Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZFMR5RQRD4WJCG0YCNR

Run Details

Duration:
50.1s
Cost:
$0.000526
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
A sharp rapping at the door jolted Rory from her research. She glanced up from the scattered parchment, one hand instinctively reaching for the dagger tucked in her boot. The deadbolts clanked as she undid them, cracking open the door with a cautious, "Yes?" Lucien stood on the threshold, one hand elegantly holding his cane. His slicked-back hair glinted like molten metal under the hallway's dim light. Mischief danced in his amber eye. "Aura de la nuit," he drawled with a roguish grin, his French accent caressing each word. "Might a weary traveler beg sanctuary for the evening?" Rory felt the impact of that mismatched gaze hit her like a tidal wave, their shared history surging between them. The fight, the accusations, the blame. All the unspoken words clamoring for release. "Lucien," she said flatly, not yet moving to let him in. "What are you doing here?" "Just passing through," he replied with a negligent shrug of his tailored suit jacket, "And finding myself in dire need of shelter. This humble abode was the first to come to mind." His clueless facade didn't fool her for a moment. Rory knew him too well - his sharp mind calculated every play, every line. She sighed and opened the door wider, stepping back. "Fine. But don't make yourself too comfortable." He slipped inside gracefully, the spicy scent of his cologne mingling with sandalwood wafting from his clothes. Rory shut the door on his triumphant smirk. Hoping to avoid more conversation, she cleared a space on the cluttered couch and gestured for him to sit. Instead, Lucien trailed his fingers along the spines of her stacked tomes and scrolls. "Fascinating research," he noted, peering at the scribed runes with interest. "Tried to crack the code, have we?" "It's not a code," Rory corrected him, tidying some stray papers. "It's an ancient language. And I've barely made a dent." "A shame, considering your silver tongue." His eyes gleamed with playful remembrance. "Though I seem to recall you've always been a night owl." To deflect the heavy allusion, Rory retorted, "You're one to talk. I doubt you've slept a wink since the last century." "Au contraire." Lucien gracefully lowered himself into the offered seat, steepling his fingers. "I sleep quite peacefully, knowing how deeply I'm adored by the fairer sex." That drew a snort of derision from Rory. "If you mean because you vamp them into adoration, I won't argue there." "Ah, but you're proof it doesn't work on everyone," he cooed, voice sliding to a lower register. "Especially those with steel in their hearts." Rory stiffened, knowing he prodded at her deepest scars. Mustering a stony facade, she leveled a defiant stare at him. "Steel means I'm not so easily molded. Not by charm, wit, nor supernatural coercion. You of all people should remember that." Lucien went still. Tension knotted the air, the weight of a thousand unspoken words pressing them into a standstill. Then, gently, hesitantly: "Aurora...about that night-" "Please." Rory held up a hand, curling her fingers as if corraling the topic. "Just...don't." "I need to explain-" "It's late," she interrupted firmly, Crisis averted. "We'll talk in the morning." Shutting herself in the bedroom, Rory sagged against the door, listening to the quiet creak of Lucien shifting on the couch. No need to torture herself further tonight. She would figure out what game he was playing in the harsh light of day.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said flatly [flatly]"
1"she interrupted firmly [firmly]"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.154
82.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount570
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"hesitantly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"hesitantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount570
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"unspoken"
count2
2
word"facade"
count2
3
word"calculated"
count1
4
word"comfortable"
count1
5
word"fascinating"
count1
6
word"charm"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"unspoken"
2"facade"
3"calculated"
4"comfortable"
5"fascinating"
6"charm"
7"tension"
8"weight"
9"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences36
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences36
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences49
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords570
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
20.80% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount387
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.58
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Lucien5
French1
Crisis1
Shutting1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Crisis"
places(empty)
globalScore0.208
windowScore0.5
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if corraling the topic"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount570
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
74.88% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean21.92
std9.03
cv0.412
sampleLengths
044
129
225
333
416
532
632
77
825
933
1018
1121
1223
1321
1426
1521
1624
1720
1821
1919
206
2115
224
2312
2428
2515
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs71
matches
0"was playing"
84.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences49
ratio0.02
matches
0"Rory knew him too well - his sharp mind calculated every play, every line."
98.26% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount387
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.041343669250646
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.020671834625323
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences49
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences49
mean11.63
std5.72
cv0.491
sampleLengths
011
118
215
311
412
56
616
79
820
96
107
1111
125
1332
149
1514
169
177
1817
198
2019
2114
2211
237
2411
2510
2612
2711
2821
2913
3013
318
3213
3317
347
359
3611
3721
383
3916
406
4114
421
434
447
455
4621
477
4815
97.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.7142857142857143
totalSentences49
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences36
matches
0"Instead, Lucien trailed his fingers"
1"Then, gently, hesitantly:"
ratio0.056
75.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences36
matches
0"She glanced up from the"
1"His slicked-back hair glinted like"
2"he drawled with a roguish"
3"she said flatly, not yet"
4"he replied with a negligent"
5"His clueless facade didn't fool"
6"She sighed and opened the"
7"He slipped inside gracefully, the"
8"he noted, peering at the"
9"His eyes gleamed with playful"
10"he cooed, voice sliding to"
11"she interrupted firmly, Crisis averted"
12"She would figure out what"
ratio0.361
71.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount28
totalSentences36
matches
0"A sharp rapping at the"
1"She glanced up from the"
2"The deadbolts clanked as she"
3"Lucien stood on the threshold,"
4"His slicked-back hair glinted like"
5"Mischief danced in his amber"
6"he drawled with a roguish"
7"Rory felt the impact of"
8"The fight, the accusations, the"
9"she said flatly, not yet"
10"he replied with a negligent"
11"His clueless facade didn't fool"
12"Rory knew him too well"
13"She sighed and opened the"
14"He slipped inside gracefully, the"
15"Rory shut the door on"
16"he noted, peering at the"
17"Rory corrected him, tidying some"
18"His eyes gleamed with playful"
19"Lucien gracefully lowered himself into"
ratio0.778
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences36
matches
0"To deflect the heavy allusion,"
ratio0.028
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He slipped inside gracefully, the spicy scent of his cologne mingling with sandalwood wafting from his clothes."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he drawled, his French accent caressing each word"
1"he cooed, voice sliding to a lower register"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he drawled (drawl)"
1"he noted (note)"
2"Rory corrected (correct)"
3"the heavy allusion Rory retorted (retort)"
4"he cooed (coo)"
5"she interrupted firmly (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.462
81.8516%