| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.43% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1533 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "lightly" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1533 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "structure" | | 10 | "intricate" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "traced" | | 13 | "raced" | | 14 | "echoes" | | 15 | "unreadable" | | 16 | "trembled" | | 17 | "profound" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | matches | | |
| 90.34% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 136 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 161 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 1508 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "architectural anomaly, microclimate, hallucinogenic spores" | | 1 | "go" | | 2 | "unfolded" | | 3 | "clean" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.18% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 74 | | wordCount | 1198 | | uniqueNames | 24 | | maxNameDensity | 1.84 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | December | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Rory | 22 | | Twelve | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae-born | 1 | | Seers | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Trees | 1 | | Isolde | 17 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Ignoring | 1 | | Carvings | 1 | | Celtic | 1 | | Ogham | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Hellgate | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Fae | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Seers" | | 4 | "Half-Fae" | | 5 | "Trees" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "Blade" | | 8 | "Ignoring" | | 9 | "Silas" | | 10 | "Grove" | | 11 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae-born" | | 3 | "Carvings" | | 4 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 0.582 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 9.55% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a held breath" | | 1 | "seemed brighter here, deeper" | | 2 | "felt like carpet" | | 3 | "stones that seemed to have been placed, yet felt utterly natural" | | 4 | "patterns that seemed to shift under her gaze" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.653 | | wordCount | 1508 | | matches | | 0 | "Not transported, but *unfolded*" | | 1 | "not by stars but by slow, drifting will-o’-the-wisps" | | 2 | "Not empty, but full" | | 3 | "not an earthquake, but a shudder, as if the land itself had taken a sudden, sharp b" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 25.13 | | std | 19.64 | | cv | 0.782 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 83 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 68 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 70 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 53 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 67 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 51 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 209 | | matches | | |
| 54.13% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 161 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "Inside the circle, wildflowers Rory couldn’t name bloomed—deep purple stars and silver blossoms—defying the season." | | 1 | "Above, no sky she recognised stretched—a deep twilight purple, lit not by stars but by slow, drifting will-o’-the-wisps that cast a silver-white light." | | 2 | "This one held a structure—or the remains of one." | | 3 | "Some she recognised—Celtic knots, Ogham script." | | 4 | "The ground beneath Rory’s feet trembled—not an earthquake, but a shudder, as if the land itself had taken a sudden, sharp breath." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 528 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "usual faint inner glow" |
| | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.03598484848484849 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013257575757575758 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 161 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 161 | | mean | 9.37 | | std | 5.77 | | cv | 0.617 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 52.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.37267080745341613 | | totalSentences | 161 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 27.78% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, from the direction of" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "Its bark felt warmer than" | | 1 | "It felt like a held" | | 2 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 3 | "It hadn’t pulsed, exactly, but" | | 4 | "It shimmered, a faint distortion" | | 5 | "Her rational mind, the one" | | 6 | "Her newer, less rational mind," | | 7 | "She stepped into the centre" | | 8 | "They encircled a different space" | | 9 | "Her feet sank into moss" | | 10 | "They looked less like a" | | 11 | "She seemed to have been" | | 12 | "Her silver hair seemed to" | | 13 | "It didn’t reach her pale" | | 14 | "It was the first human-like" | | 15 | "It was cool and slightly" | | 16 | "They emerged into another clearing." | | 17 | "It gleamed with a cold," | | 18 | "She could see her breath" | | 19 | "It was colder than ice," |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 39.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 101 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory trailed her fingers along" | | 1 | "Its bark felt warmer than" | | 2 | "Isolde had called it a" | | 3 | "It felt like a held" | | 4 | "Nyx’s voice whispered on the" | | 5 | "Rory kept her voice low" | | 6 | "The quiet felt deliberate, like" | | 7 | "Nyx flowed closer to the" | | 8 | "The air smelled of petrichor" | | 9 | "Isolde had given only coordinates" | | 10 | "Rory had expected a meeting," | | 11 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 12 | "It hadn’t pulsed, exactly, but" | | 13 | "Nyx said, gesturing toward the" | | 14 | "Rory eyed the empty space" | | 15 | "It shimmered, a faint distortion" | | 16 | "Rory let out a slow" | | 17 | "Her rational mind, the one" | | 18 | "Her newer, less rational mind," | | 19 | "She stepped into the centre" |
| | ratio | 0.842 | |
| 41.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 85.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The resonant hum grew slightly louder as they moved away from the pool, following a path of pale, smooth stones that seemed to have been placed, yet felt utterl…" | | 1 | "The ground beneath Rory’s feet trembled—not an earthquake, but a shudder, as if the land itself had taken a sudden, sharp breath." | | 2 | "She turned, putting the altar at her back, scanning the luminous trees." | | 3 | "Something that walked on two legs and left deep, crushing footprints in the thick moss." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde’s voice came, not startling them" | | 1 | "Rory kept, but her eyes drank in the impossible details" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, their violet eyes fixed on the Hellgate carving" |
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| 30.95% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx’s voice whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Isolde confirmed (confirm)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.262 | | leniency | 0.524 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.238 | |