| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.235 | | leniency | 0.471 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 634 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 634 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "unspoken" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "carried the weight" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "quickened" | | 11 | "tension" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "raced" | | 14 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 628 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.20% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 535 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 2.06 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 7 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Isolde | 3 | | Fae | 1 | | Aurora | 11 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.472 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like the first breath of autumn, b" | | 1 | "quite match any known alphabet" | | 2 | "as if sensing the shift in the world around them" |
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| 40.76% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.592 | | wordCount | 628 | | matches | | 0 | "not of leaves, but of something moving just beyond the edge of sight" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 23.26 | | std | 17.79 | | cv | 0.765 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 30 |
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| 92.50% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "been stretched" | | 1 | "been carved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 68 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something like the first breath of autumn, but sharper, deeper." | | 1 | "The ground beneath her feet was uneven—some patches smooth and polished, others rough and jagged, as if the earth itself had been carved by unseen hands." | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed closer, their carvings now clearer—symbols she didn’t recognize, but something in them made her stomach twist." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 540 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "soft, moss-covered ground." |
| | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.02962962962962963 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005555555555555556 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 68 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 68 | | mean | 9.24 | | std | 6.35 | | cv | 0.688 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 38.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.2647058823529412 | | totalSentences | 68 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 68.03% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d seen worse." | | 1 | "she asked, voice low" | | 2 | "She didn’t move, didn’t speak," | | 3 | "She didn’t wait for them" | | 4 | "It pulsed faintly, warm against" | | 5 | "Their eyes were the same" | | 6 | "she said, voice steady despite" | | 7 | "It was an invitation." |
| | ratio | 0.163 | |
| 0.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here was thick" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boots" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "The light filtering through the" | | 4 | "Nyx stepped beside her, their" | | 5 | "Aurora didn’t flinch." | | 6 | "She’d seen worse." | | 7 | "she asked, voice low" | | 8 | "Nyx’s voice was a whisper," | | 9 | "Isolde stepped into the clearing," | | 10 | "The air around her seemed" | | 11 | "She didn’t move, didn’t speak," | | 12 | "She didn’t wait for them" | | 13 | "The path ahead led deeper" | | 14 | "The ground beneath her feet" | | 15 | "A sound cut through the" | | 16 | "A rustling, not of leaves," | | 17 | "Aurora’s fingers tightened around the" | | 18 | "It pulsed faintly, warm against" | | 19 | "Nyx’s form dissolved into shadow" |
| | ratio | 0.918 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their bark etched with strange, spiraling carvings that didn’t quite match any known alphabet." | | 1 | "The light filtering through the canopy above was a pale, shifting gold, as if the sun itself had been stretched thin by unseen hands." | | 2 | "Nyx stepped beside her, their form flickering between solid and shadow, the faint violet glow of their eyes pulsing like a heartbeat." | | 3 | "The path ahead led deeper into the grove, the trees growing taller, their branches twisting into shapes that defied nature." | | 4 | "The ground beneath her feet was uneven—some patches smooth and polished, others rough and jagged, as if the earth itself had been carved by unseen hands." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, voice low" | | 1 | "she said, voice steady despite the unease creeping up her spine" |
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| 91.18% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.235 | | leniency | 0.471 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |