Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSWEX6FKQ561PSNVKWV3PFK

Run Details

Duration:
43.5s
Cost:
$0.007192
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked, then the second, then the first. Aurora watched the door swing inward, her heart already climbing into her throat before she saw who stood on the other side. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe like he owned the building, cane tucked under one arm, his charcoal suit immaculate despite the drizzle that had been plaguing East London all afternoon. Water droplets clung to his platinum hair. One amber eye caught the dim hallway light; the other, black as pitch, seemed to drink it in. "You're not Eva." "No." She gripped the edge of the door, knuckles white. "She's at work." "Ah." He tilted his head, studying her face with an intensity that made her skin prickle. "Then I suppose I'll have to settle for you." "I didn't realise settling was your style." A smile ghosted across his mouth, there and gone. "It isn't." Ptolemy wound between their ankles, the tabby's tail flicking against Aurora's shin. She stepped back, half-turning away in what she hoped looked like indifference rather than retreat. "Well? Are you coming in or planning to waterboard me with small talk through the threshold?" Lucien straightened, crossed the entrance in two smooth strides, and shut the door behind him with a soft click. The flat suddenly felt half its size. Books and scrolls crowded every surface — Eva's endless research into things Aurora still didn't fully understand — and the scent of old paper mixed with the curry rising from the restaurant below. She'd grown used to it over the months. Now the familiar smell turned her stomach. "You've been avoiding me." "Have I?" "Three messages, Rory. Two weeks." "I've been busy." She moved toward the kitchen counter, putting distance between them, and busied herself with the electric kettle. Anything to keep her hands occupied. "Deliveries. Eva's been — Eva's been needing help with things." "Things." "Research things. Dangerous things. You know how she gets." A soft thump as Lucien set his cane against the overcrowded bookshelf. His footsteps, impossibly quiet for a man his size, drew closer. "You're lying." "I'm not." "You always were terrible at it." The amusement in his voice made her jaw tighten. "Your pulse jumps. Just there — at the hollow of your throat." Aurora's hand flew up before she could stop it, fingers pressing against the spot he'd named. She caught herself, dropped her hand, turned to face him with the kettle clutched like a weapon between them. "What do you want, Lucien?" The question hung in the air. Outside, a car splashed through a puddle on Brick Lane. Ptolemy leaped onto the windowsill, watching the rain streak the glass. "I wanted to discuss a matter with Eva. Professional interest." He smoothed his tie, the gesture almost nervous. Almost. "But since you're here —" "I'm not the one who left." The words escaped before she could cage them. She watched them land, watched the tightening around his mismatched eyes that might have been surprise or guilt or nothing at all. "Ah." He exhaled the syllable like he'd been holding it for days. "So that's what this is." "I don't know what this is. You tell me. You're the one who disappeared after —" She caught herself, turned back to the kettle, flicked the switch harder than necessary. "After everything. No explanation. No nothing. Just gone." "I had my reasons." "Clearly." "You wouldn't understand." "Then make me understand." She faced him again, arms crossing over her chest. The defensive posture felt childish, but she couldn't seem to help it. "You owe me that much." "Do I?" "We were —" She stopped. Swallowed. Started again. "I thought we were something." The silence stretched between them, filled with the hum of the refrigerator and the tick of rain against the window. Lucien's expression remained unreadable, that particular mask he wore when he wanted the world to see nothing of what churned beneath. When he finally spoke, his voice had dropped. Softer. Almost human. "You thought correctly." "Then why?" "Because you deserve better than what I can give." Aurora laughed, the sound bitter and sharp. "That's such horseshit." His eyebrows rose. "I beg your pardon?" "You heard me." She stepped closer, anger finally overtaking the ache in her chest. "That's the line, isn't it? The noble sacrifice. 'I'm doing this for you, Rory. I'm leaving because I care.' Do you have any idea how patronising that is?" "I wasn't trying to —" "You don't get to decide what I deserve." She was in his space now, close enough to see the faint scar beside his amber eye, close enough to smell the sandalwood and rain that clung to his jacket. "That's not your call. It's mine." "Even if the choice leads somewhere dangerous?" "Everything in my life has been dangerous since I met Eva. Since I met you." She spread her hands, helpless. "At least let me choose the danger I want." Something shifted behind his eyes. The black one seemed to swallow the light; the amber one burned with it. His hand came up, almost touching her face, before he caught himself and let it fall. "You make it very difficult to do the right thing." "Maybe the right thing is wrong." "Rory —" "Six months." Her voice cracked on the words. "Six months, Lucien. I waited. I told myself you'd come back, that you'd explain, that there was something I wasn't seeing. And you just — you never —" "I know." The words were barely a whisper. "I know, and I'm —" "If you say sorry, I swear to God I'll throw you out." A pause. Then, unexpectedly, he laughed. A genuine sound, rough at the edges, that transformed his face into something younger and more vulnerable than she'd ever seen it. "Noted." Ptolemy chirped from the windowsill, apparently deciding the tension had reached acceptable levels. The cat jumped down and wound between their feet again, purring like a small engine. Aurora became suddenly aware of how close they were standing. Of the heat radiating from him despite the damp chill of the London evening. Of the way his gaze kept dropping to her mouth and jerking away again, as if he couldn't help himself. "The real reason," she said, forcing steadiness into her voice. "Tell me. The truth." "The truth is complicated." "Uncomplicate it." Another long pause. The kettle clicked off behind her, the water forgotten. "My father," Lucien said finally. "He's — the circumstances of his existence create certain... obligations. For me. Ones I cannot ignore, and cannot escape." His jaw tightened. "Ones that would put anyone close to me in considerable danger. The sort that doesn't care about innocence or choice." "Demon politics?" "Something like that." "And you didn't think I should have a say in whether that risk was worth taking?" "I thought I could spare you the burden of the choice." "That wasn't your right." "No." He met her eyes, and the raw honesty there made her breath catch. "It wasn't. I see that now. I saw it three weeks ago, when I realised I couldn't stay away any longer, and every day since has been an exercise in talking myself out of coming here." "So what changed?" "Nothing. Everything." He shook his head, a rueful smile twisting his lips. "I simply... missed you. Too much to pretend otherwise." Aurora's throat tightened. She wanted to stay angry, wanted to hold onto the righteous fury that had kept her going for six months of silence and unanswered messages. But looking at him now — the tension in his shoulders, the way his fingers tapped against his thigh in that nervous tell he probably didn't know he had — she felt the anger drain away, leaving only the hurt beneath. "You should have told me." "I should have done many things." "You're a bastard." "Frequently." "And you're impossible." "Also true." "And I spent half a year hating you while simultaneously hoping you'd walk through that door." The confession slipped out before she could stop it. Lucien's breath caught audibly. "I spent half a year hoping you wouldn't," he said quietly. "Because I knew if I saw you again, I wouldn't be able to leave. And staying is the most selfish thing I could possibly do." "And yet here you are." "Here I am." The rain had softened to a whisper against the windows. Ptolemy had curled up on a stack of ancient texts, apparently deciding the humans would work things out on their own. The curry smell had faded into the background, replaced by something warmer — something that felt dangerously close to hope. Aurora stepped back, creating distance, trying to think through the fog of months of waiting and wondering. Her fingers found the crescent scar on her wrist, traced it absently. "I need time," she said. "You don't get to walk back in and have everything be fine. That's not — I can't do that." "I know." "I'm still furious with you." "You should be." "And you're going to explain everything. All of it. No half-truths or convenient omissions." "All of it," he agreed. "I promise." "Starting now?" "Starting now." She studied his face, searching for the deception that experience told her had to be there. And found nothing but exhaustion and want and something that looked terrifyingly like hope. "Fine." She grabbed two mugs from the cluttered counter. "Sit down. You're making my kitchen look small." "Your kitchen is small." "Don't push your luck, Moreau." But when she turned back with the tea, she found him watching her with an expression that made her chest ache — the same one he'd worn the night before he disappeared, when he'd pressed his forehead to hers and said her name like a prayer. She wasn't ready to forgive him. Might never be ready. But she'd spent six months learning to live without this — without the heat of his attention, the way he listened like her words actually mattered, the strange comfort of his impossible presence. And if she was being honest with herself, she'd never stopped wanting it. The anger could wait. The explanations couldn't. She slid a mug across the counter toward him. "Start from the beginning."
created_at"2026-02-19T02:42:57.156Z" 2/19/2026, 2:42:57 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien said finally [finally]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences100
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.38
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.04
91.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1693
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1693
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"churned"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count2
11
word"tension"
count2
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"familiar"
2"stomach"
3"electric"
4"footsteps"
5"pulse"
6"flicked"
7"silence"
8"unreadable"
9"churned"
10"whisper"
11"tension"
12"chill"
13"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
94.16% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1703
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Then, unexpectedly, he laughed."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1041
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
East1
London2
Aurora8
Eva1
Lucien6
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
38.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like indifference rather than retr"
1"he windowsill, apparently deciding the tensio"
2"ancient texts, apparently deciding the humans"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1703
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs99
mean17.2
std16.84
cv0.979
sampleLengths
032
156
23
313
425
57
611
727
816
974
104
112
125
1336
141
159
1625
172
1827
1935
205
2127
2224
236
2430
2517
2638
274
281
293
3030
312
3213
3341
3414
352
369
3710
387
3942
405
4144
427
4329
4435
4510
466
472
4836
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs192
matches
0"were standing"
1"was being"
23.10% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences167
ratio0.042
matches
0"One amber eye caught the dim hallway light; the other, black as pitch, seemed to drink it in."
1"Books and scrolls crowded every surface — Eva's endless research into things Aurora still didn't fully understand — and the scent of old paper mixed with the curry rising from the restaurant below."
2"The black one seemed to swallow the light; the amber one burned with it."
3"But looking at him now — the tension in his shoulders, the way his fingers tapped against his thigh in that nervous tell he probably didn't know he had — she felt the anger drain away, leaving only the hurt beneath."
4"The curry smell had faded into the background, replaced by something warmer — something that felt dangerously close to hope."
5"But when she turned back with the tea, she found him watching her with an expression that made her chest ache — the same one he'd worn the night before he disappeared, when he'd pressed his forehead to hers and said her name like a prayer."
6"But she'd spent six months learning to live without this — without the heat of his attention, the way he listened like her words actually mattered, the strange comfort of his impossible presence."
95.48% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount952
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.045168067226890755
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01680672268907563
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean10.2
std8.65
cv0.848
sampleLengths
010
122
231
37
418
53
610
73
816
99
107
119
122
1312
1415
1516
1619
177
1833
198
207
214
222
235
2420
256
2610
271
289
2912
3011
312
322
3315
3412
3516
3619
375
386
3910
4011
4118
421
435
446
458
4622
4712
485
4930
66.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.41916167664670656
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners70
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Then, unexpectedly, he laughed."
ratio0.013
80.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences80
matches
0"She gripped the edge of"
1"He tilted his head, studying"
2"She stepped back, half-turning away"
3"She'd grown used to it"
4"She moved toward the kitchen"
5"His footsteps, impossibly quiet for"
6"She caught herself, dropped her"
7"He smoothed his tie, the"
8"She watched them land, watched"
9"He exhaled the syllable like"
10"She faced him again, arms"
11"His eyebrows rose."
12"She stepped closer, anger finally"
13"She was in his space"
14"She spread her hands, helpless"
15"His hand came up, almost"
16"Her voice cracked on the"
17"she said, forcing steadiness into"
18"His jaw tightened"
19"He met her eyes, and"
ratio0.35
41.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences80
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked, then"
1"Aurora watched the door swing"
2"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
3"Water droplets clung to his"
4"She gripped the edge of"
5"He tilted his head, studying"
6"A smile ghosted across his"
7"Ptolemy wound between their ankles,"
8"She stepped back, half-turning away"
9"Lucien straightened, crossed the entrance"
10"The flat suddenly felt half"
11"Books and scrolls crowded every"
12"She'd grown used to it"
13"She moved toward the kitchen"
14"Anything to keep her hands"
15"A soft thump as Lucien"
16"His footsteps, impossibly quiet for"
17"The amusement in his voice"
18"Aurora's hand flew up before"
19"She caught herself, dropped her"
ratio0.838
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Now the familiar smell turned"
ratio0.013
30.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe like he owned the building, cane tucked under one arm, his charcoal suit immaculate despite the drizzle that had been…"
1"She watched them land, watched the tightening around his mismatched eyes that might have been surprise or guilt or nothing at all."
2"A genuine sound, rough at the edges, that transformed his face into something younger and more vulnerable than she'd ever seen it."
3"She wanted to stay angry, wanted to hold onto the righteous fury that had kept her going for six months of silence and unanswered messages."
4"The curry smell had faded into the background, replaced by something warmer — something that felt dangerously close to hope."
5"But when she turned back with the tea, she found him watching her with an expression that made her chest ache — the same one he'd worn the night before he disap…"
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He smoothed, the gesture almost nervous"
1"She spread, helpless"
2"He shook, a rueful smile twisting his lips"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences100
tagDensity0.05
leniency0.1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.02
81.9845%