 | "The grove opened before her" | | 17 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 18 | "The sky here wasn't London's" | | 19 | "It swirled with colours she" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 64.10% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Because it wasn't just trees." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from the earth like the ribs of some buried giant, their surfaces slick with moss that shimmered faintly in the pre-dawn gloom." | | 1 | "Rory counted seven of them, arranged in a rough circle that seemed too perfect, too deliberate for anything natural." | | 2 | "It pulsed with gentle warmth against her collarbone, a steady rhythm that quickened as she stepped closer to the circle's centre." | | 3 | "Colours bled past her peripheral vision — greens too vivid, purples that had no business existing in nature." | | 4 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in waves of violet and gold, their petals luminescent in the amber-tinged light that filtered down from somewhere above." | | 5 | "Rory followed it, her boots leaving impressions in the soft earth that filled with pale light before fading." | | 6 | "A well carved from a single massive gemstone, its water rising impossibly high before tumbling back down." | | 7 | "The surface reflected not the strange sky above, but something else entirely — a constellation she didn't recognise, stars arranged in patterns that hurt to loo…" | | 8 | "The woman was slight, no taller than Rory herself, with silver hair that cascaded to her waist and moved as if underwater." | | 9 | "Her skin held the luminescence of moonlight, her features ageless in a way that made Rory's eyes water when she tried to focus on them." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx had, their form more defined than she'd ever seen it" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |