Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSWEX6FF2JMS5QWZ1Y0F6S6

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Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.007800
Provider:
Novita

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the earth like the ribs of some buried giant, their surfaces slick with moss that shimmered faintly in the pre-dawn gloom. Rory counted seven of them, arranged in a rough circle that seemed too perfect, too deliberate for anything natural. Each oak trunk had been carved with symbols she didn't recognise — spirals that hurt to look at directly, and shapes that shifted when she turned her head. "We shouldn't linger at the threshold." Nyx's voice came from everywhere and nowhere, their shadowy form pooled between two of the stones before rising into something vaguely humanoid. "The boundary hungers." Rory's hand drifted to the Heartstone pendant at her throat. It pulsed with gentle warmth against her collarbone, a steady rhythm that quickened as she stepped closer to the circle's centre. The silver chain felt ice-cold against her skin. "Lead the way, then." Nyx flowed forward, their violet eyes leaving faint trails in the darkness. They passed between two stones — and vanished. Rory swore under her breath. Her trainers squelched in the damp grass as she approached the gap. The air here tasted different: sweeter, heavier, like the moment before a storm broke. She could see her own breath misting in front of her face, though the night had been mild moments ago. She stepped through. The world folded. For one horrible instant, her stomach lurched as if she'd missed a step in the dark. Colours bled past her peripheral vision — greens too vivid, purples that had no business existing in nature. Then her feet found solid ground, and she gasped. The grove opened before her like a secret the earth had been keeping. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in waves of violet and gold, their petals luminescent in the amber-tinged light that filtered down from somewhere above. The sky here wasn't London's perpetual grey, nor was it the black of night. It swirled with colours she had no names for, layered like watercolours left out in rain. Massive oaks ringed the clearing, their branches intertwined overhead to form a living cathedral. Between their trunks, she caught glimpses of deeper forest — shadows that moved with purpose, shapes that watched. "The air." Rory's voice came out strange, hushed. "It's... different." "Time runs thin here." Nyx had solidified beside her, their form more defined than she'd ever seen it. In this place, they almost looked human — if humans were made of darkness and starlight and regret. "An hour in your world might be minutes in this one. Or days. The Grove follows its own whims." A path wound through the wildflowers, stones worn smooth by feet that had walked here long before Richmond Park existed. Rory followed it, her boots leaving impressions in the soft earth that filled with pale light before fading. She knelt, pressing her palm flat against the ground. The earth hummed against her skin. Not warmth, not cold — something else. Something alive. "Where is she?" "The Seer knows we've arrived." Nyx drifted ahead, passing through a cluster of flowers without disturbing a single petal. "She chooses when to be found." Rory straightened and walked deeper into the grove. Her shoulder-length hair lifted in a breeze she couldn't feel, and the crescent scar on her wrist began to itch — an old sensation, one she hadn't experienced since childhood. She rubbed at it absently as she took in the impossible architecture around her. Because it wasn't just trees. Between the oaks, half-hidden by flowering vines and curling brambles, stood structures that predated anything she'd seen in history books. Stone archways that led to nowhere. A well carved from a single massive gemstone, its water rising impossibly high before tumbling back down. Benches of woven silver branches that supported sleeping figures — not people, she realised, but something else. Figures carved from wood that breathed. "The Fae built this?" "The Fae didn't build. They grew." Nyx's whisper carried an edge she'd never heard before. "They sang it into being when your world was young. This place remembers." A sound drifted through the clearing — pipes, maybe, or wind through hollow reeds. Music without a source. It wound between the trees and curled around her ankles like a cat, and Rory found herself walking faster, following it without meaning to. The grove shifted around her. One moment she was on the path. The next, the wildflowers gave way to a pool of water so still it looked like polished glass. The surface reflected not the strange sky above, but something else entirely — a constellation she didn't recognise, stars arranged in patterns that hurt to look at for too long. She stepped back. Her heel caught on a root that hadn't been there before. "Careful." A hand caught her elbow — solid, unexpectedly warm. Nyx's violet eyes were inches from her own, and for a moment, their shadowy form flickered. She glimpsed something beneath the darkness: the memory of a face, angular and pale, with an expression caught between grief and wonder. "The grove tests those who enter. It searches for weaknesses." "And what's it looking for in me?" Nyx released her arm. Their form flowed backward, becoming more insubstantial. "That's between you and it." The music changed. Deeper now, a single note that resonated in her chest. Rory pressed her hand against her sternum and felt the Heartstone's pulse quicken in response. It burned against her skinnot painfully, but urgently, pulling her forward. She followed. The trees parted like curtains. The wildflowers bent away from her path. Even the light seemed to shift, pooling ahead of her in a corridor of gold and amber that led toward a cluster of standing stones at the grove's heart. These stones were different. Older. Their surfaces were worn nearly smooth, but she could still make out carvings — hands reaching toward one another, never quite touching. Faces contorted in ecstasy or agony, the expressions so similar she couldn't tell which. In their centre stood a figure. Rory stopped. The woman was slight, no taller than Rory herself, with silver hair that cascaded to her waist and moved as if underwater. Her skin held the luminescence of moonlight, her features ageless in a way that made Rory's eyes water when she tried to focus on them. She wore a gown that might have been woven from spider silk and morning dew, and her feet hovered an inch above the earth. When she moved, no grass bent beneath her. When she turned her pale lavender eyes toward Rory, the temperature in the grove dropped. "Aurora Carter." Her voice layered over itself, harmonics upon harmonics. "You carry gifts you did not earn to a place you do not belong. The Heartstone burns for its home. The blade sleeps at your hip. And the shadow walks beside you when shadows cannot walk at all." Rory's hand moved to the Fae-forged blade strapped to her belt. Its hilt was ice against her palm. "Isolde." "The Seer." Isolde smiled, and it was the smile of someone who had watched centuries pass, who had seen empires rise and fall and knew the weight of knowledge. "You've come with questions. They always come with questions." "I need answers." "Answers are easy." Isolde drifted closer, leaving no footprints, no trace of her passage. "It's the questions that cost."
created_at"2026-02-19T02:42:57.138Z" 2/19/2026, 2:42:57 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"quickened"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"lurched"
count1
8
word"tinged"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"resonated"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"silk"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"gloom"
2"perfect"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"quickened"
6"stomach"
7"lurched"
8"tinged"
9"whisper"
10"flickered"
11"resonated"
12"pulse"
13"silk"
14"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
73.17% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1226
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1063
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory13
Heartstone2
London1
Nyx7
Richmond1
Park1
Fae-forged1
Isolde2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Heartstone"
1"London"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Fae-forged"
globalScore0.889
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like polished glass"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.447
wordCount1226
matches
0"not people, she realised, but something else"
1"not the strange sky above, but something else entirely"
2"not painfully, but urgently, pulling her forward"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean29.19
std23.29
cv0.798
sampleLengths
073
131
239
34
420
551
63
73
843
913
1085
1110
1255
1347
1415
153
1625
1752
1871
194
2028
2142
225
2355
243
2511
2658
277
2816
2941
302
3141
3241
336
342
3571
3623
3748
3819
3938
403
4119
88.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences82
matches
0"been carved"
1"were made"
2"were worn"
3"been woven"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs181
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences98
ratio0.133
matches
0"Each oak trunk had been carved with symbols she didn't recognise — spirals that hurt to look at directly, and shapes that shifted when she turned her head."
1"They passed between two stones — and vanished."
2"Colours bled past her peripheral vision — greens too vivid, purples that had no business existing in nature."
3"Between their trunks, she caught glimpses of deeper forest — shadows that moved with purpose, shapes that watched."
4"In this place, they almost looked human — if humans were made of darkness and starlight and regret."
5"Not warmth, not cold — something else."
6"Her shoulder-length hair lifted in a breeze she couldn't feel, and the crescent scar on her wrist began to itch — an old sensation, one she hadn't experienced since childhood."
7"Benches of woven silver branches that supported sleeping figures — not people, she realised, but something else."
8"A sound drifted through the clearing — pipes, maybe, or wind through hollow reeds."
9"The surface reflected not the strange sky above, but something else entirely — a constellation she didn't recognise, stars arranged in patterns that hurt to look at for too long."
10"\"Careful.\" A hand caught her elbow — solid, unexpectedly warm."
11"It burned against her skin — not painfully, but urgently, pulling her forward."
12"Their surfaces were worn nearly smooth, but she could still make out carvings — hands reaching toward one another, never quite touching."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1055
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"ice-cold against her"
1"different: sweeter, heavier, like"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.037914691943127965
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009478672985781991
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean12.51
std8.17
cv0.653
sampleLengths
026
119
228
328
43
510
621
78
84
912
108
115
1212
1314
1420
153
163
1716
1818
199
2013
2123
2214
2316
2414
2518
268
272
2818
2918
3019
3120
3218
339
346
357
362
373
3819
396
408
4130
4214
435
4420
456
4617
4717
486
494
71.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.45918367346938777
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners45
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then her feet found solid"
1"Even the light seemed to"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences78
matches
0"It pulsed with gentle warmth"
1"They passed between two stones"
2"Her trainers squelched in the"
3"She could see her own"
4"She stepped through."
5"It swirled with colours she"
6"She knelt, pressing her palm"
7"Her shoulder-length hair lifted in"
8"She rubbed at it absently"
9"It wound between the trees"
10"She stepped back."
11"Her heel caught on a"
12"She glimpsed something beneath the"
13"Their form flowed backward, becoming"
14"It burned against her skin"
15"Their surfaces were worn nearly"
16"Her skin held the luminescence"
17"She wore a gown that"
18"Her voice layered over itself,"
19"Its hilt was ice against"
ratio0.256
49.74% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences78
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Rory counted seven of them,"
2"Each oak trunk had been"
3"Nyx's voice came from everywhere"
4"Rory's hand drifted to the"
5"It pulsed with gentle warmth"
6"The silver chain felt ice-cold"
7"Nyx flowed forward, their violet"
8"They passed between two stones"
9"Rory swore under her breath."
10"Her trainers squelched in the"
11"The air here tasted different:"
12"She could see her own"
13"She stepped through."
14"The world folded."
15"Colours bled past her peripheral"
16"The grove opened before her"
17"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
18"The sky here wasn't London's"
19"It swirled with colours she"
ratio0.821
64.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Because it wasn't just trees."
ratio0.013
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The standing stones rose from the earth like the ribs of some buried giant, their surfaces slick with moss that shimmered faintly in the pre-dawn gloom."
1"Rory counted seven of them, arranged in a rough circle that seemed too perfect, too deliberate for anything natural."
2"It pulsed with gentle warmth against her collarbone, a steady rhythm that quickened as she stepped closer to the circle's centre."
3"Colours bled past her peripheral vision — greens too vivid, purples that had no business existing in nature."
4"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in waves of violet and gold, their petals luminescent in the amber-tinged light that filtered down from somewhere above."
5"Rory followed it, her boots leaving impressions in the soft earth that filled with pale light before fading."
6"A well carved from a single massive gemstone, its water rising impossibly high before tumbling back down."
7"The surface reflected not the strange sky above, but something else entirely — a constellation she didn't recognise, stars arranged in patterns that hurt to loo…"
8"The woman was slight, no taller than Rory herself, with silver hair that cascaded to her waist and moved as if underwater."
9"Her skin held the luminescence of moonlight, her features ageless in a way that made Rory's eyes water when she tried to focus on them."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx had, their form more defined than she'd ever seen it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.2386%