Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSWEX6FSBY1MJAR1RJX7DTE

Run Details

Duration:
37.1s
Cost:
$0.006135
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station smelt of wet concrete and something else—something copper-sweet that Harlow Quinn had learned to associate with bad nights. She stepped over the yellow crime scene tape, her worn leather watch catching the torchlight as she checked the time. Three forty-seven in the morning. The hour when London showed its true face. "Down here, Detective." DC Sanjeev Rao's voice echoed from the platform below. He was young, eager, and had the kind of optimism that made Quinn's teeth ache. She descended the stairs with military precision, each footfall deliberate on the cracked tiles. Water dripped somewhere in the darkness beyond the police cordon, a steady rhythm that would drive a person mad if they listened long enough. The platform stretched before her, graffiti-tagged and litter-strewn. Ancient advertisements peeled from the walls—Britannia Airways, a production of Cats, something about a phone service that no longer existed. But the body lay centre stage, arranged with a care that made Quinn's stomach tighten. "Male, mid-thirties. No ID on him." Rao gestured toward the corpse with his torch. "CSIs have been through. Photographs are done. We can move him whenever you're ready." Quinn crouched beside the body. The man wore a tailored suit, the kind that cost more than her monthly salary. His shoes were Italian leather, barely scuffed. No signs of struggle on his clothes, no tears or grass stains. Yet here he lay in an abandoned station that had been sealed since 1992. "What's wrong with this picture?" Rao shifted his weight. "The location's unusual, but junkies and dealers use these old stations all the time. Could be a drug deal gone wrong." "Look at his hands." Rao aimed his beam downward. The victim's fingernails were clean. Manicured, even. The skin around his cuticles showed no sign of needle marks. "Could be a user who kept himself presentable. High-functioning addict." "Look at his shoes again." The torchlight swept back. Quinn waited. "They're... clean?" "Dry." Quinn stood, her sharp jaw tight. "The tunnel floor is wet. There's standing water two metres from where he's lying. To get here from the street entrance, you'd have to walk through at least three flooded sections. I know—I just did it." Rao's brow furrowed. "So someone carried him?" "Through a flooded tunnel? In a suit that expensive? Without getting water on the shoes or the trouser cuffs?" Quinn circled the body slowly. "Look at the shoulders, the underarms. No damp patches. No water stains on the fabric at all." "Then how did he—" "That's the question, isn't it?" Quinn knelt again, this time examining the area around the body. The concrete platform was dusty, scattered with old newspapers and crisp packets. She could see her own footprints in the grime, Rao's, the CSIs'. But nothing leading to the victim. It was as if he'd materialised right where he lay. "Maybe he came from the other direction. The tunnel on the north side." "That tunnel collapsed in 2008. There's no other way in." Rao scratched his neck. "With respect, ma'am, there has to be. Someone killed him somewhere else and dumped him here. They probably knew another route. Homeless people, urban explorers—they find ways into these places all the time." Quinn didn't argue. She'd seen enough of London's hidden arteries to know he wasn't entirely wrong. But something about the scene nagged at her, a splinter in her mind that she couldn't dislodge. She studied the victim's face. Pale, unsurprisingly. Eyes closed, almost peaceful. But there was something about his expression—a lingering surprise, as if death had arrived without warning. No fear, no pain. Just surprise. "What do the CSIs say about cause of death?" "Nothing obvious. No wounds, no ligature marks. They're thinking poison or natural causes, pending the post-mortem." "Natural causes." Quinn let out a breath through her nose. "In an abandoned Tube station at three in the morning." "People die in strange places all the time." She couldn't argue with that either. But her instinct—honed over eighteen years on the force, sharpened further by the case that had taken DS Morris from her three years ago—told her this was different. This was wrong in ways that went beyond the unusual location. She walked the perimeter of the crime scene, forcing herself to look at everything. The graffiti on the walls. The rusted track bed. The old signal box, its door hanging crooked on one hinge. A rat scurried into the darkness, and Rao flinched. "Jumpy?" "Rats and I have an understanding. They stay away from me, I don't scream like a child." Despite herself, Quinn's mouth twitched. "What's in the signal box?" "Nothing. CSIs checked. Just old equipment, some rubbish." She approached it anyway. The door groaned when she pushed it open, revealing a cramped space filled with decommissioned levers and switches. Rao was right—nothing here but rust and rodent droppings. But as she turned to leave, something caught her eye. A marking on the wall. Small, almost invisible in the shadows near the floor. She crouched, angling her torch. "Rao. Come here." He joined her, squeezing into the cramped space. "What am I looking at?" "That." She pointed. Etched into the concrete was a symbol. A circle with lines radiating outward, intersected by what looked like angular script. It reminded her of something, though she couldn't place what. "Some kind of graffiti?" "Maybe." But Quinn doubted it. The symbol was too precise, too deliberate. And beneath it, barely visible, were other marks. Scratches in the concrete that formed a pattern—not random, but purposeful. Like a formula, or a map. She photographed it with her phone, then backed out of the signal box. Her mind was racing now, making connections she couldn't quite articulate. "The victim's pockets. What was in them?" Rao consulted his notebook. "Wallet—no cash, no cards. A key. That's it." "A key to what?" "Unknown. Standard Yale lock. CSIs bagged it." "And no phone?" "No phone." Quinn returned to the body, studying it from a new angle. The victim's right hand was curled slightly, as if he'd been holding something when he died. Something small enough to fit in a palm. Something that was no longer there. "Who found him?" "Transit police. They were doing a sweep of the tunnels, checking for trespassers. Found him around two a.m." "Who called it in?" "Control. Standard procedure." Quinn turned to face the tunnel entrance, the way they'd come. The darkness beyond the police lights seemed to press against them, hungry and patient. "Show me exactly where the transit officers entered." Rao led her back up the platform, past the crime scene, toward the tunnel mouth. "They came through there. The entrance on Kentish Town Road." "And they didn't see anyone? Hear anything?" "According to their statements, the station was empty except for the body. No sign of forced entry, no sign of anyone else having been here." Quinn stood at the tunnel's edge, peering into the blackness. Her torch beam caught the gleam of standing water, the curve of the tunnel wall. Nothing unusual. Nothing that would explain how a well-dressed man had died in the middle of an abandoned station without getting his shoes wet. Then she saw it. A faint discolouration on the tunnel wall. Circular, about the size of a dinner plate. She stepped closer, water seeping into her shoes, and raised her torch. The concrete there was different. Not damaged, not decayed. Changed. As if the wall itself had been altered at a fundamental level, the molecules rearranged into something that shimmered almost imperceptibly in the artificial light. "Rao." He sloshed through the water to join her. "What is it?" "Do you see that? On the wall?" He squinted. "See what?" Quinn pressed her palm flat against the spot. The concrete was cold, solid. But beneath her fingers, she felt a faint vibration. Not mechanical. Not electrical. Something else entirely. "Ma'am? You're starting to worry me." She pulled her hand back. The discolouration remained, but the sensation had faded. "Get forensics back here. I want this section of the wall analysed." "For a water stain?" "It's not a water stain." Quinn turned to face him. "And I don't think our victim walked in here through the front door. I think he came through something else entirely." Rao's expression was sceptical, but he'd worked with her long enough to know better than to argue. "I'll call it in." Quinn stood alone in the tunnel, water soaking through her shoes, staring at the spot on the wall. She didn't have answers yet. But she had questions now—better questions, the kind that could crack open a case if she followed them far enough. And somewhere in the back of her mind, three years old and still bleeding, Morris's voice whispered that she was getting close to something she wasn't ready to face.
created_at"2026-02-19T02:42:57.155Z" 2/19/2026, 2:42:57 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn knelt again [again]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.035
93.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1491
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1491
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"footfall"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"furrowed"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"racing"
count1
7
word"standard"
count2
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"footfall"
2"stomach"
3"weight"
4"furrowed"
5"etched"
6"racing"
7"standard"
8"shimmered"
9"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1472
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount995
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn18
London2
Sanjeev1
Rao12
Britannia1
Airways1
Cats1
Italian1
Morris2
Etched1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Rao"
3"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.595
windowScore0.5
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"It was as if he'd materialised right where he lay"
1"looked like angular script"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.679
wordCount1472
matches
0"not random, but purposeful"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences156
matches
0"whispered that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean19.37
std16.26
cv0.839
sampleLengths
055
13
262
343
428
553
65
725
84
923
1010
115
126
132
1443
157
1641
174
1856
1913
2010
2137
2233
2333
249
2516
2620
278
2845
2943
301
3117
3210
338
3441
3519
363
3713
383
3930
404
4137
4224
437
4412
454
467
473
482
4941
95.43% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"been sealed"
1"was curled"
2"been altered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was racing"
1"was getting"
14.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences156
ratio0.045
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelt of wet concrete and something else—something copper-sweet that Harlow Quinn had learned to associate with bad nights."
1"Ancient advertisements peeled from the walls—Britannia Airways, a production of Cats, something about a phone service that no longer existed."
2"But there was something about his expression—a lingering surprise, as if death had arrived without warning."
3"But her instinct—honed over eighteen years on the force, sharpened further by the case that had taken DS Morris from her three years ago—told her this was different."
4"Rao was right—nothing here but rust and rodent droppings."
5"Scratches in the concrete that formed a pattern—not random, but purposeful."
6"But she had questions now—better questions, the kind that could crack open a case if she followed them far enough."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount553
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"post-an abandoned Tube"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.028933092224231464
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.009041591320072333
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean9.44
std6.74
cv0.714
sampleLengths
022
120
25
38
43
59
615
714
824
98
1020
1115
1214
1314
145
1515
167
1712
1814
195
204
2121
224
235
245
252
2611
2710
285
294
302
312
327
3336
343
354
3624
3717
384
3916
4012
4112
426
4310
4413
4510
464
4733
483
4913
67.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4230769230769231
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners66
34.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Then she saw it."
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences97
matches
0"She stepped over the yellow"
1"He was young, eager, and"
2"She descended the stairs with"
3"His shoes were Italian leather,"
4"She could see her own"
5"It was as if he'd"
6"She'd seen enough of London's"
7"She studied the victim's face."
8"She couldn't argue with that"
9"She walked the perimeter of"
10"She approached it anyway."
11"She crouched, angling her torch."
12"He joined her, squeezing into"
13"It reminded her of something,"
14"She photographed it with her"
15"Her mind was racing now,"
16"Her torch beam caught the"
17"She stepped closer, water seeping"
18"He sloshed through the water"
19"She pulled her hand back."
ratio0.216
83.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences97
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelt"
1"She stepped over the yellow"
2"The hour when London showed"
3"DC Sanjeev Rao's voice echoed"
4"He was young, eager, and"
5"She descended the stairs with"
6"Water dripped somewhere in the"
7"The platform stretched before her,"
8"Rao gestured toward the corpse"
9"Quinn crouched beside the body."
10"The man wore a tailored"
11"His shoes were Italian leather,"
12"Rao shifted his weight."
13"Rao aimed his beam downward."
14"The victim's fingernails were clean."
15"The skin around his cuticles"
16"The torchlight swept back."
17"Quinn stood, her sharp jaw"
18"Rao's brow furrowed."
19"Quinn circled the body slowly"
ratio0.753
51.55% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"As if the wall itself"
ratio0.01
9.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Water dripped somewhere in the darkness beyond the police cordon, a steady rhythm that would drive a person mad if they listened long enough."
1"But there was something about his expression—a lingering surprise, as if death had arrived without warning."
2"But her instinct—honed over eighteen years on the force, sharpened further by the case that had taken DS Morris from her three years ago—told her this was diffe…"
3"Scratches in the concrete that formed a pattern—not random, but purposeful."
4"Nothing that would explain how a well-dressed man had died in the middle of an abandoned station without getting his shoes wet."
5"As if the wall itself had been altered at a fundamental level, the molecules rearranged into something that shimmered almost imperceptibly in the artificial lig…"
6"Quinn stood alone in the tunnel, water soaking through her shoes, staring at the spot on the wall."
7"But she had questions now—better questions, the kind that could crack open a case if she followed them far enough."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn stood, her sharp jaw tight"
1"Quinn knelt again, this time examining the area around the body"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"But Quinn doubted (doubt)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.018
leniency0.035
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.035
81.5913%