| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Lucien said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 100 | | tagDensity | 0.19 | | leniency | 0.38 | | rawRatio | 0.105 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |
| 91.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1693 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1693 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "intensity" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "electric" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "churned" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "tension" | | 12 | "chill" | | 13 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.16% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 167 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1703 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, unexpectedly, he laughed." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1041 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.77 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | East | 1 | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 8 | | Eva | 1 | | Lucien | 6 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Ptolemy | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "East" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 38.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like indifference rather than retr" | | 1 | "he windowsill, apparently deciding the tensio" | | 2 | "ancient texts, apparently deciding the humans" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1703 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 99 | | mean | 17.2 | | std | 16.84 | | cv | 0.979 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 74 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 42 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 44 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 36 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "were standing" | | 1 | "was being" |
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| 23.10% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 167 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "One amber eye caught the dim hallway light; the other, black as pitch, seemed to drink it in." | | 1 | "Books and scrolls crowded every surface — Eva's endless research into things Aurora still didn't fully understand — and the scent of old paper mixed with the curry rising from the restaurant below." | | 2 | "The black one seemed to swallow the light; the amber one burned with it." | | 3 | "But looking at him now — the tension in his shoulders, the way his fingers tapped against his thigh in that nervous tell he probably didn't know he had — she felt the anger drain away, leaving only the hurt beneath." | | 4 | "The curry smell had faded into the background, replaced by something warmer — something that felt dangerously close to hope." | | 5 | "But when she turned back with the tea, she found him watching her with an expression that made her chest ache — the same one he'd worn the night before he disappeared, when he'd pressed his forehead to hers and said her name like a prayer." | | 6 | "But she'd spent six months learning to live without this — without the heat of his attention, the way he listened like her words actually mattered, the strange comfort of his impossible presence." |
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| 95.48% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 952 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.045168067226890755 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01680672268907563 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 167 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 167 | | mean | 10.2 | | std | 8.65 | | cv | 0.848 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 66.27% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.41916167664670656 | | totalSentences | 167 | | uniqueOpeners | 70 | |
| 41.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, unexpectedly, he laughed." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 80.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "She gripped the edge of" | | 1 | "He tilted his head, studying" | | 2 | "She stepped back, half-turning away" | | 3 | "She'd grown used to it" | | 4 | "She moved toward the kitchen" | | 5 | "His footsteps, impossibly quiet for" | | 6 | "She caught herself, dropped her" | | 7 | "He smoothed his tie, the" | | 8 | "She watched them land, watched" | | 9 | "He exhaled the syllable like" | | 10 | "She faced him again, arms" | | 11 | "His eyebrows rose." | | 12 | "She stepped closer, anger finally" | | 13 | "She was in his space" | | 14 | "She spread her hands, helpless" | | 15 | "His hand came up, almost" | | 16 | "Her voice cracked on the" | | 17 | "she said, forcing steadiness into" | | 18 | "His jaw tightened" | | 19 | "He met her eyes, and" |
| | ratio | 0.35 | |
| 41.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt clicked, then" | | 1 | "Aurora watched the door swing" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the" | | 3 | "Water droplets clung to his" | | 4 | "She gripped the edge of" | | 5 | "He tilted his head, studying" | | 6 | "A smile ghosted across his" | | 7 | "Ptolemy wound between their ankles," | | 8 | "She stepped back, half-turning away" | | 9 | "Lucien straightened, crossed the entrance" | | 10 | "The flat suddenly felt half" | | 11 | "Books and scrolls crowded every" | | 12 | "She'd grown used to it" | | 13 | "She moved toward the kitchen" | | 14 | "Anything to keep her hands" | | 15 | "A soft thump as Lucien" | | 16 | "His footsteps, impossibly quiet for" | | 17 | "The amusement in his voice" | | 18 | "Aurora's hand flew up before" | | 19 | "She caught herself, dropped her" |
| | ratio | 0.838 | |
| 62.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the familiar smell turned" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 30.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe like he owned the building, cane tucked under one arm, his charcoal suit immaculate despite the drizzle that had been…" | | 1 | "She watched them land, watched the tightening around his mismatched eyes that might have been surprise or guilt or nothing at all." | | 2 | "A genuine sound, rough at the edges, that transformed his face into something younger and more vulnerable than she'd ever seen it." | | 3 | "She wanted to stay angry, wanted to hold onto the righteous fury that had kept her going for six months of silence and unanswered messages." | | 4 | "The curry smell had faded into the background, replaced by something warmer — something that felt dangerously close to hope." | | 5 | "But when she turned back with the tea, she found him watching her with an expression that made her chest ache — the same one he'd worn the night before he disap…" |
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| 46.05% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "He smoothed, the gesture almost nervous" | | 1 | "She spread, helpless" | | 2 | "He shook, a rueful smile twisting his lips" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 100 | | tagDensity | 0.05 | | leniency | 0.1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.02 | |