Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSWEX6GZ3M2F4642NX9FR39

Run Details

Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.008601
Provider:
Venice

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked open and Aurora knew she should have checked the peephole. She pulled the door inward and there he stood, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane, the other loose at his side. Rain had darkened the shoulders of his charcoal suit, and water dripped from the ends of his platinum hair onto the worn welcome mat Eva had bought from a charity shop three years ago. Lucien Moreau looked like he had no business being on a threshold in Brick Lane, above a curry house that still smelled of last night's tikka masala. "Rory." Her name in his mouth sounded different than it had four months ago. Then again, four months ago she had been pressing a towel to a knife wound on his ribs, her hands shaking, her voice lower, rougher, telling him not to die on her kitchen floor. "What do you want?" "May I come in?" Ptolemy wound between her ankles, purring, either oblivious to the tension or entirely indifferent to it. The cat butted his head against the doorframe and meowed up at Lucien. "No." Lucien's heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, tracked the cat before returning to her face. A beat passed. The rain continued its steady percussion against the railing behind him. "It's coming down rather hard." "I can see that." "Your neighbour has been attempting to light a cigarette on his balcony for the past three minutes. I believe the elements are winning." "I hadn't noticed." She started to close the door. His cane shot out, the tip catching the wood inches from her wrist. Not touching her. Never touching her. That had been one of the rules, hadn't it? Before everything went sideways in a warehouse in Whitechapel, before blood on concrete, before he had looked at her with those mismatched eyes and told her she deserved better than a half-breed with more enemies than friends. "Five minutes." Water ran down the bridge of his nose. "Then I will leave. You never have to see me again." The worst part was that she believed him. Lucien Moreau did not make promises he did not intend to keep. It was one of the things she had liked about him, back when liking him had been simple, before it had tangled into something knotted and sharp-edged. She stepped back and let the door swing open. He entered with a grace that seemed impossible for someone of his height, shaking droplets from his sleeves as he took in the chaos of Eva's flat. Books on every surface. Scrolls unfurled across the kitchen table. Research notes pinned to the walls with red string connecting them like a madman's conspiracy board. Ptolemy hopped onto the back of the sofa and watched the intruder with half-lidded eyes. "I see Eva's research has not slowed." "Eva's research is none of your business." "No." He paused near a stack of texts on demonic hierarchies, one eyebrow raised. "But someone has been asking questions about the realm of Avaros in certain circles. Questions that have drawn attention." A chill crept down her spine. She crossed her arms over her chest, acutely aware that she was wearing an oversized t-shirt and pyjama bottoms with cartoon whales on them. Not exactly the armour she would have chosen for this conversation. "What kind of attention?" "The dangerous kind." "Be specific." He turned to face her fully, and the motion put his back to the window, the grey London light silhouetting his tall frame. His expression was unreadable. It always had been. She had spent weeks learning the subtle tells, the slight twitch at the corner of his mouth, the way his left hand flexed when he was hiding something. His left hand stayed perfectly still at his side. "Someone is looking for a door. They believe your friend has the key." Eva's notes. Her obsessive mapping of pathways between realms, the diagrams she had sketched based on second-hand accounts and forbidden texts. Rory had helped her catalogue them last month, her fingers cramping from hours of writing, Eva muttering about ley lines and resonance points. "Eva's in Cardiff. Her mother's sick." "I know. That is why I came to you." The admission landed heavier than it should have. He had kept track of where Eva was. He had kept track of where Rory was. Four months of silence, and he had still been watching. "You could have called." "Would you have answered?" No. She would have let it ring out, stared at the unknown number on her screen, and then thrown the phone across the room. They both knew it. "Why now?" "Because by tomorrow evening, the people looking for that door will know Eva is away. They will assume the flat is empty." He paused. "They will assume you are not a threat." A laugh escaped her, sharp and humourless. "They'd be right." "Rory." Her name again, spoken with a weight that made her stomach tighten. "You know that is not true. You proved it in that warehouse. You have never been anything less than formidable." She did not want to think about the warehouse. The way he had thrown himself in front of her when the first shot rang out. The way his blood had felt warm against her hands. The way he had pressed his forehead to hers on the dirty floor after, both of them breathing hard, both of them alive, the air thick with something neither of them had been brave enough to name. "I don't do that anymore. That life. Whatever you want to call it." "I am not asking you to." "Then what are you asking?" He took a step closer. Then another. The distance between them shrank until she could smell rain and sandalwood and something darker beneath it, something that reminded her of woodsmoke and old libraries. She held her ground. "I am asking you to let me help." "Why?" His jaw tightened. For a moment, she thought he would not answer. Then his voice came, low and rough. "Because I have not stopped thinking about you. Because four months has felt like four years. Because every time my phone rings, I hope it is you, and every time it is not, I am—" He cut himself off, breathing unevenly. His hands clenched at his sides. "I told you to find someone who could give you a normal life. I meant it. But I cannot stand by and watch you walk into danger without doing something. Even if you hate me. Even if you never want to see me again after this. At least let me make sure you survive it." Ptolemy chose that moment to leap from the sofa and pad across the floor, winding between their legs again, purring like a motorboat. The cat had never been subtle about his opinions. He liked Lucien. Had liked him from the first night he had shown up with information about a missing artefact, had rubbed against his trousers and left white hairs all over that expensive suit. Rory looked at the cat, then back at the half-demon standing in her best friend's cramped living room, rain still drying in his hair. "You're soaked." "I am aware." "Sit down before you drip on Eva's notes. She'll kill me if anything gets ruined." She did not wait for him to respond. She turned and walked toward the kitchen, pulling the kettle from the counter, filling it with more force than necessary. Behind her, she heard the creak of the old armchair as Lucien lowered himself into it. She should have told him to leave. Should have shut the door in his face the moment she saw him standing there. Four months of carefully reconstructing her life, of convincing herself that whatever had passed between them was a fever dream brought on by adrenaline and proximity. Her hand went to her left wrist, fingers tracing the crescent scar there without thinking. "The warehouse." His voice drifted from the other room. "I did not say what I should have said." "Lucien." "You asked me to stay. And I left." "I remember." "I thought I was doing the right thing." She turned, leaning against the kitchen counter, the kettle beginning to rumble behind her. Through the doorway, she could see him in the armchair, his cane propped against the armrest, his head bowed. "I know." "Does that make it easier? Knowing I was a fool for the right reasons?" A beat of silence. "No." He looked up at that. Their eyes met across the cluttered space, between towers of books and drifts of paper, and the weight of four months of unsaid words pressed against her chest. "I don't hate you, Lucien." His expression shifted, the smallest crack in the mask. "But I haven't forgiven you either." "That is fair." The kettle clicked off. Steam curled toward the ceiling. Somewhere beyond the window, a siren wailed through the London streets, fading into the distance.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1507
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1507
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"resonance"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"eyebrow"
2"chill"
3"down her spine"
4"unreadable"
5"resonance"
6"silence"
7"weight"
8"stomach"
9"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"tend to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1502
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Rory had helped her catalogue them last month, her fingers cramping from hours of writing, Eva muttering about ley lines…"
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1105
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Eva5
Moreau2
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien6
Whitechapel1
London2
Rory3
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Whitechapel"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like he had no business being on a"
1"seemed impossible for someone of his height, shaking droplets from his sleeves as he took in the chaos of Eva's flat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1502
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences129
matches
0"was that she"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean20.03
std19.65
cv0.981
sampleLengths
014
159
227
31
447
54
64
729
81
930
105
114
1223
133
1471
1521
1647
179
1868
197
207
2133
2241
234
243
252
2659
279
2813
2944
306
319
3234
334
344
3528
362
3732
3810
3933
4072
4113
426
435
4437
458
461
4719
4835
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs182
matches
0"was wearing"
1"was hiding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences129
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1110
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.023423423423423424
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006306306306306306
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean11.64
std9.71
cv0.834
sampleLengths
014
125
234
327
41
513
634
74
84
916
1013
111
1216
133
1411
155
164
1723
183
196
2013
213
223
239
2437
2510
2611
278
2812
2927
309
3127
324
336
3416
3515
367
377
3814
3919
406
4124
4211
434
443
452
4623
474
484
4928
53.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3488372093023256
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"Then again, four months ago"
1"Then his voice came, low"
2"Somewhere beyond the window, a"
ratio0.038
40.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences80
matches
0"She pulled the door inward"
1"Her name in his mouth"
2"She started to close the"
3"His cane shot out, the"
4"It was one of the"
5"She stepped back and let"
6"He entered with a grace"
7"He paused near a stack"
8"She crossed her arms over"
9"He turned to face her"
10"His expression was unreadable."
11"It always had been."
12"She had spent weeks learning"
13"His left hand stayed perfectly"
14"Her obsessive mapping of pathways"
15"He had kept track of"
16"He had kept track of"
17"She would have let it"
18"They both knew it."
19"Her name again, spoken with"
ratio0.45
53.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences80
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked open"
1"She pulled the door inward"
2"Rain had darkened the shoulders"
3"Lucien Moreau looked like he"
4"Her name in his mouth"
5"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
6"The cat butted his head"
7"Lucien's heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
8"A beat passed."
9"The rain continued its steady"
10"She started to close the"
11"His cane shot out, the"
12"That had been one of"
13"Water ran down the bridge"
14"The worst part was that"
15"Lucien Moreau did not make"
16"It was one of the"
17"She stepped back and let"
18"He entered with a grace"
19"Books on every surface."
ratio0.813
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Before everything went sideways in"
ratio0.013
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Then again, four months ago she had been pressing a towel to a knife wound on his ribs, her hands shaking, her voice lower, rougher, telling him not to die on h…"
1"He entered with a grace that seemed impossible for someone of his height, shaking droplets from his sleeves as he took in the chaos of Eva's flat."
2"Rory had helped her catalogue them last month, her fingers cramping from hours of writing, Eva muttering about ley lines and resonance points."
3"The distance between them shrank until she could smell rain and sandalwood and something darker beneath it, something that reminded her of woodsmoke and old lib…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.3179%