Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZFQ7JYFPP29CK5ARWFG

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Duration:
3.7s
Cost:
$0.000107

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air here was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something like the first breath of autumn, but sharper, deeper. Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft, moss-covered ground. The standing stones loomed ahead, their bark etched with strange, spiraling carvings that didn’t quite match any known alphabet. The light filtering through the canopy above was a pale, shifting gold, as if the sun itself had been stretched thin by unseen hands. Nyx stepped beside her, their form flickering between solid and shadow, the faint violet glow of their eyes pulsing like a heartbeat. Aurora didn’t flinch. She’d seen worse. “You’re sure this is safe?” she asked, voice low. Nyx’s voice was a whisper, a breath carried on the wind. “The Veil thins here. The boundary between realms feels… *hungry*.” Isolde stepped into the clearing, her silver hair catching the light like scattered stars. The air around her seemed to ripple, as if the very air itself held her presence. She didn’t move, didn’t speak, but the weight of her gaze pressed down on them like the weight of unspoken warnings. Aurora exhaled. “Then let’s not linger.” She didn’t wait for them to follow. The path ahead led deeper into the grove, the trees growing taller, their branches twisting into shapes that defied nature. The ground beneath her feet was uneven—some patches smooth and polished, others rough and jagged, as if the earth itself had been carved by unseen hands. A sound cut through the silence. A rustling, not of leaves, but of something moving just beyond the edge of sight. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the Heartstone pendant at her throat. It pulsed faintly, warm against her skin, as if sensing the shift in the world around them. Nyx’s form dissolved into shadow for a moment, then reappeared beside her. “Something’s watching us,” they murmured. Isolde’s voice was a whisper, but it carried the weight of a thousand years. “Or being watched.” Aurora stepped forward, her boots crunching on brittle leaves. The air grew colder, the light dimmer. The standing stones loomed closer, their carvings now clearer—symbols she didn’t recognize, but something in them made her stomach twist. A warning? A promise? Then she saw it. A figure stood at the edge of the clearing, half-hidden in the mist. Tall, gaunt, their form shifting between solid and shadow. Their eyes were the same faint violet as Nyx’s, but where Nyx’s was a whisper, this figure’s gaze burned like embers. Aurora’s breath hitched. “Isolde,” she said, voice steady despite the unease creeping up her spine. “Is that—” The figure turned. And Nyx’s voice slithered into the air, low and dangerous. “It’s not here to harm you.” The figure stepped forward, their silhouette shifting like smoke. “You shouldn’t have come.” Aurora’s pulse quickened. “Who are you?” The figure tilted their head. “A remnant. A fragment of the old world.” Isolde’s voice cut through the tension. “You were never meant to be here.” The figure’s form flickered again, then solidified. “The Veil is thinning. The boundaries between realms are weakening. And you—you have the power to change it.” Aurora’s mind raced. The Heartstone. The Fae blade. The warnings in the standing stones. This wasn’t just a warning. It was an invitation. Nyx’s hand brushed hers, their presence steadying her. “We need answers,” they said. “And this… this is where we find them.” The figure’s gaze locked onto Aurora. “Then you’ll pay the price.” Aurora met their gaze, unflinching. “We always do.” The figure dissolved into the mist, leaving only the echo of their words behind. Aurora exhaled, her fingers stilling around the pendant. The air here was alive, shifting, full of secrets. And for the first time, she wasn’t sure if she wanted to leave.
total_cost0.00010668

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount634
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount634
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count3
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"carried the weight"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"quickened"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"raced"
count1
14
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"etched"
2"whisper"
3"weight"
4"unspoken"
5"silence"
6"pulsed"
7"carried the weight"
8"stomach"
9"pulse"
10"quickened"
11"tension"
12"flickered"
13"raced"
14"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords628
ratio0.002
matches
0"hungry"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
47.20% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount535
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.06
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Nyx7
Heartstone2
Isolde3
Fae1
Aurora11
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.472
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like the first breath of autumn, b"
1"quite match any known alphabet"
2"as if sensing the shift in the world around them"
40.76% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.592
wordCount628
matches
0"not of leaves, but of something moving just beyond the edge of sight"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean23.26
std17.79
cv0.765
sampleLengths
078
128
29
321
451
56
653
748
817
917
1040
114
1243
1317
143
1516
1613
176
1813
1913
2025
2123
2221
2311
248
2514
2630
92.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences55
matches
0"been stretched"
1"been carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs92
matches(empty)
16.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences68
ratio0.044
matches
0"The air here was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something like the first breath of autumn, but sharper, deeper."
1"The ground beneath her feet was uneven—some patches smooth and polished, others rough and jagged, as if the earth itself had been carved by unseen hands."
2"The standing stones loomed closer, their carvings now clearer—symbols she didn’t recognize, but something in them made her stomach twist."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount540
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"soft, moss-covered ground."
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02962962962962963
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005555555555555556
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean9.24
std6.35
cv0.688
sampleLengths
023
112
219
324
422
53
63
79
811
910
1014
1116
1221
132
144
157
1620
1726
186
1915
2010
2117
2212
235
2414
253
269
277
2820
292
302
314
3213
339
3421
353
3612
372
383
3910
406
419
424
433
443
455
468
476
487
497
38.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2647058823529412
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners18
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"Then she saw it."
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences49
matches
0"She’d seen worse."
1"she asked, voice low"
2"She didn’t move, didn’t speak,"
3"She didn’t wait for them"
4"It pulsed faintly, warm against"
5"Their eyes were the same"
6"she said, voice steady despite"
7"It was an invitation."
ratio0.163
0.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences49
matches
0"The air here was thick"
1"Aurora stepped forward, her boots"
2"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
3"The light filtering through the"
4"Nyx stepped beside her, their"
5"Aurora didn’t flinch."
6"She’d seen worse."
7"she asked, voice low"
8"Nyx’s voice was a whisper,"
9"Isolde stepped into the clearing,"
10"The air around her seemed"
11"She didn’t move, didn’t speak,"
12"She didn’t wait for them"
13"The path ahead led deeper"
14"The ground beneath her feet"
15"A sound cut through the"
16"A rustling, not of leaves,"
17"Aurora’s fingers tightened around the"
18"It pulsed faintly, warm against"
19"Nyx’s form dissolved into shadow"
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The standing stones loomed ahead, their bark etched with strange, spiraling carvings that didn’t quite match any known alphabet."
1"The light filtering through the canopy above was a pale, shifting gold, as if the sun itself had been stretched thin by unseen hands."
2"Nyx stepped beside her, their form flickering between solid and shadow, the faint violet glow of their eyes pulsing like a heartbeat."
3"The path ahead led deeper into the grove, the trees growing taller, their branches twisting into shapes that defied nature."
4"The ground beneath her feet was uneven—some patches smooth and polished, others rough and jagged, as if the earth itself had been carved by unseen hands."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she asked, voice low"
1"she said, voice steady despite the unease creeping up her spine"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.118
69.1251%